Guest Sasori-dono Posted October 7, 2006 Posted October 7, 2006 (edited) DEFENSIVE Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara( Mantra Style: Chanting Field) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Hibun: Defensive activated Cost: 30+X( Whereby X= Amount of stats the user wishes to add to his/her teammates* 1.5 ) and 15+Y to upkeep( Whereby Y= X/2) Damage: n/a Effects: The technique increases teammates that are in the area's Ninjutsu and Taijutsu by 10. And the jutsu doesn't apply to the user. The user cannot move or attack normally except for doing jutsu that uses this jutsu as a base. If the user moves away from the chanting field(yes, he can still dodge attacks), the field will dissapear. Leaving the field can be define as either going for a taijutsu attack when the enemy is too far away from the user, or the user retreats due to reasons such as being pressured(enemy attacks him two on one, explosive kunai is thrwon at him, etc.) Description: After doing several hand seals, the user thrust his hand towards the ground. In the very moment his/her hand reaches the ground, a seal of mantras covers the ground below the user. It spreads up to 10 meter radius around the user. Although His/her teammates are not in the field of mantra, their stats are still boosted. Points: 2 Jp *Note: If the user doesn't wish to add any bonuses to his/her teammates except the base bonus that is automatically given from the jutsu, X and Y is ignored. Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Hebi Dageki No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Serpent Strike Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku Ginshou Nohara is activated. Cost: 25 per serpent( maximum of 3 serpent) Damage: 15 per serpent ( multi-hit jutsu) Effects: The opponent will get the status Scared for 1 turn for every serpent materiallized. Description: After imitating a number of hand seals, a materialized serpent will form from the chanting field and strike the opponent. Points: 4 Jp Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Hato Bakudan No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Dove Bombs Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara is activated Cost: 40+X( X= Y) Damage: 40+Y( amount of damage the user wants to add. Maximum of 20 bonus damage. Damage mod applies after adding Y.) Effects: n/a Description: The user summons a flock of mantra doves to attack the opponent. The doves explodes upon contact. The user can increase the number of birds to his likings at the cost of his chakra. Points: 3 Jp Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Shingon Soutei No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Mantra Binding Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara is activated. Cost: 150 and 100 upkeep ( can only target one opponent) Damage: n/a Effects: The opponent will suffer a loss of 60 evasion, 60 speed and 60 accuracy for an indefinite amount of turn. The bind will stay as long as the user pays the chakra to keep the bind in play. Every, the opponent may try to break free with a cost of 50 stamina/chakra. The opponent may roll a dice of 100, if he rolled 45( This can be changed by applying the binder's ninjutsu mod against the opponents chosen mods(taijutsu/ninjutsu, depends on whether they paid stamina/chakra)or above, he will be free of the bind. While being binded, the opponent may still attack. Description: The user extends the chanting field until it reaches the opponent. The field is then used to bind the target, slowing him down, making him more prone to be hit. The mantra moves randomly around the enemy, slowly eating away their stamina/chakra as they try to break away from the bind. Points: 5 Jp Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Konpaku Kujiku( Mantra Style: Soul Crush) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara and Shingon Fuukaku: Shingon Soutei No Jutsu is activated. Cost: 75 per opponent Damage: 93 per opponent( maximum of 2 opponent per turn) Effects: n/a Description: After several hand seals are made, the part of the field that is used to bind the target contracts, causing pain to the target as it slowly crushes his bones. Points: 5 Jp Edited October 28, 2006 by Sasori-dono
Guest Ichi-kun Posted October 7, 2006 Posted October 7, 2006 Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara( Mantra Style: Chanting Field) Approved Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Hebi Dageki No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Serpent Strike Technique) Max gennin cost is 80, you have 90. Might have to remove a snake. Rest are Approved
Guest Sasori-dono Posted October 7, 2006 Posted October 7, 2006 I've edited the Shingon Fuukaku: Hebi Dageki No Jutsu.
