Cho Hakkai Posted September 19, 2006 Share Posted September 19, 2006 (edited) The 10 Saints of Sins and Virtue (Kuroshirokon) Organization Head: Cho Hakkai --------------------------------- Organization Base: Extra Village (Noodle Country/Moon country [undecided yet]) --------------------------------- Organization Emblem: http://www.myspacephoto.com/files/4779/mandala.jpg The image you see is called a mandala. A mandala is a geometric figure based upon the squaring of a circle around a unifying center representing a desire for spiritual unity and psychic integration. Also, each member of the organization has a personal emblem. What is that you may ask? A rose. Yes, a rose for each different member. Each of these roses goes along with their Virtue or Sin in some way or another. The roses are normally found on the dead body's the saint killed in battle as a way of a thing of remembrance into the next world and an item to give for peace of mind for the late person. Here is a list of the rose colors for each of the Saints: Death: Black (Black is usually a symbol of death and also given to remember the leader) Life: White (White is almost always a sign of life or rebirth) Greed: Green (Green, usually the color associated with greed.) Generosity: Yellow (Generosity normally allows for joy which rose color is yellow) Lust: Orange (Orange, a color of desire) Chastity: Purple (A color of caution, purple is one for those who are pure) Pride: Royal Blue (A color of something impossible, which is a word a prideful person knows not.) Humility: Pink (A person who is normally graceful and gentle) Love: Red (Red, the color of passion) Hatred: Plum (A color close to black but light enough to not be. Black is also a color of hatred) --------------------------------- Organization Goals: The true reason for their existence is unknown but is thought to prevent evil in the world. --------------------------------- Organization History: The Saints in the history of the world as we know are people who have been considered holy by the church. Several tens of people have been made saints and each of them a saint of a certain emotion or thing in life, for example, St. Michel the archangel of death. But also with these saints are the deadly sins, something that if a person did they would be sent to hell when they died. What were the deadly sins used in this group you may ask? They are the Sins of Greed, Lust, Pride, Envy, and Wrath, also known as death. But along with each of these Sins, came a virtue, these were also called the Heavenly Virtures. Lust went in hand with Chastity, Greed went in hand with Generosity, Death (Wrath) went with Life (Meakness also known as peace), Envy with Charity, and Pride went hand in hand with Humility. Each of the sins also had a demon to go with them. Wrath: Satan. Pride: Lucifer. Greed: Mammon Envy: Leviathan Asmodeus: Lust Each of the said demons are powerful in their own way and have a reason as to why they are the demon to the sin. Wrath is for Satan because he is known for killing people and hurting. Lucifier's is for pride because he originally was an archangel but he came to his pride and rebelled against god, who banished him an empty area of the world, eventually to be known as hell, to spend for the rest of eternity. Mammon is known as a symbol for greed or excess money in several areas of the Bible. Asmodeus is known for his name of being the demon of lust because his name is actually Æshma and which connects to the word "ish” denoting "to desire" or "to lust after." A reason as to why Leviathan was the demon of envy isn't known that well, but he was branded this name by St. Thomas Aquinas. Each demon was sent to hell to spend the rest of their lives, but this excludes Lucifer who was banished to earth to spend his life there. But most of these demons had weaker demons at their command to destroy anything they wanted. These demons were all considered "evil” by Christianity and were never thought of as a good thing. Thus, since they were evil, these became sins. Onto the world of Naruto… Cho Hakkai has left his village, the village hidden in sound, or Otogakure no Sato, because he thought that staying in his village would mean that he could not grow more, that he could not spread his wings fully. But other things had also lead Hakkai to this decision. During the Kumo rebellion, his friends Kaguya Kieto and Kaguya Jinsei were turned to evil and attempted to attack the new gennin of the rebellion group. Because of this, Kieto was killed and Jinsei lived but was banished from Otogakure no Sato. Hakkai had a sense of being betrayed because of this. But he didn't feel betrayed by his friends; it was by the leader of the Otogakure No Sato rebellion, Brash. He had done the murder and banishment out of pure anger. Though Hakkai stayed in the hidden sound village throughout the rebellion, he always wanted to leave to be with his friend again. After several months of training under Brash, the new Kyoukage, Hakkai left Oto to begin a new life and fully allow his wings to spread out as much as they could. Now he has set