Muse Posted June 13, 2010 Posted June 13, 2010 (edited) As a side note, I've really really worked hard on this.. so, if you will- at least look at this topic. I'm hoping it can be approved in the week or so. Enjoy.~ Her lips; sweet, moist- something wet and something memorable. A tear drop strolling, just strolling; trailing down her cheek like an august waterfall; the serene kisses floating gently abreast. Her eyes- they were said to be pure, transparent.. able to conceive a story which plotted her entire life. A touch of her skin has been hinted to send wonderful springs of joy and fright; a synergism of two unlike things, creating an unimaginable affect between two unidentifable lovers. Shuryō Sukōpu [Huntress Eagle-scope] At first it began as a pigment of ones imagination; began from two definite lovers, after conceiving a a sun-kissed child on winters morning. The child herself, Igeki Akemi began to exhibit strange symptoms, as at birth her eyes seemed to radiate a bright golden hue; the pupils were slightly bigger sporadically, and there was a usual almond shape which took place. They compared her orbs to that of a winged creature, she feeding off the resemblance, giving her a very exotic factor which put her in a higher caliber than most girls her age. Though she only felt it was for show any nothing else, what really went on was within her occular talent, giving her another 'foresight'; an advantage above all else. Within Akemi's body, enzymes that made up the strands of her DNA had a strange input that even gave off a stranger output. This is what gave her the notable color of her pupils, and the strange look of dilation. Though the mutation itself does not affect any of her circulatory organs, lungs, or that of her chakra points, it has a significant on her eyes which gives her an 'edge'. She can see things at an amazing distance, another depiction of her being a bird; she just hasn't spreaded her wings, yet. The remarkable thing about this was that even with her bird-like feature, she has the same hinderances they have. If one induced a temporary blindness on her, she would find that the effects were two times as effective, and things that are flashy seem to give of an additional blindness which can hinder her sight to an extant. But because of all of the hinderances placed upon her, her attacks have to be somewhat strong. Her accuracy is adept, being able to target multiple things and hit them consecutively with ease, pin-pointing the different vital points within the human body simply, the ratio of hit and miss usually 20:1 (technically). And with her bird-like characteristics, there came many chances where in her life she would be able to deal deadly blows which could shock someone senseless. She's able to strengthen every shot she makes- her eyes can pick out the vital areas and exploit them, often leading to very stern blows which could leave someone stricken. In some cases her attacks might be so accurate they are critical hits- though this is information built if her previous actions, the estimation of showing this ability is so high one could say she would develop this 'huntress' trait within her teenage years, as each breath she takes leads to that beginning, and because of the birth mutation it is probable it will be passed down to her generation to come. Īguru Bijon [Eagle Vision] Akemi showed many unusual characteristics which led those who observed her to believe that she was essentially unable to be taken lightly; her eyes are so amazingly 'sculpted' that everything she sees are so vivid, knicks and crannies in the trees are highly visible. She can quite literally spot anything she wanted to from a miles radius, though it's not enough for a 181 degree and up circumference; it's still quite effective. The minute the 'switch' is turned on within her, her eyes are able to adjust to many things though there are some drawbacks. When she was further tested, it appeared as though using projectiles was to her advantage attacks made when flinging a rock from her hands were two times as effective for her in terms of crippling the adversary. //|| Note ||\\: Gennin: It costs 10% stamina upon activation, and 5% every turn after. Chuunin+: It costs 5% stamina upon activation, and 2.5% every other turn after. rank 1 Accuracy base stat is increased by 3x, where x is the users level [minimum = 3o] (may not exceed 1.5x their base stat) Does not stack with any other stat-raising skill. (-3) rank 2 Accuracy base stat are increased by 6x, where x is the users level [min = 6o]. Does not stack with other stat-raising skill. (may not exceed 1.5x their base stat) Chuunin rank, must have attained rank one of Īguru Bijon. (-4) rank 3 Accuracy base stat is increased by 10x [minimum = 9o] , where x is the users level. Does not stack with any other stat-raising skill. (May not exceed 1.5x their base stat) Jounin rank; level 5o, must have attained rank two of Īguru Bijon(-4) Dorīmu Keikan [Dream-scape] The foundations of her genetic affect, within her occular mutation there came a form of reassure. Within her eyes there came another foresight, able to conjure a sudden strength within her. With her sight, using items found off the ground were so much more effective, techniques that utilized her 'huntress advantage' have been shown as more startling than ever before, having a much wider impact than other things she could do. rank 1 For every 25 points in their accuracy stat, they gain an additional 2% to perform a critical hit with a ranged attack [projectiles, ranged non-genjutsu techniques]. May never exceed 2o% for the crit-hit mod. User may never use the concentration mod as a critical hit modifier. Does not stack with any other critical-to hit raising skills. Gennin, level 1o. (-3) rank 2 For every 4o points in their accuracy stat, they gain an additional 3% to perform a critical hit with a ranged attack [projectiles, ranged non-genjutsu techniques]. May never exceed 3o% for the crit-hit mod. User may never use the concentration mod as a critical hit modifier. Does not stack with any other critical-to hit raising skills. Chuunin rank, must have attained rank one of Dorimu Keikan. (-3) rank 3 For every 6o points in their accuracy stat, they gain an additional 4% to perform a critical hit with any taijutsu attack[basic attacks, projectiles, weaponry, non-chakra using techs.]. May never exceed 4o% for the crit-hit mod. User may never use the concentration mod as a critical hit modifier. Does not stack with any other critical-to hit raising skills. Jounin rank; level 5o, must have attained rank two of Dorimu Keikan.(-4) Troubling Huntress Description: Though there are so many advantages of acquiring this mutation of genes, one who carries this gift often finds that their eyes are more susceptible to attacks that induce blindness, making it much harder to adjust. Effect: Status effects that induce blindness and/or cause flashy lights [impaired Eyesight, Blind, Fazed] last one turn longer, or for their maximum duration. Requirements: Must acquire the first rank of Iguru Bijon, must be taken at character creation. Cost: +3 Edited June 15, 2010 by Bell
Azure Posted June 14, 2010 Posted June 14, 2010 I ask that you include that no other skills may raise the % to get a critical and that jazz if you're reaching for a max of 40%.
