Kassiel Posted August 13, 2007 Posted August 13, 2007 (edited) Ranpu Techs Ranpu Yaiba (Light Blade) Type: Clan Ninjutsu Bloodline: Ranpu Rank: Gennin Cost: 30 chakra per blade+25 upkeep per turn per blade Damage: NA Effects: This technique increases the modifiers on basic attacks by 10% (This bonus does not stack with any other bonuses to basic attacks.), and increases the user’s Evasion by 40 as well. This effect can last up to four turn. Two blades possible. (One for each arm.) Description: Manipulating the unique Chakra belonging to those that possess the Ranpu bloodline, the user absorbs the surrounding light in the vicinity. This light is then manipulated in such a way that it produces up to two blades made entirely out of light, appearing as more or less an extension of the user’s arm(s). These blades of light not only enhance the damage capable of being inflicted by a physical blow, but improve upon the user’s visualization of the surroundings as well. Points: 3 Ranpu Yaiba (Light Blade) Type: Clan Ninjutsu Bloodline: Ranpu Rank: Chuunin Cost: 60 chakra per blade+ 50 upkeep per turn per blade Damage: NA Effects: This technique increases the modifiers on basic attacks by 20%(This bonus does not stack with any other bonuses to basic attacks.), and increases the user’s Accuracy and Evasion by 60 as well. Basic attacks may now be used at long range. This effect lasts for up to four turns. Two blades possible. (One for each arm.) Description: Manipulating the unique Chakra belonging to those that possess the Ranpu bloodline, the user absorbs the surrounding light in the vicinity. This light is then manipulated in such a way that it produces up to two blades made entirely out of light, appearing as more or less an extension of the user’s arm(s). These blades of light not only enhance the damage capable of being inflicted by a physical blow, but improve upon the user’s visualization of the surroundings as well. Points: 5 (or +1) Special: Evolving: If you have the level before this one, this Jutsu costs +1 point to learn. IE: Normal jp cost= 5 JP. Evolving, cost is 3+1= 4 jp. Ranpu Yaiba (Light blade) Type: Clan Ninjustsu Bloodline: Ranpu Rank: Jounin Cost: 120 chakra per blade+100 upkeep per turn per blade Damage: NA Effects: This technique increases the modifiers on basic attacks by 30%(This bonus does not stack with any other bonuses to basic attacks.), and increases the user’s Accuracy and Evasion by 120 as well. Basic attacks may now be used at long range. This effect lasts up to four turns. Two blades possible. (One for each arm.) Description: Manipulating the unique Chakra belonging to those that possess the Ranpu bloodline, the user absorbs the surrounding light in the vicinity. This light is then manipulated in such a way that it produces up to two blades made entirely out of light, appearing as more or less an extension of the user’s arm(s). These blades of light not only enhance the damage capable of being inflicted by a physical blow, but improve upon the user’s visualization of the surroundings as well. Points: 7 (or +2) Special: Evolving: If you have the level before this one, this Jutsu costs +2 points to learn IE: Normal jp cost= 7 JP. Evolving, cost is 5 (or 4)+1= 6 (or 5) jp. Depending if you have all ranks. Name: Ranpu Yoroi (Light armor) Rank: Gennin Type: Clan Ninjutsu Cost: 30+3 Upkeep Effects: Decreases damage from Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and Basic Attacks by 10 points, and burns the opponent for 5 damage when struck. Description: Using chakra unique to