The Next Uchiha Clan

[Guest MrSako]

Clan Name: The Uchiha Clan

Clan Village: Konoha

Clan Starter: Unknown

Clan Head: Uchiha Madara

Clan Age and Status: Old, feared, and disgraced, though it has nearly reached extinction in the past. It is now currently trying to heigten its members, but proves to be a slow process

Clan Bloodline: The Sharingan (The Wheel Eye)

Clan Element: None (Fire)

Coat of Arms:

The Uchiwa; a Red and white fan

Clan Info: The Uchiha clan is considered to be one of the most powerful clans in Konoha. The clan itself was said to be descended from the Hyuuga clan who possess the bloodline of the Byakugan eye. Because their clan possessed the Sharingan or "Wheel Eye," the Uchiha excelled at being able to read and fend off attackers. It is said that one of the ancestors of the Uchiha Clan founded the Konoha Military Police Force (Tokushu Butai). The organization itself would go on to incorporate the Uchiha fan symbol into their official logo. Since the destruction of the Uchiha Clan by Uchiha Itachi whilst he attempted to evolve his Sharingan, Sasuke (One of the last surviving Uchiha) led his life aiming to slay his older brother. Nonetheless, he eventually found a significant other in his life, and settled down with her for some time before leaving on his hunt once again.

The Clan has started to build slowly over the past one hundred years, and there is about a dozen who are able to use the Sharingan. The Uchiha Estates are being rebuilt, and life is slowly flowing back in. The Konoha Military Police Force is still headed by the Uchiha, but they have had to enlist the aid of some of the other Clans in Konoha, including the Nara, the Akimichi, the Inuzuka, and the Aburame Clan. The Hyuuga Clan was not invited to join in this group.

Select few members of the Uchiha clan possess the ability to activate the bloodline Sharingan eye. This doujutsu (eye skill) gives one the ability to read Genjutsu, Taijutsu and Ninjutsu and then defeat it. As such, the clan member can view a technique being performed and see the tricks and movements required to be able to complete it. However the clan member can not copy techniques which are unique to another bloodline. The clan itself is known for their ties to fire. For a clan ninja to be seen as an adult, they must be able to utilize a Katon (Fire Element) jutsu such as Goukakyuu no Jutsu. Thus is the tie between the manipulation of fire and the mind of an Uchiha member.

The Sharingan, although appearing in the user's eyes, is tightly regulated by the user's body. That is why, if someone is able to take the eyes of an Uchiha, it takes more strain to use the abilities of the Sharingan. Information on the matter has been revealed through Hatake Kakashi, who received a 'gift' from Uchiha Obito before his death. Details of the encounter was recorded by Kakashi and handed over to Uchiha Sasuke, who has passed it down. It is now in possession of the current Clan Head and reveals many of the secrets of the Sharingan.

Uchiha Character Rules:

-May not have the Hindering traits: 'Sealed Ninjutsu' or 'Sealed Genjutsu.'

-May not take another bloodline (Uchiha pride will keep you from diluting yourself with any of the 'weaker' bloodlines)

-There will only be 3 spots open (and I will take one of these spots), so effectively, 2 open spots for other PCs. I will have a fair and open process of determining who will be included and I encourage everyone to try out.

-You go Missing, you will be hunted down ASAP. The Clan has learned since the mistake of allowing Uchiha Itachi to go rogue.

-For any of the 'Forbidden' techniques, you will need permission from the Hokage and Clan Head

-Clan Skills and Bloodline skills may -not- be taught by Jounin/Sennin/whatever NPC. You earn these.

Sharingan Bloodline Stealing Rules

-The stolen eyes are always active. To 'deactivate it' the eye must be physically covered. User may not activate their own Doujutsu to 'deactivate' the Sharingan

-The upkeep cost is Doubled if only one eye has been taken

Uchiha Bloodline Transufsion Rules

-None will be offered, so please do not ask

Bloodline

-this is based mostly of Mensmentis' contributions, but I have made some revisions to it. I have also incorporated some of Lemon's contributions, and have added a unique portion to it from me (the Techniques)

Skill Name: Inlaid Sharingan

Bloodline: Uchiha Clan

Cost: 0 (Must have already purchased the next level Sharingan. It is inactive until the 'key' is a success.

Effect:

Key to Dokushinha Sharingan

Once per a battle, this character may roll a D100. If the roll turns up any number with a seven in its digits, such as 17 or 76, then they are awarded the Dokushinha Sharingan. This skill cannot be used in the Practice Arena.

Key to Ninjuuha Sharingan

Once per a battle, this character may roll a D100. If the roll turns up any number with a seven in its digits, such as 17 or 76, then they are awarded the Ninjuuha Sharingan. This skill cannot be used in the Practice Arena.

Key to Toripuruha Sharingan

Once per a battle, this character may roll a D100. If the roll turns up any number with a seven in its digits, such as 17 or 76, then they are awarded the Toripuruha Sharingan. This skill cannot be used in the Practice Arena.

Key to Mangekyou Sharingan

Once per a battle, this character may roll a D100. If the roll turns up any number with a seven in its digits, such as 17 or 76, then they are awarded the Mangekyou Sharingan. This skill cannot be used in the Practice Arena.

Name: Sharingan Eyes

Description: The Sharingan (写輪眼, literally "Copy Wheel Eye" or "Mirror Wheel Eye") is a special type of dōjutsu (pupil technique) that naturally occurs in all members of the Uchiha clan, though not all of them ever discover it. The Sharingan decended from the Byakugan and grants the user different abilities and a different eye of insight. The Sharingan's first and most well known ability is to memorize any technique that it is a witness to. It can memorize ninjutsu (ninja techniques), genjutsu (illusionary techniques), and taijutsu (hand-to-hand techniques) with perfect accuracy and allow the user to use the techniques, as long as they have the necessary resources to do so. Second, it has the ability to predict an opponent's movement as well as allowing sight of fast moving objects with great clarity. Third, it is capable of a unique brand of hypnosis that involves suggesting actions and thoughts to the opponent. Fourth, it can see through genjutsu, the level of which is possibly dependent on the user's skill.

In order to copy a jutsu, one has to have the physical ability to perform the technique. For example, they have to have the needed amount of chakra, stamina, agility, and/or strength in order to perform said technique. In addition to physical skill, the Sharingan cannot copy any other bloodline abilities or summon a creature the user has not made a contract with because the user of the sharingan has to have the same blood of the other summoning user.

The Sharingan does not automatically appear from birth in a user; instead, it will usually appear when the user is in a life threatening situation, where the power of the Sharingan will save the user. After this first appearance, the user can then call up the Sharingan any time he or she pleases. The power of the Sharingan is judged through the number of tomoe (swirls) in the person's eye. It is not unheard of for a Sharingan user to have different amounts of tomoe in each eye. For example, Sasuke's Sharingan initially had two tomoe in one eye and one in the other. Eventually his Sharingan evolved to two tomoe in each eye, then three. An "adult" and fully matured Sharingan has three tomoe in each eye.

Interestingly enough, it is possible to transplant Sharingan eyes from one person to another, as occurred with Kakashi and his deceased comrade Obito. However, transplanted eyes do not work as well without an Uchiha body, causing much more strain on the user, as was the case with Kakashi - extended use of his Sharingan caused him to collapse. Uchiha clan members are not burdened with this weakness; while activation of the Sharingan does consume chakra, the drain is so small as to be almost insignificant. Uchiha Itachi in particular seemed to have no trouble in keeping his Sharingan activated near-constantly.

Requirements: Must be activated and costs 5% of your total chakra every turn it is open.

Dokushinha Sharingan

First level of Sharingan that can be obtained by an especially gifted Uchiha, it is astoundingly weak compared to the higher forms of the Sharingan, but is quite potent when used by someone who can think on their feet. Not capable of extraordinary things at this level, can still instill fear in those who have heard of it. Has one swirl in both eyes. May be opened in the Main Phase. (-1)

Requirements: Inlaid Sharingan; Key to Dokushinha (Success)

Sharingan Sight - Rank 1

If the Dokushinha Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a technique, then if they decide to use the same technique again in the same battle, then the technique's effects are cut drastically. Repeated Taijutsu techniques have their effects cut by 10%, repeated Ninjutsu techniques have their effects cut by 20%, and repeated Genjutsu techniques have their effects cut by 15%.

