Atlas

Have to agree with Cntr, this sheet is insanely good for a first time submission. I read through a lot of it just for the joy of it and because the aesthetics drew me in. I saw a few small things that could be corrected that are all minor so feel free to take with a grain of salt or disregard: Physical description: First paragraph ends mid sentence at “represent” Likes: Inconsistent capitalization for each item (I may bullet them in someway too just for presentation) Personality: Third paragraph, sentence that begins “But after his father’s death” needs revision. I would split into two sentences. The sentence beginning “This often leads to people around Jin to become surprised”, I would consider revising as well. Relationships: Under Nara Shinjiro, second paragraph. “He dedication to his clan” should be His That is as far as I took notes. The only reason I even bring them up is because the whole sheet is so good that I thought you may want to fix the small things

Updated to include that specification!

Raitoningukurō l Lightning Claw l ライトニングクロー Type: Hybrid [Ninjustu-Taijutsu; Lightning; Claw (Medium)] Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Chakra + 40 Stamina Damage: 10 Effects: Target is 'Stunned' for one turn. Description: The user takes their chakra and infuses their claw(s) with electricity. When the user’s blade(s) touches a foe, the electricity is immediately discharged, affecting their nervous system and temporarily stunning them. Points: 5

Not sure if this will effect my activity noticeably or not, but figured I would give a warning that I may be a little less active now that the new Super Mario came out. Will likely still be posting as normal during the week. This is more of a "just in case" for my team members than anything.

Mishra Haro

Mishra Haro- Eijirou Kirishima (if his hair was white it would be perfect!)

You’re far too kind :dance:

Don’t know if this is the appropriate section for this question, but is there any possibility of adding missions for Kumogakure that could be focused around helping get setup for the Chuunin Exams? Seems like a relevant RP opportunity for people in the village leading up to the event.

Welcome back! Hope you’re able to really get going this time around!

Purchasing two of the following weapon: Weapon Type: Claws Size: Medium Level: 5 Special: None. Description: Adorning these metal plated leather gloves are two six inch blades that straddle the middle knuckle. These blades were forged using standard methods; they are nothing particularly special. They simply act as blades that can be attached to one’s hands. Cost: $100 per glove ($200 total) Money on hand: $225 Cost of Items: $200 New money on hand total: $25

While I don’t think this is necessarily the appropriate occasion for this, I don’t know if there is an inappropriate situation for it: Happy Birthday!

You’re too kind, thank you so much!

Username: Atlas Character Name: Mishra Haro Skin Tone: Naruto’s Skin Color- Reference Hair Colour: Pure White Hair Length: His hair goes up not down so hard to say, maybe 6 inches off the top of his head? (Naruto’s hair length is also a good reference point) Hair Style: Can also be based on Naruto; the spiky above the head style. Bangs: No bangs, hair above forehead protector. Eye Colour: Aquamarine Eyes Based on Which Character: Do as you please! Judging by the rest of my choices I guess Naruto’s are a pretty safe pic XD Body Based On Which Character: Uzumaki Naruto from Naruto Shippuuden era. Top Clothes: Black Gi with white trim Bottom Clothes: Black Gi with white trim Accessories: Forehead protector, worn titled slightly on the forehead (don’t care which direction its tilted) Headband: Kumogakure Additional Items: None Background: None Pose: Relaxing, hands held on the back of his head. Sorry if my descriptions are poor, but pretty much my guy looks fairly similar to what Naruto would like in Shippuuden, except with white hair and wearing a black gi with white trim.