Warr Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 (edited) Quote Water Manipulation; Power Spear Type: Ninjutsu (Personal) Rank: Genin Cost: 75 Damage: 60 Effects: May only use Evasion to dodge this technique, excluding bloodline skills that provide evasive or straight dodging bonuses. Effect only applies to ninjas of the same rank or below of the user. Description: This technique manipulates the surroundings amongst the user and siphons the principal element of Water. This method of assault forces an incredible volume of water to implode within its own dimensions becoming nothing bigger than a fist. At will, the commendable breadth of water will split into a thin, long rivulet towards their targeted intention with impossible speeds. The true force of the technique is developed on contact however, as the connection between its source severs whence the target is hit; the manipulation aspect of this technique generates such a possibility. Points: 4 Quote Jounin 0-40 damage points – 1 tech point 41-80 damage points – 2 tech point 81-130 damage points – 3 tech point 131-170 damage points – 4 tech point 171-220 damage points – 5 tech point 221-270 damage points – 6 tech point (270 = Max Genjutsu Damage, the extra 120 can be used for effects) 271-320 damage points – 7 tech point (320 = Max Ninjutsu Damage, the extra 60 can be used for effects) 321-380 damage points - 8 tech points (380 = Max Taijutsu Damage) Damage Ratios -Jounin+ 2:3 Umikoi Warrusu Type; Power Lance Type: Ninjutsu (Personal) Rank: Jounin Cost: 253 Damage: 275 Effects: May only use Evasion to dodge this technique, excluding bloodline skills that provide evasive or straight dodging bonuses. Effect only applies to ninjas of the same rank or below of the user. After being hit by this technique, on the next turn, the opponents Evasion, and Accuracy are reduced by 20, and speed is reduced by 40. This reduction is for the next turn alone. Description: An advancement of Water Manipulation; Power Spear, this technique uses the same basic movements, but more water which is more tightly compressed than the former technique, and which is spun even more quickly than the former as well, the tendril of water decompressing as it hits the opponent, and hitting much harder than the other, as well as hitting in a way that knocks them off balance. Points: 6 Umikoi Warrusu Type; Dragon's Breath Spear Type: Ninjutsu (Personal) Rank: Jounin Cost: 288 Damage: 275 Effects: May only use Evasion to dodge this technique, excluding bloodline skills that provide evasive or straight dodging bonuses. Effect only applies to ninjas of the same rank or below of the user. If hit by this technique, opponent is scorched for three turns. Description: An advancement of Water Manipulation; Power Spear, this technique gathers water or moisture around the user, which is gathered into a very tight tendril of water, slung around just as if the original incarnation of the technique, and in the end shows its surprise, it's 'fangs'. The water which hits the opponent not only pierces through the opponent from its high speed movements, but burns the skin around the wound, and other skin as well, from the steam which ends around the spear. Points: 7 Edited June 2, 2019 by Warr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arashi Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 Approved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 The jutsu quoted merits a cost of 15 chakra towards the effect. Apply that 15 chakra to the other jutsu. The second one is also over costed. They will both have a 252 cost, when it is all calculated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warr Posted November 1, 2007 Author Share Posted November 1, 2007 (edited) 15 Cost was included in the other, just so you know. However, I'm more than willing to lower the chakra cost. Edited November 1, 2007 by Warr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 (edited) Whoops, my calculations were off, I think I just had a mental problem and revered two numbers D: 1) 253 2) 288 Edited November 1, 2007 by Azure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warr Posted November 1, 2007 Author Share Posted November 1, 2007 Changed the price to your cost anyways, simply because it made the second cheaper, and I don't care for a slight up in cost. The fifteen was accounted for when I made it, but readjusted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 (edited) Jutsu points are off now. 1 is 6 and 2 is 7. Edit-- Approved. Edited November 1, 2007 by Azure Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arashi Posted November 1, 2007 Share Posted November 1, 2007 Once changed, Re-stamp Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cellar Door Posted December 16, 2016 Share Posted December 16, 2016 Afflicts Burned: Dead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warr Posted June 2, 2019 Author Share Posted June 2, 2019 Burned switched for Scorched. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
almondsAndRain Posted November 3, 2022 Share Posted November 3, 2022 These need to say who they are personal to. The tag will look something like “Ninjutsu [ Personal; Umikoi Warrasu ]” or some variation. That aside, this can get a deeper review if you return. Until then, I am putting this in dead to clean up the custom forums, as I mentioned in the PM I sent last week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