Sharingan Copy – Rank 1

If the Dokushinha Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a technique, in your Setup phase you may spend X Chakra (X = cost of target Jutsu) to make an attempt to copy the technique. If you choose to do so, roll a D10 dice and if you roll a 1 or 2, you learn the technique; any other number is failure. Cannot copy Clan techniques or techniques that have a skill requirement or techniques that do not require hand seals to perform. May not be used to learn techniques from Ninja Ranks that are higher than your own. May use copied Jutsu without corresponding 'Subtle Elements' skill. Copied Jutsu do not take up any slots (points).

Sharingan Minor Hypnotism – Rank 1

If the Dokushinha Sharingan is activated at the time a non-Blind opponent attempts to use a technique, you may choose to spend X Chakra (X = cost of target Jutsu) to make an attempt to spin the Sharingan and hypnotize the opponent into using a different technique. If you choose to do so, roll a D10 dice and if you roll a 1 through 2, then they must choose to use a different technique; any other number is failure. This ability is usable once per turn. Opponent is still considered to have 'used' the other technique and does not regain stamina/chakra spent on the Jutsu.

Sharingan Tracking - Rank 1

If the Dokushinha Sharingan is activated while this character is about to attack an opponent, then there is a chance of receiving a boost to the accuracy of the attack. However, if the opponent being targeted has twice this character's speed, the bonus turns off. Gives a +10% to hit with all attacks and techniques.

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Ninjuuha Sharingan

Second level of Sharingan that is granted only when the owner of the Dokushinha Sharingan is put through an extraordinary amount of training. Should they succeed, the Sharingan's power is nearly doubled and becomes much more powerful. Capable of some truly exquisite abilities, it is most common in chuunins, but is said that some genin can obtain it as well. Has two swirls in both eyes. May be opened in the Main Phase or Setup Phase. (-2)

Requirements: Level 10. Inlaid Sharingan; Key to Ninjuuha (Success)

Sharingan Sight - Rank 2

If the Ninjuuha Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a technique, then if they decide to use the same technique again in the same battle, then the technique's effects are cut drastically. Repeated Taijutsu techniques have their effects cut by 25%, repeated Ninjutsu techniques have their effects cut by 40%, and repeated Genjutsu techniques have their effects cut by 30%.

Sharingan Copy – Rank 2

If the Ninjuuha Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a technique, in your Setup phase you may spend X Chakra (X = cost of target Jutsu) to make an attempt to copy the technique. If you choose to do so, roll a D10 dice and if you roll a 1 through 4, you learn the technique; any other number is failure. Cannot copy Clan techniques or techniques that have a skill requirement or techniques that do not require hand seals to perform. May not be used to learn techniques from Ninja Ranks that are higher than your own. May use copied Jutsu without corresponding 'Subtle Elements' skill. Copied Jutsu do not take up any slots (points).

Sharingan Minor Hypnotism – Rank 2

If the Ninjuuha Sharingan is activated at the time a non-Blind opponent attempts to use a technique, you may choose to spend X Chakra (X = cost of target Jutsu) to make an attempt to spin the Sharingan and hypnotize the opponent into using a different technique. If you choose to do so, roll a D10 dice and if you roll a 1 through 4, then they must choose to use a different technique; any other number is failure. This ability is usable once per turn. Opponent is still considered to have 'used' the other technique and does not regain stamina/chakra spent on the Jutsu.

Sharingan Tracking - Rank 2

If the Ninjuuha Sharingan is activated while this character is about to attack an opponent, then there is a chance of receiving a boost to the accuracy of the attack. However, if the opponent being targeted has twice this character's speed, the bonus turns off. Gives a +20% to hit with all attacks and techniques.

Sharingan Major Hypnotism - Rank 1

During the Setup Phase, as long as Ninjuuha Sharingan is activated, you may choose to pay 5% of your total amount of Chakra to make an attempt to spin the Sharingan and completely hypnotize the mind of a non-Blind opponent. This always has some effect on the target's mind and can do any number of things to impair the opponent's mind. User rolls a D16.

1: Force an opponent to use any one Jutsu they have used in this battle.

2-3: Choose a Jutsu that opponent has used this battle. They may not use that Jutsu for the remainder of the battle.

4-6: Opponent must use the same Jutsu they used on their last Main Phase (If the Jutsu has a restriction such as -ONCE- per battle, then opponent must skip their Main Phase)

7+: No Effect

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Toripuruha Sharingan

Third level of Sharingan that is granted only when the owner of the Ninjuuha Sharingan is put through a great deal of anguish or an incredible ordeal that taxes both mind and body. Should they succeed, the Sharingan's power is nearly doubled yet again and becomes fearsomely powerful. Capable of only the most powerful abilities, it is most common in jounins, but is said that some chuunin can obtain it as well. Has three swirls in both eyes. May be opened in the Main Phase, Setup Phase, or the Response Phase. (-3)

Requirements: Chuunin; Inlaid Sharingan; Key to Toripuruha (Success)

Sharingan Sight - Rank 3

If the Toripuruha Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a technique, then if they decide to use the same technique again in the same battle, then the technique's effects are cut drastically. Repeated Taijutsu techniques have their effects cut by 45%, repeated Ninjutsu techniques have their effects cut by 60%, and repeated Genjutsu techniques have their effects cut by 50%.

Sharingan Copy – Rank 3

If the Toripuruha Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a technique, in your Setup phase you may spend X Chakra (X = cost of target Jutsu) to make an attempt to copy the technique. If you choose to do so, roll a D10 dice and if you roll a 1 through 6, you learn the technique; any other number is failure. Cannot copy Clan techniques or techniques that have a skill requirement or techniques that require hand seals to perform. May not be used to learn techniques from Ninja Ranks that are higher than your own. May use copied Jutsu without corresponding 'Subtle Elements' skill. Copied Jutsu do not take up any slots (points).

Sharingan Minor Hypnotism – Rank 3

If the Toripuruha Sharingan is activated at the time a non-Blind opponent attempts to use a technique, you may choose to spend X Chakra (X = cost of target Jutsu) to make an attempt to spin the Sharingan and hypnotize the opponent into using a different technique. If you choose to do so, roll a D10 dice and if you roll a 1 through 6, then they must choose to use a different technique; any other number is failure. This ability is usable once per turn. Opponent is still considered to have 'used' the other technique and does not regain stamina/chakra spent on the Jutsu.

Sharingan Tracking - Rank 3

If the Toripuruha Sharingan is activated while this character is about to attack an opponent, then there is a chance of receiving a boost to the accuracy of the attack. However, if the opponent being targeted has twice this character's speed, the bonus turns off. Gives a +30% to hit with all attacks and techniques.

Sharingan Major Hypnotism - Rank 2

During the Setup Phase, as long as the Torupuruha Sharingan is activated, you may choose to pay 5% of your total amount of Chakra to make an attempt to spin the Sharingan and completely hypnotize the mind of a non-Blind opponent. This always has some effect on the target's mind and can do any number of things to impair the opponent's mind. User rolls a D12.

1: Force an opponent to use any one Jutsu they have used in this battle.

2-3: Choose a Jutsu that opponent has used this battle. They may not use that Jutsu for the remainder of the battle.

4-6: Opponent must use the same Jutsu they used on their last Main Phase (If the Jutsu has a restriction such as -ONCE- per battle, then opponent must skip their Main Phase)

7+: No Effect

Sharingan Reflect - Rank 1

If the Toripuruha Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a Ninjutsu/Genjutsu, there is a small chance the action will be reflected back upon its user. Use in the Response Phase before the dodge roll, with a base 5% chance. If reflected, the action deals half damage back to its user (they may use a dodge roll in their next Response Phase as well as use Jutsu/skills) and this character is not in any way affected. Only applies to techniques or attacks of a lesser or equal Ninja Rank. Must pay X to use this ability, where X is equal to one-half the cost of opponent's Jutsu. If successful, may not use Sharingan Copy in the same turn.

