wolfnin Posted January 7, 2007 Posted January 7, 2007 (edited) Name: Go-Ruden Ookami: Ookami Fundo(Golden Wolf: Wolf Rage) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin(Clan Jutsu) Cost: 130 chakra Damage: 40 damage Effects: Opponent's ninjutsu damage is reduced by 50 for 1 turns. Cannot be used two times in a row. Does not stack with any other damage reduction. Description: One of the most powerful technique known to the gennin of the Senuskai clan. Unleashing a lot of their chakra the user is able to to cause serious damage to their opponent. As the chakra begins to take shape of wolves, it lunges at the opponent. As the chakra wolves bite their opponent, the opponent is in imese amount of pain, causing their next attack to be weaker. Points: 5 Name: Go-Ruden Ookami: Kihaku Ookami Fundo(Golden Wolf: Soul Wolf Rage) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Jounin(Clan Jutsu) Cost: 200 chakra; must have Wolf Soul Chakra Damage: 50 damage Effects: Opponent's ninjutsu damage is reduced by 100 for 2 turns. Cannot be used two times in a row. Does not stack with any other damage reduction. Description: A more powerful version of the Go-Ruden Ookami: Ookami Fundo. Using the black wolf soul chakra the user is able to to cause serious damage to their opponent. Black chakra circles the user and surrounds them diagonaly. As the chakra takes the shaoe of wolves, the user thrustes his hand foward lauching the wolf shaped chakra at the opponent. The wolves "bite" the opponent causing the opponent in immense pain and causes them to lose their concentration. Points: 5(3 if user knows Go-Ruden Ookami: Ookami Fundo) Name: Go-Ruden Ookami: Seinaru Kihaku Ookami Fundo(Golden Wolf: Sacred Soul Wolf Rage) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Jounin(Clan Jutsu) Cost: 355 chakra; must have Wolf Soul Chakra Damage: 200 damage Effects: Opponent's ninjutsu damage is reduced by 150 for 4 turns. Cannot be used two times in a row. Does not stack with any other cost reduction. Description: A more powerful version of the Go-Ruden Ookami: Kihaku Ookami Fundo. Using the black wolf soul chakra the user is able to to cause serious damage to their opponent. Black chakra circles the user and surrounds them diagonaly. Wolf Shaped Chakra begins to form and glows gold. The user thrustes his hand foward lauching the wolf shaped chakra at the opponent. The wolves "bite" the opponent causing the opponent in immense pain and causes them to lose their concentration. Points: 8(4 if user knows Go-Ruden Ookami: Kihaku Ookami Fundo) Name: Go-Ruden Ookami: Seinaru Kihaku Ookami Fundo Lv. 2(Golden Wolf: Soul Wolf Rage) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Sennin/Forbidden(Clan Jutsu; void) Cost: 1200 chakra and 200 damage to user(unsubtractable) ; must have Wolf Soul Chakra Damage: see effect Effects: User is not able to use any type of jutsu during this jutsu. This jutsu last for 5 turns. When the jutsu is first used, the opponent dodge rolls for this like any normal jutsu. Then after the opponent must roll a d100 at the beginning of each turn. Add the roll of the dice + the opponents level minus the users level to get the result. If they do not have a result of 65 or greater they are trapped in this jutsu. If the opponent rolls a 100 on the roll they automatically escape the jutsu. The opponent is automatically trapped in this jutsu and has 4 chances of escaping. Turn 1: If opponent escapes, opponent is numbed for 2 turns. Turn 2: if opponent escape, opponent is numbed and vulnerable for 2 turns. Opponent's ninjutsu and taijutsu is reduced by 10% of their original stats for the remainder of the battle. Turn 3: If opponent escape, opponent is numbed, vulnerable, and stunned for 2 turns. Opponent's accuracy and evasion is reduced by 15% of their original stat for the remainder of the battle. Turn 4: If opponent escapes, opponent is numbed, vulnerable, and stunned for 2 turns. Opponent's chakra, health, and stamina are reduced by 15%. Turn 5: If opponent fails to escape jutsu by the 4th turn. The opponent rolls a d100. If opponent rolls a 51-100 opponent's chakra, health, and stamina tank stats are reduced to 15% of their original stats and opponent's