Shades Posted October 21, 2006 Posted October 21, 2006 (edited) Name: Reikokumujoudo: Maishou'aku Sekkan (merciless style: Ever-grasping Stone ) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Requirements: Reikokumujoudo Cost: 60 stamina Damage: 6 Effects: opponent immobilized for 2 turns. User is immobilized for 1 turn and takes 5 points of unmodified damage Description: The user plants one foot firmly on the ground. After that that the user proceeds to grab the opponent, yank them forward, and simultaneously slam the other foot into the ground and strike the opponent in the stomach area, the user drawing on his life-force to attack the opponent's lower nervous system and locking up the opponent's leg muscles. However, due echoes of the shock returning through the user fist, they also becomes immobilized, albeit not as long as their opponent. Points: 3 Name: Reikokumujoudo: Raika o tsutsuite imasu (merciless style: thrusting fire created by lightning) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Requirements: Reikokumujoudo Cost: 80 stamina Damage: 10 damage per hit (6 hits) Effects: full chain opening to ketsu'atsu bakuhatsu if 2 or more attacks hit. user takes 1 ponit of unmodified damage per each hit that lands Description: the user makes six strikes in rapid succession, using his life-force to light up each of the main arteries. Points: 4 Name: Reikokumujoudo: ketsu'atsu bakuhatsu (merciless style: blood pressure explosion ) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Requirements: Reikokumujoudo Cost: 20 stamina Damage: 1 Effects: 1st turn: opponent takes 1 point of bleeding damage. user takes 3 points of unmodified damage. 2nd round: opponent takes 30 points of bleeding damage. if opponent is inflicted by numb before this attack, they take 10 points of bleeding damage on the additional (3rd) turn. Description: requires senbon. using a senbon, the user punctures one the opponents main arteries and then quickly applies their life-force to temporarily seal the wound and draw as much blood as it can before the wound explodes open few moments later. Points: 1 Name: Reikokumujoudo: shintou kanketsusen (merciless style: Impact Geyser ) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Requirements: Reikokumujoudo Cost: 60 stamina Damage: 12 Effects: opponent is vulnerable. the user must follow up with any taijutsu technique (besides tatsumaki sokubaku). if the user does not, they cannot make any close-ranged attacks for the next turn. Maishou'aku sekkan cannot be used after this technique. user takes 5 points of unmodified damage. Description: the user does a high-speed impact blow which sends the opponent flying. opponent is left in shock of the attack and cannot properly defend themselves from further attack for a few moments. Points: 3 Name: Reikokumujoudo: tatsumaki sokubaku (merciless style: tornado binding) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Requirements: Reikokumujoudo Cost: 80 stamina Damage: (see effects) Effects: requires (a) long-range weapon(s) that are connected to the user either by wires, chains or spiked chains. opponent is ensnared for x amount of turns. also, the opponent takes bleeding damage equal to the amount of damage the weapon(s) can inflict for a number of turns equal to y. may use as many weapons as indicated by basic weapon attacks per rank. user takes unmodified damage equal to z+2. can only be used once per battle per rank. user cannot make any attacks for 3 turns. cannot be used with senbon. Description: weapon based technique. the user spins around, releasing the weapons at the end of the spin, creating a spiral net which the user controls much like a puppeteer, and wraps it around the opponent, binding them to the spot and slowly cutting the opponent trapped inside it. long-range technique. Points: 4 small weapons: x=3, y=1,z=1 per weapon. medium weapon: x=2, y=2, z= 1 per weapon level. large weapon: x=1, y=3, z=2 per weapon level. Suggestions/comments? Edited February 3, 2007 by cntrstrk14
