Daisuke Zala Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 (edited) Name: Meditative Edge Type: Katana Size: Medium Level: 1 Special: Swift Sword Play- Use the following formula to find the accuracy of this weapon's attack: 1/2 accuracy mod + 1/2 concentration mod. Attributes: - Chakra Blade - Indestructible Description: A very light katana. Its sharp blade silver is only 3 1/2 feet long rested on a red firm handle. The blade is only 2 inches wide, and blue swirls cover the blade. A sleek gold rim surrounds the red handle, with gold bits of string hanging from the bottom of the handle. Because it is so light and easy to maneuver, the user cannot aim the sword at the user, but must concentrate its swift movements and slashes at the opponent. It is held on the back of a shinobi in a thin and light black wooden case. Cost: $220? 50 (chakra blade) 50 (indestructible) 20 (level 1 medium) $120+100 (Special)= 220 Edited October 25, 2006 by Daisuke Zala
Takius Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 I thought we were no longer doing stats that replaced others? Anyways, DENIED for now, unless change it to 1/2 Accuracy + 1/2 Concentration... Or something like that. Get someone else's opinion... I'm bad with weapons.
Seven Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 Special: Swift Sword Play- Use the concentration stat to determine the accuracy of this weapon's attack. 100$ IMO, and approved at that
cntrstrk14 Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 Spellcheck, go to the main site to learn how to spell the weapon attributes.... Also, Ryuu, he didn't do what Takius said. It still says concentration. I revoke Ryuu's approval.
Seven Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 meh appro... I still think the other way was weaker >.>
Daisuke Zala Posted October 25, 2006 Author Posted October 25, 2006 (edited) meh appro... I still think the other way was weaker >.> Yes, I like that way better. Also Karasu replaced resistance with the concentration stat (when calc damage) for a technique. - Thx for the re-approval. (fixed spelling) For the other mods: [ Old way was- Use concentration to calculate the accuracy of this weapon's attack] Edited October 25, 2006 by Daisuke Zala
cntrstrk14 Posted October 25, 2006 Posted October 25, 2006 Ok, the pricing and all is good, but fix the spelling in the Special and expand your weapon description a bit. Let me visualize it, if I wanted to I want to be able to draw a precise picture of it. Describe the sheathe, edge of the blade, how the guard is designed, etc.
Daisuke Zala Posted October 25, 2006 Author Posted October 25, 2006 Ok, ran it throught my spellcheck, and added some more description of my weapon. Tell me if it needs more.