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  1. Plant Illusion; Restain Type: Genjutsu [Plant | Elemental Archetype] Rank: Gennin Cost: 80 Chakra Ghost Damage: 15 Effect: one (1) turn of 'Receptive," one (1) turn "Choking." Description: after the user weaves a few hand seals, the illusion of vines creeping from the earth begins to fill the victim's mind. The vines seemingly wrap themselves around the opponents legs and lower body, and as the opponent is occupied trying to escape its grasp, two more vines shoot upward to restrain the opponents neck, choking them in order to prevent them from speaking Points: 4 JP Plant Illusion; Restrain II Type: Genjutsu [Plant | Elemental Archetype | Evolving] Rank: Chuunin Cost: 139 Chakra Ghost Damage: 30 Effect: one (1) turn of "Receptive," one (1) turn "Choking," and one (1) turn "Bound [Paired Arms]" Description: after the user weaves a few hand seals, the illusion of vines creeping from the earth begins to fill the victim's mind. The vines seemingly wrap themselves around the opponents legs, lower body and even their arms, and as the opponent is occupied trying to free themselves from its grasp, two more vines shoot upward to restrain the opponents neck, squeezing their airways in order to prevent speaking. Points: 5 [Evolving 1; Restrain] Plant Illusion; Restrain III Type: Genjutsu [Plant | Elemental Archetype | Evolving] Rank: Jounin Cost: 270 Ghost Damage: 210 Effect: one (1) turn of "Receptive," one (1) turn of "Choking," one (1) turn of "Headache," and one (1) turn "Bound [Paired Arms]" Description: after the user weaves a few hand seals, the illusion of vines creeping from the earth begins to fill the victim's mind. The vines seemingly wrap themselves around the opponents legs, lower body and even their arms, and as the opponent is occupied trying to free themselves from its grasp, two more vines shoot upward to restrain the opponents neck, squeezing their airways in order to prevent speaking. The sudden lack of oxygen to the opponent begins to take its toll on the opponent. For this reason, many who suffer from this technique report headaches. Points: 6 [Evolving 1; Restrain II]
  2. I'm not exactly staff ... but the way I read this, is that the user can give the puppet a set amount of health at any turn. While this is great an all, the way it reads, allows for it to be used to potentially increase the puppet's durability past its base value, especially on smaller or medium sized puppets, which is something I don't think should be allowed. At that point, it's no longer being used as a repair kit, and more as a buff kit. I think you should consider adding the phrase "cannot add durability past the puppet's base durability," or something along those lines if you want more luck moving forward with this item's approval. Otherwise, I like the idea of it ... even though I don't see myself using it.
  3. maybe add some restrictions to these two? Otherwise, I think it could provide some interesting gameplay. *shrug* im also new, so i cant quite give you the pricing on them.
  4. I see you created a weapon that has the same idea as this fluff. I'm not sure elements are the best way to go with this one. You can always just .. you know ... use Affliction [Shackled (Paired Legs)]* on a weapon and create weapon techniques that require the weapon to do what this is trying to accomplish. Affliction: [Status Effect]*
  5. Tsumugi Emika has re-entered the chat. Although i wanted the picture like Tsubasa's. Can you help with that? Thanks either way.
  6. Based on a Discord suggestion, I added "Must have both ranks in "Scribe."' into the restrictions part of the skill. I do plan on having both ranks and using scrolls and therefore having both ranks of scribe doesn't really affect me. I also brought up the SP cost, as this skill is very similar to "Unsavory Chakra." Unsavory Chakra Edit: no i didn't :p
  7. Notes: (Before anyone can look at it, I want @Princess to give their thoughts on this skill, as they are the original creator of Blind. Also, @Toroi21 helped me tremendously with this skill but told me to post it, as it would be more relevant to my character than to any of his. Thank you!)
  8. Braille Inscriptions Whereas others transcribe their scrolls using the standard language of the shinobi world, you are blind, and because of this, it is impossible for you to decipher them. As a result, you must use a different method to transcribe and use scrolls, or else they will never work. Effect: This character may never use scrolls besides those inscribed by themselves, or other shinobi with this skill. This character may never sell scrolls they have inscribed with techniques to other characters without this skill. In addition, the post requirement for inscribing techniques is increased by two (2) posts. Requirements: Must be Taken at character Creation. Must have "Blind." Must have both ranks in "Scribe." Cost: +1 SP Scribe
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