Nyna Posted January 9, 2006 Posted January 9, 2006 (edited) ~User Data~ -Username: Nyna -Posting: At least one to two times a day -Time Zone: EST ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Name: Ri'nil Kila Village: Suna Clan: None Age: 10 ~Appearance~ -Height: 4' 5" -Weight: 62 lbs. -Hair Color: Dark Brown -Eye Color: Dark Brown, a slightly lighter shade than her eyes -Clothing: Kila typically wears a loose dark red sleeveless shirt with a picture of a large black dragon on the back, spitting out fiery bright red and orange flames across the back and around the left side of her body. She wears a dark red wristband with a orange stripe that goes around the middle of the band. She wears a pair of loose-fitting dark brown shorts, a small red teardrop adorning the lower part of the left leg. Her kunai pouch is tied to a thin black belt around her upper left leg. Finally, Kila usually wears a pair of dark brown boots that go up to a little past her ankles, about a third of the way up her shin. The laces of her boots are a dark red, and a small flame weaves its way up the left side of her left boot and the right side of her right boot. Her village amulet is worn around her left shin, directly above her boot. -Physical Description: Kila's dark brown hair is cut in two layers, the outer falls a bit past her ears, while the second, a bit of a lighter shade than the outer layer, ends a little above the bottom of her ears. The outer layer is cut so that the inner layer, though mostly hidden, is still easily visible. Both layers of hair are cut so that small groups of strands are cut to the same length but different groups of strands are cut to varying lengths. Kila's eyes always seem to express an inner joy at life itself, and a smile always seems ready to appear on her lips at any moment. While small in stature, only weighing a little over sixty pounds and about four and a half feet tall, Kila does not look weak in the least. Her body is slender and her muscles well-toned and lean, ready to spring into action in an instant. She looks a little more biased towards speed over power, as her body is rather light, which tends to be representative of speed, but she looks as though she can pack a punch when neccessary. Kila's tanned skin tends to be covered with a multitude of small cuts, scrapes and bruises from various training or games on her arms and legs, and her clothes are rarely perfectly clean, usually having some kind of mud stain somewhere. The girl seems to simply radiate energy and her joy with life. Story/Background: Kila was born to Ri'nil Jirako, a retired Jounin, (currently) age 51 and Ri'nil Rina, owner of a local okonomiyaki restaurant, (currently) age 48, two citizens of the Suna Village, along with her identical twin sister, Ri'nil Miyami. They are the youngest of five siblings. The oldest, their brother, Ri'nil Duran, now 24, is currently a Chunnin of the Suna village. Ri'nil Lorana, their sister, age 21, has just recently become a Chuunin at the last exam, and Ri'nil Tibal, their other brother, age 16, is currently a Genin with little hope of ever becoming a Chuunin in the near future due to his temper and rebellious streak. Kila grew up with her twin sister, constantly getting in trouble for pranks Kila came up with. The more energetic of the twins, Kila was usually in trouble for something, whether it was for refusing to come home by curfew or throwing mud at a classmate she didn't get along with at the time. Occasionally she'd drag Miyami into the mess, with the two coming up with plans such as placing a live frog in a girl's desk to setting up a tripwire to launch water balloons at someone entering a classroom. Kila's relationships with her family members are very good. She looks up to her older sister, trying to become as good as she has become, and then better, of course. Her brother Duran is a great source of advice, and her mother is kind, caring, and another source of advice for any problems she may have. Her father, while very strict and not happy with the pranks Kila constantly pulls and the trouble she gets in, is another good source of advice for all things ninja. Kila gets along very well with her twin as well, and the two share nearly everything, from clothes to food to secrets. The only family member Kila dislikes is her brother Tibal. Tibal, a rather arrogant, rebellious, and (in Kila's opinion) stupid guy, constantly teases, picks on, and basically annoys Kila to no end. The main target of Kila's pranks, Tibal and Kila do not get along in the least, and Kila's