Blackrose Posted October 17, 2006 Posted October 17, 2006 (edited) Aisu Hada (Ice Body) Name: Frozen Transformation Description: The transformation of the Aisu Hada is the most defining part of the bloodline. Though the original user of this bloodline could not revert to his normal form, his later generations learned to use their chakra to FORCE a reversion so that they wouldn't always have to remain in the Frozen Body state. By using their chakra they were able to activate their transformations and revert back to normal at will. While in the transformation the user's hair becomes snow white, and their eyes turn a brilliant blue color. The user's skin becomes pale and cold, while their cold breath can be seen even on the hottest day. The cold becomes nothing to them but, unfortunately, the extreme heat of fire jutsu has a harsher effect on the user's transformed state. With time, the Use can get used to the harsher effects but cannot overcome them. Rank 1: May transform in the Setup Phase with a cost of 10% total chakra. Ice transformation takes 2 turns to revert to normal, with a cost of 10% total chakra to perform the reverse transformation. Fire Jutsu do 30% more damage to the users while transformed rounded up. Ice jutsu does 20% less damage to the user while transformed rounded down. Requires: Clan Membership Cost: -2 Rank 2: May transform in the Setup Phase with a cost of 7% total chakra. Ice transformation takes 1 turn to revert to normal, with a cost of 7% total chakra to perform the reverse transformation. Fire Jutsu do 20% more damage to the user while transformed rounded up. Ice jutsu do 30% less damage to the user while transformed rounded down. (Replaces previous rank) Requires: Rank 1 and Rank 2 of Gifts of ice - Chunnin Cost: -2 Rank 3: May transform in the Setup Phase with a cost of 5% total chakra. Ice transformation reverts to normal immediately with a cost of 5% total chakra to perform the reverse transformation. Fire jutsu do 10% more damage to the user while transformed rounded up, Ice Jutsu do 40% less damage to the user while transformed rounded down. (Replaces previous rank) Requires: Rank 2, and Rank 2 of Gifts of ice. - Jounin Cost: -2 Name: Gifts of Ice Description: The transformation unlocks many abilities that the user wouldn't normally have. While in the transformation ice and the user become one in the same, allowing the user to control ice at will. The nature of ice also provides many defensive as well as offensive capabilities to the user. Rank 1: Ice Jutsu may be used without the need for Subtle elements Water and Wind or Twisted colors. Ice jutsu performed by the user do .2X more damage, while X equals the user's level and may not exceed 15. (Only while transformed) Requirements: Clan Membership, Rank 1 in Frozen Transformation Cost: -2 Rank 2: Water and Wind Jutsu so 10% less damage to the user rounded up. Ice jutsu performed by the user do .3X more damage, while X equals the user's level and may not exceed 25 and does not stack with the pervious rank. (Only while transformed) Requirements: Rank 1 in Frozen Transformation - Rank 1 of Gifts of Ice Rank: -2 Rank 3: The user's Genjutsu gains +40 in stats. Ice jutsu performed by the user do .4X more damage, while X equals the user's level and may not exceed 50 and does not stack with the pervious rank. (Only while transformed) Requirements: Rank 2 in Frozen transformation - Rank 2 in Gifts of Ice - Chunnin Cost: -3 Rank 4: The user's Ninjutsu gains +40 in stats. Taijutsu take's a -20 hit to stats. Ice jutsu performed by the user do .5X more damage, while X equals the user's level and may not exceed 75 and does not stack with the pervious rank. (Only while transformed) Requirements: Rank 3 in Frozen Transformation - Rank 3 in Gifts of Ice - Jounin Cost: -4 Name: Ice Master Description: Now that the User has mastered Ice, they can now come to understand the elements that make up ice. As they do there ability to control ice is much more finely tuned. This makes their ability to control it nearly effortless. Rank 1: Water and wind Elements can be used without the need for Subtle Elements. (Only while transformed.) Requirements: Rank 3 in Frozen Transformation - Rank 4 in Gifts of Ice - Jounin Cost: -1 Rank 2: Ice jutsu take -5 chakra to perform, must pay minimum of 1. May negate the chakra cost for the Frozen Transformation. (Reversion only not the Activation.) Requirements: Rank 1 in Ice Master Cost: -2 Rank 3: Ice jutsu cost -50 Chakra to perform must pay minimum of one. (this replaces previous rank.) Requirements: Rank 2 in Ice Master Cost: -2 Rank 4: Water and Wind Elements cost do .2X Damage where X is equal to the users level. May not exceed 75 maximum. Requirements: Rank 3 in Ice Master. Cost: -3 (Was unsure about the cost ratio for all of this. I tried to incorporate some negative modifiers to even it out. Please give me as much feed back as you want. Just don't be too mean...) Edited October 22, 2006 by Blackfire
Guest Ichi-kun Posted October 18, 2006 Posted October 18, 2006 I would rather see this be activeated in the Setup Phase, all of them, you obtain them all once you activate the bloodline. The cost, will be 5% activation of total chakra and 5% total chakra to maintain. Unlimited use as longas you pay the upkeep.
Blackrose Posted October 19, 2006 Author Posted October 19, 2006 Okay me and Ichi talked about the bloodline online. This bloodline isn't odd when it comes to the transforamtion. The original user of this bloodline could not revert to a normal form he was simply stuck in the transformation. Later generations however learn to use their chakra to FORCE a reversion so that they wouldn't always have to remain in the Frozen Body state. So instead of upkeep the user must pay a percent of their total chakra to activate the transformation and to revert to normal. I'm going to edit that part into the decription so it is more clarified.
experimental lover Posted October 21, 2006 Posted October 21, 2006 I like it... edit the following and I'll approve. My concerns: "Ice Master", Rank 3 = Um... -10 for for -2? Yeah... that's a ripoff to yourself. Your techniques later will cost a SHIT load. This is not worth it to you at all. The only reason I see Rank two being worth it is because you can negate the cost... that better only be the conversion back (meaning CHANGE that part).
Blackrose Posted October 21, 2006 Author Posted October 21, 2006 Okay I adjusted the Rank 2 and Rank 3: Rank 2: -25 Chakra to Ice jutsu cost. Negation of the Reversion chakra cost for Frozen Transformation. Rank 3: -75 Chakra to Ice Jutsu cost. Okay I think that adjustment should be a bit better. Let me know if there is anything else.
experimental lover Posted October 21, 2006 Posted October 21, 2006 (edited) APPROVED. Wait, no. Change the first back to -5... THEN APPROVED. Edited October 21, 2006 by experimental lover
Blackrose Posted October 21, 2006 Author Posted October 21, 2006 done... 1 more to go! ty so much Gxb!
cntrstrk14 Posted October 21, 2006 Posted October 21, 2006 D: -75 is alot, change it to -50 and then approved.
