Ancient Posted February 8, 2017 Share Posted February 8, 2017 ~User Data~ -Posting: Minimum twice per week -Time Zone: GM+1 -Character Slot: 1 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Vital Statistics~ Name: Hitachi Clan: Aragane Birthplace: Iwagakure no sato Current Residence: Iwagakure no sato Age: 16 D.O.B.: Dec 05 Sex: Male ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Appearance~ -Height: 5'6 fts -Weight: 44kg -Hair Color: Silvery white, long ponytail -Eye Color: Ocean blue -Clothing: Hitachi outfits include a short arm blue khaki shirt with high collar and white short. He has bandages wrapped around his left arm, chest and left leg with blue shinobi sandals, he is usually seen wearing his village forehead protector which is his pride. -Physical Description: Hitachi has a fairly pale skin with ocean blue eyes and a fair height. He has a long silvery white ponytail hair which reaches the middle of his back, a trait not common in the aragane clan members. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancient Posted February 8, 2017 Author Share Posted February 8, 2017 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Persona~ Personality: Hitachi is somehow introvertial while at times he tends to outgoing, putting on a straight face and finds barely anything funny. He has high respect for those he think are better or stronger than he is, this at times might mean defending the person's name even if he has to fight. He also loves challenges, he could challenge a kage to a duel even tho he knew he wasn't gonna win, he sees this as a stepping stone to his dream, iron sharpens iron. Hitachi, though isn't so friendly, is protective and dedicated, he will always protect his few friends, as they are all he's got. The fact that Hitachi is an introvert makes him a solitudanarian, he stated he enjoys the state of solitude , as this is where he get inspired to greatness. Hitachi is an like an ocean, fierce in the day, calm at night, he is loving and aggressive, he getting angry at the slightest mistake a friend commit, tho reconciling few minutes later after correcting him/her. Above all, he feel he is unique and specially different from his other clan members. Likes: Meditating under in the moon Dislikes: The sun, snakes(reptiles) Favorites: -Food: Pasta, Ramen , suya -Color: Silver -Music Genre: Funk -Book Genre: -Hangout: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Background~ Current Allegiance: Iwagakure no sato. Relationships: - Parent(s): Taosin and Mina - Sibling(s): - Significant Other(s): - Pet(s): - Teacher(s): - Friend(s):Tala Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancient Posted February 8, 2017 Author Share Posted February 8, 2017 (edited) History: Taosin and Mina are father and mother to Hitachi. Years ago, After several hardship of getting a first child , frustration sets in. Taosin would go alongside Mina to see the village doctor, they had endured enough , unable to conceive a child after 3 years of marriage. One faithful day, Taosin and Mina decided to visit the doctor hoping to do some tests and give some complains about body pains and after series of tests, Mina was told be 2 months pregnant. Whatttt!!!!!!!?. They(Taosin and Mina) couldn't believe their ears as ocean of joy flow down their cheek, they hug each other tightly in exictment. The doctor( Ray Luke) looked at them with joy in their heart, “Alas, after 3 years, they bear a child" he said to himself. The couple had been visiting him for medication and it seems those drugs worked. “Thank you Sire" The two said as they left. 7 months after, Mina concived a baby boy(Hitachi) who was name on the 7th day of birth. Hitachi is growing in strength, age and wisdom, he somehow has an odd silvery white hair appearance, a trait not common in the aragane clan. Taosin and Mina loved him so much that they would do anything to satisfy their son, they were however careful not spoil him like some single-baby parents do. Two years after the birth of hitachi, Taosin and Mina tried to concieved another baby , all effort to do so was futile. Taosin and his wife visit the village doctor once again, who carried out some test and confirmed that Mina womb is completely damaged. “What!!!!?! yelled the two. The doctor further explained that the gradual damaging of the womb could have been the reason why Mina encountered some problems in conceiving her first child and stated frankly that the first child that she conceived was by some sorta miracles. Ray Luke( The doctor) sympathise with them and told them accept their fate and live on with one child. Taosin and Mina walked out of the doctors' office, sadden and filled with sorrow. They got home late at night and lock themselves up in their room with Hitachi asleep in his own room. Several nights passed, as they were drown in the ocean of salty rain. After several months, Taosin explained to Mina that they've gotta move on, move on with Hitachi, as their fate. They agreed to forget their sorrow and live a joyful and peaceful life with their son. Taosin and Mina are both ninjas with jounin ranks, while Taosin specialised in offensive liquid steel ninjutsu , Mina focus on medical jutsu . The two planned great things for their kid, wanting the best for and of him. Though most aragane clansmen were business men specialized in blacksmith, Taosin and Mina were not. They see the beyond the horizon of other clansmen believing they must follow their ninja paths rather than doing businesses. These made them stand out, as they were among the strongest ninjas in the village (Iwagakure). During the Kumogakure war, Taosin skills in liquid steel release helped drastically to some extent, providing support and defense to the entire platoons of shinobis, something the tsuchikage praised him for been so influential. Mina rare skills with medical ninjutsu did a lot in the war also, helping to heal casualties of injuries and wounds. She's one of the the best