stats are reduced to 50% of their original stats. Opponent is also hospitalized for x amount of days. (Depends on Kage's decision). If the opponent rolls a 25-50 the opponent tanks stats are reduced to 1 and regular stats are reduced to 0. IF opponent rolls a 1-24 the opponent dies after 3 days of being hospitalized. Description:The ultimate version of the Go-Ruden Ookami: Ookami Fundo. Using the black wolf soul chakra the user is able to cause serious damage to their opponent. Black chakra circles the user and surrounds them diagonally. As the chakra takes the shape of wolves, the user thrusts his hand forward launching the wolf shaped chakra at the opponent. The wolves circle the opponent then strike at them a couple of times. Despite the jutsu's power it affects the user also. Damaging the user as the user thrusts his hand forward the chakra drains some of the user's life. After creating the Go-Ruden Ookami: Seinaru Kihaku Ookami Fuundo, some of the clan members wanted to create an even more powerful version. Unfortunately many ninjas wasted too much of their chakra and passed out while trying to improve the jutsu. After many months of practicing the jutsu and gathering a lot of chakra, the second version of the Go-Ruden Ookami: Seinaru Kihaku Ookami Fuundo was created. As some of the Jounin began using the jutsu, some of the clan ninjas began dying after being attacked with the jutsu. As well as some of the shinobi in the clan began using it for their own personal needs. Many people began complaining to the clan head about the jutsu and its effect on many of the people in the clan. But the clan head refused and told them to use it at their own risk. As the Senuskai Clan war arose this jutsu was one of the main causes of death. Many ninjas were killed, as well as buildings were destroyed too. Once the clan war was settled and after the clan head was established, Kirro Senuskai, the clan head, took it upon himself and labeled the jutsu forbidden. If the jutsu was every to be used in the clan area, the user would be labeled a missing-nin and be killed. cost: 23(18 if Go-Ruden Ookami: Seinaru Kihaku Ookami Fundo and Go-Ruden Ookami: Kihaku Ookami Fundo is known) Edited January 10, 2007 by wolfninja33
cntrstrk14 Posted January 7, 2007 Posted January 7, 2007 Name: Go-Ruden Ookami: Ookami Fundo(Golden Wolf: Wolf Rage)Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin(Clan Jutsu) Cost: 80 chakra Damage: 40 damage Effects: Opponent's ninjutsu damage is reduced by 10% for 2 turns. Cannot be used two times in a row. Description: One of the most powerful technique known to the gennin of the Senuskai clan. Unleashing a lot of their chakra the user is able to to cause serious damage to their opponent. As the chakra begins to take shape of wolves, it lunges at the opponent. As the chakra wolves bite their opponent, the opponent is in imese amount of pain, causing their next attack to be weaker. Points: 2 'Does not stack' Name: Go-Ruden Ookami: Kihaku Ookami Fundo(Golden Wolf: Soul Wolf Rage) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chunnin(Clan Jutsu) Cost: 120 chakra; must have Wolf Soul Chakra Damage: 70 damage Effects: Opponent's ninjutsu damage is reduced by 25% for 3 turns. Cannot be used two times in a row. Description: A more powerful version of the Go-Ruden Ookami: Ookami Fundo. Using the black wolf soul chakra the user is able to to cause serious damage to their opponent. Black chakra circles the user and surrounds them diagonaly. As the chakra takes the shaoe of wolves, the user thrustes his hand foward lauching the wolf shaped chakra at the opponent. The wolves "bite" the opponent causing the opponent in immense pain and causes them to lose their concentration. Points: 3(2 if user knows Go-Ruden Ookami: Ookami Fundo) 'Does not stack', 150 chakra Name: Go-Ruden Ookami: Seinaru Kihaku Ookami Fundo(Golden Wolf: Sacred Soul Wolf Rage) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Jounin(Clan Jutsu) Cost: 300 chakra; must have Wolf Soul Chakra Damage: 200 damage Effects: Opponent's ninjutsu damage is reduced by 40% for 5 turns. Cannot be used two times in a row. Description: A more powerful version of the Go-Ruden Ookami: Kihaku Ookami Fundo. Using the black wolf soul chakra the user is able to to cause serious damage to their opponent. Black chakra circles the user and surrounds them diagonaly. Wolf Shaped Chakra begins to form and glows gold. The user thrustes his hand foward lauching the wolf shaped chakra at the opponent. The wolves "bite" the opponent causing the opponent in immense pain and causes them to lose their concentration. Points: 4(2 if user knows Go-Ruden Ookami: Kihaku Ookami Fundo) 'Does not stack', 4 turns, 360 charka Name: Go-Ruden Ookami: Seinaru Kihaku Ookami Fundo Lv. 2(Golden Wolf: Soul Wolf Rage) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Sennin/Forbidden(Clan Jutsu; void) Cost: 1200 chakra and 200 damage to user(unsubtractable) ; must have Wolf Soul Chakra Damage: see effect Effects:Effects: User is not able to use any type of jutsu during this jutsu This jutsu last for 5 turns. During the beggining of the opponents turn, the opponent must roll a d100. Add the roll of the dice + the opponents level minus the users level to get the result.. If they do not have a result of 65 or greater they are trapped in this jutsu. The opponent is automatically trapped in this jutsu and has 4 chances of escaping. Turn 1: If opponent escapes, opponent is numbed for 2 turns Turn 2: if oppponent escape, opponent is numbed and vulnerable for 2 turns. Opponent's ninjutsu and taijutsu is reduced by 10% of their oringinal stats for the remainder of the battle. Turn 3: If opponent escape, opponent is numbed, vulnerable, and stunned for 2 turns. Opponent's accuracy and evasion is reduced by 15% of their original stat for the remainder of the battle. Turn 4: If opponent escapes, opponent is numbed, vulnerable, and stunned for 2 turns. Opponent's chakra, health, and stamina are reduced by 15%. Turn 5: If opponent fails to escape jutsu by the 4th turn. The opponent rolls a d100. If opponent rolls a 51-100 opponents chakra, health, and stamina tank stats are reduced to 15% of their original stats and opponents stats are reduced to 50% of their original stats. Opponent is also hospitalized for x amount of days. (depends on Kage's decision). If the opponent rolls a 25-50 the opponent tanks stats are reduced to 1 and regular stats are reduced to 0. IF opponent rolls a 1-24 the user dies after 3 days of being hospitalized. These effects for turn 5 are permanant. Description: The ultamite version of the Go-Ruden Ookami:Ookami Fundo. Using the black wolf soul chakra the user is able to to cause serious damage to their opponent. Black chakra circles the user and surrounds them diagonaly. As the chakra takes the shaoe of wolves, the user thrustes his hand foward lauching the wolf shaped chakra at the opponent. The wolves circle the opponent then strike at them a couple of times. cost: 18(15 if Go-Ruden Ookami: Seinaru Kihaku Ookami Fundo and Go-Ruden Ookami: Kihaku Ookami Fundo is known) What does '200 to use' mean. And this large scale reductions cannot be permanent.
shizuki Posted January 7, 2007 Posted January 7, 2007 imma straight-up deny the effect of those first three jutsu. We don't allow percents in techs, and the cost-to-penalty ratio is terrible.
wolfnin Posted January 7, 2007 Author Posted January 7, 2007 done..although Cntr I don't know where you see 200 to use. The only 200 is 200 damage to user. Also i changed the percent to fractions if that's ok.
shizuki Posted January 8, 2007 Posted January 8, 2007 Percents are fractions with a different representation. No.
cntrstrk14 Posted January 8, 2007 Posted January 8, 2007 What shizuki said, make them static ninjutsu decreases.
wolfnin Posted January 8, 2007 Author Posted January 8, 2007 ok changed it..well I fixed it. If this doesn't work out then I'll just make it affect the Ninjutsu stat.
shizuki Posted January 8, 2007 Posted January 8, 2007 1) Needs to cost 130. 40 for damage, 50 for stat sub, another 40 for stat sub maintenance. That means, at a cost of 130 DP, it's a 5-pt chuunin tech. 2) Second needs to cost 200. That's a 5-pt jounin tech. 3) Level 3 needs to cost 355. That's an 8-pt jounin tech. 4) I want cntr's opinion on whether or not that's ready. All point costs were pulled straight off the site.
