Prophet Posted March 10, 2006 Posted March 10, 2006 (edited) Level: 0 Name: Piroki Appearance: Palm-sized misty-blue porcupine with white quills. Pale red eyes. Personality: Curious, noisy, and overall an immature little brat.He loves beer nuts and is an insufferable optimist. Clearly not of the fighting sort, Piroki tends to hide in the bushes and call out when he can help. Skills: Boosts Accuracy by 60 and Defense by 40 Techs: None Weapon: None -Stats- HP: 30 Sta: 10 Cha: 10 Tai: 0 Def: 20 Nin: 0 Res: 0 Gen: 0 Con: 0 Speed: 10 Acc: 0 Eva: 20 Level: 1 Name: Asuka Appearance: Size of a dog, mist-blue quills, pale red eyes, half-moon glasses on a golden chain Personality: Inquisitive and quick-witted, Asuka is the paranoid healer of the group. Older then her comrades, she ends up playing the role of nanny to the youngsters most of the time. Don't let that fool you though as she can still hold her own. Skills: Inner Calm -1 Techs: Serene Touch, Spin Cycle, & Aqua Dragoon Weapon: None -Stats- HP: 80 Sta: 40 Cha: 100 Tai: 20 Def: 60 Nin: 40 Res: 20 Gen: 0 Con: 20 Speed: 40 Acc: 40 Eva: 40 Level: 2 Name: Tarak'nai Appearance: A stout young warrior standing 3'6" and weighing 172 lbs. Mist-blue quills and pale red eyes, wears a light suit of armor. Personality: Eager to prove his worth in combat, Tark'nai is hot-headed and bold to the point of being reckless. Laughed at for his appearance whenever he has been summoned, he tends to be on the touchy side, snapping on people for the smallest things. Skills: Martial Artist -1 , Iron Skin -2 Techs: Kawirimi, Revolution (Kakumei), Retribution (Houfuku), Tainted Combo, Endurance Weapon: Lvl 1 Quills -Stats- HP: 150 Sta: 150 Cha: 100 Tai: 120 Def: 100 Nin: 60 Res: 40 Gen: 0 Con: 20 Speed: 80 Acc: 80 Eva: 100 Level: 3 Name: Kaza'nok Appearance: Basic mist-blue w/ pale red eyes, 7'8", large paws and legs, looks really heavily-built Personality: Cold and remorseless, borderline sociopathic, Kaza'nok scares the crap out of his siblings. Even his own father, the Lord of Porcupine Summons, is a little worried about what he may one day become. Wielding a vicous axe covered in barbs and spikes, he wades into battle as silent as the Reaper himself. The only time he shows any emotion is when someone harms his master, who has to earn his trust first. Skills: Martial Artist -1, Ninjutsu Mastery -1, Savior -1, Steadfast Durability -1, Warrior *Widowmaker Axe* -1 Techs: Gennin Spin Cycle, Aqua Dragoon, Revolution, Retribution, Hidden Mist Skill Chunnin Gatsuuga, Scylla, Water Dragon Blast Skill Weapon: Large Battleaxe he calls "The Widowmaker" *will post for approval later* -Stats- HP: 300 Sta: 300 Cha: 200 Tai: 240 Def: 240 Nin: 200 Res: 140 Gen: 100 Con: 100 Speed: 200 Acc: 220 Eva: 260 Level: 4 Name: Spike Appearance: Dark misty-blue w/ one dark red eye, the other's been burned out, 24'9", burn scars covering body, quills missing in some places Personality: Mature and wise, methodical and remorseless, Spike has been with Kazuma since the beginning. He was there when his brothers betrayed him and his family and was key to helping the elder Atane's escape safely. A powerful warrior in his own right, Spike is known more for his ability of foresight and logic. Skills: Martial Artist -1, Ninjutsu Mastery -1, Inner Calm -1, Iron Skin -2, Chakra Barrier -2, Steadfast Durability -1 Techs: Gennin Heavy Mist Skill, Hitonmi Burichi, Spin Cycle, Aqua Dragoon, Kawirimi Chunnin Mizubunshin, Scylla, Water Dragon Blast, Water Barrier Wall, Gatsuuga Jounin Dehydrate Weapon: None yet *again later approval* -Stats- HP: 760 Sta: 760 Cha: 800 Tai: 660 Def: 660 Nin: 660 Res: 400 Gen: 400 Con: 500 Speed: 660 Acc: 920 Eva: 820 Level: 5 Name: The Lady Adisha Appearance: 49'10" This is one lady you don't want to cross. You approach her with the utmost perfect manners as she holds them in high regard. Once a deal has been brokered between her and the summoner that suits her, the summoner can relax in knowing that his opponent's life as a shinobi will be coming to an end shortly. Dark blue quills cover her body and crimson red eyes flash dangerously at her enemies. Her teeth are razor sharp fangs unlike the majority of her race and her claws can level forests. Personality: Polite and respectful, the Lady Adisha is the epitome of polite society in the summon world. She will brook no disgrace to her family's name and is very severe in her punishments. On the other hand, she is very knowledgable in many aspects of the shinobi world. Skills: Iron Skin -2, Chakra Barrier -2, Savior -1, Strategist -3, Knowing the Elements -2 Techs: Gennin Heavy Mist Skill, Hitonmi Burichi, Spin Cycle, Aqua Dragoon, Kawirimi Chunnin Mizubunshin, Scylla, Water Dragon Blast, Water Barrier Wall, Gatsuuga Jounin