out to find people who will join the idea of his organization with already a few in mind... --------------------------------- Rules: Yes, there are going to be rules. ~You must have been invited by Cho Hakkai, the character. Usually this will be done if he sees awesome power or a smart character. ~To join fully, you must have rank 4 of Subtle Elements for Light (which will also be considered Dark.) ~Leaving the organization is fine in the eyes of the leader, just as long as you give your items back. ~Disgracing the organization in anyway will become your death. This includes: -Killing another member for either the hell of it or for enjoyment. This may change based on the circumstance. -Attacking another member with the thought of murder in your mind -Betraying the group and give out secret information -Anything else that may seem to be disgraceful. ~You may not choose which Saint you want to be, Hakkai does this based on his thoughts and your personality and style of battle. ~If any of these are broken, you will be hunted down and killed. ~I don't even want to put this here, but DO NOT PM ME TO ASK IF YOU CAN JOIN! I will say no and tell you that everything is done based on RP and RP alone. If my character asks you, then you can only join. You can't just pm me and say "like lolz cn I join dis shizzet?" No. Just wait and if I like you, then yes you will be asked to join. But other than that, I will restate this. DO NOT FRICKEN PM ME TO ASK IF YOU CAN JOIN!! ~If you read the above, please click and listen to the following link: The link you should click on ~More may be added --------------------------------- Total Members: 10 seats Saint of Death: Cho Hakkai Saint of Life: Saint of Greed: Saint of Generosity: Saint of Lust: Saint of Chastity: Saint of Pride: Saint of Humility: Saint of Love: Saint of Envy: --------------------------------- Entrance fee: $250 per person. (Paid to Cho Hakkai) --------------------------------- Additional Organization information: 2 members of this group will travel with each other. Obviously each sin works with their virtue and works on the mission given to them by the leader or the leader's right hand man. Obviously, the Saint of Death and Life. --------------------------------- Note: Beyond this point, there will be 2 sets of skills, equipment, and 2 sets of techniques. This is because the organization is divided into 2 sections, the Virtues and the Sins. Note 2: If by any chance either one of the pair decide to fight the other one, neither one of their skills can work for the duration of the battle. Organization Skills: TBA --------------------------------- Organization Jutsu: TBA The Deadly Sins Name: Enter the Darkness Type: Genjutsu Rank: Chuunin Cost: 150 Damage: N/A Effects: Blind for 3 turns. Description: The Deadly Sins of the Saints are known for their powers and ties with the darkness. With a set of hand seals made, the user begins to screw around with the opponents mind causing their eyesight to go missing to the point where they are surrounded by compelte darkness, not able to see anything, not even their hand infront of their face. Points: 5 (Erosion 1) Name: The Darkness flame Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chuunin Cost: 150 Damage: 110 Effects: burned for 2 turns Description: A powerful justu used with the Deadly Sins. They begin to surround their entire body with a dark and powerful flame. They then force this onto the opponent as it covers them and burns them quite horribly. Points: 5 Name: Beware the Claws Attack Type: Taijutsu Rank: Chuunin Cost: 60 Damage: 5 hits of 15 damage (Multi Hit Justu) Effects: Instead of adding all of your normal Taijustu stat to this technique, you instead add half of your speed modifier and half of your Taijustu together. Description: Freddy Krueger, a person known for his long claws and slick killing abilities, has always been a person who ends up in nightmares. With mimicking the ways of F.K., the user uses his/her speed and strength together. Points: 2 points (Erosion 1) Name: Beware of Darkness Type: Genjutsu Rank: Jounin Cost: 380 Damage: 100 Effects: confused for 3 turns, Terrified for 3 turns after the confused, -250 evasion for 1 turn. Description: Darkness is something no one should ever temper with. But manipulating the power is something the Deadly sins are used too. With this they temper with the mind of their opponent thinking they are in true darkness, unable to tell if they are attacking themselves or an opponent. But after the darkness breaks free, the opponent thinks the opponent is the Grim Reaper, the skeleton, and face of your death. Points: 8 Name: The dark orbs Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Jounin Cost: 380 Damage: 10 attacks of 33 damage each Effects: Vulnerable for 1 turn Description: The Deadly sin that uses this skill will bring their hands to their faces and cross over so each of their hands are on the opposite side of their face. By concentrating on their fingertips, they gain small orbs in each finger. They then uncross their wrists and throws each orbs at their opponent for