Takius Posted October 22, 2006 Posted October 22, 2006 (edited) Name: Reikokumujoudo: Maishou'aku Sekkan (merciless style: Ever-grasping Stone ) Level 1Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 60 stamina Damage: 6 Effects: opponent immobilized for 2 turns. User is immobilized for 1 turn and takes 5 damage Description: The user plants one foot firmly on the ground. After that that the user proceeds to grab the opponent, yank them forward, and simulataneously slam the other foot into the ground and strike the opponent in the stomach area, the user drawing on his life-force to attack the opponent's lower nervous system and locking up the opponent's leg muscles. However, due echos of the shock returning through the user fist, they also becomes immobililed, albeight not as long as their opponent. Points: 3 Look at the end of this post. Name: Reikokumujoudo: Raika o tsutsuite imasu (merciless style: thrusting fire created by lightning) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 80 stamina Damage: 12 damage per hit (6 hits) Effects: full opening to ketsu'atsu bakuhatsu if 2 or more attacks hit. user takes 1 damage per each hit that lands Description: the user makes six strikes in rapid succession, using his life-force to light up each of the main arteries. Points: 4 Follow the Gennin damage cap my friend (60)... Is the damage the user takes modified or unmodified? Name: Reikokumujoudo: ketsu'atsu bakuhatsu (merciless style: blood pressure explosion ) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 20 stamina Damage: 1 Effects: 1st turn: opponent takes 1 point of bleeding damage. user takes 3 points of damage. 2nd round: opponent takes 30 points of bleeding damage. if opponent is inflicted by numb, they take 10 points of bleeding damage on the additional turn.. Description: requires senbon. using a senbon, the user punctures one the opponents main arteries and then quickly applies their life-force to temporarily seal the wound and draw as much blood as it can before the wound explodes open few moments later. Points: 1 Follow the formula for Bleed damage, please. Name: Reikokumujoudo: shintou kanketsusen (merciless style: Impact Geyser ) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 60 stamina Damage: 12 Effects: opponent is vulnerable. if the user does not follow up with any taijutsu (besides tatsumaki sokubaku) the user cannot make any close-ranged attacks for the next turn. Maishou'aku sekkan cannot be used after this technique. user takes 5 points damage. Description: the user does a high-speed impact blow wich sends the opponet flying. opponent is left in shock of the attack and cannot properly defend themselves from further attack for a few moments. Points: 3 Does this mean that if the user follows up with Taijutsu they cannot use close ranged attacks or that if they don't they can't use close ranged attacks? Word your effects better... Name: Reikokumujoudo: tatsumaki sokubaku (merciless style: tornado binding) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 80 stamina Damage: (see efects) Effects: requires (a) long-range weapon(s) that are connected to the user either by wires, chains or spiked chains. opponent is ensnared for x ammount of turns. also, the opponent takes bleeding damage equal to the amount of damage the weapon(s) can inflict for a number of turns equal to y. may use as many weapons as indicated by basic weapon attacks per rank. user takes damage equal to z+2. can only be used once per battle per rank. user cannot make any attacks for 3 turns. cannot be used with senbon. Description: weapon based technique. the user spins around, releasing the weapons at the end of the spin, creating a spiral net which the user controls much like a puppeteer, and wraps it around the opponent, binding them to the spot and slowly cutting the opponent trapped inside it. long-range technique. Points: 4 small weapons: x=3, y=1,z=1 per weapon. medium weapon: x=2, y=2, z= 1 per weapon level. large weapon: x=1, y=3, z=2 per weapon level. BTW all of these require the skill 'Reikokumujoudo' Suggestions/comments? All of them need to be run through a spelling and grammar check... Denied until the issues above are dealt with and this is written up with CORRECT spelling and grammar. Oh, and from now on please do not post more than 3 techniques at a time as it discourages modmins from looking them over. :] Edited October 22, 2006 by Karasu
Shades Posted October 22, 2006 Author Posted October 22, 2006 (edited) 1.spell-checked. will do a grammar check when I can. 2.damage points is= to the stamina/chakra cost, correct? and the genin's taijutsu damage ratio is 4:5? so wouldn't 60 damage points multipied by that ratio equal 75 damage which is actually more than what that technique does. otherwise, that would make 3 points better in the damage department. 3. how could I create a delayed damage effect, then? 4.re-worded and clarified. 5 Edited October 22, 2006 by Shades