Takius Posted October 8, 2006 Posted October 8, 2006 DEFENSIVEName: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara( Mantra Style: Chanting Field) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Hibun: Defensive activated Cost: 30+X( Whereby X= Amount of stats the user wishes to add to his/her teammates* 1.5 ) and 5+Y to upkeep( Whereby Y= X/6) Damage: n/a Effects: The technique increases teammates that are in the area's Ninjutsu and Taijutsu by 10. And the jutsu doesn't apply to the user. The user cannot move or attack normally except for doing jutsu that uses this jutsu as a base. If the user moves away from the chanting field(yes, he can still dodge attacks), the field will dissapear. Description: After doing several hand seals, the user thrust his hand towards the ground. In the very moment his/her hand reaches the ground, a seal of mantras covers the ground below the user. It spreads up to 10 meter radius around the user. Although His/her teammates are not in the field of mantra, their stats are still boosted. Points: 2 Jp Define 'leaving this field'... Does that mean if the user changes ranges? (IE Moving from close to far range) *Note: If the user doesn't wish to add any bonuses to his/her teammates except the base bonus that is automatically given from the jutsu, X and Y is ignored. Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Hebi Dageki No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Serpent Strike Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku Ginshou Nohara is activated. Cost: 25 per serpent( maximum of 3 serpent) Damage: 15 per serpent Effects: The opponent will get the status Scared for 1 turn for every serpent materiallized. Each serpent has it's own damage mods. Description: After imitating a number of hand seals, a materialized serpent will form from the chanting field and strike the opponent. Points: 4 Jp State that the technique is a multi-hit jutsu... Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Hato Bakudan No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Dove Bombs Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara is activated Cost: 40+X( X= Y*1.5) Damage: 40+Y( amount of damage the user wants to add. Maximum of 20 bonus damage. Damage mod applies after adding Y.) Effects: n/a Description: The user summons a flock of mantra doves to attack the opponent. The doves explodes upon contact. The user can increase the number of birds to his likings at the cost of his chakra. Points: 4 Jp 'proved. Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Shingon Soutei No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Mantra Binding Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara is activated. Cost: 100 and 100 upkeep per opponent. Damage: n/a Effects: The opponent is immobilized as long as the user pays the upkeep. Every turn, the opponent can try to escape the bind by paying 50 stamina/chakra and rolling a d100. If the opponent get higher than 41( this can be change by applying the binder's ninjutsu mod against the opponents chosen mods(nin/tai, depends on whether he pays chakra or stamina). , he is released from the bind. Description: The user extends the chanting field until it reaches the opponent(s). Points: 5 Jp Need a better description, and max of 1 opponent due to the cost limits of being a Chuunin. Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Konpaku Kujiku( Mantra Style: Soul Crush) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara and Shingon Fuukaku: Shingon Soutei No Jutsu is activated. Cost: 96 per opponent Damage: 120 per opponent Effects: n/a Description: The binding mantra that covers the opponent is used by the user to crush the opponent. Points: 5 Jp 'proved.
Guest Sasori-dono Posted October 8, 2006 Posted October 8, 2006 Edited every error that was pointed out by Takius. Check again please?
Takius Posted October 12, 2006 Posted October 12, 2006 Everything's approved except the second to last one... Still need a better description, mate.
Guest Sasori-dono Posted October 12, 2006 Posted October 12, 2006 Thx cntr, erm.. do I need another approval or does Ichi-kun's approval still counts?
Nappers Posted October 13, 2006 Posted October 13, 2006 Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Shingon Soutei No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Mantra Binding Technique)Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara is activated. Cost: 100 and 100 upkeep ( can only target one opponent) Damage: n/a Effects: The opponent is immobilized as long as the user pays the upkeep. Every turn, the opponent can try to escape the bind by paying 50 stamina/chakra and rolling a d100. If the opponent get higher than 41( this can be change by applying the binder's ninjutsu mod against the opponents chosen mods(nin/tai, depends on whether he pays chakra or stamina). , he is released from the bind. Description: The user extends the chanting field until it reaches the opponent. The field is then used to bind the target, rendering him from any movement of that sort. The inscriptions that are use to bind the opponent grow tighter every second, leaving no space for the target to break free. Only the strong are able to break loose from this fromidable bind as its grip is wretchedly strong. Points: 5 Jp Denied. Kagemane Duplicate (an improved one). PM Arashi about this one.