hopes that they will hit. Points: 8 Name: Strike of the 7 Angels Type: Taijustu Rank: Jounin Cost: 170 Damage: 40 damage per hit, 7 hits Effects: Scared for 3 turns. Description: In order to use this attack the user must have a weapon. With said weapon, the user charges at the opponent with and disappears. They reappear to one side of their rival and attack them. They disappear again and do so once more. This happens 7 times. Though true this is a technique that of a light based, this technique is the one and only Yang of the yin. Only usable once per battle. Points: 4 The Heavenly Virtues Name: A Piercing Light Type: Genjutsu Rank: chuunin Cost: 90 Damage: n/a Effects: Stunned for 1 turn, Dizzy for 2 turns. Description: The Heavenly Virtues use this technique quite often. All this technique does is have the user point their index finger into the sky and produce a rather bright light, though this all an illusion. Points: 3 (erosion 1) Name: The Icy Light Beam Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chuunin Cost: 130 Damage: 60 damage Effects: frozen for 2 turns Description: Have you ever heard of the expression the cold light? Well this makes a person freeze in their tracks. A light usually causes a person to stand still, even if their in grave danger. This is a technique that uses this skill and causes a bright light to come out of the user's body and aim said light in 1 direction, freezing their opponent. Points: 5 (Erosion 1) Name: luminosity combo Type: Taijutsu Rank: chuunin Cost: 60 Damage: 3 attacks of 30 damage Effects: N/A Description: In a flash, the Saint of Virtue runs at the opponent and disappears and then appears in front of their face and punches them into the chest and a hammer fist into the side of their head. Points: 2 Name: The Light of the heavens Type: Genjutsu Rank: Jounin Cost: 320 Damage: 120 Effects: Prone for 2 turns, blind for 3 Description: The Saint of Virtue that uses this technique has been able to mess with the opponents mind causing them to see a bright light and mentally hurt through this. They cannot see or move for a set amount of time because of the intensity of the light. Points: 4 Name: Strike of the 7 Demons Type: Taijustu Rank: Jounin Cost: 170 Damage: 40 damage per hit, 7 hits Effects: Scared for 3 turns. Description: With a weapon the user is able to send chakra of their dark powers throughout their whole body and disappears in mid air. Then they reappear to attack and disappear. This would go on 7 times and then after that, the whole technique is finished. Though this technique is of a dark basis, every good must have a bad, so thus the technique is made of evil. Only useable once per battle. Points: 4 --------------------------------- Organization EQ: The Deadly Sins Rings: These rings are worn on a specific finger to show their Sin. Depending on where their ring is based on their position on the Sins. Once given a ring, you cannot change it. Name: Ring of Sins- Death Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique, Indestructible. Description: A small black ring given to the Saint of death. This ring has the Kanji of "death” engraved into the top of the ring and filled in with a white color. The ring is worn on the right thumb to show the power of this person which makes it a big bigger in size. Only the leader of the group may have this. Name: Ring of Sins- Green Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique, Indestructible. Description: A small black ring given to the Saint of Greed. This ring has the kanji for "greed” put into it to show their rank in this group and the kanji is colors a light green. This ring usually is worn on the middle finger of the right hand to show their rank amongst the others. Name: Ring of Sins- Lust Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A black ring that is small in size that has the words "Lust” written in Japanese kanji on the top of it and written in orange ink to make the engraved kanji more standing out. This is given to the Saint of Lust for is it his/her ring to show to others. This ring is usually worn on the right pinky finger so it is a little bit smaller than the others in size. Name: Ring of Sins- Pride Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A small ring and dark in color, this black ring has the word "Pride” inscribed into the top of it and colored a light blue color. This ring is given to and only given to the Saint of pride. The ring is worn on their left ring finger to show their status in the organization. Name: Ring of Sins- Envy Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A small ring, though medium sized compared to most, this ring has the kanji "Envy” and the kanji colored with a light purple color. This is given to the Saint of Envy and worn on the left ring finger. Name: Vest of Sins Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Indestructible +60 evasion +60 accuracy. Description: This vest is meant for the members of the organization who are on the "Deadly Sins" side. This vest is a dark black in color with a single solid cresent moon on the back of