Wairoware

The health and stamina drain were meant to be as upkeep, so I fixed that for now. The other issues will be addressed shortly too.

Fixed and added a better explanation for "x" in the effects, where it is the number of turns, which may not exceed the limit of five.

I think this can pretty much be moved to trash. I've hit a road block with this. Wanted it to have skills and techniques that emphasis the "connectedness" in all things or how everyone is "bound" by death. Maybe I'll revisit this at some point. PM me and anyone has an idea on how to proceed with this, otherwise I'm drawing blanks. thanks

Notes: The last technique I made got me thinking, and there is not really an archetype like this. This does have some arguable overlap with Meditative, but I guess I would argue that there is overlap between many of the Archetypes. This did make me wonder though if "self" should be included as a tag in Genjutsu. I know of at least one other Genjutsu that is cast on the user made by Cntr (as of this awaiting approval), and of course Izanagi (which I don't know is in game or not).

Genjutsu Archetype: Autosuggestion Effect: Genjutsu that targets "self" or the caster of the jutsu has its Chakra cost decreased by 10%. Description: Though whatever means, some Genjutsu users have mastered placing themselves in illusions. Some developed this skill to escape a terrible reality, retreating into a fantasy of their own creation. Whatever the case, these practitioners have unlocked the secrets to their own mind, and can dissolve their own reality on a whim. Cost: -1

Name: Koukotsu | Trance | 恍惚 (こうこつ) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Chuunin Cost: 90 Chakra, Upkeep + 10%Health(x) +10%Stamina(x) Damage: N/A Effects: The user's Accuracy, Evasion, Taijutsu and speed are increased by 50% for the duration (x, which may be no greater than five), and their Defense is increased by 25%. Also, at the start of the battle if there is more than one person not including the user, the user must assign each character a number upon activating this effect. Every attack that the user makes while this technique is active must be accompanied with a die roll with sides equal to the number of people (friend and foe), and the number rolled will correspond to the target of each attack. Multi-strike techniques only require one roll of this die. Description: A Genjutsu that puts its own user under a spell. This technique places one in a "trance" like state, bringing its user's abilities beyond their natural limits, putting tremendous strain on their body the longer it lasts. It is said to create a "tunnel-vision" like effect, and the user cannot properly discern who or what to attack. All that is their is a blind rage that is sure to leave destruction in its wake. Points: 3

For bloodlines, do you need to make a separate post for the skills that come with them? Or do the bloodlines and their respective skills get approved all in one go?

Fixed! sorry mixing up my rpg's with the single/multiple target jazz

Fixed!

Fixed

Ohhh I see, I misunderstood. Fixed now

Doesn't it get minus 1 jp too for evolving so they cancel each other out?

Changes made. With the jounin, I wasn't sure if the damage was split between the tai cap and the nin cap or if they both get capped like you say. Always helpful thank you!

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