Eclipse Techniques; I

[Rhap Sodos]

 

 

Event Horizon | 事象の地平面 | Jishō no Chiheimen
Type: Ninjutsu | Eclipse
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 350 Chakra 
Damage: 320
Effect:  This technique ignores all passive Ninjutsu damage reduction from opponent's Skills or Equipment. Opponents hit with Event Horizon may not use Ninjutsu techniques that require Combinatorial Elements for three (3) turns. 
Description: Jishō no Chiheimen is the manifestation of Namikaze Izzy's creative will in chakra form. Condensing chakra forces in an area, he creates a singular core of energy that rapidly collapses nearby matter into a singular point for a brief moment before exploding outwards. Eclipse techniques have a distinct visual style to them that center upon a dark mass with a vivid spectrum of light surrounding, and Jishō no Chiheimen is no exception. Light collapses in wisps to a dark center before exploding outwards brilliantly, showering the battlefield in their radiance. Because this attack can be manifested anywhere the creator can see it excels at bypassing conventional defenses. The forces of light and dark chakra that flare outwards from the core disrupt nearby chakra systems, preventing them from properly manipulating complicated combinations.
JP: 8

 

Day's Undoing | 一日のやり直し | Ichinichi no Yarinaoshi
Type: Ninjutsu | Eclipse | Negation Response Phase Jutsu
Rank: Jounin 
Cost: X Chakra, where X is the Cost of Target Technique 
Effect: Negates all damage and effects of target technique that causes physical damage. This technique does not have a fail chance if used against Elemental Ninjutsu. This technique may be used against higher ranked jutsu, but costs an additional 10% in total Health to perform and has a 5% fail chance regardless of the Jutsu type. The Health cost cannot be negated by any other skill or technique. May only be used once per battle.
Description: Ichinichi no Yarinaoshi is a raw force of Eclipse chakra, an almost natural reaction to incoming damage. Namikaze Izzy's inherit nature to protect those around him led him to discover that his will alone could protect those he cared for with the power of the highest tier of elements. With a raised hand, he expels his chakra into a wall, instantly weaving light and dark to creating a barrier that shreds all physical forces that come his way. If used against a Ninjutsu attack that makes use of elemental chakra, the force will fragmentize the bonds that keep the attack together, turning it back into normal chakra and causing the offensive action to lose all form. 
JP: 8

 

Weight of Reality | 密度 | Mitsudo
Type: Ninjutsu | Eclipse
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 280 Chakra

Damage: 195
Effect: The target of this technique may not pay upkeep costs, or use any ability or technique with an upkeep cost for two (2) turns. 
Description: Mitsudo is, at its core, empathy. Namikaze Izzy reaches out into the opponent, connecting to their essence with fibers of eclipse chakra. For a moment they are connected, and he can feel their pain and emotions, before pulling the fibers back to himself. This actions tears their chakra away, causing their internal systems to stumble and disrupting their chakra systems momentarily. Because this can momentarily knock an opponent out of a bloodline limit or other powerful ability, it is sometimes compared to breaking off a piece of their soul and allowing it to fall away. Those who have been effected by it describe it as feeling as if something of themselves had been removed.

JP: 7

 

Edited June 28, 2017 by Rhap Sodos

[Rhap Sodos]

Cost Break Down
Event Horizon

• 320 Damage at 2:3 Ratio: 215
• Special Effects: 135 CP

x3 of "Quarantine Ninjutsu" would be 120 CP, and this is like a mini version of that so I'm valuing it at somewhere around 60-80 CP.
The ignoring damage reduction might be a little undercosted, but as a "Tier 5" combinatorial element my thought is that most passive skills/equipment aren't going to be terribly effective in the first place. I priced it at about 1.2x

 

Day's Undoing
Pretty standard "pay x, negate x" negation jutsu for the baseline ability. I figure 15% total health is a pretty fair cost for being able to use it against high-ranked jutsu. 

 

Weight of Reality

• 195 Damage at 2:3 Ration: 130
• 75 CP x2 for the Special Effect. This puts it slightly above the cost level of Metabolic Break Down. 

Additional Notes

Yes, I am fully aware that these are a bit pushed as far as power level is concerned. My reasoning behind this is: 

• All "Eclipse" techniques have the umbrella rule that they can only be used once per battle. You cannot spam these techniques. 
• "Eclipse" is effectively Izzy's bloodline, due to SP dump required to reach it. 

[Cellar Door]

Can you link the Eclipse skill? I looked at it a bit ago, and I remember you saying somewhere that they could only be used once per battle, but it wasn't actually in the effect anywhere, and your techniques have one that has the limitation written in but the others don't. It's confusing. 

[Rhap Sodos]

Link: Combinatorial: Eclipse

 

The only one that explicitly states a "per use" is the RPJ and that's because of RPJ rules. I can remove it if you think it's redundant, but the idea was to make it explicit in this case. 

[Cellar Door]

I think these are pretty much okay. They've got some pretty unique twists that make them a little difficult. The first one looks nearly perfectly balanced to me though.

The second one... I think should probably get a fail chance against higher level stuff.

The last one is pretty okay. It does need a JP cost though.

[Rhap Sodos]

• Added 5% fail chance to the second one if used against higher ranked Jutsu. I did scale back the total health cost to 10% though if we're going to give it a fail chance. 
• Added missing JP cost to the third technique. 

Edited June 28, 2017 by Rhap Sodos

[PandaMattMatt]

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[cntrstrk14]

These are all weird, but I agree with the cost breakdowns at the top. Also the fact that they are all one time per use per battle (thanks to Eclipse Release) means that normal concerns of spamming these don't exist I am a little uncomfortable with the weird range that these can have, but there is no rules against making a lot of jutsu that do very weird things. So that all said...

 

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