it. It is worn over any clothes that is usually worn by the user. The organization emblem is also seen on the right chest. If the user wears a vest from their Chuunin or Jounin status, this replaces it and still adds what the previous vest adds. ~Variation for Saint of Death~ The right side of the Vest is black with the left side being white. There is also the Organization Emblem on the back instead of the Moon and a white moon on the right chest. --------------------------------- The Heavenly Virtues Rings: These rings are worn on a specific finger to show their Sin. Depending on where their ring is based on their position on the Sins. Once given a ring, you cannot change it. Name: Ring of Virtues- Life Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A small white ring, this ring has the kanji of "Life” written on it and then colored in with black ink to show the kanji better. This ring is unique only to the Saint of Life, no one else may have it. This is usually worn on the right index finger to show their power above all of the other members, except the Saint of death. Name: Ring of Virtues- Generosity Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A white ring that is medium in size. This ring has the kanji of "Generosity” engraved into the top and colored with a dark gold color to show it more clearly. Given to the Saint of Generosity, this ring is worn the right ring finger. Name: Ring of Virtues- Chastity Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A ring worn on the left index finger, this ring is white in color. It bears the engraved kanji of "Chastity” The engraved word is colored a deep purple to make it stand out more. This ring is only given to the Saint of Chastity. Name: Ring of Virtues- Humility Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A ring that is white in color, this ring is usually worn on the left middle finger. It has the kanji of "Humility” engraved into the top of the ring and colored a dark pink. Only given to the Saint of Humility. Name: Ring of Virtues- Love Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible Description: A small white ring. This ring is worn on the left pinky finger and has the kanji of "Love” on it and colored a deep red. This is given to the Saint of Love. Name: Vest of Virtue Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Indestructible +60 evasion +60 accuracy. Description: A vest for the members of Kuroshirokon that are on the side of the "Virtures." This vest covers the chest and torso area and is white in color. Its a more or less basic vest, looking a lot like the vests used as Chuunin and Jounin. On the back of this vest is a black cresent moon and on the upper right chest area is a symbol of the Organization. This replaces as a Jounin or Chuunin Vest if you receieved it. Variation for Saint of Life~ A vest that is white on the right side and black on the left side. The clan Organization emblem is on the back instead of the Cresent moon and the Cresent moon is on the upper right chest. Edited January 3, 2007 by Cho Hakkai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matthias Drake Posted September 19, 2006 Share Posted September 19, 2006 Man, I'm all for the analysis of mythohistory (love The Golden Bough) but seriously, at least get your myths straight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted September 19, 2006 Author Share Posted September 19, 2006 how so? please explain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matthias Drake Posted September 19, 2006 Share Posted September 19, 2006 1. Seven Deadly Sins and the Seven Cardinal Virtues. You used three of each and made up two for each set, giving you five. Five is not seven. 2. Regarding the demons; the story (which is apocryphal) is merely that, for rebelling alongside Lucifer, they were banished to a place which was not Heaven or Earth, and the absence from God's light was punishment enough by far. 3. Just spelling here - it's "Leviathan". 4. I'm not sure how a saint can be representative of a sin... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted September 19, 2006 Author Share Posted September 19, 2006 1. Here you will find Seven "Holy" Virtues. Just look in the first paragraph. I admit I did change the wording a little, but it wasn't that dramatic. As to the 3 of each and 2 i made up, Life and Death were supposed to be meakness and Wrath. And actually, I messed up hatred and Envy. My mistake.And also love is supposed to be Charity, but can't I just keep it at love? I mean, again not that big of a difference. 2. A place not heaven or hell is Earth. Am I wrong? 3. Thanks. I wasn't sure and maybe Wiki had it wrong or I'm just stupid. 4. Yes, I realize a saint shouldn't be a representaion of a sin, but I thought I should keep going a long with the whole saint thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matthias Drake Posted September 20, 2006 Share Posted September 20, 2006 1. Cardinal, holy; it's the same set, with different names. My point is that 5 =/= 7. 2. Try reading that again. 3.Wikipedia has it as Leviathan... 