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Mangekyou Sharingan

The final level of the Sharingan it begins to show its roots from the Byakugan Eyes of the Hyuuga Clan. In order to obtain the ultimate doujutsu, it is said that the owner of the Toripuruha must kill their best friend, no small feat indeed since it can easily lead to the shinobi immediately becoming a missing-nin and become hunted by ANBU. This rumor was been dispelled by Hatake Kakashi, who proved that with enough training, a Jounin would be able to control the incredible powers of the Mangokyou. May be opened in the Main Phase, Setup Phase, Response Phase, or Loss Tag Phase. When activated, the upkeep is 10% of Total Chakra per turn. (-4)

Requirements: Jounin; Inlaid Sharingan; Key to Mangekyou (Success)

Sharingan Sight - Rank 4

If the Mangekyou Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a technique, then if they decide to use the same technique again in the same battle, then the technique's effects are cut drastically. Repeated Taijutsu techniques have their effects cut by 55%, repeated Ninjutsu techniques have their effects cut by 75%, and repeated Genjutsu techniques have their effects cut by 60%.

Sharingan Copy – Rank 4

If the Mangekyou Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a technique, in your Setup phase you may spend X Chakra (X = cost of target Jutsu) to make an attempt to copy the technique. If you choose to do so, roll a D10 dice and if you roll a 1 through 8, you learn the technique; any other number is failure. Cannot copy Clan techniques or techniques that have a skill requirement or techniques that require hand seals to perform. May use copied Jutsu without corresponding 'Subtle Elements' skill. Copied Jutsu do not take up any slots (points).

Sharingan Minor Hypnotism – Rank 4

If the Mangekyou Sharingan is activated at the time a non-Blind opponent attempts to use a technique, you may choose to spend X Chakra (X = cost of target Jutsu) to make an attempt to spin the Sharingan and hypnotize the opponent into using a different technique. If you choose to do so, roll a D10 dice and if you roll a 1 through 8, then they must choose to use a different technique; any other number is failure. This ability is usable once per turn. Opponent is still considered to have 'used' the other technique and does not regain stamina/chakra spent on the Jutsu.

Sharingan Tracking - Rank 4

If the Mangekyou Sharingan is activated while this character is about to attack an opponent, then there is a chance of receiving a boost to the accuracy of the attack. Gives a +40% to hit with all attacks and techniques.

Sharingan Major Hypnotism - Rank 3

During the Setup Phase, as long as the Mangekyou Sharingan is activated, you may choose to pay 5% of your total amount of Chakra to make an attempt to spin the Sharingan and completely hypnotize the mind of a non-Blind opponent. This always has some effect on the target's mind and can do any number of things to impair the opponent's mind. User rolls a D8.

1: Force an opponent to use any one Jutsu they have used in this battle.

2-3: Choose a Jutsu that opponent has used this battle. They may not use that Jutsu for the remainder of the battle.

4-6: Opponent must use the same Jutsu they used on their last Main Phase (If the Jutsu has a restriction such as -ONCE- per battle, then opponent must skip their Main Phase)

7+: No Effect

Sharingan Reflect - Rank 2

If the Mangekyou Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a Ninjutsu/Genjutsu, there is a small chance the action will be reflected back upon its user. Used in the Response Phase before the dodge roll, with a base 10% chance. If reflected, the action deals half damage back to its user (they may use a dodge roll in their next Response Phase as well as use Jutsu/skills) and this character is not in any way affected. Must pay X to use this ability, where X is equal to one-half the cost of opponent's Jutsu. If successful, may not use Sharingan Copy in the same turn.

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Sharingan Mastery

The Branch of the Sharingan that offers many unique abilities that further improve the ability of Uchiha Clan members to fight off attacks and defeat the unknown, but at a costly price indeed. But those who can master this branch will soon become quite formidable shinobi quite quickly. (Masteries do not stack with previous ranks).

Characters may only learn Mastery skills once every 5 levels (i.e., if you pick Optic Mastery rank 1, then you must wait 5 levels before picking Optic Mastery rank 2 -or- Mirror Mastery rank 1)

-Sharingan Optic Mastery

Sharingan Optic Mastery – Rank 1 (-1)

Sight

Once per a battle while the Sharingan is opened, you may completely negate the effects of one technique, regardless of what type of technique it is. May not be used against techniques that are of a higher Ninja Rank than your own. Used in the Response Phase.

Tracking

Once per a battle while the Sharingan is opened, you may have any attack or technique gain the undodgeable effect; regardless of what type of attack it is. May only be used on techniques that are of a lesser or equal Ninja Rank. Used in the Main Phase as a free action.

Sharingan Optic Mastery – Rank 2 (-2)

Sight

Twice per a battle while the Sharingan is opened, you may completely negate the effects of one technique, regardless of what type of technique it is. May not be used against techniques that are of a higher Ninja Rank than your own. Used in the Response Phase.

Tracking

Twice per a battle while the Sharingan is opened, you may have any attack or technique gain the undodgeable effect; regardless of what type of attack it is. May only be used on techniques that are of a lesser or equal Ninja Rank. Used in the Main Phase as a free action.

Sharingan Optic Mastery – Rank 3 (-3)

Sight

Three times per a battle while the Sharingan is opened, you may completely negate the effects of one technique, regardless of what type of technique it is. May not be used against techniques that are of a higher Ninja Rank than your own. Used in the Response Phase

Tracking

Three times per a battle while the Sharingan is open, you may have any attack or technique gain the undodgeable effect; regardless of what type of attack it is. May only be used on techniques that are of a lesser or equal Ninja Rank. Used in the Main Phase as a free action.

-Sharingan Mirror Mastery

Sharingan Mirror Mastery – Rank 1 (-1)

Copy

Reduces the roll of Sharingan Copy by 1. Paying an additional 10% of your total amount of Chakra during a Sharingan Copy attempt will reduce it by another 1.

Reflect

This boosts the chance of Sharingan Reflect by 5%. Should you fail to reflect an attack, you may pay 10% of your total Chakra to re-roll for the reflection; this may be used as much or as often as you have the Chakra to spend on it.

Sharingan Mirror Mastery – Rank 2 (-2)

Copy

Reduces the roll of Sharingan Copy by 2. Paying an additional 10% of your total amount of Chakra during a Sharingan Copy attempt will reduce it by another 1.

Reflect

This boosts the chance of Sharingan Reflect by 10%. Should you fail to reflect an attack, you may pay 5% of your total Chakra to re-roll for the reflection; this may be used as much or as often as you have the Chakra to spend on it.

-Sharingan Hypnotism Mastery

Sharingan Hypnotism Mastery – Rank 1 (-1)

Major Hypnotism

Reduces the roll of Sharingan Major Hypnotism by 1. Paying an additional 10% of your total amount of Chakra during a Major Hypnotism attempt will reduce it by another 1.

Minor Hypnotism

Reduces the roll of Sharingan Minor Hypnotism by 1.

Sharingan Hypnotism Mastery – Rank 2 (-2)

Major Hypnotism

Reduces the roll of Sharingan Major Hypnotism by 2. Paying an additional 5% of your total amount of Chakra during a Major Hypnotism attempt will reduce it by another 1.

Minor Hypnotism

Reduces the roll of Sharingan Minor Hypnotism by 2.

Clan Skills

Skill Name: Fast Trainer

Bloodline: Uchiha

Description: The posessor is able to use the natural enhanced memory facilities which the Sharingan grants to its user to absorb and process information faster (as the Sharingan is able to apply the visual cortex's function of "completion" - filling in the blanks - to any information).

Effect: Reduces amount of training needed by 2 posts (a standard post is 10 lines, which is 200 words). Stacks with Quick Learner, Genius, Prodigy bonuses.

