Takius Posted August 14, 2009 Posted August 14, 2009 (edited) Improved Kagemane no Jutsu Bloodline: Personal Bloodline Description: Having been blessed with a knack for precise Chakra molding, Hideki was bound to have applied his talent to his clan's signature move. By turning his sharpened sense of focus to the Kagemane and Maruchi Kagemane jutsus, Hideki is able to overpower weaker opponents with ease. Effect: Find the difference of the user and the target's Concentration. Divide this number by 40 (rounding down) and add it to the required die roll to break free from the effects of Nara Hijutsu; Kagemane No Jutsu and Nara Hijutsu; Maruchi Kagemane No Jutsu. If the user's Concentration is lower than the target's, then this skill has no effect. The number may never (through the effects of this skill) exceed 90. Cost: 1 Link to mentioned jutsu: http://ninja-academy-online.invisionzone.c...showtopic=23844 Edited August 16, 2009 by Takius
Cellar Door Posted August 14, 2009 Posted August 14, 2009 Improved Kagemane no JutsuBloodline: Personal Bloodline Description: Having been blessed with a knack for precise Chakra molding, Hideki was bound to have applied his talent to his clan's signature move. By turning his sharpened sense of focus to the Kagemane and Maruchi Kagemane jutsus, Hideki is able to overpower weaker opponents with ease. Effect: Find the difference of the user and the target's Concentration. Divide this number by 50 and add it to the required die roll to break free from the effects of Nara Hijutsu; Kagemane No Jutsu and Nara Hijutsu; Maruchi Kagemane No Jutsu. If the user's Concentration is lower than the target's, then this skill has no effect. Cost: 1 Add that for clarity.
Nappers Posted August 14, 2009 Posted August 14, 2009 Realign would cost a whole bunch more. Also regarding the first skill- you're better off making it more compliant with 7.0 rules so that you won't have to resubmit it.
Azure Posted August 14, 2009 Posted August 14, 2009 Plus there are many modifiers for Concentration, you'd have to be more specific.
Takius Posted August 14, 2009 Author Posted August 14, 2009 Took out Realign, that will be a battle for another day ;P How is the first skill not complying with 7.0 rules?
Takius Posted August 15, 2009 Author Posted August 15, 2009 (edited) donesauce edit: edited in link Edited August 16, 2009 by Takius
Kouta Posted August 18, 2009 Posted August 18, 2009 Approved as a skill. Not part of the Canon Nara Skills, However, and cannot be treated as such.