Arashi Posted October 13, 2006 Posted October 13, 2006 As Nappers said, this is too similar to kagemane in all the ways. Don't know how so many(3) staffmembers could miss that... -Second Denial-
Guest Sasori-dono Posted October 21, 2006 Posted October 21, 2006 Erm, okay, I changed it. Not too similar now. Can someone look at this again?
cntrstrk14 Posted October 21, 2006 Posted October 21, 2006 DEFENSIVEName: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara( Mantra Style: Chanting Field) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Hibun: Defensive activated Cost: 30+X( Whereby X= Amount of stats the user wishes to add to his/her teammates* 1.5 ) and 5+Y to upkeep( Whereby Y= X/6) Damage: n/a Effects: The technique increases teammates that are in the area's Ninjutsu and Taijutsu by 10. And the jutsu doesn't apply to the user. The user cannot move or attack normally except for doing jutsu that uses this jutsu as a base. If the user moves away from the chanting field(yes, he can still dodge attacks), the field will dissapear. Leaving the field can be define as either going for a taijutsu attack when the enemy is too far away from the user, or the user retreats due to reasons such as being pressured(enemy attacks him two on one, explosive kunai is thrwon at him, etc.) Description: After doing several hand seals, the user thrust his hand towards the ground. In the very moment his/her hand reaches the ground, a seal of mantras covers the ground below the user. It spreads up to 10 meter radius around the user. Although His/her teammates are not in the field of mantra, their stats are still boosted. Points: 2 Jp Upkeep is too low. Make it 15+Y (Y = x/2) I suspect this only can increase ninjutsu and taijutsu. *Note: If the user doesn't wish to add any bonuses to his/her teammates except the base bonus that is automatically given from the jutsu, X and Y is ignored. Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Hebi Dageki No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Serpent Strike Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku Ginshou Nohara is activated. Cost: 25 per serpent( maximum of 3 serpent) Damage: 15 per serpent ( multi-hit jutsu) Effects: The opponent will get the status Scared for 1 turn for every serpent materiallized. Each serpent has it's own damage mods. Description: After imitating a number of hand seals, a materialized serpent will form from the chanting field and strike the opponent. Points: 4 Jp Again, do not need to state damage modifier part, its a multi hit jutsu. Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Hato Bakudan No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Dove Bombs Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara is activated Cost: 40+X( X= Y*1.5) Damage: 40+Y( amount of damage the user wants to add. Maximum of 20 bonus damage. Damage mod applies after adding Y.) Effects: n/a Description: The user summons a flock of mantra doves to attack the opponent. The doves explodes upon contact. The user can increase the number of birds to his likings at the cost of his chakra. Points: 4 Jp You can make x = y the same. also, this will only be 3 JP. Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Shingon Soutei No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Mantra Binding Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara is activated. Cost: 150 and 100 upkeep ( can only target one opponent) Damage: n/a Effects: The opponent will suffer a loss of 60 evasion, 60 speed and 60 accuracy for an indefinite amount of turn. The bind will stay as long as the user pays the chakra to keep the bind in play. Every, the opponent may try to break free with a cost of 50 stamina/chakra. The opponent may roll a dice of 100, if he rolled 45( This can be changed by applying the binder's ninjutsu mod against the opponents chosen mods(taijutsu/ninjutsu, depends on whether they paid stamina/chakra)or above, he will be free of the bind. Description: The user extends the chanting field until it reaches the opponent. The field is then used to bind the target, slowing him down, making him more prone to be hit. The mantra moves randomly around the enemy, slowly eating away their stamina/chakra as they try to break away from the bind. Points: 5 Jp Can the opponent attack or dodge? Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Konpaku Kujiku( Mantra Style: Soul Crush) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara and Shingon Fuukaku: Shingon Soutei No Jutsu is activated. Cost: 96 per opponent Damage: 120 per opponent Effects: n/a Description: After several hand seals are made, the part of the field that is used to bind the target contracts, causing pain to the target as it slowly crushes his bones. Points: 5 Jp This would work better as an AoE, since you can only spend 150 chakra a turn as a chuunin. So making it 150 chakra and dealing 50 damage to every opponent would be the way to go.