Requirements: Must have unlocked Dokushinha Sharingan

Cost: -1

Ranks: 1

Clan Techniques

-Must learn Katon: Goukyaku no Jutsu before becoming a Chuunin

-These techniques are variants to the 'normal' Jutsu. The following are Uchiha-only.

Name: Katon: Goukyaku no Jutsu (Fire Release: Grand Fireball Technique) lvl 1

Type: Ninjutsu (Clan, Fire)

Rank: Gennin

Cost: 80

Damage: 60

Effect: Opponent takes 5 burn damage for 5 turns. If opponent uses a Jutsu in their Response Phase against this attack, it costs 1.5x (rounded down)

Description: Utilizing a high amount of chakra, a large ball of flame is exhaled from the user's mouth. When an Uchiha clan member perfectly masters this technique, the person is fully recognized as an adult. This Katon jutsu is said to be the most powerful among all others of the same element, since this is seen as a rite of passage into adulthood for all Uchiha clan members

Name: Katon: Goukyaku no Jutsu (Fire Release: Grand Fireball Technique) lvl 2

Type: Ninjutsu (Clan, Fire)

Rank: Chuunin

Cost: 120

Damage: 120

Effect: Opponent takes 10 burn damage for 5 turns. If opponent uses a Jutsu in their Response Phase, it costs 1.5x (rounded down)

Name: Katon: Goukyaku no Jutsu (Fire Release: Grand Fireball Technique) lvl 3

Type: Ninjutsu (Clan, Fire)

Rank: Jounin

Cost: 180

Damage: 240

Effect: Opponent takes 15 burn damage for 5 turns. If opponent uses a Jutsu in their Response Phase, it costs 2x

Name: Katon: Goukyaku no Jutsu (Fire Release: Grand Fireball Technique) lvl 4

Type: Ninjutsu (Clan, Fire)

Rank: Kage/Sennin

Cost: 350

Damage: 500

Effect: Opponent takes 20 burn damage for 5 turns. If opponent uses a Jutsu in their Response Phase, it costs 2x

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Name: Katon: Housenka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique) lvl 1

Type: Ninjutsu (Clan, Fire)

Rank: Gennin

Cost: 25 per fireball (max 3)

Damage: 20 per fireball

Effect: Multi Attack Jutsu. For each attack that misses, the next one has a +5% chance to-hit (cumulative).

Description: Multiple balls of fire are sent at the target. It is also possible to hide shurikens within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack

Name: Katon: Housenka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique) lvl 2

Type: Ninjutsu (Clan, Fire)

Rank: Chuunin

Cost: 20 per fireball (max 6)

Damage: 20 per fireball

Effect: Multi Attack Jutsu. For each attack that misses, the next one has a +5% chance to-hit (cumulative).

Name: Katon: Housenka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique) lvl 3

Type: Ninjutsu (Clan, Fire)

Rank: Jounin

Cost: 25 per fireball (max 8)

Damage: 30 per fireball

Effect: Multi Attack Jutsu. For each attack that misses, the next one has a +10% chance to-hit (cumulative).

Name: Katon: Housenka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique) lvl 4

Type: Ninjutsu (Clan, Fire)

Rank: Kage/Sennin

Cost: 40 per fireball (max 10)

Damage: 50 per fireball

Effect: Multi Attack Jutsu. For each attack that misses, the next one has a +10% chance to-hit (cumulative).

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Name: Magen: Kyōten Chiten (Demonic Illusion: Mirror Heaven and Earth Change)

Type: Genjutsu (Clan)

Rank: Jounin

Cost: 2X (X = cost of Genjutsu targetting user)

Effect: Used in the Response Phase. Target opponent's Genjutsu of equal rank or lower is copied and reflected back against the user. Does not work against Genjutsu Hybrid techniques. Apply your Genjutsu modifiers and opponent's Concentration modifiers. May not use an offensive Jutsu during the next Main Phase.

Description: Utilizing the copy and counter abilities of the Sharingan, the Uchiha clan member can reverse the Genjutsu casted on them and use it against the original user

Requirement: Must have Toripuruha (or Mangekyou) Sharingan activated when using this Jutsu.

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Name: Tsukiyomi (Mood God; Illusionary Underworld Moon)

Type: Genjutsu (Clan)

Rank: Forbidden

Cost: 750

Damage: 1000 Spectral Damage

Effect: Does not affect opponents who are under the Status Effect 'Blind.' Damage from this Jutsu may not be reduced/absorbed by any Equipment, Skill, Bloodline, Jutsu, or any ability that does not specifically mention Tsukiyomi (and must be of Sealing/Forbidden level). Do not apply opponent's Concentration for purposes of Damage Reduction (they still use Concentration roll to dodge). After this ability is used, the upkeep cost of Mangekyou Sharingan is doubled for the duration of battle (cumulative). After the battle is over, the Sharingan may not be used for X days, where X is equal to the number of turns Mangekyou Sharingan was used this battle.

Spectral Damage: Damage is treated as Ghost Damage except that this may not be healed by any Jutsu or Skill that restores Health. When opponent's Health falls below 1, target is unconscious for remainder of battle.

Description: Execution of this technique will trap the target in an illusionary world that is totally controlled by the user. The user can then torture the target for as long as desired, inflicting vast mental damage upon the target. Targets of this technique will most likely suffer mental collapse; if they are lucky enough to survive, they will not be in fighting condition for a while. Time is also distorted in the illusionary world: for example, the target will feel the effects of three days when only mere seconds have truly passed. Tsukuyomi requires that the target make eye contact with the user, however, Uchiha Itachi seems to be able to 'force' his opponents to make eye contact with him, probably through the use of the hypnotic suggestion ability (see above) of the Sharingan, as he demonstrated when he used this technique on Uchiha Sasuke, who had both of his eyes closed prior to Itachi's activation of the technique, but opened them in a shock/fear expression as Itachi used the technique on him (Note that this may not have been the case; it is equally possible that Sasuke opened his eyes of his own volition, albeit unwisely)

Requirement: Mangekyou Sharingan must be activated to use this Jutsu

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Name: Amaterasu (Sun Goddess; Shining Heaven)

Type: Ninjutsu (Clan, Dark Fire)

Rank: Forbidden

Cost: 750

Damage: 1000

Effect: Jutsu Type may not be changed by any other ability. Damage from this Jutsu may not be reduced/absorbed by any Equipment, Skill, Bloodline, Jutsu, or any ability that does not specifically mention Amaterasu (and must be of Sealing/Forbidden level). Do not apply Resistance against this attack. After this ability is used, the upkeep cost of Mangekyou Sharingan is doubled for the duration of battle (cumulative). After the battle is over, the Sharingan may not be used for X days, where X is equal to the number of turns Mangekyou Sharingan was used this battle.

Description: Not much is known about this technique, as it has only been employed once by Uchiha Itachi, and was executed off-screen. However, we do know that black fire is an aftereffect, and that the technique is extremely hazardous and can burn right through even the strongest of materials, such as the esophagus of an extremely large rock frog (which is capable of breathing fire and cannot therefore be easily burned) that was summoned by one of the legendary Sannin, Jiraiya. According to the Second Databook, the fires created through Amaterasu are as hot as the sun, and blaze for seven days and seven nights. (However, Jiraiya was able to contain these fires with his Fūka Hōin (Fire Sealing Method)).

Requirement: Mangekyou Sharingan must be activated to use this Jutsu

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Name: Susanoo (God of Sea and Storms)

Type: Taijutsu (Clan)

Rank: Forbidden

Cost: 750

Damage: 1000

Effect: Damage from this Jutsu may not be reduced/absorbed by any Equipment, Skill, Bloodline, Jutsu, or any ability that does not specifically mention Susanoo (and must be of Sealing/Forbidden level). Do not apply Defense against this attack. After this ability is used, the upkeep cost of Mangekyou Sharingan is doubled for the duration of battle (cumulative). After the battle is over, the Sharingan may not be used for X days, where X is equal to the number of turns Mangekyou Sharingan was used this battle.