primary objective is to be better than Tibal in everything possible, just to show him just how bad he really is. Kila entered the Ninja Academy to follow in her father's footsteps. Though her mother wanted her to wait several years, Kila refused, stating "I want to become strong to protect you and sis as soon as possible!" Training every day to reach this goal, Kila is set in her determination to protect her family, the most important people in her life (other than Tibal). Determination can only take you so far, however, as Kila soon learned upon entering the Academy. Though mastering the theory behind the jutsu's never seemed to be a real problem for the young girl, for some reason she was never able to perform the techniques, no matter how hard she tried. Eventually, she just decided that it must be her teacher's fault, for it's not like she could be bad at anything someone else can do! It's not like those Genjutsu's are interesting anyways... Personality: A very cheerful, energetic girl who loves life and lives life to its fullest. While she respects authority, she finds it difficult not to pull pranks on those she dislikes, though they never cause any real harm. If something like a bucket of water falling from a slightly open door onto someone's head happens, the first person everyone looks to is Kila, who is usually giggling over at her desk. However, as all her friends know, Kila is very kind and loyal to friends and family, and will never go back on her word, once given. A insult to a friend is an insult to Kila, and Kila will always stand up for friends and family alike, no matter the cost. One of Kila's favorite things to do is compete with others, whether it happens to be through a sport, a game, or some other competition, friendly or otherwise. Kila is quite competitive, and always tries to be the best in everything, though she's always willing to help out those she gets along with in order to have better competition. One of the things Kila is not known for is the ability to keep her cool. Possessing a rather short temper at times, Kila is rather famous among her group of friends for her rather volatile temper; she easily becomes angered from a precieved insult to her person, and, though she seems to shed her anger after a while, it's usually only due to her plotting some sort of 'revenge' on the target of her anger, such as a silly prank of some sort. Kila is quick to forgive her friends for angering her, but slow to forgive those she dislikes already, or didn't know beforehand. Kila's first impression of a person is usually her only impression of a person; she rarely revises her opinion, once made. Kila is rather impatient at the best of times. She likes to always be moving about, and standing around waiting for someone to show up or something to happen is not her cup of tea. The only way to get her to wait peacefully is to bribe her with some kind of food or sweet, like ice cream. Otherwise, she gets really bored really quickly, and a bored Kila tends to become an annoyed and/or angry Kila after awhile. Due to her impatience, Kila's never really bothered with Genjutsu's, preferring to strike at her opponent's directly instead of wasting time tiring her opponents out. Likes: Pranks, A warm cozy fire, Food, Sweets, Miyami, Sports, Games, Running around and enjoying life in general Dislikes: Punishment, the cold, Vegetables, Medicine, Tibal, Reading, Homework, sitting around and doing absolutely nothing Hopes: Become strong to protect her mother and Miyami, to one day eat the best Okonomiyaki in the world, to become world-renowned for her prowess as a Ninja Fears: Death of a family member, Lightning, Unable to be a Ninja any longer, Breaking a promise, Failing her friends and family ~Favorite~ (What's your character's favorite…) -Food: Any kind of Okonomiyaki (except those with veggies) -Sweets: Strawberry Ice Cream -Color: Red, Brown -Music Genre: Anything loud and/or fast -Book Genre: What's a book? -Sport: Soccer -Prank: Painting a Fake Moustache on Tibal's Face three years ago while he was asleep -Sibling: Miyami Ninja Stats Level: 5 TXP: 580 (Ghost XP): 50 -Stats(out of 1050)- (Health Power) 80 (Stamina) 110 (Chakra) 100 (Taijutsu) 120 (Defense) 40 (Ninjutsu) 100 (Resistance) 40 (Genjutsu) 0 Sealed (Concentration) 40 (Speed) 240 (Accuracy) 80 (Evasion) 100 Skills: 0 Skill Points Available Skill Name: Subtle Elementals (Fire) Effect: You may learn an elemental jutsu that is not from your village (IE: Fire jutsus in Mist village). Remember that you must specify which element you