medical ninja in Iwagakure. Hitachi was too young to remember a dime about the war, though his father once told him stories about the war. Hitachi right from then had wished he was a fully grown ninja to help like his parent did in the war, he would follow his parent ninja path rather than becoming a business man like other clansmen. Now, Hitachi has been registered in the academy, Taosin is determined to train his child in the art of liquid steel, which he has started doing. Everyday after class, Taosin would bring his son to the training ground while Mina prepares lunch for the family. she often use her medical abilities to heal Hitachi whenever he get hurt, as Taosin often go hard ,wanting the best of him. Hitachi is learning at a faster pace, seen as a intelligent boy by all his peers. He has shown to be very observant, an attribute gained from the “use your mind-brain test" his father always give to him before starting the daily training. Hitachi love his parent dearly, loves to walk and commune with them. Hitachi is an introvert , so clearly you can guess what type of person he is, barely finds anything funny to him. Despite this he still has a male friend named Tala in the academy, more like a rival because he always admire Hitachi's intelligences and skills and often challenge him to battle, which at most time Hitachi would walk away. Tala and Hitachi were good friend , while in the academy for class, they would sit close to each other and they often shared most of their things together. Tala see Hitachi as of the same blood and even though Hitachi might not view in the same perspective , he still love Tala as a friend. A day came when some bullies in their class came chasing after them after lectures. They had probably seen something that interest them and wanted it at all cost “The crystal necklace on taka ". The two bullies were in the same class as Hitachi, however their names were not known because they don't usually attend class,kinda unserious right?. The two bump into Hitachi and Tala asking for the necklace, this was when Hitachi training will count. Tala mouth was wide open like a tea cup when he amazely saw how Hitachi the bullies , badly injuring one in the process which made the bullies flee. After the fight Hitachi walk up to tala who was still amazed at his friends' skills, he just pat tala on the back and faked a smile and they both headed home. Neither Hitachi nor tala told anyone about this incident nor were these bullies seen attacking again. The effort of Hitachi's parent on him made him stand out, he was one of the first set of students to graduate from academy.Life moves on and Hitachi revolves with it. Now a Gennin, he is ready to begin his ninja life and chase his dreams. Edited February 9, 2017 by Ancient Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancient Posted February 8, 2017 Author Share Posted February 8, 2017 (edited) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Statistics Death Bonus: Rank: Gennin Level: 5 TXP: 2173 Total Stat Points: 1000 -Stats- (Health) 200 (Stamina) 10 (Chakra) 200 (Taijutsu) 0 (Defense) 0 (Ninjutsu) 100 (Genjutsu) 0 (Concentration) 10 (Speed) 180 (Accuracy) 150 (Evasion) 150 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Skills~ Skill Point Tally: (5/7) Remaining Skill Points: 0 Skills: Ekikōton | 液鋼遁 | Liquid Steel Release Ninja who possess the power of the Ekikōton (ʟɪqᴜɪᴅ sᴛᴇᴇʟ) are able to easily comprehend and manipulate its elemental components of Fire, Earth, and Water. The bloodline is found within the Aragane clan; this genetic mutation probably arose from extended exposure to steel while living for generations in the Country of Coal. The liquid aspect was dormant until the connection was discovered by Aragane Shiro while researching in Kiri. In essence, the bloodline enables its carriers to wield a water-like steel chakra which can form metallic structures with an interactive structure. In its dormant form, the steel retains its traditional, impervious shape and strength; however, if the right chakra signal is applied to the metal, its structure radically changes into a liquid format without the need for intense heating. Even from a young age a novice capable of transmuting a simple metal spoon back and forth between its liquid and solid states, and masters from the art can create metallic tidal waves which in an instant freeze to form monumental steel prisons. Elegant yet cold, the ʟɪqᴜɪᴅ sᴛᴇᴇʟ is at the heart of the Aragane strength. Forgeborn Description: Found within many members of the Aragane clan, the born users of Ekikōton able to easily shape, restructure, and utilize most metallic objects- especially steel. While this natural attribute makes them renowned metallurgists and blacksmiths, their bodies are not as inherently attuned to the more basic elements of their trademark ʟɪqᴜɪᴅ sᴛᴇᴇʟ. While they may eventually gain the ability to utilize more base elements and beyond, it is not typical without extensive training. Effect: The wielder receives the skill ‘Combinatorial Elements: ʟɪqᴜɪᴅ sᴛᴇᴇʟ’ for 0 Skill Points. When purchased at character creation, the skill “Combinatorial: ʟɪqᴜɪᴅ sᴛᴇᴇʟ” replaces their village bonus skill. When purchasing the skill “Ninjutsu Mastery; ʟɪqᴜɪᴅ sᴛᴇᴇʟ”, characters with this skill may purchase 2 ranks for 1 Skill Point. Cost: -2 Quick Learner: You pick up on concepts and skills more quickly than the average ninja. You may gain +10% EXP From Training, Battles, Gamemaster and Mission rewards. Bonus EXP is not included in this. Rank:1 Cost:-2 SP The Path of the Artisan: Some Ninja are either exceptionally gifted at the creation and use of items in battle or work hard towards that mastery. These ninja are more often than not viewed as the most inventive among their peers, and those that follow the Path of the Artisan in the past have been known to create some of the greatest items of legend, as well as the simple tools that nearly every Ninja has used for over