Shadow Posted February 21, 2006 Posted February 21, 2006 (edited) ~User Info~ -Username: Kihoji -Posting: As much as I can. Email me if I'm needed. -Time Zone: Eastern Standard, -5 GMP ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Basics~ Name: Karasu Kihoji (sometimes known as Sand Wanderer) Village: Suna (Sand) Clan: none Age: 13 Gender: Male ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Appearance~ -Height: 5'8 -Weight: 155lbs -Hair: He has black hair that comes just past his ears. It is straight and a lot of times it covers his eyes. -Eyes: He has black eyes that most of the time they show no emotion. -Clothing: He wears black stealth pants with no markings of any kind. He also wears a crimson, skintight, long sleeve shirt that is made for rough terrain and even water engagements. He wears gloves from time to time but only when he's not on a mission. -Physical Description: Kihoji has an athletically built body. Slim muscles allow him to move quickly in water and on land. His defense and offense are almost equal, as well as his speed and accuracy. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~History~ Background: Kihoji has a slightly shattered past. As a boy of 7 he was found wandering through the desert by a Suna patrol. When asked who he was or where he'd been Kihoji only answered by saying, "No where.” The patrol took him back to the Suna village where he was allowed to stay. Medical specialist tried to find out how the boy had been surviving in the dessert but were completely stumped Kihoji also seemed to be suffering memory loss since he couldn't remember his parents or his village. When trackers for Suna found that he had come from a nearby village the attemped to contact his parents. The people of the village recognized him but no one claimed him as their own. Eventually a Chunnin of Suna adopted him and began to train and care for him. Kihoji followed and trained hard to please his "father”. Upon completing the Academy, Kihoji continued to train with his father before kihoji would be assigned to his three-man team. His father noticed that Kihoji was a quick learner and he also had gifted methods when controling and using his chakra. Kihoji was also very good at ninjutsu and genjutsu, but his taijutsu wasn't quite up to par. Seeing this his father decided to teach him Shield of Sand (Suna no Tate) so that he wouldn't be at such a disadvantage in close range combat. Since Kihoji was gifted with his chakra the shield of sand woud be ideal for him. Just before Kihoji turned 12 his father left on a mission, he never returned, and neither did his father's team. Though Kihoji was still cared for by his adopted mother he never really acted the same again. He continued to train hard and become stronger, but he also began to distance himself from others. Some of the other children became afraid of his eyes, which had become completely black from the light brown he once had been when he arrived. Adults didn't think much of it though. His mother, who for some reason Kihoji never truly bonded with, tried her best to support Kihoji. Since she was a medical Ninja she tried her best to teach him what she knew. Kihoji, however, had no intrest in medical techniques so he tried his best to develop his own. Finally on his 13th birthday word came that his father had been found. He was captured while on his mission and had been able to escape with one of his teammates. Kihoji was very happy to see his father return, but for some reason he could never show it. He seemed detacted form his emotions as if he could no longer reach them even if he wanted to. As his father recovered Kihoji doubled his efforts and awaited the day that he would be assigned to his 3-man team. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Persona~ Personality: Kihoji is a very quiet person. His eyes tend to hold no emotion and he can carry out tasks without the slightest hint of a conscience. He does the job he is given whether it is honorable or not. He is very cold hearted, but to certain people he can be very friendly. Likes: Kihoji, likes to train or run missions most of the time. Other than that he likes to sit atop the highest building when there is a full moon, and simply watch it until dawn. Dislikes: Kihoji dislikes joking around. He is usually serious and hates when others aren't. ~Favorite~ -Food: Anything that will sustain him. He has no preference for food. -Color: Black and Crimson -Music Genre: Rock -Book Genre: none -Hangout: The top of the tallest building in Suna. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Ninja Stats~ Rank: Gennin Level: 0 TXP: 0 -Stats (out of 500)- (Health Power) 70 (Stamina) 40 (Chakra) 100 (Taijutsu) 10 (Defense) 40 (Ninjutsu) 60 (Resistance) 30 (Genjutsu) 60 (Concentration) 40 (Speed) 30 (Accuracy) 50 (Evasion) 20 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Skills~ (Checkout the General Skills page. If you are entering the academy do not fill this out yet.) Remaining Skill Points: 0 Skills: (Skills you own. Try to sort them into lists of positive skills, hindering traits, bloodlines, stances, etc) Quick Learner It takes 1 less post per 10 to learn a new technique. Must always post at least 2 posts to learn a technique. n/a -1 5 Gifted [Chakra] When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). n/a -1 Once per stat Skills learned from Jounins: (These do not count towards your skill points limit. You must link to the topic in which you learned these skills) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Techniques~ (Check out the Technique Page or create your own set for approval. If you are entering the Academy please remove the basic jutsus, you will learn them in the academy.) Basic Academy Jutsus: (You start off with these) Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates illusionary replicas of the user. They are unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as good distractions. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you actually were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects: Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: (You can start with up to two of these. Technique Page for all the premade ones, or create your own and set them up for approval) Shield of Sand (Suna no Tate) Type: Ninjutsu (wind) Rank: Gennin Damage: N/A Cost/Effect: -Konoha Jutsu's = 3 chakra for every 1 damage -Kiri Jutsu = 3 chakra for every 1 damage -Suna Jutsu = 1 chakra for every 4 damage -Kumo Jutsu's = 1 chakra for every 2 damage -Iwa Jutsu= 1 chakra for every 4 damage -Kusa Jutsu = 2 chakra for every 1 damage -Oto Jutsu = 5 chakra for every 1 damage -Weapons = 1 chakra every 3 damage -Taijustu = 1 chakra for every 3 damage --If the opponent's applicable stat (taijutsu or ninjutsu or accuracy) is more than or equal to double the user's ninjutsu, then the shield is bypassed and the attack cannot be blocked. --If the opponent's applicable stat is more than or equal to the user's ninjutsu, then the chakra:damage ratio is halved, so that 1:2 will become 1:1. --If the opponent's applicable stat is less than or equal to half the user's ninjutsu, the ratio is doubled, so that 1:2 becomes 1:4. Description: The basic defense of the Wind ninja. This creates a shield of the element of Sand that can absorb any jutsus, taijutsu, or basic attacks in general. This shield is the one seen in the Naruto Anime. Wind Blade (Kaze no Yaiba) Type: Ninjutsu (wind) Rank: Gennin Cost: 30 Damage: 20 Effect: A very hard to dodge and especially penetrating ttack. This attack reduces evasive skills used against it by 20 as well as ignoring any armor used against it. It must be used very close to melee range though. Description: A sword of wind that forces compressed air to cut through the target. Since it is so fast and hard to see it is hard to avoid, and the wind goes right through all defenses. Due to the tempermental nature of wind the blow only maintains enough force to be dangerous with ten feet though. Jutsus learned from Jounins: (These do not count towards your Jutsu limit. You must link to the topic in which you learned these) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Inventory~ Armor: -Head: -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Upper arm(s): Hitai-Ate -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: Weaponry: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: -Un-equipped Slot one: -Un-equipped Slot two: -Un-equipped Slot three: Items: -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, 4 Senbon Needles. -Items in Vault: Nothing. -Money on hand: $125 Animals: (If you want an animal you may purchase one via the market) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Update Log~ Character Approval: 2/28/06 Kitai Tenshi, Arashi, and Khaos Leveled up/Exp Earned: TXP: 25 Ambush battle25Xp gained Self Training 35xp(TBA) (Link to the topic where you gain exp. points. Make sure to include a description, the amount of exp. points gained, and whether it merited a level up) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Transactions~ (How much money you have spent, when, where, and who approved it) Buy: Sell: Reward: Loss: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Battle Log~ (Practice arena battles don't count. Make sure to link to the topics. Ambushed - lost Wins: Losses: 1 Draws: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Mission Log~ Rank D: Rank C: Rank B: Rank A: Rank S: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Edited March 19, 2006 by Kihoji
Takius Posted February 26, 2006 Posted February 26, 2006 Mm... You need to put in the descriptions for the techniques... Other than that, it's good to go... But it would be a good idea not to be a super rounded fighter... Then you're not good at anything... But whatever... That's it, I guess.
Shadow Posted February 26, 2006 Author Posted February 26, 2006 Okay it's done, Thanks for the tips. Btw im not exactly sure what to do after the 3 approvals could some pm or post here to help me out with it?
Hardcore Skittlez Posted February 28, 2006 Posted February 28, 2006 First and foremost: I would try to avoid using the whole cliche Orphan thing. No personal history? Not going to slide with the mods. Adopted father and team dead? Again, not going to slide too well with the mods. Patch your background up, and it'll look alright.
Shadow Posted February 28, 2006 Author Posted February 28, 2006 I edited it, but it was his father's team that didnt return... kihoji hadnt been assigned yet.
Hardcore Skittlez Posted February 28, 2006 Posted February 28, 2006 Nicely done, I like it better now than when I read the first part. So, stamped.(I can't approve, so this is good enough). Mods, do him a favor and check it out? Just a little side note to ye: PM some mods, and ask them to check it out, it'll speed up the process.
Ironwolf Posted February 28, 2006 Posted February 28, 2006 Okay, brake up your back ground a bit, your back ground is basically a preview of how you will RP, the better you make it the easier you will find yourself getting approved.
Shadow Posted February 28, 2006 Author Posted February 28, 2006 That better? I usually space it out but i wasn't aware it was that long until i took a good look at it sorry.
Khaos Posted February 28, 2006 Posted February 28, 2006 Approved I'd just say that you really didn't relate his skills and whatnot to his BG. no big deal as you may well still RP his personality affectively.
Shadow Posted February 28, 2006 Author Posted February 28, 2006 Thankx I'll look over it and see if i can fit his skills into his BG. 2 more to go
Kitai Tenshi Posted March 1, 2006 Posted March 1, 2006 (edited) ~approved~ PM a admin to get you moved and view village. Edited March 1, 2006 by Kitai Tenshi
Shadow Posted March 3, 2006 Author Posted March 3, 2006 (edited) could some1 move this to the suna sheets for me please? Edit: ahh b4 you do... would i be allowed to change the Third Eye jutsu? i could really use a better attack jutsu there instead of the thrid eye... cause that eye really doesnt do anything... Edited March 3, 2006 by Kihoji
Hardcore Skittlez Posted March 7, 2006 Posted March 7, 2006 Nay, he is not. I'm going to tote him to the Hospital after I finish with you, where a modmin will decide how many days he is in for.
Shadow Posted March 7, 2006 Author Posted March 7, 2006 I had my character 'die' the same way like half the gennin died int he anime.. u just see them seriously hurt and closing their eyes.. lmao .. basically if Uberness gets me to the hospital in time they could revive me.
Shadow Posted March 13, 2006 Author Posted March 13, 2006 Updated loss for ambush (forgot to do earlier)
