PhantasyIV Posted July 25, 2006 Posted July 25, 2006 (edited) The Tsuchiiro-hi Clan Bloodline-- Name: Haiirosaito (Ashen Sight) Description: The Ashen Sight of the Tsuchiiro-hi clan is a doujutsu of odd proportions; when activated, the pupils of each eye will disappear, and a light cloud-like appearance will begin to swirl around the eye in perpetual manner. A second pair of eyes (Blood red with fiery patterns) will rise from the skin of the forehead, and the pupils will elongate into thin, vertical slits. The Haiirosaito may not be partially activated; both the Kumouzume and the Uzuchime must be active at the same time. It is quite literally impossible to activate one, and not the other. Kumouzume (Cloud Swirl Eyes)-The Kumouzume, the bottom (True) pair of eyes are intentionally clouded to hinder physical sight, but the Chakra-created clouds create a field of some degree in which seems to repel Genjutsu or otherwise mind-altering jutsus with some ease. While activated, the visibility of the character is cut, while allowing the mind to concentrate fully at all times. Kumozume enhances the Concentration of the character by a varying degree dependant upon the level of mastery of the user. The Uzuchime cancels out this negative aspect Uzuchime (Blood Swirl Eyes)-The Uzuchime, the upper (False) pair of eyes boast elongated pupils in which keep track of Chakra flow and Chakra use, as well as using a mixture of normal vision and heat vision to make note of bodies in motion. The Uzuchime are capable of seeing the brain and scanning it for weak points in which allow for more effective Genjutsus to be implemented upon it. Generally used to counteract the negative vision that the Kumouzume causes. However, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu effects/damage are halved when the doujutsu is in use Cost: 5% total chakra to activate, 5% total chakra upkeep. (Activate/Deactivate in the Setup Phase) Restriction: May not take Chakra Flow Requirements: Clan Membership, at least 60 Genjutsu, and at least 60 Chakra Rank Requirements: 1 - Membership 2 - Rank 1 (Level 10) 3 - Rank 2, Chuunin 4 - Rank 3, Jounin Rank 1: The Kumouzume forms in the true eyes, and the Uzuchime opens slightly, granting limited sight and manipulation of the effects thereof. Character gains +15% to accuracy and evasion rolls when using/dodging a Genjutsu [Ninjutsu and Taijutsu Techniques are -25% accuracy while active to the minimum of 15% as usual] -1 Rank 2: The Kumouzume forms in the true eyes, and the Uzuchime opens a little more, granting longer sight and more effective manipulation of the effects thereof. Enemy Genjutsu last -1 turn (minimum 1) on this character. [Ninjutsu and Taijutsu Techniques are -25% accuracy while active while active to the minimum of 15% as usual, does not stack with previous ranks] -1 Rank 3: The Kumouzume forms in the true eyes, and the Uzuchime opens almost entirely, granting extremely good sight and advanced manipulation of the effects thereof. The Uzuchime will glow a light pink while the Komouzume will glow a light gray. This character's Genjutsu have +20 effect [Ninjutsu and Taijutsu Techniques are -15% accuracy while active, replaces rank 2] -3 Rank 4: The Kumouzume forms in the true eyes, and the Uzuchime opens entirely, granting perfect sight and masterful manipulation of the effects thereof. The Uzuchime now glows a blood red when active, and the Kumouzume glows white. The whites of the eyes are now black (on both pairs). Character gains +30% (Does not stack with Rank 1) to accuracy and evasion rolls when using/dodging a Genjutsu [Ninjutsu and Taijutsu Techniques are -15% accuracy while active, does not stack with previous ranks.] -3 Name: Asshu-uwakawa (Ash Skin) Description: The Ash Skin of the Tsuchiiro-hi clan is indeed an effective means of defense for the clan members. The dermis (Layer of skin below the epidermis, or the top layer of skin (Visible)) is covered in a thick, ashen skin boasting surprising resistance to cutting and impact blows. The Ash is usually rather stoic and soft, but when Chakra is surged through it, it bolsters its defenses and becomes sturdy and difficult to puncture/wound. Chakra consumption tends to be overlooked while it is maintained due to the surprising effects, but most fall prey to the consumption over a short period of time, forgetting how much Chakra is devoured by the hungry ash Requirements: Clan Membership, One rank of Haiirosaito Rank Requirements: 1 - Membership 2 - Rank 1 (Level 10) 3 – Rank 2, Chuunin 4 – Rank 3, Jounin Rank 1: Character takes -10% damage from weapons and martial arts (punching/kicking) and is immune to ‘blood loss' statuses -2 (NOTE: once this rank is taken, this character cannot use summoning techniques Rank 2: Character gains +10% to blocking chance (if a 75 is needed, a 61 still counts as blocked) against Nin and Tai -2 Rank 3: Character takes -20% damage from weapons and martial arts (punching/kicking, doesn't stack with Rank 1) -3 Rank 4: Character gains +15% to blocking chance (does not stack with rank 2) against Nin and Tai -3 Edited July 31, 2006 by PhantasyIV
Kouta Posted July 26, 2006 Posted July 26, 2006 hmmm...your last ability is definately too powerful...and never define if any of your powers stack. negating 25% is already tough..but when you negate 50%, with no drawbakcs, that is simply too much of a cut with no reqs or drawbacks. mix that with iron skin, and, well....yea. At the very least, the max it should cut is 40%, and even then, needs a hefty chakra cost, as said in description.
PhantasyIV Posted July 26, 2006 Author Posted July 26, 2006 Made some changes. I hope they're acceptable.
Guest MrSako Posted July 27, 2006 Posted July 27, 2006 we cannot use abilities that make jutsu 'cannot miss' or 'auto hit' in 5.0
PhantasyIV Posted July 27, 2006 Author Posted July 27, 2006 (edited) Changes made in ranks 3 and 4. Edited July 27, 2006 by PhantasyIV
Nappers Posted July 31, 2006 Posted July 31, 2006 After many changes and touchups via AIM discussion. I believe this bloodline now is indeed fair and approvable. Thus; Approved.