4. I seeee... Well, since it's just somethign your character popped up with and not some ancient magic hoodoo voodoo that's okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted September 20, 2006 Author Share Posted September 20, 2006 1. Oh. Sorry kinda forgot about that part. Well 14 members seems to be a bit too much. I thought 10 should be a fine number since it is a commonly used number and such. 2. So I am guessing Hell? 3. Then it was my fault. 4. K. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matthias Drake Posted September 20, 2006 Share Posted September 20, 2006 1. Then don't call it the seven deadly sins >_> 2. Before that, it wasn't hell... It was just "random empty place number blah". But yes, hell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted September 20, 2006 Author Share Posted September 20, 2006 Edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MrSako Posted September 20, 2006 Share Posted September 20, 2006 Just post when you are completed, and I will adjust the skill points cost on all the skills you have here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted September 20, 2006 Author Share Posted September 20, 2006 I should be finished now. If there is anything that I come up with, I will probably put it through the creation areas or just tell you guys i added something, meaning more approvals would be needed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted November 8, 2006 Author Share Posted November 8, 2006 3 day bumplz peopel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warr Posted November 8, 2006 Share Posted November 8, 2006 (edited) I think my previous post may have been deleted, but you left out a good deal of the other virtues, and such, and using all seven major sins and all seven major virtues would be better. >> List of Seven Deadly Sins, according to the Roman Catholic Church Lust Gluttony Greed/Avarice Sloth/Laziness Wrath Envy Pride/Hubris Seven Great Virtues Chastity Abstinence Generosity Diligence Patience Kindness Humilty Chastity Vs Lust Abstinence Vs Gluttony Generosity Vs Greed Diligence Vs Sloth Patience Vs Wrath Kindness Vs Envy Humilty Vs Pride I could help figuring out stuff for the ones which don't have things yet, if you'd like. Edited November 8, 2006 by Warr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted November 9, 2006 Author Share Posted November 9, 2006 Warr, no thank you. I am sure i have previously stated in my posts that i want 10 member, it's much more of an offical number than 14. I know the Virtues and the Sins and I know what each are the oppisite and such. I do not need help because it is more or less finished. I also replaced some with just different wording with something else. Death is Wrath and Life is meakness, which you didn't state in your little thing. I apologize but I wish to keep it as is. I have explained most of everything quite clearly. If you don't read that's your fault, but i have already adressed your worry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted November 12, 2006 Author Share Posted November 12, 2006 B u m p? Please, just someone take a look at it, like Nappers maybe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest MrSako Posted December 1, 2006 Share Posted December 1, 2006 --------------------------------- Entrance fee: $250 per person. --------------------------------- Who does entrance fee go to? Organization Skills: The Deadly Sins Skill Name: Yin with the Yang Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: For every sin there is a virtue, an opposite, the other half. They aren't really complete without this other half and when they are working with their Virtue, they become much more stronger. Effect: When training with the Virtue that is your opposite, you gain +.5 exp per line when training. Cost: -2 Note: This is a skill for all of the Deadly Sins. OK Skill Name: Death's true power Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: The Saint of Death, a person who has both committed murder and witnessed death several times, takes the pain that they took in their hearts and learn to take it stronger. But in knowing of the way of death and how it is made, they take this knowledge to further themselves in power. Effect: For every PC that the wielder of the skill knew that has died or gone inactive or switched to make another character gains +5% to evasion and accuracy rolls before mods. +.1 EXP per line for every dead PC the character knows (also if they were killed off, or switched to make another character, or gone inactive. Banishing does not count.) Cost: -2 Restriction: Must have Path of Scholar and Path of Sage Restriction #2: Must have either been a team mate or befriended the PC character in some way. Denied Skill Name: Greed is always beneficial Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: No matter what the Saint of Greed, they always seem to have spare money with them and always gain money. Maybe their just lucky like that. Effect: For every 3 lines (600 words) of training the Saint of Greed does, he/she gain $15 for free. This does count for