Description: In Japanese mythology, Amaterasu, Tsukuyomi, and Susanoo were siblings. Since Tsukuyomi is a genjutsu and Amaterasu is a ninjutsu, one could assume that the "Susanoo" is a bloodline limit taijutsu. It is speculated that Sasuke or Itachi will one day use this jutsu to defeat Orochimaru. This is because Susanoo was the Japanese god that killed Orochi, the eight-headed serpent.

Requirement: Mangekyou Sharingan must be activated to use this Jutsu

(note that until this Taijutsu is used in the Manga, the effects will be as is, unless it is revealed to be otherwise)

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This is in the Spam section because... this will not count towards the current state of affairs, but only if there is another reset. Also, I'd like constructive criticism on it now, so that if there is a reset, I can transition it easily. Now, entrance into the Uchiha and Hyuuga Clans will be through RP ability. I will not just give it out to the first person who asks. I will have my own 'entrance requirements' if you will... which will be fair and open to everyone. One quick way to fail this 'entrance requirement' is to copy the Jutsus that I have just listed and to use it in some form for your character on this version on NA.

Also, I would like constructive criticism. If you don't like something, you will write in this fashion, or I will ignore your comment completely.

"I don't like [this ability] because [of this]. It would be better if [describe solution here]."

For example:

"I don't like Chidori being an Uchiha technique because it was clearly Hatake Kakashi's technique. It would be better if this was just a Lightning technique open to Kumo Ninjas"

That is a much better and constuctive way of writing criticisms and would make me more open into wanting you in the Clan to make it better.

Here's something interesting for you all to see... Kakashi's Mangekyou vs. Itachi's Mangekyou:

So... who knows if they are different, or if they are the same... oh well

My Personal Jutsu

-Obviously will require Subtle Elements: Lightning

Name: Chidori (One Thousand Birds; Lightning Edge) lvl 1

Type: Ninjutsu (Personal, Lightning)

Rank: Chuunin

Cost: 200

Damage: 120

Effect: If Speed is greater than opponent's Speed, opponent may not use Equpment, Jutsu, or skills of equal or lower Ninja rank in their Response Phase against this Jutsu. Does not require hand seals to perform.

Description: A very powerful technique that requires a huge amount of chakra, which becomes visible around the user's hand. Once the hand has been charged, it is then thrust straight through the target. Due to the direct and obvious path the user of the technique must take to achieve an effective strike, a user of Chidori is left highly vulnerable to counterattacks and dodges. The technique can only be safely attempted by a ninja with the Sharingan or a similar countermeasure to defenses and attacks. Chidori is said to be the only original technique of Hatake Kakashi, who is also one of only two known users, the other being Uchiha Sasuke. The name Chidori comes from the sound the technique makes, which is said to remind the listener of the chirping produced by a thousand birds. Due to the high amount of chakra it requires, a ninja can only use Chidori a limited number of times per day. Attempting to use the technique more times than one's chakra allows will result in Chidori failing. Depending on how much chakra they draw on past their limits, it may paralyze (which happened with Sasuke's attempting a third), or as Kakashi claims, kill the user (due to lack of chakra).

Restriction: When used a -THIRD- time in battle, user is Stunned and Immobilized for 1 turn. When used a -FOURTH- time in battle, set user's Chakra to 0.

Name: Chidori (One Thousand Birds; Lightning Edge) lvl 2

Type: Ninjutsu (Personal, Lightning)

Rank: Jounin

Cost: 200

Damage: 240

Effect: If Speed is greater than opponent's Speed, opponent may not use Equipment, Jutsu, or skills of equal or lower Ninja rank in their Response Phase against this Jutsu. Does not require hand seals to perform.

Restriction: When used a -FOURTH- time in battle, user is Stunned and Immobilized for 1 turn. When used a -FIFTH- time in battle, set user's Chakra to 0.

Name: Chidori (One Thousand Birds; Lightning Edge) lvl 3

Type: Ninjutsu (Personal, Lightning)

Rank: Kage/Sennin

Cost: 400

Damage: 500

Effect: If Speed is greater than opponent's Speed, opponent may not use Equipment, Jutsu, or skills of equal or lower Ninja rank in their Response Phase against this Jutsu. Does not require hand seals to perform.

Restriction: When used a -FIFTH- time in battle, user is Stunned and Immobilized for 1 turn. When used a -SIXTH- time in battle, set user's Chakra to 0.

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Name: Chidori Nagashi (One Thousand Birds Current) lvl 1

Type: Ninjutsu (Personal, Lightning)

Rank: Chuunin

Cost: 300

Damage: 100

Effect:

Used in the Response Phase. Negate target close-range Jutsu, basic, or weapon attack string. Treat opponent's Evasion as 0 against this Jutsu. May not attack in the next Main Phase. Does not require hand seals to perform.

-or-

Used in the Setup Phase. For 2 turns, Weapon Attacks performed cause the Status Effect 'Stunned' for 1 turn if all the attacks hit and if Speed is greater than opponent's Speed, opponent may not use Equipment, Jutsu, or skills of equal or lower Ninja rank in their Response Phase against your Weapon Attacks. May not use Chidori Nagashi during the Response Phase if this ability is activated.

Description: This jutsu allows the Uchiha to project chakra from anywhere on their body, creating a Chidori-like effect. Sasuke has used this as a defensive technique, stunning multiple attackers within melee range similarly to the Raigeki no Yoroi (Lightning Armor). This jutsu can also be used offensively, as Sasuke demonstrated when he sent chakra through his hand and sword, cutting through a kunai that was used in an attempt to parry. After being stabbed by that sword, Yamato concluded that this current not only increases the sword's cutting ability, but also effectively numbs the target's body.

Requirememt: Chidri of equal level to learn

Restriction: Counts towards the usage limit of Chidori

Name: Chidori Nagashi (One Thousand Birds Current) lvl 2

Type: Ninjutsu (Personal, Lightning)

Rank: Jounin

Cost: 300

Damage: 200

Effect:

Used in the Response Phase. Negate target close-range Jutsu, basic, or weapon attack string. Treat opponent's Evasion as 0 against this Jutsu. May not attack in the next Main Phase. Does not require hand seals to perform.

-or-

Used in the Setup Phase. For 3 turns, Weapon Attacks performed cause the Status Effect 'Stunned' for 1 turn if all the attacks hit and if Speed is greater than opponent's Speed, opponent may not use Equipment, Jutsu, or skills of equal or lower Ninja rank in their Response Phase against your Weapon Attacks. May not use Chidori Nagashi during the Response Phase if this ability is activated.

Requirememt: Chidri of equal level to learn

Restriction: Counts towards the usage limit of Chidori

Name: Chidori Nagashi (One Thousand Birds Current) lvl 3

Type: Ninjutsu (Personal, Lightning)

Rank: Kage/Sennin

Cost: 500

Damage: 500

Effect:

Used in the Response Phase. Negate target close-range Jutsu, basic, or weapon attack string. Treat opponent's Evasion as 0 against this Jutsu. May not attack in the next Main Phase. Does not require hand seals to perform.

-or-

Used in the Setup Phase. For 4 turns, Weapon Attacks performed cause the Status Effect 'Stunned' for 1 turn if all the attacks hit and if Speed is greater than opponent's Speed, opponent may not use Equipment, Jutsu, or skills of equal or lower Ninja rank in their Response Phase against your Weapon Attacks. May not use Chidori Nagashi during the Response Phase if this ability is activated.

Requirememt: Chidri of equal level to learn

Restriction: Counts towards the usage limit of Chidori

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Edited June 3, 2006 by MrSako

[shizuki]

For plot reasons, I would prefer you not call the taijutsu supreme attack Susanoo.

[Guest Rei-Chun]

-The upkeep cost is Doubled if both eyes have been taken, and they are Tripled if only one eye has been taken

Am I correct to assume the keep up costs are six times as high if you used a forbidden jutsu with one eye?

-There will only be 3 spots open (and I will either take a spot here or in the updated Hyuuga Clan, see 'The Next Hyuuga Clan' thread in Spam for more details on the upcoming changes there...)