wolfnin Posted January 9, 2007 Author Posted January 9, 2007 everythings fixed...and I'll get Cntr to look at the fourth technique..
wolfnin Posted January 9, 2007 Author Posted January 9, 2007 wrong how... 1) ok based on how I see the calculations it 10 damage+50(damage reduction)+20(1 turn)=80 2) 30 damage+80(damage reduction)+40(2 turns)=150 that's what I see it as. Unless you did it a different way.
shizuki Posted January 9, 2007 Posted January 9, 2007 The second turn of reduction requires that you pay 80% of the original cost every turn after the first for Ninjutsu.
wolfnin Posted January 9, 2007 Author Posted January 9, 2007 alright I converted them back to the way they were and I fixed the changes you asked for.
cntrstrk14 Posted January 10, 2007 Posted January 10, 2007 I APPROVE the first 3, though they are undercosted, since it should be based on Ninjutsu subtraction, I will let them go through because they are clan, and also because they only effect the damage portion of Ninjutsu and not other factors that the stat could sway (Such as usage of techniques). The last one though... Name: Go-Ruden Ookami: Seinaru Kihaku Ookami Fundo Lv. 2(Golden Wolf: Soul Wolf Rage)Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Sennin/Forbidden(Clan Jutsu; void) Cost: 1200 chakra and 200 damage to user(unsubtractable) ; must have Wolf Soul Chakra Damage: see effect Effects:Effects: User is not able to use any type of jutsu during this jutsu This jutsu last for 5 turns. During the beggining of the opponents turn, the opponent must roll a d100. Add the roll of the dice + the opponents level minus the users level to get the result.. If they do not have a result of 65 or greater they are trapped in this jutsu. The opponent is automatically trapped in this jutsu and has 4 chances of escaping. Turn 1: If opponent escapes, opponent is numbed for 2 turns Turn 2: if oppponent escape, opponent is numbed and vulnerable for 2 turns. Opponent's ninjutsu and taijutsu is reduced by 10% of their oringinal stats for the remainder of the battle. Turn 3: If opponent escape, opponent is numbed, vulnerable, and stunned for 2 turns. Opponent's accuracy and evasion is reduced by 15% of their original stat for the remainder of the battle. Turn 4: If opponent escapes, opponent is numbed, vulnerable, and stunned for 2 turns. Opponent's chakra, health, and stamina are reduced by 15%. Turn 5: If opponent fails to escape jutsu by the 4th turn. The opponent rolls a d100. If opponent rolls a 51-100 opponents chakra, health, and stamina tank stats are reduced to 15% of their original stats and opponents stats are reduced to 50% of their original stats. Opponent is also hospitalized for x amount of days. (depends on Kage's decision). If the opponent rolls a 25-50 the opponent tanks stats are reduced to 1 and regular stats are reduced to 0. IF opponent rolls a 1-24 the user dies after 3 days of being hospitalized. Description: The ultamite version of the Go-Ruden Ookami:Ookami Fundo. Using the black wolf soul chakra the user is able to to cause serious damage to their opponent. Black chakra circles the user and surrounds them diagonaly. As the chakra takes the shaoe of wolves, the user thrustes his hand foward lauching the wolf shaped chakra at the opponent. The wolves circle the opponent then strike at them a couple of times. cost: 18(15 if Go-Ruden Ookami: Seinaru Kihaku Ookami Fundo and Go-Ruden Ookami: Kihaku Ookami Fundo is known) Ok, the very first roll on turn one should be mentioned that it is a normal dodge roll. After you 'trap' them in it, you can continue with the level rolls. Also, for the level rolls, you should add in that if they roll a perfect 100 on the die that they break out. This is to give a 1% luck chance for someone to break out if they are 35 levels under you. Also, jutsu points need to be upped to 23, as per cost rules following Forbidden jutsu. Clean up some of the grammar too, especially in the effect. Missing some periods, etc. I would also say to expand your description. Forbidden jutsu have a long history of their creation, their use, the reason they are forbidden, their origin. There is a lot to write about, so expand that greatly. You cannot just make these willy nilly. They need to be honed.
wolfnin Posted January 10, 2007 Author Posted January 10, 2007 changes are fixed, description added, and spell checked