missions. +5% of total EXP when training. Also, when purchasing items, this person has a -5% off any purchase due to their ability to manipulate people into their greed. Restrictions: May not have more than +3 hindering skills. Cost: -3 No additional reduction in purchase price, just the monetary bonus for lines. No bonus to xp Skill Name: The Lusty Pervert Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: The Saint of Lust, obviously a major pervert, has actually been taught that being a pervert is ok; in fact it can actually help him in battle and completely avoid the side effect of being a pervert. Effect: The skill "Pervert” does nothing in terms of battle though the skill point boost stays. Also, when in battle with a member of the gender you have with the "Pervert” skill, you gain +25% in evasion rolls. +10% EXP gain when battling an enemy of an opposite gender than the "Pervert” skill says. Cost: -3 Restriction: Must have the skill "Pervert” and only 1 rank of it. No, the bonus is too high for the 'cost' which is really -2 because you get a free point from pervert. You only get +10% to the dice roll Skill Name: Pride isn't always a bad thing Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: The Saint of pride, a person who tends to think he/she is much better than the rest of the world, can manipulate the pride they have and always tend to make themselves stronger. But also being Prideful comes at a cost. Effect: This person cannot be healed with any medical Jutsu but takes 90% of all damage recieved. Any weapon used by this person has an extra attack to it (even base attacks).They also cannot use any techniques that involve another person or have any pets. (IE: justu that involve more than 1 person) Except Summoning type justu. But when they summon a creature, they may only have 1 summoning out on the field. Restrictions: May not know any medical justu above 3 points. May not have more than +2 hinderance skills. Cost: -4 No extra attacks Skill Name: A Heart filled with Envy Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: The saint of Envy, who seems to be jelous of other things for what they have or had, living or dead. But their true power lies within this emotion, if they can manipulate the envy that resides in their hearts. Effect: Any damaging attacks have a +10% chance to hit and a +10% base damage (not exceeding any limits obviously) to any Taijustu or Ninjustu based techniques. When ever hit with a justu that involves an effect, the wielder of this skill rolls a D25 and on a roll of <5, they aren't effected. Cost: -4 No way, a 25% chance to be immune to status effects? Denied Skill Name: The Yang with the Yin Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: With every virture there is a sin, a yang with a yin, one half with another. With this skill, the Virture is able to work as one with their Sin Partner and become stronger by working with their other half. Effect: +.5 EXP per line when training with your oppasite sin. Cost: -2 Note: The Above skill is for all Virtues Approved Skill Name: Give me life Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: The Saint of Life, a person who has also learned of death, also has tried to bring the dead back to life. Even knowing they can't, they can take their deaths and make it into life. Effect: For every person the weilder of this skill has known that died (includes resigning their character, going inactive, changing to another character, etc), the user gains 10% of their resistance and defence for the duration of the battle. They are now also able to use 2 justu in the same turn as long 1 (one) is a medical type justu. They may also not be effected with the stat effect "Bleeding." Cost: -3 Denied Skill Name: Generosity of the heart Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: The generosity of the heart can be a good thing or a bad thing. The Saint of Generosity can manipulate his/her generosity by healing his/her allies but can also manipulate to attack their enemies. Effect: For a 1:2 chakra:health ratio, the user can use their main phase to heal an ally counting as a medical justu or harm their opponent as a basic ninjustu with a base of how much chakra used. When using this against an opponent, you apply 3/4 of your ninjustu against the attack. MAy not be effected with the stat effect "confused." Requirements: Medic Ninja rank 4 Cost: -2 Denied Skill Name: Pureness healing Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: The Saint of Chasitity, a person who is considered to be pure and unharmed, is powerful or should be powerful in the field of medical justu. With the persons heart as pure as fresh snow, they are able to gain the abilities of the medical ninja with no problem. Effect: Able to take the skills "Initiate Medic,” "Intermediate Medic,” and "Doctor” for -1 skill point each. Also the skill "Initiate Medic” no longer has the 10% less damage for damage ninjustu. IF the Saint of Chastity has any of these 3 skills, he/she can change the skill cost and gain the amount from the difference. They may also bring a KOed character