Uchiha; Kamui

[Cellar Door]

• Kamui | Authority Of The Gods| 神威 (Long-Range)
Type: Ninjutsu [Void| Hijutsu; Uchiha | Dōjutsu; Mangekyō Sharingan | Kinjutsu; Powerful | Seal-Less | Response]
Rank: Jōnin
Cost: 350 Chakra
Damage: 700
Effect: This technique may only be utilized while the Mangekyō Sharingan is active. This technique may be utilized in the Response Phase, or Main Phase.

Response: This technique reduces the damage of an unresolved Ranged Weapon Attack, or Ninjutsu Technique targeting the user by the amount of damage it deals. If 100% of the unresolved attack’s total damage is negated, all effects of the attack are negated. The user sacrifices their Main Phase when using this technique. This technique may be used in the Response Phase 2 times per battle. This technique has a base 5% chance to fail.

Main: The user of this technique must choose ‘Bound; Arm’ or ‘Shackled; Leg’. On a successful Critical Hit, the target of this technique is afflicted with the chosen status effect. This effect may only be removed by a medical technique of at least Sennin Rank. This technique may be used in the Main Phase 2 times per battle.

The user of this technique is afflicted with the status effect ‘Bleeding; 1’ for 3 turns. The damage dealt by this effect stacks with other techniques that possess the ‘Dōjutsu; Mangekyō Sharingan’ descriptor and all techniques that possess the ‘Dōjutsu; Mangekyō Sharingan' descriptor have a -10y% chance to hit (or +10y% chance to fail if the technique is not offensive), where ‘y’ is equal to the damage dealt by the status effect ‘Bleeding’ per turn (Only 'Bleeding' afflicted by the use of techniques with the Dōjutsu; Mangekyō Sharingan descriptor counts in this way.). If this technique is purchased in conjunction with another technique with the 'Dōjutsu; Mangekyō Sharingan' descriptor, then that technique must be 'Kamui (Short-Range)'.
Description: Kamui is a unique and extremely specialized form of space-time manipulation. When awoken, Kamui grants its user the ability to transport matter, including other people and even themselves to a small dimension that is completely unique to the user's Sharingan. The left Mangekyō Sharingan is capable of manipulating an area at distance, and warping it away by focusing on a particular object. This is done by creating a barrier space around the object and concentrating on the object within, which is distorted and pulled into the dimension. Through this method a capable user is able to transport enemy attacks away before they can cause harm, or they can transport other people to their dimension. By focusing on a certain appendage, the user can deal considerable damage to their enemies and even cleanly amputate limbs by warping them away. Like all techniques that are unique to the Mangekyō Sharingan, Kamui damages the eyes of the user with each subsequent use and eventually leads to blindness.
Points: 40

• Kamui | Authority Of The Gods| 神威 (Short-Range)
Type: Ninjutsu [Void| Hijutsu; Uchiha | Dōjutsu; Mangekyō Sharingan | Kinjutsu; Powerful | Seal-Less | Response]
Rank: Jōnin
Cost: 150 + x Chakra
Effect: This technique may only be utilized while the Mangekyō Sharingan is active. This technique may be utilized in the Response Phase, or Set-Up Phase.

Response: For the purpose of cost calculation ‘x’ is equal to 50 * the total JP of all unresolved attacks targeting the user (with basic and weapon attacks equaling 1). This technique negates all unresolved attacks targeting the user. The user sacrifices their Set-Up Phase, and Main Phase when using this technique in the Response Phase. This technique may be used 2 times per battle in the Response Phase. This technique has a base 5% chance to fail.

Set-Up: For the purpose of cost calculation ‘x’ is equal to 120 – the user’s level. This technique applies the status effect ‘Half-Opening’ to the attack performed in the following Main Phase the first time this technique is used in battle. The technique used in the following Main Phase is treated as if it were a Dynamic Trap that ignores Barriers and Shields. Response techniques used against the technique used in the Main Phase have a +45% chance to fail. The user’s Speed is considered to be 2x its base until the attack resolves. This technique may be used 2 times per battle in the Set-Up Phase.

The user of this technique is afflicted with the status effect ‘Bleeding; 1’ for 3 turns. The damage dealt by this effect stacks with other techniques that possess the ‘Dōjutsu; Mangekyō Sharingan’ descriptor and all techniques that possess the ‘Dōjutsu; Mangekyō Sharingan' descriptor have a -10y% chance to hit (or +10y% chance to fail if the technique is not offensive), where ‘y’ is equal to the damage dealt by the status effect ‘Bleeding’ per turn (Only 'Bleeding' afflicted by the use of techniques with the Dōjutsu; Mangekyō Sharingan descriptor counts in this way.). If this technique is purchased in conjunction with another technique with the 'Dōjutsu; Mangekyō Sharingan' descriptor, then that technique must be 'Kamui (Long-Range)'.
Role-Play: The user of this technique is not required to make Travel-Posts, when using this technique outside of battle.
Description: Kamui is a unique and extremely specialized form of space-time manipulation. When awoken, Kamui grants its user the ability to transport matter, including other people and even themselves to a small dimension that is completely unique to the user's Sharingan. The right Mangekyō Sharingan is capable of manipulating an area at short range, most commonly being used as a means of warping the user themselves out of harms way. By distorting their own body to their dimension a user is able to both evade damage that would be otherwise fatal, or travel great distances in the blink of an eye. Teleportation is done by traveling to their dimension, and transporting themselves back to the material world in the desired location. This form of teleportation can be used to effectively get the drop on enemies, reducing the possibility of them successfully evading attacks. Like all techniques that are unique to the Mangekyō Sharingan, Kamui damages the eyes of the user with each subsequent use and eventually leads to blindness.
Points: 40 Edited July 5, 2015 by Cellar Door

[cntrstrk14]

Long Range
Needs a limitation use per battle for the Main Phase action since it is inflicted a status effect without a turn duration. I assume you mean this to last even after the battle?

Short Range
Concerned about the cost here since I haven't seen cost = to JP before. So here is my breakdown for the costing.

 

https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1OWS-qUbRE9RVEeezbXB62k4WVJgwxlDHIG1b6KA5lbQ/edit#gid=0

 

I'm concerned with just how quickly your costing outpaces the regular costing of x equal to the cost of the enemy attack.

[Cellar Door]

M'kay.

Ranged Kamui's main phase usage is 2 per battle now.

The costs on Kamui have been changed. I'll admit, I had not tested them much. I just came up with an equation that looked innovative, but yeah now that I see it on a spread sheet it's dumb. You can check the new prices out here.

Edited April 21, 2015 by Cellar Door

[cntrstrk14]

[Cellar Door]

Somebody come approve this.

[Hardcore Skittlez]

Gunna bump this since I can't approve it. Only needs one more people.

[PandaMattMatt]

Approved