Blackrose Posted March 11, 2006 Posted March 11, 2006 (edited) ~Character Sheet~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~User Info~ -Username: Blackfire -Posting: I'll try my best my brother will let me know if I get any messages. -Time Zone: Eastern standard –5 GMT ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Basics~ Name: Onkyou Kia Village: Oto (Sound) Clan: None Age: 13 Gender: Female ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Appearance~ -Height: 5'5 -Weight: 112 -Hair: Kia's straight hair is usually worn down and it come past her mid back. Here hair is always jet-black with streaks of purple mixed in. -Eyes: Her eyes are purple (yes purple) which works well with her hair. -Clothing: Kia usually wears normal ninja attire, or so she says. Her ‘modified' attire allowed her to reveal a good amount of her body and her curves but not enough to show everything. This usually makes boys stare but that's exactly how she likes it. The more the gawk the more favors she gets. -Physical Description: Kia's body is defiantly one to stare at. Sleek and tone and very much attractive. She's may not be the strongest person around, but she has many other qualities, physically that get her ahead. She makes sure to keep herself looking beautiful and healthy all the time. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~History~ Background: Kia's childhood was rather spoiled. Her parents were rather wealthy in their country, and would spoil Kia to death. Everything she wanted she would get. It had been that way ever since she was a little girl. After turning 6, young Kia decided she wanted to become a ninja. Her parents, who never usually said no, urged her to try to pick something else. Kia, however, would not take no for an answer. She had her parents hire a trainer for her at her so that she may learn to be a ninja before actually applying for the academy. Kia may have been a spoiled brat, but when she put her mind to something, she did it. She trained hard and vigorously under her master, who had been a retired Jounin from the Hidden Village of Sound. After about two years Kia had actually developed into a rather nice fighter. When she was 8 Kia had finally reached the jounin's expectations of her. The jounin knew that Kia's physical strength would not hold up against other ninja, but her mind was incredibly sharp and she became very skilled at deception. When she was 9 she entered the Sound village's academy and began her formal training to become a ninja. She had found it difficult at first since she wasn't that strong at all, but at around this time her body also began to bloom. Since she was still young it seemed like nothing at first, but then she saw how men would do anything for an attractive girl. At this point she began to flaunt herself a bit. By ten, just about every guy in her class wanted to be with her. This didn't make the girls too happy, to say the least. Kia's grades were top notch but her physical combat was a bit low. When it came to fighting guys she didn't have to do much. A little wink and a hair flip always made them give up. Girls, however, were eager to kick Kia's butt. After some embrassing defeats Kia was able to come up with strategies to beat the girls as well. Her mind was a great weapon indeed, as Kia found ways using Ninjutsu and Genjutsu to lure the girl into traps. By 12 Kia was graduating the academy with top marks. Her mind was the sharpest around which made up for lack of physical strength. Though her mother and father were proud of their daughter, to Kia this wasn't enough. She wanted everyone to know who she was and to be proud of her. So her next goal is to climb to the top and become and elite ninja. Now Kia is 13 and is waiting for her next step, the assignment to a three-man team and the arrival of a new jounin trainer for her. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Persona~ Personality: Kia is devious to say the least. She flaunts herself without shame because she knows she can get what she wants. With a body to die for, Kia finds ways to manipulate everyone around her. She may be spoiled but this girl is certainly not dependant. She is very fierce and very determined. Beware the rose, for its thorns are sharp. Likes: Men… She loves them because she can always get what she wants. Money power all of these things interest her. Maybe someday someone will teach her that there are more, better, and more special things in life. Dislikes: Females. They annoy her. Most of the time they are jealous of her but she will keep a few ‘followers' around her. ~Favorite~ -Food: Ramen -Color: Purple and black -Music Genre: no preference -Book Genre: Ninja Arts -Hangout: Wherever as long as she gets what she wants ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Ninja Stats~ Rank: Gennin Level: 1 TXP: 100 -Stats (out of 600)- (Health Power) 80 (Stamina) 20 (Chakra) 80 (Taijutsu) 20 (Defense) 20 (Ninjutsu) 85 [Gifted] (Resistance) 20 (Genjutsu) 40 (Concentration) 40 (Speed) 80 (Accuracy) 60 (Evasion) 60 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Skills~ Remaining Skill Points: 2 Skills: (Skills you own. Try to sort them into lists of positive skills, hindering traits, bloodlines, stances, etc) Hindering: Fear of Elements (Lightning/Thunder) User is paralyzed for one post after seeing (Lightning/Thunder) used against them for the first time in a match. n/a +1 Once for each village Self-Defense Opponents always act first, no matter what. n/a +2 1 Positive: Subtle Elementals (Fire) You may learn an elemental jutsu that is not from your village (IE: Fire jutsus in Mist village). Remember that you must specify which element you bought with this skill (Fire, Mist, Wind, Earth, Lightning, Grass, Sound) n/a -1 Once for every village. Subtle Elementals (Water) You may learn an elemental jutsu that is not from your village (IE: Fire jutsus in Mist village). Remember that you must specify which element you bought with this skill (Fire, Mist, Wind, Earth, Lightning, Grass, Sound) n/a -1 Once for every village. The Twisted Colors You may create techniques from two different elements. Subtle Elementals -1 1 Gifted [Ninjutsu] When you place points to your stats, the chosen stat gets a +25% reward from training (Rounded down). n/a -1 Once per stat Skills learned from Jounins: (These do not count towards your skill points limit. You must link to the topic in which you learned these skills) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Techniques~ (Check out the Technique Page or create your own set for approval. If you are entering the Academy please remove the basic jutsus, you will learn them in the academy.) Basic Academy Jutsus: (You start off with these) Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Genjutsu Description: Creates illusionary replicas of the user. They are unable to attack or interact with other objects, but can serve as good distractions. Damage: None Effects: Adds +5 evasion and +5 accuracy for each clone. Once a clone is hit it is destroyed, and the bonuses with it. Name: Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique) Type: Genjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5 Genjutsu Description: Wrap chakra around your body to change your appearance. You can still use the features of the thing you can become, e.g use the claws of a clawed animal, but not to the extent of if you actually were that thing. Damage: None Effects: Change your appearance. Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu (Body Substitute Technique) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Ninjutsu Description: A lifesaver, and a must-have technique. With this technique, the user is able to swap their body with a nearby object, usually a log, which will take the full force of any incoming blows for them, while they retreat to safe ground or search for an opening. You can only use this 3 times per battle. Damage: None Effects:Evade the next attack aimed at you. You are unable to attack the opponent the turn you use this. You can only use this 3 times per battle. This technique cannot be used to dodge Ninjutsu, Taijutsu or Genjutsu Techniques. Other Jutsus: (You can start with up to two of these. Technique Page for all the premade ones, or create your own and set them up for approval) Air Slicing Blast (Zankuuha) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Ninjustu/ 50 Ninjutsu with Air Pressure Device. Effects: 40 Damage/ 55 Damage with Air Pressure Device. Description: A Jutsu which allows the user to freely control super sonic sound waves and air pressure. The cannons that are their arms can create blasts powerful enough to even destroy rock. Mythical Fire Flower (Katon Housenka) Type: Ninjutsu (Fire) Rank: Gennin Cost: 20 per fireball Damage: 20 per fireball Effect: This skill may be used to launch multiple fireballs in one action. Each fireball beyond the first becomes progressivly easier to dodge; add 20 to the relevant stat when attempting to dodge any fireball beyond the first. This skill may also be used to target multiple people. One fireball per target suffers no negative penalties, but if ever multi-targetting and striking any target with more than one fireball, that target receivs a bonus of 30 to the relevant stat to dodge each fireball. Description: The ninja draws in a large breath of fire and shoots it out in many quite fast, small fireballs. Due to the nature the fireballs deal less damage than a single attack but may be used to hammer a target or strike multiple foes. Jutsus learned from Jounins: (These do not count towards your Jutsu limit. You must link to the topic in which you learned these) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Inventory~ Armor: -Head: -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): Hitai-Ate -Calve(s): -Feet: Weaponry: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: -Un-equipped Slot one: -Un-equipped Slot two: -Un-equipped Slot three: Items: -Pouch: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, 4 Senbon Needles. -Items in Vault: Nothing. -Money on hand: $125 Animals: (If you want an animal you may purchase one via the market) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Update Log~ Character Approval: Ironwolf 3/11/06 Tantan 3/12/06 Khaos 3/12/06 Leveled up/Exp Earned: Survival Training: 100 XP ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Transactions~ (How much money you have spent, when, where, and who approved it) Buy: Sell: Reward: Loss: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Battle Log~ (Practice arena battles don't count. Make sure to link to the topics. Wins: Losses: Draws: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Mission Log~ Rank D: Rank C: Rank B: Rank A: Rank S: Edited March 28, 2006 by Blackfire
Hardcore Skittlez Posted March 11, 2006 Posted March 11, 2006 You need to specify what element your character is afraid of in the skill name, otherwise, looks pretty good to me.
Blackrose Posted March 11, 2006 Author Posted March 11, 2006 Thanks I wanted her to be afraid of lightning... i believe thats Kumo's territory right?
Kouta Posted March 11, 2006 Posted March 11, 2006 Ok, there is one problem. You have 6 points of skills, but only 5 points to spend. -Positive- Subtle Elements (Fire & Water) -2 Twisted Colors -1 Gifted (Ninjutsu) -1 Natural Growth -2 Total....-6 -Negative- Fear of Elements (Thunder) +1 Self Defense +2 Normal SP +2 Total....+5 Lightning/Thunder are the same village, so it only counts once...therefore, you need to drop a skill, or add a hindering trait
Blackrose Posted March 11, 2006 Author Posted March 11, 2006 (edited) Okay Ill take away natural growth. I wont spend that last skill point just yet then. Edited March 11, 2006 by Blackfire
Ironwolf Posted March 12, 2006 Posted March 12, 2006 The only thing I see is a lack of punctuation, but I am fine with everything else. Approval No Jutsu
Blackrose Posted March 12, 2006 Author Posted March 12, 2006 Yay! two more . I'll try to fix those errors, but thatnx for the approval!
Guest horus Posted March 12, 2006 Posted March 12, 2006 (edited) i like your character (kicked my as.) grats to you as for her background good job if i could id give you an approval also I liked her description anyways good job ...and thxs for bandages and stuff after fight i would have died otherwise lol ill b sure to add some points to speed Edited March 12, 2006 by horus
Blackrose Posted March 12, 2006 Author Posted March 12, 2006 Yay! Thanks soo much! That's one more to go!
Khaos Posted March 12, 2006 Posted March 12, 2006 Approved ~Welcome to Oto~ ((PM an admin to complete your transition))
Shadow Posted March 13, 2006 Posted March 13, 2006 (edited) She did she was just making sure. Edit: sorry if i wasn't allowed to post here... Edited March 13, 2006 by Kihoji
Blackrose Posted March 28, 2006 Author Posted March 28, 2006 (edited) Updated: complete survial training and leveled up Edited March 28, 2006 by Blackfire