cntrstrk14 Posted October 23, 2006 Posted October 23, 2006 Name: Reikokumujoudo: Maishou'aku Sekkan (merciless style: Ever-grasping Stone ) Level 1Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 60 stamina Damage: 6 Effects: opponent immobilized for 2 turns. User is immobilized for 1 turn and takes 5 damage Description: The user plants one foot firmly on the ground. After that that the user proceeds to grab the opponent, yank them forward, and simultaneously slam the other foot into the ground and strike the opponent in the stomach area, the user drawing on his life-force to attack the opponent's lower nervous system and locking up the opponent's leg muscles. However, due echoes of the shock returning through the user fist, they also becomes immobilized, albeit not as long as their opponent. Points: 3 Is the damage the user takes modified or not? Name: Reikokumujoudo: Raika o tsutsuite imasu (merciless style: thrusting fire created by lightning) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 80 stamina Damage: 12 damage per hit (6 hits) Effects: full opening to ketsu'atsu bakuhatsu if 2 or more attacks hit. user takes 1 damage per each hit that lands Description: the user makes six strikes in rapid succession, using his life-force to light up each of the main arteries. Points: 4 Again, is it modified damage or not? Also, make it a total of 5 hits, otherwise you break the 60 damage genin can do. Name: Reikokumujoudo: ketsu'atsu bakuhatsu (merciless style: blood pressure explosion ) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 20 stamina Damage: 1 Effects: 1st turn: opponent takes 1 point of bleeding damage. user takes 3 points of damage. 2nd round: opponent takes 30 points of bleeding damage. if opponent is inflicted by numb, they take 10 points of bleeding damage on the additional turn.. Description: requires senbon. using a senbon, the user punctures one the opponents main arteries and then quickly applies their life-force to temporarily seal the wound and draw as much blood as it can before the wound explodes open few moments later. Points: 1 Modified or not on yourself? And when you say inflicted by numb, does that mean that if they were numbered before that turn they take 10 points of damage? Maybe make some spaces to clerify what happens on each turn. Such as... First Turn: blah blah blah Second Turn: Blah Blippity Blah Name: Reikokumujoudo: shintou kanketsusen (merciless style: Impact Geyser ) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 60 stamina Damage: 12 Effects: opponent is vulnerable. the user must follow up with any taijutsu technique (besides tatsumaki sokubaku). if the user does not, they cannot make any close-ranged attacks for the next turn. Maishou'aku sekkan cannot be used after this technique. user takes 5 points damage. Description: the user does a high-speed impact blow which sends the opponent flying. opponent is left in shock of the attack and cannot properly defend themselves from further attack for a few moments. Points: 3 Modified or no? Name: Reikokumujoudo: tatsumaki sokubaku (merciless style: tornado binding) Level 1 Type: Taijutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 80 stamina Damage: (see effects) Effects: requires (a) long-range weapon(s) that are connected to the user either by wires, chains or spiked chains. opponent is ensnared for x amount of turns. also, the opponent takes bleeding damage equal to the amount of damage the weapon(s) can inflict for a number of turns equal to y. may use as many weapons as indicated by basic weapon attacks per rank. user takes damage equal to z+2. can only be used once per battle per rank. user cannot make any attacks for 3 turns. cannot be used with senbon. Description: weapon based technique. the user spins around, releasing the weapons at the end of the spin, creating a spiral net which the user controls much like a puppeteer, and wraps it around the opponent, binding them to the spot and slowly cutting the opponent trapped inside it. long-range technique. Points: 4 small weapons: x=3, y=1,z=1 per weapon. medium weapon: x=2, y=2, z= 1 per weapon level. large weapon: x=1, y=3, z=2 per weapon level. APPROVED?, but I want another staff member to look at this first. BTW all of these require the skill 'Reikokumujoudo' Then make a line in each that says... Requirements: Reikokumujoudo Suggestions/comments?
Shades Posted October 23, 2006 Author Posted October 23, 2006 1.clarified 2.clarified and damage per hit is reduced, though I'm still curious about the entire formula. 3.clarified, I think. 4.clarified. 5.
cntrstrk14 Posted October 24, 2006 Posted October 24, 2006 ALL APPROVED Still want another check on the last though.
Guest Ichi-kun Posted October 24, 2006 Posted October 24, 2006 The last one seems alright, it makes sense. App
