Hardcore Skittlez Posted October 1, 2011 Posted October 1, 2011 Ryuumyaku [Dragon Pulse] Type; Ninjutsu [Fire; Distortion] [seal-less] Rank; Sennin [Clan] [Personal] Cost; 750 Damage; 700 Effect; Requires the consumption of the setup-phase prior to this technique's use to form this technique. This technique may not be "blocked" by a shinobi of equal or lesser rank to the technique's user; additionally, it ignores 5% of its intended target's defense. For the purposes of this technique, treat the effects of "Subtle Elements; Fire" as being tripled; similarly, this technique does not "consume" the bonuses granted by "Sharingan Secret Technique; Spacial Distortion Arts", though it does not benefit from that skill. Requires Toripuruha Sharingan to be active. Requires use of both arms. Description; Ryuumyaku is the original technique of Uchiha Katsuro's Ryuuton ninjutsu series- a superb blend of traditional ninjutsu and sharingan spacial distortion arts. This technique's formation begins when Katsuro forcibly isolates the chakra in a single arm and converts it into the space-distorting chakra found within the Uchiha distortion arts; this act causes a light-blue glowing "seal" to form on that appendage, winding its way up to his shoulder before abruptly stopping. After doing so, Katsuro will form an orb of highly volatile fire-oriented chakra to coalesce in his opposing hand. Formation of the technique thereon becomes "tricky", as Katsuro must bring both of his hands together to compact the fire chakra with the distortion element bound into his arm- this oftentimes causes the precisely formed 'orb' to lose shape and revert into an amorphous mass of dual-elemental chakra. With those steps finished, the technique becomes "completed"- though execution remains an entirely different matter. Given the nature of the technique and his mastery over the combined arts of distortion and another element, Katsuro is unable to launch the mass of chakra as a projectile lest it lose its form and dissipate into nothing more than a temporary spacial 'anomaly'; Katsuro must bring himself into close quarters with his chosen target through whatever means necessary and press the mass of chakra into the target's body. Unlike most similar techniques, Ryuumyaku has no immediate external results- instead, the spacial distortion chakra 'phases' the mass of flame into the target's internal workings. There, the flame will erupt and expand- severely burning anything that it can in its fairly short lifetime. Even given the aforementioned lifespan of the completed technique, it has proven thus-far to be a very damaging ninjutsu. -11 jp [[ Pricing logic: (700*2)/3=467 for base damage 113*2=226(tripling subtle elements; fire)* 467+226=693 Incapable of being blocked from sacrifice of setup phase Ignoring 5% comes from the remaining cost, which is 57- which is roughly 10 chakra per 1% of defense ignored *113 was derived from reverse-math found in Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu [Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique] 火遁・豪龍火の術Rank; Jounin [Clan(Uchiha)] Type; Ninjutsu [Fire] Cost; 280 Damage; 250 Effect; When applying Subtle Elements; Fire to this technique, consider its effects doubled. After this is used, the climate is changed to "Rain" for two turns, even if this technique misses. Description; The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes it into a dragon-shaped fireball. The user then skillfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. Even outside of the attack range, its power and reliability are stressed. The flames have a high temperature, as they can create an upward movement of air currents which in turn can give rise to thunder clouds. A master of this technique can fire off several flames in succession and anyone caught in the technique could potentially be reduced to ashes. -8 jp (250*2)/3=167, 280-167= 113 chakra to double the effects of subtle elements; fire(increasing its burn damage by an additional 5%.) I just doubled that for the additional 5% that comes from tripling it, which makes 113*2=226 ]]
Major Posted October 7, 2011 Posted October 7, 2011 The math is sound, at least to me. Seems to be alright. Approved, but I'm curious to see what a modmin thinks.
cntrstrk14 Posted October 8, 2011 Posted October 8, 2011 Can you give me a link to "Sharingan Secret Technique; Spacial Distortion Arts" ?
Hardcore Skittlez Posted October 9, 2011 Author Posted October 9, 2011 http://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=30083 Sharingan Secret Technique; Spacial Distortion ArtsEffect: Allows the use of the [Distortion] techniques. [Distortion] is a void type element whose total damage and effects may never be reduced by more than 2/5s of their total, except in the case of responsive skills or techniques that would entirely ignore one or both sections of a [Distortion] technique. Whenever a [Distortion] technique is used, the user gains an additional 4% hit(stacking per use) to a maximum of an additional 12% to hit. This bonus does not apply to other exclusively [Distortion] techniques, and is consumed when a non-[Distortion] technique is used. Description: Among the Sharingan's plethora of abilities lies one gem that only the most talented, or determined, of the Sharingan wielders might find themselves capable of using- Spacial Distortion Arts. Through these arts, the Sharingan wielder gains access to manipulation of the space around them- an ability that is most often used as a means to set of more successful combos on an opponent, and revered as a pinnacle of ninjutsu mastery. Requirements: Requires Toripuruha Sharingan to be active to use any [Distortion] techniques. -4