bought with this skill (Fire, Mist, Wind, Earth, Lightning, Grass, Sound) Cost: -1 Skill Name: The Twisted Colors Effect: You may create techniques from two different elements. Cost: -1 Requirements: Subtle Elementals Skill Name: Shiva: The Destroyer Effect: If you have this skill any direct attack type jutsus you use deal an additional 25% damage, but you may not use Genjutsus or Medical Jutsus. Cost: -3 Skill Name: Knowing the Elements Effect: By knowing the the elements of Ninjutsu perfectly you have discovered the flaws in many of them and are able to cut through your enemies simple-minded techniques like so much paper. Your rank in this skill determines how many times you can choose to ignore the damage from an enemy Ninjutsu. Effects of the jutsu outside damage still strike you (Web Jutsu will still bind you, etc). Cost: -2 Ranks: 1 Jutsu Adept Bloodline: No Requirements: Permission from creator Description: The user, through hard work, practice and defined skill is very adept in the pratice of charka flow, and jutsu formation. Effects: -Jutsu take 50% justsu slots up when learning(IE Every 2 jutsu learned= 1 slot taken) -Jutsu cost 5 Chakra less Cost: -4 Hindering Skills: Skill Name: Fear of the Elements: (Lightning) Effect: User is paralyzed for one post after seeing Lightning used against them for the first time in a match. Cost: +1 Skill Name: Sealed Genjutsu Effect: Cannot use any Genjutsu techniques. Cost: +2 Techniques: Basic Academy Jutsus: Name: Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates an illusionary replica of the user. It is unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as a good distraction. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: 6 Free Jutsu Slots Wind Blade (Kaze no Yaiba) Type: Ninjutsu (wind) Rank: Gennin Cost: 30 Damage: 20 Effect: A very hard to dodge and especially penetrating ttack. This attack reduces evasive skills used against it by 20 as well as ignoring any armor used against it. It must be used very close to melee range though. Description: A sword of wind that forces compressed air to cut through the target. Since it is so fast and hard to see it is hard to avoid, and the wind goes right through all defenses. Due to the tempermental nature of wind the blow only maintains enough force to be dangerous with ten feet though. Powerful Fireball Skill (Katon Goukakyuu no Jutsu) Type: Ninjutsu (Fire) Rank: Gennin Cost: 30 Damage: 30 Effect: If performed by a member of the Uchiha clan this technique causes serious burning which will cause five additonal damage for the next five posts unless tended to. Non-Uchiha only burn for two posts. If this technique misses the user is left vulnerable for one post due to the awkward position they need to take to use the jutsu. Description: The trademark fireball jutsu, this technique creates fire from the lungs and generates it through the mouth, funneling through a hand put in front of the mouth. Due to needing to stand still and putting the hands away from the defense this can be a risky move. Leaf Spinning Wind (Konoha Senpuu) Type: Taijutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 20 Damage: 10 Effect: This move is incredibly hard to dodge. Lower the effective evading stat of the target by 20 - 30 if you have more than double their taijutsu. This move leaves opponents vulnerable (only half dodge/defense) to the Kage Buyo technique for their next post only. Description: The ninja dissapears in a blur of pure speed, appearing right under their target and thrusting a kick into their chin from below, launching them into the air. While weak and costle the move is very hard to avoid and makes a great opening. Shadow Leaf Dance (Kage Buyou) Type: Taijutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Effect: The opponents skips his next response phase. Description: A technique used to attach the user to their opponents shadow. Once done, the victim is in a vulnerable position to a more damaging attack. Such as Initial Lotus or less advanced attacks, like the Lion Combo. Jutsus Learned From Jounin: Suna Jutsu: Kyananbo-Ru [sand Type: Cannonball] Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 20 + X (X=Extra Chakra paid) Damage: 20 Effect: User can pay Up to 40 extra chakra per ninja rank (including genin) to add up to 40 damage per rank to this technique. This cannot exceed damage caps. Enemy is knocked out of melee range. Description: A simple orb of sand that can be conjured by the simplest Suna-Nin. It can, however, become deadly, for it is easily able to be enlarged, being able