wolfnin Posted December 12, 2006 Posted December 12, 2006 (edited) Name: Ookami Revolution Description: The final and ultamite bloodline of the Senuskai clan. Many clan members the posses the ability to activate the bloodline, but do not discover it untill later. Unleashing the wolf part inside of the user, they are able to acheive great strength and speed. The bloodline allowing them to fully master and control any soul jutsu they have been able to reduce how much chakra they use. Using the bloodline to increase their clan jutsu powers they have been known to strike fast and hard. The bloodline causes the Aku Ookami Maku to spread, but does not activate it. Requirements: Must have Wolf Soul Chakra Skill, Wolf Spirit Skill, Aku Ookami Bloodline Rank 2 or higher Rank 1-must be in the clan and lvl 5 or over, Rank 2- level 15, Rank 3-Chunin, Rank 4-jounin Cost: 20% start; 15% upkeep Rank 1- Description- User is surrounded with grey chakra. User's ears begin to become a little pointy. The users eyes become more wolf like. The user is able to move faster and the wolf mark on his/her right hand begins to spread Effect- Users speed is increased by 20. All soul jutsus cost 10% less chakra/stamin than normal. Inability to stak with any other cost reduction abilities. All clan jutsu damage are increased by 10. User's evasion is increased by 20. Cost: -5sp Rank 2- Description: The grey chakra begins to turn black. An aura is created around the user made out of chakra. Wolf Souls begin to surround the user fusing with the chakra. User's nails become sharper and ears more wolf like. The wolf mark fully spreads up the right arm and glows red. Effect- User's speed is increased by 30. All soul jutsu cost 15% less than normal. Inability to stack with any other cost reduction abilities. All clan jutsu damage are incread by 30. Evasion is increased by 40 and user gains +25 chakra at the activation of this jutsu. Does not stack with rank 1 Cost: -3sp Rank 3- Description: Black chakra fully surrounds the user in an aura. The chakra surrounds the shape of the user and begins to form a chakra wolf tail. The user's ears are fully wolf like and are outlined by the chakra. The wolf mark fully covers the body and glows bright yellow. User's eyes turn black and their nails are sharp. Effect: User's speed is increased by 40. All soul jutsu cost 35% chakra/stamina less than normal. Inability to stack with any other cost reduction abilities. All clan jutsu damage are increased by 40. Evasion is increased by 60 and user gainst +45 chakra at the activation of this jutsu. Does not stack with rank 2 cost: -3sp Rank 4- Description: Black chakra still fully surrounds the user in an aura. The chakra outlines the user and a chakra wolf tail is fully formed. The user's nails are sharp and wolf like and their ears are fully wolf like. The user's eyes are wolf like and are the pupil is pure black. The wolf mark fully covers the body and glows a goldish color. Effect: User's speed is increased by 60. All soul jutsus cost 50% chakra/stamina less than normal. Inability to stack with any other cost reduction abilitiesAll clan jutsu damage are increased by 50. Evasion is increased by 80 and the user gains +65 chakra at the activation of this jutsu. Does not stack with rank 3 Cost: -4sp Edited December 23, 2006 by wolfninja33
Guest MrSako Posted December 14, 2006 Posted December 14, 2006 please put in a link to the other skills (Wolf Spirit Chakra, etc)
Guest MrSako Posted December 15, 2006 Posted December 15, 2006 The percentage reduction in Jutsu is too much... you already have a lot of jutsu cost-reducing abilities elsewhere
wolfnin Posted December 16, 2006 Author Posted December 16, 2006 alright I lowered the jutsu reduction cost..and changed some stuff
cntrstrk14 Posted December 16, 2006 Posted December 16, 2006 FOr the cost reduction, add in that it cannot stack with any other cost reduction abilities. I also think for the first rank you mean 10% and not just '10'
wolfnin Posted December 16, 2006 Author Posted December 16, 2006 Fixed the changes that you requested
cntrstrk14 Posted December 19, 2006 Posted December 19, 2006 APPROVED with the inability to stack with other cost reductions.
Arashi Posted December 23, 2006 Posted December 23, 2006 Wait here. This bloodline is underpriced. Rank 1 should cost 6 skillpoints for that effect at least. Why haves it already got one approval? You will have to decrease the effect, or increase the costs (think that 1 skillpoint is around 20 stats)
wolfnin Posted December 23, 2006 Author Posted December 23, 2006 actually the price is right...20(eva)+20(speed)+10 damage +10% chakra reduction=3 sp right there if they are all base on 1 sp per 20 stats
Arashi Posted December 23, 2006 Posted December 23, 2006 No... 20 Eva = 1SP 20 Speed = 1SP 10 Damage (40 ninjutsu or taijutsu) = 2SP 10% CHK reduction = 2SP (or more in some cases) Total: 6 Skill Points
Arashi Posted December 23, 2006 Posted December 23, 2006 Rank 1 - cost 5 (it´s x-mas after all) Rank 2 - cost 3 Rank 3 - cost 3 Rank 4 - cost 4
Arashi Posted December 23, 2006 Posted December 23, 2006 Approved (You will still need another approval since you have done changes)
