Shades Posted January 28, 2007 Share Posted January 28, 2007 (edited) Ready Name: Reikokumujoudo:Hanagouri (Merciless Style: Flower surrounded by ice)LvL2 Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu (Ice element) Rank: Chunin Cost: 40 stamina+40 chakra, 10 hp Damage: 3 hits: see effects Effects: 1st hit: deals 41 damage; 2nd hit: does 41 damage to chakra; 3rd hit: 41 damage to stamina Description: Like a spark of beauty surrounded in a land of desolation, so to does a flower surrounded by creates hope for those who follow such omens. Alas that this technique should follow such eloquence for it does not create destruction to the point of entry but rather expands outwards creating ripples of chakra that target specific aspects of the target's body. Points: 3 Requirements:Reikokumujoudo:Triforce Name: Reikokumujoudo:Fuunka (Eruption)LvL2 Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu (Magma element) Rank: Chuunin Cost: 70 stamina + 70 chakra, 10 hp Damage: 2 hits: see effects Effects: First Hit (Normal):Deals 15 damage + Blinds for 1 turn. Second Hit (AoE):Burns for 1 turn Description: Like lava overflowing, this attack is swift and brutal. The user super-heats a section of Earth underneath him before dashing forward and uppercutting his opponent with the magma erupting from underneath his opponent. Points: 5 Requirements:Reikokumujoudo:Triforce; Name: Reikokumujoudo: (Lashing Vine)LvL2 Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu (wood/plant element) Rank: Chuunin Cost: 60 Stamina + 60 Chakra + 30 hp Damage: See effects Effects: If this attack hits, the both the user and the target are bound [hands] for 3 turns. If the opponent is forced away during this time by another technique, they are no longer bound, but instead take 115 (+10 per turn bound is canceled early) damage. If the user is of the Toge clan and has their bloodline active, apply the bloodlines bleeding effects to this technique. Description: A brutal application of the study of plant manipulation, as the user creates thorned vines to emerge from his or her arm, after which it attempts to latch itself upon the chosen target. Points: 5 Requirements:Reikokumujoudo:Triforce; Link to said skill Comments/suggestions welcome Edited February 3, 2007 by Shades Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shades Posted February 1, 2007 Author Share Posted February 1, 2007 It's all set and ready for inspection. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cntrstrk14 Posted February 2, 2007 Share Posted February 2, 2007 First two approved, for the last look here For all of them, brush up your capitalization and spelling and spacing. Techniques should be capitalized like a title. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shades Posted February 2, 2007 Author Share Posted February 2, 2007 thanks and...changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MrSako Posted February 3, 2007 Share Posted February 3, 2007 I have no idea what the phrase 'If the opponent is forced away by another technique, they take 115 damage' means for the third Jutsu. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shades Posted February 3, 2007 Author Share Posted February 3, 2007 (edited) pretty much any technique/skill that prevents either the user or the target from specifically using close-ranged attacks and/or creates said effect through role-play. (like for example, my shinto kankensen) EDIT: modified slightly Edited February 3, 2007 by Shades Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cntrstrk14 Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 APPROVED Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shades Posted February 5, 2007 Author Share Posted February 5, 2007 one more to go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atlas Posted February 6, 2007 Share Posted February 6, 2007 App'd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...