Miso Posted April 23, 2019 Share Posted April 23, 2019 (edited) Water Release: Starch Syrup Capturing Field I | Suiton: Mizuame Nabara I Type: Ninjutsu [ Water | Hisame ] Rank: Chûnin Cost: 120 Chakra Effect: Target is inflicted with the status effect [Shackled: Paired Legs] for one (1) turn. Additionally, targets are inflicted with [Slow] on the following two (2) turns after shackled is resolved. Description: The user expels an extremely viscous fluid from their mouth that covers the ground. Any ninja caught by the sticky liquid will find it quite bothersome to wiggle their way free of the tacky surface or maneuver thereafter. Requirements: -- Cost: 4 Water Release: Starch Syrup Capturing Field II | Suiton: Mizuame Nabara II Type: Ninjutsu [ Water | Hisame ] Rank: Jōnin Cost: 170 Chakra Effect: Target is inflicted with the status effect [Shackled: Paired Legs] for two (2) turns. Additionally, targets are inflicted with [Slow] on the following three (2) turns after shackled is resolved. Description: The user expels an extremely viscous fluid from their mouth that covers the ground. Any ninja caught by the sticky liquid will find it very bothersome to find wiggle their way free of the tacky surface or maneuver thereafter. Requirements: Suiton Mizuame Nabara I Cost: 4 Water Release: Starch Syrup Sea | Suiton: Mizuame Enkai Type: Ninjutsu [ Water | Hisame | AoE ] Rank: Sennin Cost: 360 Chakra Effect: Opponents are inflicted with the status effect [Shackled: Paired Legs] for one (1) turns. Additionally, all opponent(s) are inflicted with [Slow] on the following two (2) turns after shackled is resolved. Description: Much like the parent technique, the user expels an extremely large volume of highly viscous fluid from their mouth that covers the ground in mass. Ninja caught in the vicinity of the sticky liquid will find it nigh impossible to free their way of the tacky surface or maneuver freely afterwards. Requirements: Suiton Mizuame Nabara I Cost: 6 -- Notes: Resubmit of an old Hisame technique (here) with Azure's permission. Including an addition of an area of effect version of the technique. -Shackled [Paired legs]: 50 CP per turn -Slow: 35 CP per turn Edited June 1, 2019 by Miso Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toroi21 Posted April 23, 2019 Share Posted April 23, 2019 (edited) I saw this and I know I may not be approval staff, but when i think of 'Field' or '[insert element name here] sea' i think of a terrain jutsu. But I'm not one to ruin someone else's fun, so as is: Math looks good on this one. (35 x 2 for slow + 50 for Shackled legs = 120. So boom you good. same logic goes for the second one. But im sure there's turn caps for ninjutsu effects/damage. it caps off at 4 turns. so 3 turns of slow and 2 turns of shackled legs would equal to 5 total turns affected. which is.... grr i think. (but im not approval staff so im not 100% sure.) This seems aight. These are just suggestions, and could get overruled. but this is my humble opinion as a fellow member. Edited April 23, 2019 by Toroi21 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cellar Door Posted April 26, 2019 Share Posted April 26, 2019 Pretty sure capture field exists already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miso Posted April 26, 2019 Author Share Posted April 26, 2019 Nah, it's dead piled. I used the whole forum search for the technique and that's the only thing I found. I also talked to both Tony and Azure who both worked on the technique and the sticky syrup terrain at various points. Got the go ahead from Blue to remake it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudnine Posted May 27, 2019 Share Posted May 27, 2019 Looks good, just take the ranks out of the tags and add 'Rank' as a field below 'Type.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miso Posted May 27, 2019 Author Share Posted May 27, 2019 Definitely. Fixed and ready to go. If I need to reduce the turn duration on the Jonin level. I can do that as well. It has been brought up by Toroi but however it should be handled, I'll edit it accordingly or leave it in, if good as is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Posted May 27, 2019 Share Posted May 27, 2019 Unfortunately you are still limited to the 4 turns of ninjutsu for status effects by everything I'm reading, so im going to repeat Toroi's sentiment that the 5 turns needs to be reduced to 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miso Posted May 27, 2019 Author Share Posted May 27, 2019 No problem. Edited, sealed, and out for delivery. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudnine Posted May 28, 2019 Share Posted May 28, 2019 Jounin rank is now 4JP with the changes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miso Posted June 1, 2019 Author Share Posted June 1, 2019 Good catch. Fixed and ready. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloudnine Posted June 2, 2019 Share Posted June 2, 2019 Approved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Posted June 2, 2019 Share Posted June 2, 2019 Yeah my maths works on these and they look basic af. Approved Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