to deal more damage when launched at high speeds by the wind. Learned here. Suna Jutsu: Nenshou Kyananbo-Ru [sand Type: Flaming Cannonball] Type: Ninjutsu (Sand/Fire) Rank: Genin Cost: 50 Damage: 30 (10 Burn Damage for 3 Turns) Effects: Enemy is knocked out of Melee range. Requirements: Twisted Colors, Ability to use Konoha and Suna jutsu. Description: When formed, the sand is coated in chakra, which can be ignited by the user. This turns the once mere projectile into a flaming ball, which is substancially hurtful. Learned here. Name: Kaen Hyoushi (Blaze Beat) Type: Dual-Style Taijutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Damage: 25/20/20 Effects: Multi-Attack, -10 accuracy each attack after the first Description: A wild attack, lashing out with one leg to strike the opponent upwards, followed quickly by two strong kicks to the chest. It's hard to keep track of an aerial opponent though and thus while powerful the attacks suffers some problems landing. Learned here. Armor: -Head: -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): Village Amulet -Feet: Weapons: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: -Un-equipped Slot one: -Un-equipped Slot two: -Un-equipped Slot three: Items-- -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai -Items in Vault: Nothing -Money on hand: $125 ~Update Log~ Character Approval: 01/10/06 - By: Kitai Tenshi, Arashi, and Draseri Leveled up: 4/30/06 - Level 5: Link 4/29/06 - Level 4: Link 4/28/06 - Levels 2 & 3: Link 3/18/06 - Level 1: Link Exp Earned: 4/30/06: 21 exp gained at the end of training: Link 4/30/06 - 106 XP during training: Link 4/29/06 - 107 XP during training: Link 4/28/06 - 245 XP plus the Kage Buyou and Konoha Senpuu Link 3/18/06 - 100 XP plus a skill point as a reward for being patient =) Link 2/1/06 - 50 Ghost XP during basic training: Link ~Money Log~ 5/7/06 - Spent 50$ on a raffle ticket - Link ~Battle Log~ Wins: None Losses: None Draws: None ~Mission Log~ Rank D: None Rank C: None Rank B: None Rank A: None Rank S: None Edited May 7, 2006 by Nyna
Guest kuratg Posted January 9, 2006 Posted January 9, 2006 ^-^ This is a really good application and I couldn't find much to critize. However, something did bug me enough to post: You're character seems to have no real faults or weaknesses aside from her love of pulling pranks on people she dislikes. Maybe you could go into her battle etiquette or expand on her personality to include a couple of negitive aspects of herself. With that, you could add a couple of hindering skills and allow yourself more room for beneficial ones.
Guest Sweet Neodaddy Posted January 9, 2006 Posted January 9, 2006 (edited) Well, if roleplayed correctly, that single hindrance could mess the character up quite a bit, Kura. Taking on hindrance traits isn't required, and (IMO) should only be done if it fits your character. Other skills will come anyway. Congratulations, you have a decent character sheet. Edited January 9, 2006 by Sweet Neodaddy
Guest kuratg Posted January 9, 2006 Posted January 9, 2006 *Shrugs* Didn't say she had to. Twas a suggestion-seemingly perfect characters are even harder to RP since they've got no faults-making up crap that completely doesn't fit AFTER the character's been accepted is pointless. Better to nip it in the bud.
Nyna Posted January 9, 2006 Author Posted January 9, 2006 (edited) I've added an additional two paragraphs to Kila's personality. I had already decided those few little quirks in Kila's personality, but I'd forgotten to add them to the description. Thanks for the replies! Edit: I've added another paragraph to Kila's personality, as well as a few hindering skills. I figure, if Kila doesn't use Genjutsu anyways, I might as well seal it... I've used the bonus skill points to add another skill as well. I've also added Fears and Hopes under Likes and Dislikes, just to help expand on Kila's personality a bit. I also added her favorite sweet to the favorites section (gotta love that strawberry ice cream! ) Edited January 9, 2006 by Nyna
Kitai Tenshi Posted January 9, 2006 Posted January 9, 2006 After reviewing your character sheet i give you a gold star. I think its done very well. My only thing, and this is a pet pevee, is put sealed next to your genjutsu stat. Just makes it easier for staff to know before they get to your skills. But since it is just a pet pevee I give you your first ~APPROVAL~
Arashi Posted January 9, 2006 Posted January 9, 2006 Approved Really good, the only thing that would be better is if you put in the costs of your skills in the sheet.
