Averius Posted August 8, 2007 Share Posted August 8, 2007 (edited) Shitateya Clan Name: Origasenito (Cage of 1000 Threads) Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chuunin Cost: 150 Damage: N/A Effects: Opponent becomes Vulnerable, Stunned and Disorganized for one turn (misses next turn) and uses 10 Stamina from struggling within the cage. Stamina damage is unmodified. Description: The user performs several hand seals, chakra made needles and threads then rain from all directions, barely missing the enemy and constricting their movement. Points: 5 Requires Clan membership. Edited August 11, 2007 by Averius Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Posted August 8, 2007 Share Posted August 8, 2007 This would cost 50 minimum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Hooligan Posted August 8, 2007 Share Posted August 8, 2007 (edited) I'd thought Genin level jutsu couldn't deal damage to Chakra or Stamina. I could be wrong though. Edit: Also wouldn't cost more than 50 considering: Disorganized: Lose your next Setup Phase. Opponent is not affected by disorganized if they were stunned in the previous post. May only be used once a battle per enemy by Genin, three times by Chuunin and six times by Jounin.Max Duration: 1 turn DP: 30 Stunned: Lose your next Main Phase. Opponent is not affected by stun if they were stunned in the previous post. May only be used once a battle per enemy by Genin, three times by Chuunin and six times by Jounin.Max Duration: 1 turn DP: 50 Vulnerable: Lose your next Response Phase. Opponent is not affected by vulnerable if they were vulnerable in the previous post. May only be used once a battle per enemy by Genin, two times by Chuunin and three times by Jounin.Max Duration: 1 turn DP: 50 That is the status effect combination to effectively make and opponent lose a turn and it is well over the Genin damage cap. Edited August 8, 2007 by Kama Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averius Posted August 8, 2007 Author Share Posted August 8, 2007 (edited) I made it chuunin and made the cost 140 since losing the turn costs 130. Edited August 8, 2007 by Averius Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 5 JP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cntrstrk14 Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 Instead of skip turn, state that they are Vulnerable, Stunned and Disorganized for one turn. 150 Chakra. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averius Posted August 9, 2007 Author Share Posted August 9, 2007 /Editted Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cntrstrk14 Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 Mention that the stamina damage is unmodified. Then we will be good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averius Posted August 11, 2007 Author Share Posted August 11, 2007 Then we are good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azure Posted August 11, 2007 Share Posted August 11, 2007 Approved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Averius Posted August 12, 2007 Author Share Posted August 12, 2007 Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warr Posted August 14, 2007 Share Posted August 14, 2007 I don't see any problems, approved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
almondsAndRain Posted March 13, 2023 Share Posted March 13, 2023 Moved to dead as Disorganized no longer exists. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...