possesers of the ranpu bloodline, the user absorbs light from the area, and molds it into a weightless full body suit of armor. The armor lessens the force of attacks, and the opponent burns himself when striking it. Points: 3 Name: Ranpu Yoroi (Light armor) Rank: Chuunin Type: Clan Ninjutsu Cost: 120+12 Upkeep Effects: Decreases damage from Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and Basic Attacks by 40 points, and burns the opponent for 20 damage when struck. Description: Using chakra unique to possesers of the ranpu bloodline, the user absorbs light from the area, and molds it into a weightless full body suit of armor. The armor lessens the force of attacks, and the opponent burns himself when striking it. Points: 5 (Or +1) Special: Evolving- If you had the rank before this, the jutsu only costs +1 point to learn. IE: Normal jp cost= 5 JP. Evolving, cost is 3+1= 4 jp. Name: Ranpu Yoroi (Light armor) Rank: Jounin Type: Clan Ninjutsu Cost: 240+24 Upkeep Effects: Decreases damage from Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and Basic Attacks by 160 points, and burns the opponent for 80 damage when struck. Description: Using chakra unique to possesers of the ranpu bloodline, the user absorbs light from the area, and molds it into a weightless full body suit of armor. The armor lessens the force of attacks, and the opponent burns himself when striking it. Points: 7 (Or +1) Special: Evolving- If you had the rank before this, the jutsu only costs +1 point to learn. IE: Normal jp cost= 7 JP. Evolving, cost is 5 (or 4)+1= 6 (or 5) jp. Depending if you have all ranks. Name: Ranpu Yaiba: Dark Rift Formation Rank: Chuunin Description: Using the Ranpu Yaiba, the user begins absorbing all ligt from the area. Moments before it is absolutely dark, they let out the light in a blinding flash. All non-Awaiken clan members on the battlefield are momentarily blinded, and suffer burns. Effect: Charges for three turns, then attacks, causing status effect blindness for one turn, and 60 damage. Points: 4 JP Requirements: Awaiken Clan member, Light absorbtion (Rank 2). Edited September 11, 2007 by Kassiel
Rhapsody Posted August 19, 2007 Posted August 19, 2007 the first two look more like.. bloodlines. o_o
Kassiel Posted August 19, 2007 Author Posted August 19, 2007 They are...but when I posted them there, they said that the bloodlines had to be skills, so i posted the skills required there, and moved them here.
Baromosa Posted August 19, 2007 Posted August 19, 2007 (edited) Ah yes, I see now. From your other post. It's a bit confusing, but I see what your trying to do. Alright, look at the two and try to provide more information in the other one. Is there a way to post these in the same place? perhaps not, but if you could put it on one sheet somehow it would be easier to understand. edit: It looks reasonable, but I'm not that knowledgeable about the numbers yet. Someone will look at it soon I bet. Edited August 19, 2007 by Baromosa
Guest Decadence Posted August 25, 2007 Posted August 25, 2007 Why is it you won't simply put the first two techniques into technique form like your last technique is? That way, they won't look like skills. You would probably have to make separate topics for them then, seeing as it's common courtesy to only submit 3-4 techniques into one topic, as to not give the modmins a hard time.
Kassiel Posted August 26, 2007 Author Posted August 26, 2007 Umm...those ARE in the same form...they have ranks. They're in bloodline form, but they said bloodlines had to be skills so i moved them here.
