wolfnin Posted November 18, 2006 Posted November 18, 2006 (edited) Name: Den Bushin No Jutsu (Lightning Clone Jutsu) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin Cost: 96 chakra/ clone Damage: See Effect Effects: - Can only have a maximum of 5 clones on the field at one time. -Lightning Clones has 1/10 of users stats, except for hp which always has 1. -Lightning Clones can not use healing or stat addition jutsus -Lightning Clones can use damaging ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu. -Clones add +20 evasion to user -they are automatically hit and get no dodge roll -When destroyed by a melee attack opponent becomes numbed for one turn Description: A great technique for lightning ninjas. Using lightning Kumo ninjas are able to create life like clones of themselves. When destroyed lightning explodes around the area shocking anyone that is near the destroyed clone. Points: -3jp (-2jp if you know Cloud Clone) Edited November 20, 2006 by wolfninja33
Cho Hakkai Posted November 18, 2006 Posted November 18, 2006 Since probably a lot of mods are busy, Ill take this one. "Clones add 20% evasion to user." Hm? So you make about 3 and so you begin with a evasion % of at least 60 which in truth is about 240 points worth of stats. No. Just, no. This is way to powerful even with a cap on how many clones you can make. This is the same as the Sand clone in the 1/10 stat retrospec and they cost 50 chakra to make. Already yours doesn't cost enough. You need about 5 more chakra to equal 80 (which is the cost for a sand clone and the numb part). And if a mod disagrees with my previous 20% statement, you still need to add about another 20-40 chakra onto it.
wolfnin Posted November 18, 2006 Author Posted November 18, 2006 (edited) Wait woops my bad I made a mistake. I meant to put +20 to evasion not +20%. Edited November 18, 2006 by wolfninja33
wolfnin Posted November 18, 2006 Author Posted November 18, 2006 Changed and thanks for the help. I'd like some mods to come and look at this.
cntrstrk14 Posted November 19, 2006 Posted November 19, 2006 Can only have a maximum of 5 out at a time.
cntrstrk14 Posted November 20, 2006 Posted November 20, 2006 hmm, for the numb effect, change it to when destroyed with a melee attack. A ranged attack wouldn't really cause said effect.
