Baromosa Posted August 16, 2007 Share Posted August 16, 2007 (edited) Name: Fushichou no Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 10 Chakra Damage: N/A Effects: Scared: Character tries to avoid at all costs, the one who caused the fear or the location that it is centered around. If forced to confront the object of fear, the ninja has a -5% to damage and -5% to accuracy to hit chance against target (ie. not the stat itself). Duration: 1 turns DP:10/turn Description: The ninja uses his chakra to make a large replication of a large bird of fire, and make it appear it is swooping down on the enemy ninja. When the enemy is dealing with the scary but harmless fake fire attack, the user uses this moment to come up behind or to the side of the enemy and attack. This technique can also be used to hide somewhere and plan another attack, or possibly escape if the opponent fears it enough. When the bird strikes the enemy, it harmlessly dissipates leaving smoke in its wake, though seeing this fireball like bird is scary enough to make you think you are being hit with a fire jutsu of much higher level. Only usable twice per battle. Points: 1 Requirements: Kinamoto Clan Edited September 19, 2007 by Baromosa Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Hiro Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 Scared has a DP of 10/turn, so you can either increase the duration to 2 turns, decrease the cost to 10, or add 10 damage to the technique. Also, you don't need to put the minus sign by the Jutsu Point. Just a plain and simple "1" will suffice. Other then that, it looks good to me. Oh, and this next thing is a mere suggestion: the title Firebird no Jutsu is a combination of two languages. If I were you, you should probably make it either "Firebird Technique" or "Fushichou no Jutsu" (Meaning Phoenix Bird Technique). Like I said, only a suggestion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baromosa Posted August 19, 2007 Author Share Posted August 19, 2007 Thanks Hiro. I made some changes that you suggested, they were helpful. Still looking for a new name though, if you have ideas. I kinda like it for now, might make it permanent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baromosa Posted August 21, 2007 Author Share Posted August 21, 2007 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baromosa Posted August 24, 2007 Author Share Posted August 24, 2007 Bump again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baromosa Posted August 29, 2007 Author Share Posted August 29, 2007 BUMP (I don't know if I can add anything to it really.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Posted August 30, 2007 Share Posted August 30, 2007 Approved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baromosa Posted September 3, 2007 Author Share Posted September 3, 2007 Thank you Blue! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baromosa Posted September 7, 2007 Author Share Posted September 7, 2007 Bump with my other techs :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baromosa Posted September 10, 2007 Author Share Posted September 10, 2007 Bump, need one more approval Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baromosa Posted September 14, 2007 Author Share Posted September 14, 2007 just one more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baromosa Posted September 19, 2007 Author Share Posted September 19, 2007 bumping again. soon to be seen in approval request forums if I can't find another way to edit this thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baromosa Posted October 9, 2007 Author Share Posted October 9, 2007 major bump question: should I edit this into a response/counter jutsu or keep it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baromosa Posted November 24, 2007 Author Share Posted November 24, 2007 This technique now isn't very important to me, but it has one approval so i want to see what would happen. (I would not be offended if it was moved to the dead forum or just deleted.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 Approved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
almondsAndRain Posted March 13, 2023 Share Posted March 13, 2023 Moved to dead as Scared is no longer a status effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
