Khaos Posted August 5, 2007 Posted August 5, 2007 (edited) Excess speed Bloodline: N/A Description: Some ninja have more speed than they know what to do with. With some concentration on muscle control, the user can use that speed to their advantage. Effect: Effect activated during the setup phase. Once the users speed is taken into account, in terms of the turn ratio; the left overs are used to calculate an additional evasion modifier. If the user has over x3 (not x3) the opponent's, they can use x2 the opponents speed as their valid speed, the excess being used as the additional evasion. Total amount of speed being transferred may not exceed 1.5x the users evasion stat. Cost: -4 Requirements: - Jounin Rank - >750 Speed Edited August 6, 2007 by Khaos-sama
atk2700 Posted August 5, 2007 Posted August 5, 2007 (edited) I think something has to be included about the speed being transferred over not exceeding half of the person's natural evasion. EDIT: I am assuming "750" in the requirements means speed, but I'm pretty sure you have to spell that out. Edited August 5, 2007 by atk2700
Warr Posted August 6, 2007 Posted August 6, 2007 I think something has to be included about the speed being transferred over not exceeding half of the person's natural evasion.EDIT: I am assuming "750" in the requirements means speed, but I'm pretty sure you have to spell that out. Good thinking there, Atk. I agree in both cases. Evasion has to do with reflexes, Khaos. I feel as a result, you should actually rewrite your description to give us a reason for that to work. Even with your muscles working better, that doesn't mean they'd just reflex towards something. I also feel because of the fact that this does what it does, it should have somesort of jounin or above level shinobi teacher requirement, regardless of the fact that you have to be a jounin to use it. I don't see as to why that should be a requirement though, nor that there should a level requirement. A speed requirement I have no problem with, but the other two just seem to be tacked on there.
Nappers Posted August 6, 2007 Posted August 6, 2007 NB - You're aware that things with rank teacher training requirements, if you're of that rank you can solo train? /End NB.
Warr Posted August 6, 2007 Posted August 6, 2007 NB - You're aware that things with rank teacher training requirements, if you're of that rank you can solo train?/End NB. Yes, but I still need there needs to be something there in regards to training, as this effectively allows someone to relocate their Stat Points 'just in case', and descriptionally says they have trained their body to allow for such.
Rhapsody Posted August 6, 2007 Posted August 6, 2007 Jounin requirement sort of implies that they've been 'training' the whole time. Not everything needs training.
Warr Posted August 6, 2007 Posted August 6, 2007 Jounin requirement sort of implies that they've been 'training' the whole time. Not everything needs training. If that was so, then why wouldn't the skill be handed out to every Jounin that exists? If the training is supposed to be there as per description, it needs to be there as per being there.
Nappers Posted August 6, 2007 Posted August 6, 2007 I believe the argument trully is that if this training thing is indeed the case then training requirements ought to be added to every approved and main site skill, creating an incredible backlog.
Rhapsody Posted August 6, 2007 Posted August 6, 2007 Description? What are you prattling about? The description doesn't mention any training. ...On the subject of the description, it should really read 'have more speed than they know what to do with.'