a hundred years. Effect: Character gains 1 extra Jutsu Point per level. Artistic Mastery: (Choose Two) - Master of the Brush: May gain ranks of 'Scribe' for one (1) skill point. - Master of the Canvas: May gain 2 ranks of 'Scroll Arts' for one (1) skill point. Edited March 1, 2017 by Ancient Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancient Posted February 8, 2017 Author Share Posted February 8, 2017 (edited) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Techniques~ Jutsu Points: 4 Used : 6 Available : 10 Total +4 (Creation) +10(Levels 1-5)path of artisan Gennin rank: Ekikōton: Rasenyari [Liquid Steel Release: Spiraling Spear] Type: Ninjutsu [Liquid Steel | Clan | Evolving] Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Chakra + X Barrier/Shield HP Damage: 20 Effect: This technique deals 25 plus X/.8 additional Bleeding Damage for one turn. X May never exceed 40. Description: Rasenyari is an offensive technique within the Aragane clan designed almost entirely for use from behind a protective barrier. When in such a situation, the user will form seals, then strike their barrier and twist their palm- an action that causes a long, spiraling, spike to emerge from the opposite end of the barrier. The spike then continues to twist outward and launch itself at a singular target; the spiraling nature of this 'lance' tends to grant it increased penetrative powers. The technique can also be used outside of cover simply by manifesting one's chakra as Liquid Steel and molding it accordingly. JP: -4 Jutsu learned from Jounins: Edited March 1, 2017 by Ancient Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancient Posted February 8, 2017 Author Share Posted February 8, 2017 (edited) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Inventory~ --Armor: Hitai-ate -Head: -Neck: -Body: -Waist: -Forearm(s): -Hand(s): -Thigh(s): -Calve(s): -Feet: --Weapons: -Main Weapon: -Sub Weapon: --Item Listing (7/15) -Items on Hand: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, and 4 Senbon Needles -Items in Vault: None -Money on Hand: $475 -Money in Bank: 0 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Logs~ Exp Earned: +138 exp for speed test http://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?/topic/37778-secret-dreams-speed-test/ +400 for cleaning pool http://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?/topic/37779-d-rank-cleaning-the-sanitation-pool/#comment-396188 +800 exp from catching cats and stealing bell from kito, +175 from Kito sensei. http://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?/topic/37746-between-a-rock-and-a-hard-place/#comment-396201 +660Exp for delivering supplies( Quick learner applied) http://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?/topic/37820-iaf-supply-escort-from-iwa-to-yuki/ Transaction Log: Mission Log: Rank D: 3 Rank C: 1 Rank B: Rank A: Rank S: Edited March 1, 2017 by Ancient Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hardcore Skittlez Posted February 8, 2017 Share Posted February 8, 2017 I'm going to assume that this is your main application now, since it was posted after the previous. I'll go ahead and say that I don't mind you making an Aragane clansmen, but I would like to see something in your history or personality sections that kind of references that fact. The Aragane are businessmen and blacksmiths and are one of the leading arms dealers in the known shinobi world- they've got extended family all over and do business with everyone. If Hitachi's parents are -not- part of those professions, I'd like to see maybe a little explanation as to why and how it might have affected them when the rest of the clan has those expectations. Other than that, your history looks to be pretty decent. There were two major wars in Iwagakure's recent history, one with Yukigakure(that ended a few months ago), and the large world-war with Kumogakure. You can find both on the timeline here; next to those events are little buttons that should take you to the Wiki to read more. Your character would have been pretty young for the Kumogakure War, but it was large enough that I would advise reading about it and maybe making reference to it somewhere in your history- this could be as simple as "Hitachi was too young to remember how the Kumogakure war affected his family", or however complex you'd like to make it. As Cellar Door had said in the previous thread, you do need to put Liquid Steel on your sheet itself. You were correct that it replaces your free village skill, but it still needs to actually be on your character sheet(you get it for free w/ Forge Born, so you don't need to worry about purchasing it again.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancient Posted February 9, 2017 Author Share Posted February 9, 2017 I splitted it like you asked me to, All edited for approval. Pls do me the favour of helping delete the first topic I created. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancient Posted February 9, 2017 Author Share Posted February 9, 2017 (edited) Aragane and kumogakure war history added on Taosin, Mina,Hitachi and edited . pls where do I get the liquid steel sheet, and to where do I add it?. Edited February 9, 2017 by Ancient Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ancient Posted February 9, 2017 Author Share Posted February 9, 2017 Liquid steel release added to character's sheet. Hey? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhapsody Posted February 9, 2017 Share Posted February 9, 2017 Approved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Ancient Posted February 23, 2017 Author Share Posted February 23, 2017 (edited) Added $200, 300 stat point to stat and skill quick learner, path of artisan. At 12:10 am, Feb 24 2017 Edited February 23, 2017 by Ancient Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cntrstrk14 Posted October 8, 2018 Share Posted October 8, 2018 Moved to Inactive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