I suggest you hold try-outs for the clan rather than add the first three people to as.

Sharingan Copy – Rank 1

If the Dokushinha Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a technique, in your Setup phase you may spend X Chakra (X = cost of target Jutsu) to make an attempt to copy the technique. If you choose to do so, roll a D10 dice and if you roll a 1 or 2, you learn the technique; any other number is failure. Cannot copy Clan techniques. May not be used to learn techniques from Ninja Ranks that are higher than your own.

Could they copy summoning jutsu as well?

repeated Ninjutsu techniques have their effects cut by 60%, and repeated Genjutsu techniques have their effects cut by 50%.

Wouldn't Genjutsu have a greater reduction than Ninjutsu?

Sharingan Reflect - Rank 1

If the Toripuruha Sharingan is activated at the time an opponent attempts to use a technique or attack, there is a small chance the action will be reflected back upon its user. Use in the Response Phase before the dodge roll, with a base 5% chance. If reflected, the action deals half damage back to its user (they may use a dodge roll in their next Response Phase as well as use Jutsu/skills) and this character is not in anyway affected. Only applies to techniques or attacks of a lesser or equal Ninja Rank. If successful, may not use Sharingan Copy in the same turn.

Is this based off the jutsu used by Itachi? I don't recall any of the Sharingan hosts displying this tallent.

Skill Name: Arrogant Shopper

Bloodline: Uchiha Clan

Description: a character with this skill tends to be rather arrogant, and gets in alot of arguements with shopkeepers. Therefore they get charged higher prices than others.

Effect: Must pay +5% when purchasing items. When selling items, receive -5% penalty.

Cost: +2

Ranks: 5

Restriction: Cannot be taken with any other market skills

This is was and will forever be a joke. I'd rather see it removed.

Chidori isn't an Uchiha clan ability; Due to their advance sight, which the Hyuuga also had, the Uchiha could cope with the sudden increase of speed caused by the Chidori. Moreover, the jutsu is a Jounin level technique, even if Sasuke (Chuunin in skill) could use the j the skill (somewhat effectively) is no reason to create several ranks for a justu that had one. I'm sure Gangerxbanger would agree when I say "You're not Sasuke," if he could use Chidori at Chuunin level doesn't mean the others can. If somehow this series is approved with all its might as well make Kage Bunshin no Jutsu a Gennin ability seeing that Naruto had it and limit it to his clan.

[Guest MrSako]

Plot? Ehhhh.... alright. Consider the name 'Susanoo' suspended for now... but remember, all of these won't even go into effect unless there is a reset and we all start back at the beginning. Until then, I want to work out any balance issues here in the Spam Thread. I also posted the updated Hyuuga Clan in Spam as well.

Note that I got rid of the 'Finance' part with loans... I don't think that should be allowed for anyone.

EDIT:

@Rei:

1. Yes, if you have only taken -one- eye (and upkeep costs are normally 3x) if you use a forbidden Jutsu, your upkeep cost just jumped to 6x for Mangekyou sharingan only (so it would cost 60% Total Chakra to keep up). Note that after Kakashi used his version of the forbidden technique, his abilities went down super fast.

2. Yes, try-outs will be held and it will be open to everyone, and will be based off RP ability. And I would really encourage new members to try out as I will not show partiality to any member, new or old.

3. You 'could' copy Kuchiyose no Jutsu, but you wouldn't be able to summon anything because you do not own the summoning contract. In actuality, you -cannot- use Sharingan Copy to copy any Jutsu with a skill requirement. I might edit that wording in... still thinking about it.

4. I don't know if I should swap the Genjutsu and Ninjutsu reductions... I just copy/pasted Zionward's version, and would like suggestions as to which would be better and why

5. Sharingan Reflect - it is supposed to be like 'Sharingan Copy' when Kakashi copied and fired back Zabuza's Jutsu, which is why when it activates, user may not use 'Sharingan Copy' (it is a different manifestation of the ability).

6. Arrogan Shopper was removed

7. Chidori - I added this version here because I figured it was something that Sasuke would 'pass down' to his Uchiha. I like my version better than the other version... and would like to keep it to the Clan. I'll consider the 'Jounin' as its lowest ability level.

Edited June 2, 2006 by MrSako

[Guest Rei-Chun]

Chidori - I added this version here because I figured it was something that Sasuke would 'pass down' to his Uchiha. I like my version better than the other version... and would like to keep it to the Clan. I'll consider the 'Jounin' as its lowest ability level.

Are we assuming their all decedents of Sasuke, Itachi or both? If so Cihodri would be limited to a few mrmbers?

[Guest MrSako]

I changed Sharingan Reflect to have a cost to use (to go with what I was describing it as)

I added 'cannot copy Jutsu with a skill requirement' to Sharingan Copy

Since there are only going to be 3 Uchiha, then yes, the Chidori is quite limited to the number of members that can use it

[Ravage Nocturne]

Overall Clan Skills=Much stronger than previous

Overall Clan Jutsu=Much MUCH Weaker

It's interesting, but flawed in design. Don't get me wrong, I'm not bashing it, I'm just saying: People have been complaining about the Uchiha being strong already, so what's with the boost?

[Guest MrSako]

Please explain how this is stronger... compare this to what your brother has in creation. And offer alternatives.

And please explain which Jutsu is weaker, and how it is so. And offer alternatives.

These were part of my requests up at the top, and I don't want to ignore your comment

EDIT: Sharingan Copy has the added restriction 'may not copy Jutsu that do not require hand seals to perform' and this would include the Rasengan, and the Chidori.

There has been a lot of note that the Chidori should not be a Clan Jutsu. Since this has been the case, I will then just make it into a personal Jutsu for my next character and Uchiha will only be of the 'Fire' Element. And the only way it can be learned is to be directly taught.

EDIT2: No one has said anything about the Hyuuga Clan, other than Nappers through PM... I guess this just means that people think the Uchiha are cooler than the Hyuuga... oh well.

Oh, and for the next Nara, Aburame, and Akimichi Clans... they have a lot of potential to be uber in the right hands...

Edited June 2, 2006 by MrSako

[Nappers]

Once im finished prodding you via PM over the Uchiha, then I'll get to the Hyuuga in more depth

Note: Finally Chidori is not available to the masses.

[Guest MrSako]

If you post it here, it is less likely that I will lose your PM to a random delete

[Matthias Drake]

Why is this in Spam?

[Nappers]

I assume because its for the new system and he doesnt want it to be implemented until then. There are probably more Sharingan users than would be 'allowed' and erm... because he wants all the feedback done here so that when its posted 'properly' that it would just be "approved"x2 nice and neatly

Thats what I think anyway..

[Guest Raven]

For major hypnotism do you get to choose which jutsu your opponent uses if you roll the first effect?

[Guest kuratg]

Well, I like the revisions. The old Uchiha stuff wasn't...very well thought out. All the revisions to the doujutsu itself seem a lot fairer to me than what we have now, so some serious kudos to you.

I am glad that the chidori is now being limited to either a. Your character or b. Maybe ONE of the other two Uchiha allowed in the clan. This greatly reduces the chances of any average idiot getting their hands on it. That and the Sharingan is the only doujutsu that allows the full capabilities of the chidori. Like the Fourth said, it's an incomplete technique with out the Whirling Eyes.

Finally, I'm anxious to try out for the Uchiha clan. On other sites, I'll sneak a character for the name, but this version of the clan is actually usable since it's balanced. xD Yay for resets and tryouts. <<' Make sure I'm the first to know, eh?

Edited June 2, 2006 by kuratg

[Nappers]

Note: Inlaid Sharingan you pointed out to me has a 10% chance of success. Though as it is worded you have a 19% (70-79).. Just a point for when you were reflecting the cost of the Sharingan types on that 10% chance of success.

EDit: Think I've commented on everything else

Edited June 2, 2006 by Nappers

[Guest MrSako]

Upped cost of Toripuruha and Mangekyou by 1 one more each

@MD: In Spam for reasons listed above

@Raven: yes, as it is stated, you choose one Jutsu that they know and they have to use it.