Guest Sasori-dono Posted October 21, 2006 Posted October 21, 2006 For the first jutsu, it is stated that only taijutsu and ninjutsu are raised. And for the last one, it wont do as an AoE jutsu since the mantra binding technique only targets one opponent.
Guest Sasori-dono Posted October 26, 2006 Posted October 26, 2006 Welcome to the ::BUMP:: -ing parade.
cntrstrk14 Posted October 27, 2006 Posted October 27, 2006 DEFENSIVEName: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara( Mantra Style: Chanting Field) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Hibun: Defensive activated Cost: 30+X( Whereby X= Amount of stats the user wishes to add to his/her teammates* 1.5 ) and 15+Y to upkeep( Whereby Y= X/2) Damage: n/a Effects: The technique increases teammates that are in the area's Ninjutsu and Taijutsu by 10. And the jutsu doesn't apply to the user. The user cannot move or attack normally except for doing jutsu that uses this jutsu as a base. If the user moves away from the chanting field(yes, he can still dodge attacks), the field will dissapear. Leaving the field can be define as either going for a taijutsu attack when the enemy is too far away from the user, or the user retreats due to reasons such as being pressured(enemy attacks him two on one, explosive kunai is thrwon at him, etc.) Description: After doing several hand seals, the user thrust his hand towards the ground. In the very moment his/her hand reaches the ground, a seal of mantras covers the ground below the user. It spreads up to 10 meter radius around the user. Although His/her teammates are not in the field of mantra, their stats are still boosted. Points: 2 Jp *Note: If the user doesn't wish to add any bonuses to his/her teammates except the base bonus that is automatically given from the jutsu, X and Y is ignored. APPROVED Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Hebi Dageki No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Serpent Strike Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku Ginshou Nohara is activated. Cost: 25 per serpent( maximum of 3 serpent) Damage: 15 per serpent ( multi-hit jutsu) Effects: The opponent will get the status Scared for 1 turn for every serpent materiallized. Description: After imitating a number of hand seals, a materialized serpent will form from the chanting field and strike the opponent. Points: 4 Jp APPROVED Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Hato Bakudan No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Dove Bombs Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara is activated Cost: 40+X( X= Y) Damage: 40+Y( amount of damage the user wants to add. Maximum of 20 bonus damage. Damage mod applies after adding Y.) Effects: n/a Description: The user summons a flock of mantra doves to attack the opponent. The doves explodes upon contact. The user can increase the number of birds to his likings at the cost of his chakra. Points: 3 Jp APPROVED Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Shingon Soutei No Jutsu( Mantra Style: Mantra Binding Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara is activated. Cost: 150 and 100 upkeep ( can only target one opponent) Damage: n/a Effects: The opponent will suffer a loss of 60 evasion, 60 speed and 60 accuracy for an indefinite amount of turn. The bind will stay as long as the user pays the chakra to keep the bind in play. Every, the opponent may try to break free with a cost of 50 stamina/chakra. The opponent may roll a dice of 100, if he rolled 45( This can be changed by applying the binder's ninjutsu mod against the opponents chosen mods(taijutsu/ninjutsu, depends on whether they paid stamina/chakra)or above, he will be free of the bind. While being binded, the opponent may still attack. Description: The user extends the chanting field until it reaches the opponent. The field is then used to bind the target, slowing him down, making him more prone to be hit. The mantra moves randomly around the enemy, slowly eating away their stamina/chakra as they try to break away from the bind. Points: 5 Jp APPROVED Name: Shingon Fuukaku: Konpaku Kujiku( Mantra Style: Soul Crush) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin Requirements: Shingon Fuukaku: Ginshou Nohara and Shingon Fuukaku: Shingon Soutei No Jutsu is activated. Cost: 96 per opponent Damage: 120 per opponent Effects: n/a Description: After several hand seals are made, the part of the field that is used to bind the target contracts, causing pain to the target as it slowly crushes his bones. Points: 5 Jp This needs to be changed, because a Chuunin technique cannot use more than 150 chakr ain a turn.