Guest Decadence Posted August 26, 2007 Posted August 26, 2007 Erm, I think you misunderstood not only what I was saying, but what they were saying as well. Here is an exmaple of what I mean putting them in the right form, even though they are in diffierent ranks and the like: Light Sword {Ranpu Yaiba} Type: Ninjutsu {Clan} Bloodline: Ranpu Yaiba Rank: Gennin Cost: 60 Damage: --- Effects: This technique increases the damage inflicted by basic attacks by 10%, and increases the user's Evasion by 40 as well. Description: Manipulating the unique Chakra belonging to those that possess the Ranpu Yaiba bloodline, the user absorbs the surrounding light in the vicinity. This light is then manipulated in such a way that it produces a blade made entirely out of light, appearing as more or less an extension of the user's arm(s). This blade of light not only enhances the damage capable of being inflicted by a physical blow, but improves upon the user's visualization of the surroundings as well. Points: 3 Light Sword {Ranpu Yaiba} Type: Ninjutsu {Clan} Bloodline: Ranpu Yaiba Rank: Chuunin Cost: 150 Damage: --- Effects: This technique increases the damage inflicted by basic attacks by 20%, and increases the user's Accuracy and Evasion by 60 as well. Basic attacks may now be used at long range. Description: Manipulating the unique Chakra belonging to those that possess the Ranpu Yaiba bloodline, the user absorbs the surrounding light in the vicinity. This light is then manipulated in such a way that it produces a blade made entirely out of light, appearing as more or less an extension of the user's arm(s). This blade of light not only enhances the damage capable of being inflicted by a physical blow, but improves upon the user's visualization of the surroundings as well. Points: 5 (or +1) Special: Evolving: If you have the level before this one, this Jutsu costs +1 point to learn. Light Sword {Ranpu Yaiba} Type: Ninjutsu {Clan} Bloodline: Ranpu Yaiba Rank: Jounin Cost: 240 Damage: --- Effects: This technique increases the damage inflicted by basic attacks by 30%, and increases the user's Accuracy and Evasion by 120 as well. Basic attacks may now be used at long range. Description: Manipulating the unique Chakra belonging to those that possess the Ranpu Yaiba bloodline, the user absorbs the surrounding light in the vicinity. This light is then manipulated in such a way that it produces a blade made entirely out of light, appearing as more or less an extension of the user's arm(s). This blade of light not only enhances the damage capable of being inflicted by a physical blow, but improves upon the user's visualization of the surroundings as well. Points: 6 (or +2) Special: Evolving: If you have the level before this one, this Jutsu costs +2 points to learn. The cost might not be on point, but yes, it would be so much easier to have them that way, similar to your Dark Rift Formation technique as I told you before. Simply because they have ranks doesn't mean they have to use that format and whatnot.
Kassiel Posted August 26, 2007 Author Posted August 26, 2007 Fixed...and for the cost, i'm not exactly sure how to do that, so i made it this way.
cntrstrk14 Posted August 28, 2007 Posted August 28, 2007 you do realize, that +10% on basic attacks would not even be 1 point of damage, it would be 0.5 points of damage, since the bonus goes before modifiers. What I suggest you say is... +10% total modifiers on basic attacks. This bonus does not stack with any other bonus to basic attacks.
cntrstrk14 Posted August 30, 2007 Posted August 30, 2007 That part about not stacking with other bonuses? Yeah that one? It was important D: Add it in please.
Kassiel Posted August 30, 2007 Author Posted August 30, 2007 ok, fixed...and the important-ness. So yeah, anything else?
cntrstrk14 Posted September 3, 2007 Posted September 3, 2007 Ok, you need to state how many blades can be made, and also that it can only last a max of 4 turns.
cntrstrk14 Posted September 4, 2007 Posted September 4, 2007 You didn't say how many blades you can make with each. Though cost caps seem to imply 1, on all levels.
Kassiel Posted September 4, 2007 Author Posted September 4, 2007 Yes i did, but i had onlyput them in the descriptions and not the effects, fixed now.
cntrstrk14 Posted September 6, 2007 Posted September 6, 2007 Ok, well I am a bit confused, is it 50 for both blades, and then 5 each turn for each, or 10 each turn? Or is it 50 each, then 5 each? If its the first, you cannot break 80 cost on genin techs and it cannot work. If it is the latter, then it may be under costed.
Kassiel Posted September 6, 2007 Author Posted September 6, 2007 it's fifty for the ....i duno.. unsheatheing...or whatever. and the 5 upkeep per blade so if they summon two it's 50+10 upkeep
cntrstrk14 Posted September 7, 2007 Posted September 7, 2007 If that is the case, you need to change this because it doesn't make sense. First off, the upkeep should be the percentage outlined in the jutsu rules for ninjutsu. Secondly, there should be an initial cost for each blade. I would say like, 30 chakra for each blade, and then 25 chakra per turn per blade.
Kassiel Posted September 9, 2007 Author Posted September 9, 2007 fixed, and ready to be looked at again.