[shizuki]

Do you have any plans to incorporate Kakashi's ability to distort and possibly seal off space with his Mangekyou?

[Ironwolf]

How would that be equated into this RPG environment?

[Guest kuratg]

The distortion was a genjutsu, was it not? The sealing thing, at least to me, could work the same way as sealing away a demon or something, revolving, of course, around a roll.

EDIT: Although, a technique of that power would be hard to manage unless the user was extremely careful when it comes to god-modding, as it seemed almost inescapable when Kakashi did it to whatshisname.

Edited June 2, 2006 by kuratg

[Ironwolf]

The distortion was a Ninjutsu, it affected the world around the team in a actual, tangable way, wheres Genjutsu only makes it appears so, but nothing has actually changed.

[Guest MrSako]

From Wikipedia:

It is somehow capable of creating an interdimensional spacetime warp. It is a ninjutsu similar to that of Itachi's Amaterasu in effect (although Kakashi's doesn't technically destroy, the result is the same); Kakashi uses it to warp Deidara's right arm into a different dimension. He subsequently uses it again in Chapter 278 to counter Deidara's ultimate move, which would otherwise level the entire forest they were fighting in. However, the attack requires considerable effort to aim precisely and appears to leave Kakashi's chakra significantly drained; he collapses after using the technique three times (compare to his other original move, Raikiri, which he can use 4 times a day).

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kekkei_genkai...to%29#Amaterasu

Until more about the Jutsu is learned, I will not create it.

[Matthias Drake]

Kakashi's technique is a reference to the effect of observation on the natural world - that is to say, without an observer, the world is quite literally undefined. Kakashi's technique allows him to step beyond that and choose the specific definition he wants - that is, he causes the region of space of his choice to be completely cut off from the rest of existence, seals up the hole for a fraction of a second, and then puts the piece of space back where it belonged.

[Kouta]

Wee! I come to poke holes in your fabulous system! I figured sako would PM me soon anyways, so I come without being asked!

1st: Your bloodline stealing makes it impossible to steal. The victim must be dead to steal, yet you say they must be alive, therefore..no stealing..not gonna work...I'm no idiot.

2nd: I understand that you don't have the blood that would effectively make the eyes work as correctly, but it should not get to 2x and 3x at all, that's just insane. Just because you have the Sharingan, doesn't mean the rules should change for you. The rule is 2x with one eye, no increase with both…quit trying to bend them just so that nobody will attempt to steal it...the Uchiha bloodline is the second most sought after bloodline in the world of Naruto, people want it, and so do people on NA…live with it. Every time there is a rule or a new creation that may actually be worthy of use, Sako comes out with a way to change it…and I'm honestly getting sick of it. If you had a good transplant, then there should be no hindrance at all. The only reason kakashi's is so expensive is because he only has one, and he had a genin do his transplant for him, so it was a crappy fusion. I kind of agree to the covering bit, but then again, like I say, that could be totally on the fault of his untrained ninja doing the transplant.

3rd: The keys…when you say awarded…they still have to pay for the skill, end of story there.

4th: I hate the incredibly low costs of the Sharingan. Since in your own history, it claims that it is not unheard of to have different amounts of tomoe (meaning diff Sharingan strengths in each eye)...since one skill cost will change the entire eye (in comparison to the old version where you had to buy each effect)...then make them have to buy each level for each eye. And, if you have only one level of a Sharingan in one eye, it is at half its effectiveness for everything, and costs 2x is normal cost to use that level until the other eye is upgraded too.

5th: Copy cannot only copy with skill requirements, but also cannot copy jutsu with a posting requirement or other special condition, or jutsu that are unique for specific reasons (aka, the Zanpakuto techs). As for the "doesn't need subtle elemtns”...that doesn't seem right to me…you cannot use sand techs…but you can learn this sand jutsu? What logic is that? There isn't. Sasuke has never copied a jutsu outside of Konoha (he has, in fact, only copied one jutsu…that was Rock Lee's kick), and so it is simply to be assumed that Kakashi has subtle elements for everything, considering that he uses jutsu outside of Konoha all the time (ex: Rakiri and Doton Jutsu). Copied jutsu should require points, but only half their normal points (rounded UP)…otherwise that is just unfair. I don't care what kakashi can do, its just unfair.

6th: Minor Hypnotism can noyl be used to change the opponent's jutsu once per opponents turn (as in, you cannot continually change their jutsu over and over)

1) it is not fair

2) any idiot would realize that someone else was coercing them to use different jutsu and would ignore them.

7th: Tracking says there is "chance” of getting a boost..yet your boost is a constant thing…what chance is there that thy won't get the boost….

8th: Reflection should not be X, it should be 2X, or 1.5x, where X equal the full cost of the jutsu…since it requires more chakra to stop it and turn it around than it does to just use it normally. Again I come to this question. How can you turn back a taijutsu attack like a punch? You'd have to simply copy their movements and use it back at them, meaning you would get hit…need to put something about that in there. As for if "successful” no, change that to if, if "Used” may not use copy…since there just simply won't be enough time to copy and try to reflect all at once.

9th: Major Hypnotism can only select jutsu from the ones the user has used in battle. You are not clairvoyant...you cannot instantly know every jutsu the enemy knows and pick one…you can only tell them to do what you know they can do, which is what you have seen in battle.

10th: I hate the way you sly try to make the cost of the Sharingan pointless..no, It will be 10% per turn for all but mangekyou...mangekyou gets 20% per turn. Why? Because if it costs 5% per turn, then it just gets negated by regen, making the cost to activate not anything at all. I don't care that is what wikipedia states, but for fairness, you have to be losing something to do it…case closed.

11th: Now that I have outlined my qualms with all Sharingan powers, I will open my qualms about costing. The fact that it relies on a skill to gain helps, but I don't like how it is one cost for all the powers….Kakashi and Sasuke couldn't suddenly use all the abilities...they still had to discover them…something should implement that ideal here.

12th: The masteries…optic is too low….the sight ability is half that of the regular skills, and is way more flexible...which means that the cost is too small. Make it –2 per rank, for all masteries. If you wanna master the Sharingan...you'll have to work at it.

I will not touch the jutsu yet...as I've already hatefully expressed my views against the Uchiha style Katon, and still hold them to be exactly that….so go read that topic if you want my feedback on those.

As for the chidori ones...should be 2x their speed…otherwise you could have just one point higher and murder them...which is BAD. Also, it should say "opponent can still use jutsu that are of a higher ninja rank than this character to defend/evade” since you just aren't gonna be that skillful so that you can cut anything. The Sasuke/Gaara event was different, since it was between two genius/prodigy people who were way above their own levels.

[Guest MrSako]

Wee! I come to poke holes in your fabulous system! I figured sako would PM me soon anyways, so I come without being asked!

For reference's sake, I did PM you, so there

1st: Your bloodline stealing makes it impossible to steal. The victim must be dead to steal, yet you say they must be alive, therefore..no stealing..not gonna work...I'm no idiot.

Changed it, but the stolen eyes will always be on, as per Kakashi.

2nd: I understand that you don't have the blood that would effectively make the eyes work as correctly, but it should not get to 2x and 3x at all, that's just insane. Just because you have the Sharingan, doesn't mean the rules should change for you. The rule is 2x with one eye, no increase with both…quit trying to bend them just so that nobody will attempt to steal it...the Uchiha bloodline is the second most sought after bloodline in the world of Naruto, people want it, and so do people on NA…live with it. Every time there is a rule or a new creation that may actually be worthy of use, Sako comes out with a way to change it…and I'm honestly getting sick of it. If you had a good transplant, then there should be no hindrance at all. The only reason kakashi's is so expensive is because he only has one, and he had a genin do his transplant for him, so it was a crappy fusion. I kind of agree to the covering bit, but then again, like I say, that could be totally on the fault of his untrained ninja doing the transplant.

Alright, I'll agree with it... but note that if you do steal both eyes, you are going to have to walk around pretty much blind, as there is no way to turn them off.