Nyna Posted January 9, 2006 Author Posted January 9, 2006 Thanks for the approvals! I've made the changes that you've asked.
Guest Laguna Posted January 9, 2006 Posted January 9, 2006 "Edit: I've added another paragraph to Kila's personality, as well as a few hindering skills. I figure, if Kila doesn't use Genjutsu anyways, I might as well seal it... I've used the bonus skill points to add another skill as well." Really good sheet, but sealing Genjutsu is not a choice. It is a deformity in most cases, I would mention that in your BG. PLUS since she has sealed genjutsu I would add more info about her having a hard time at the academy because most of the things on the academy jutsu are genjutsu. Just my two cents.
Nyna Posted January 10, 2006 Author Posted January 10, 2006 Yeah, I see what you mean. I've added a sixth paragraph under Background to flesh this out a little. It's a deformity, of course, but it's not like Kila's going to admit that to herself. It must be the teacher's fault, right?
Guest Tao Posted January 10, 2006 Posted January 10, 2006 ^-^ This is a really good application and I couldn't find much to critize. However, something did bug me enough to post: You're character seems to have no real faults or weaknesses aside from her love of pulling pranks on people she dislikes. Maybe you could go into her battle etiquette or expand on her personality to include a couple of negitive aspects of herself. With that, you could add a couple of hindering skills and allow yourself more room for beneficial ones. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Whats wrong with no weaknesses or no hindering traits? my char is no hindering traits at all and he is perfectly fine..>.> but besides that..ill get back to work.. Good Job. Everything seems in order. Welcome to Suna, Approved.
Guest kuratg Posted January 10, 2006 Posted January 10, 2006 *Shrugs* Didn't say she had to. Twas a suggestion-seemingly perfect characters are even harder to RP since they've got no faults-making up crap that completely doesn't fit AFTER the character's been accepted is pointless. Better to nip it in the bud. <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
Takius Posted January 11, 2006 Posted January 11, 2006 Whats wrong with no weaknesses or no hindering traits? my char is no hindering traits at all and he is perfectly fine..>.> but besides that..ill get back to work..Good Job. Everything seems in order. Welcome to Suna, Approved. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Because perfect people are annoying...? And also because nobody's perfect. =]
Rei Posted January 11, 2006 Posted January 11, 2006 (edited) Hindering skills add depth to characters, however most are clearly abused to get skill points it's sad to say the least. Really good sheet, but sealing Genjutsu is not a choice. One of her skills limits ninjustu use. Edited January 11, 2006 by Rei
Nyna Posted January 11, 2006 Author Posted January 11, 2006 One of her skills limits ninjustu use. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Would you care to specify what skill limits ninjutsu use? To my knowledge, none of my skills limits my ninjutsu's in any way.
Maelstrom Posted January 11, 2006 Posted January 11, 2006 I believe Rei is referring to Shiva: the Destroyer. Makes it so you can't use Medical Jutsu. Not really that awful I suppose. If that's not what he's referring to then I have no idea. ^^; Anyway, great character sheet. Perhaps some life might be brought back to Suna soon enough.
Guest Tao Posted January 15, 2006 Posted January 15, 2006 hmm yet another Suna nin fully approved already. Ill get you moved as well.
Nyna Posted February 3, 2006 Author Posted February 3, 2006 Edited to add two new jutsus and 50 ghost XP.
Nyna Posted March 21, 2006 Author Posted March 21, 2006 Edited to add a new skill, Knowing the Elements.
Nyna Posted April 28, 2006 Author Posted April 28, 2006 Edited main post to add 245 exp and two techniques, the Kage Buyou and Konoha Senpuu... though since I'm a Suna nin, I really think it should be called the Suna Senpuu.