Dehydrate, Water Type; Explosion Skill, Water Prison Skill Weapon: Quills Lvl 30 -Stats- HP: 1670 Sta: 1700 Cha: 1670 Tai: 1750 Def: 1666 Nin: 1602 Res: 900 Gen: 900 Con: 900 Speed: 2332 Acc: 2598 Eva: 2332 Level: 6 Name: Lord Ryuho Appearance: Standing countless stories tall, the Lord of the Porcupines is a truly terrifying creature. Dark red quills encover his massive and heavily built frame. Glowing blue eyes chill his enemies to the bone. His claws are sharper then diamonds and his fangs look like they were ripped right out of a Youma's mouth. Only his wife can calm him down when he begins to rage. Personality: Dangerous and lethal beyond comparison, only the most suicidal of shinobi's would call on this beast to aid them as he has been known to destroy the summoner as well as his opponent. He has no love for the human world as the last human who brokered a deal with him turned out to be a coward. Since then he has hated humanity for the damage and abus his family has taken. Only recently has his opinion changed thanks largely in part to one paticular Mist-nin.... Skills: Iron Skin -2, Chakra Barrier -2, Savior -1, Strategist -3, Knowing the Elements -2, Charging Tactics -1, One-handed Seals -2, Iron Will -2 Techs: Gennin Heavy Mist Skill, Hitonmi Burichi, Spin Cycle, Aqua Dragoon, Kawirimi, Kage Buyou, Great Rain Chunnin Mizubunshin, Scylla, Water Dragon Blast, Water Barrier Wall, Gatsuuga, Body Freeze Jounin Dehydrate, Water Type; Explosion Skill, Water Prison Skill, Featherly Sleep Kage Darkspear Weapon: Quills Lvl 50 -Stats- HP: 4000 Sta: 4000 Cha: 4000 Tai: 6000 Def: 5000 Nin: 4000 Res: 3000 Gen: 3000 Con: 3000 Speed: 5000 Acc: 5000 Eva: 4000 Edited March 22, 2006 by Prophet
Kouta Posted March 10, 2006 Posted March 10, 2006 Hmmm..I find the short style tacky. I'd like to see more detail and depth into this. Those are shallow descriptino at best, I'd rather see some more umph into this. Also, the jutsu effects would be nice.
Prophet Posted March 10, 2006 Author Posted March 10, 2006 okay...I'll add some more to the descrips but I cut out the jutsu ones kuz that would make it so impossibly long and an eyesore to read i thought. besides, most of them are on the main site, as for the others.....Here's the links: Heavy Mist Tech: http://ninja-academy-online.invisionzone.c...?showtopic=7894 Tainted & Endurance Tai http://ninja-academy-online.invisionzone.c...?showtopic=3218 And here's the description for Aqua Dragoon kuz i can't find the link anymore: Name: Mist Type: Aqua Dragoon Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Genin Cost: 15 per dragon Damage: 15 each Effects: Multi-Hit Attack (MAX= 4 DRAGONS) - You summon 1-4 dragons from your chakra. Description: Rising out of your body come X(X being the number of dragons you conjure) watery dragons, slamming at your opponent for 15 damage each.
Arashi Posted March 10, 2006 Posted March 10, 2006 They are really great Prophet, and I like the idea of porcupines as summons. Here is a list of problems: -Your level 0 summon needs a minimum of stats at HP, chakra, stamina and speed. So put something in C&S. -Please put the cost of the skills after. -I'm not really sure about this, but I don't think you can have a normal windmill shuriken as the summons weapon. Just say it's a level1weapon. -Your level 4 summon has 8020stats, 20 too much. Everything else seems fine And thanks for the comment on my summon sheet!
Prophet Posted March 10, 2006 Author Posted March 10, 2006 Better? And np Arashi! Least I could do for the personal training you're giving me!
Arashi Posted March 10, 2006 Posted March 10, 2006 Okay, so besides of the weapons, level 0-4 approved.
Prophet Posted March 10, 2006 Author Posted March 10, 2006 Thanks again Arashi. I owe you big time now! Lol! Let me know if you ever need anything!
Arashi Posted March 14, 2006 Posted March 14, 2006 Try to PM them, staff normaly tries to avoid this section as it's a lot of time and work to look on everything. While you wait, you could finnish the two levels you have left.
Guest MrSako Posted March 14, 2006 Posted March 14, 2006 you could also post all the jutsu they know instead of listing them... but whatever floats your boat!
Prophet Posted March 16, 2006 Author Posted March 16, 2006 (edited) FINALLY!!!! So now all I need is for this to be moved right? Thanks Khaos!!! I guess I owe you too! Edited March 16, 2006 by Prophet
Arashi Posted March 16, 2006 Posted March 16, 2006 this can't be moved yet, since you haven't finnished the two last levels. Summons works that way that when we move them, we close that topic forever, since you can't change anything on it.
Prophet Posted March 16, 2006 Author Posted March 16, 2006 Oh...okay...Then I guess I'll have those last two up by tonight!