3rd: The keys…when you say awarded…they still have to pay for the skill, end of story there.

The way it works is as follows: You pay the skill points for the Sharingan. It is inactive until the 'Keys to Success' is successful.

Example: I just created an Uchiha character. I spend one skill point on Dokushinha Sharingan. I cannot use any of those abilities until:

Key to Dokushinha Sharingan

Once per a battle, this character may roll a D100. If the roll turns up any number with a seven in its digits, such as 17 or 76, then they are awarded the Dokushinha Sharingan. This skill cannot be used in the Practice Arena

That is how it works. Then I spend 2 points on Ninjuuha Sharingan (after lvl 5). It is inactive until (etc).

4th: I hate the incredibly low costs of the Sharingan. Since in your own history, it claims that it is not unheard of to have different amounts of tomoe (meaning diff Sharingan strengths in each eye)...since one skill cost will change the entire eye (in comparison to the old version where you had to buy each effect)...then make them have to buy each level for each eye. And, if you have only one level of a Sharingan in one eye, it is at half its effectiveness for everything, and costs 2x is normal cost to use that level until the other eye is upgraded too.

The history is just to add flavor. You can say that you have 'X' pips in your eye, but until you 'unlock' the next level, you do not have that ability. That is all it is for. And as per the 'history' note that: Uchiha clan members are not burdened with this weakness; while activation of the Sharingan does consume chakra, the drain is so small as to be almost insignificant. Uchiha Itachi in particular seemed to have no trouble in keeping his Sharingan activated near-constantly. This is taken from Wikipedia, upkeep costs remain as stated.

5th: Copy cannot only copy with skill requirements, but also cannot copy jutsu with a posting requirement or other special condition, or jutsu that are unique for specific reasons (aka, the Zanpakuto techs). As for the "doesn't need subtle elemtns”...that doesn't seem right to me…you cannot use sand techs…but you can learn this sand jutsu? What logic is that? There isn't. Sasuke has never copied a jutsu outside of Konoha (he has, in fact, only copied one jutsu…that was Rock Lee's kick), and so it is simply to be assumed that Kakashi has subtle elements for everything, considering that he uses jutsu outside of Konoha all the time (ex: Rakiri and Doton Jutsu). Copied jutsu should require points, but only half their normal points (rounded UP)…otherwise that is just unfair. I don't care what kakashi can do, its just unfair.

Of course it can't copy 'embedded' Jutsu, because that requires the sword. As far as special posting requirements, I stated that it cannot copy things that require skills, and it can't copy techs of higher level. Note that it must be used in battle. I will not allow anyone to use the Sharingan in an RP environment to 'instantly learn' Jutsu.

6th: Minor Hypnotism can noyl be used to change the opponent's jutsu once per opponents turn (as in, you cannot continually change their jutsu over and over)

1) it is not fair

2) any idiot would realize that someone else was coercing them to use different jutsu and would ignore them.

That is the power of the Sharingan. Since these are 'eye-based' then I will add the restriction that it cannot work on an opponent who is Blind.

7th: Tracking says there is "chance” of getting a boost..yet your boost is a constant thing…what chance is there that thy won't get the boost….

If they have twice the Speed, then tracking doesn't work. I believe that is already stated in there...

8th: Reflection should not be X, it should be 2X, or 1.5x, where X equal the full cost of the jutsu…since it requires more chakra to stop it and turn it around than it does to just use it normally. Again I come to this question. How can you turn back a taijutsu attack like a punch? You'd have to simply copy their movements and use it back at them, meaning you would get hit…need to put something about that in there. As for if "successful” no, change that to if, if "Used” may not use copy…since there just simply won't be enough time to copy and try to reflect all at once.

As it is 'always on before a dodge roll' and only has a slight chance to activate, I will keep it as 'successful.' As the damage returned is only 50%, the cost should stay as-is. I will also put in non-Taijutsu technique (Ninjutsu/Genjutsu), as I read in Wikipedia: 'Taijutsu users are the natural anti-thesis to the Sharingan'

9th: Major Hypnotism can only select jutsu from the ones the user has used in battle. You are not clairvoyant...you cannot instantly know every jutsu the enemy knows and pick one…you can only tell them to do what you know they can do, which is what you have seen in battle.

You are right in this regards, changes made

10th: I hate the way you sly try to make the cost of the Sharingan pointless..no, It will be 10% per turn for all but mangekyou...mangekyou gets 20% per turn. Why? Because if it costs 5% per turn, then it just gets negated by regen, making the cost to activate not anything at all. I don't care that is what wikipedia states, but for fairness, you have to be losing something to do it…case closed.

And I disagree with you. The costs of using the Sharingan abilities are all high as well. Making it any higher will make it even more difficult to use. Also, if you've also stolen one eye, the costs will change to 20% and 40% per turn, and that is extremely high. Upkeep cost will remain as is. You should note that other created clans with powerful abilities do not have upkeep costs.

11th: Now that I have outlined my qualms with all Sharingan powers, I will open my qualms about costing. The fact that it relies on a skill to gain helps, but I don't like how it is one cost for all the powers….Kakashi and Sasuke couldn't suddenly use all the abilities...they still had to discover them…something should implement that ideal here.

Hence the 'Inlaid Sharingan.' If you do not have any other ideas to offer, then this is the system that will be used.

12th: The masteries…optic is too low….the sight ability is half that of the regular skills, and is way more flexible...which means that the cost is too small. Make it –2 per rank, for all masteries. If you wanna master the Sharingan...you'll have to work at it.

I made them cost -1 per rank, which is more fair

I will not touch the jutsu yet...as I've already hatefully expressed my views against the Uchiha style Katon, and still hold them to be exactly that….so go read that topic if you want my feedback on those.

As for the chidori ones...should be 2x their speed…otherwise you could have just one point higher and murder them...which is BAD. Also, it should say "opponent can still use jutsu that are of a higher ninja rank than this character to defend/evade” since you just aren't gonna be that skillful so that you can cut anything. The Sasuke/Gaara event was different, since it was between two genius/prodigy people who were way above their own levels.

Higher speed. At really high levels, it will be impossible to have 2x the opponent's Speed. However, you have a point about Jutsu of higher rank

[Kouta]

Towards Bloodline Cost: I didn't refer to the entire bloodline..I meant that:

-Sasuke opened his eyes against haku....he couldn't suddenly copy Naruto's Kage Bunshin. He could barely use the tracking, thats it....then later he learned to see through Genjutsu (as was hinted when he first saw lee) and then the copy (which he learned while he first met lee). So I'm saying that this new point system doesn't seem right, in that you can jut open it in battle and suddenly have all the abilities...

Towards Hypnotism: Please note then it is once per use of jutsu. They way it is worded now, the user could use it ten times to change one jutsu, which, no matter how freaking skillful you are, you just don't have time to attempt it more than once while their hands make seals in battle. Now, they can use it once on a jutsu, succeed, and then use it on another jutsu, suceed, and os on and on, but not twice on one jutsu unless they get a skill to re-roll it.

Stolen Eyes: Yes...the fact that they remain on constantly is accepted...and that is how you give them drawbacks. This way the cost will always be 2x, since unless they are blinded and able to fight that way (which some people could do..especially if a blind person stole the sharingan in place of his/her old eyes, being blind would be nothing different) They will only be able to get one eye. See? You can be devious without being outright devious...come on! Get some Mens-esque mentality into you! Make them think nothing is wrong, then have them do it and find out they are screwed! (Cept for Inuzuka's...they could do it and be fine, since they have canine senses)

Tracking: Well then, by your own words, you make tracking very unfair, you state how hard it is to have 2x speed higher up, so you basically give yourself a free +40%, which is NOT cool. Plausible, yes, but not cool.

Chidori, Again: Still, even if it isn't 2x higher, it should be a significant amount, since only having 1 point higher would not, logically, make you that fast to where they cannot defend. You need ot make sure there is a significant difference, I don't care how you rate that difference, but it must be significant.