back to life with a 2:1 chakra:health ratio to equal at least 5% of their total health. May not be "immoble." Requirements: Initate Medic Cost: -3 Denied, there is Path of the Medical Ninja and Advanced Path of the Medical Ninja. This allows you to basically take another path and still have those bonuses. Skill Name: Humility nature Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: The Saint of Humility, a person who acts like he/she knows where their place is and how powerful they are. But the truth of the matter is, they aren't as modest as they are. In secret they are actually training to become better than they are. Effect: The user of this skill has only 75% of any stat lowering ability casted upon them. Also, when using techniques, you gain 5% of the cost to the opposite stat (IE a taijustu that costs 50 stanima is used, you gain 3 chakra.) Cannot be effected with the stat effect "Scared." Cost: -4 Denied Skill Name: The Power of Love Bloodline: organization skill (Kuroshirokon) Description: The Saint of Love, filled with the love of him/herself and the love of others, learns that the true power of love can sometimes be the strongest. And sometimes, love can manipulate the heart. Effect: The wielder of this skill gains 5% to base damage of ninjustu and can also use 50% of their ninjustu mod on medical justu. How ever, this person may use medical justu on their opponent and actually damaging them without the modifiers. Cannot be effected with the stat effect "Burned." Cost: -3 Denied, see Path of the Medical Ninja --------------------------------- Organization Jutsu: Name: Astral Projection Technique Type: Ninjustu Rank: Jounin Effects: You can send your mental self to anywhere you choose. You are allowed to use RP justu while in this state. Description: A justu where the user closes their eyes and makes the rat symbol with their hands and can cause their mental state to travel across the country. This is usually used for meeting and such though when you create the astral projection of yourself, your voice will be slightly distorted and only a shadow of your Points: 1 (Role Play Purposes only. To be used outside of battle.) Restriction: Taken upon acceptance Approved Name: Judgement Day Type: Ninjustu (Summoning) Rank: Jounin Effects: When a KOed PC is infront of the Saints, they are "judged" based on their actions commited against humanity. The judging process is like this: The percent begins at 40% and you add 5% for every member of the organization with a ring present that agrees and subtract 5% for every member that disagrees. Minimum is 20%. Max of 90%. If their judgement is considered to be "guilty" for being crude, their character is killed by the God of Judgement and their soul is ripped to shreds, so then the person must roll a d20 if they get a TXP award of 75% and subtract the number from the 75% (if the character would gain the 75% TXP, other than that null the previous statement). Can also be used on an NPC, but if this is done, then not much is going to happen. If it is a kage of a village, then the village may not have an NPC kage for 3 weeks. If it's a jounin or below, then they are just erased and killed. If they become "not guilty" of the crime they are accused of, then they are released back into the world with their minds wiped of their memories from who attacked them or where they went. The whole process is gone from anyone who had met the Saints who attacked the PC/NPC except the Saints or anyone they want to remember, but they must specifically ask the God of Judgement by means of the Saint of Death. Description: The saints each have a ring giving a 10 in total. Now most people may ask why do they have these rings. Could they be for decoration? A fashion statement? No. It is for a summoning ritual. In the bible, The Judgment Day is when God will judge every person to see if they are worthy of going into heaven or hell. This technique, which should be done with a majority of the members of the Saints, a god is summoned. The God of Judgement. He wears a golden robe and a mask that has no markings or facial structure on it. His hair is a deep silver in color as he stands towering several yards over a normal human. He holds a hammer in his right hand and his left hand is covered in a cloud which looks like the hair on the back of his hand. Each of his fingers has a ring of sin or virture on it to corrispond with the members rings. The people who captured the person on trial must make a reason as to why the person deserves to live or die, usually die though other members may think differently. So it is basically a court. Then each of the members pay their respect to the god as he makes his desicion. If he says guilty, then he takes his hammer and smashed their soul into pieces, killing them instantly with little chance of a next life. If he says they are free to go, then he uses his cloud to take them back into the real world and wipes their memory as if it were all a dream. Then the cloud explodes making all who knew forget other than the Saints and those they want to remember. Points: 5 (Role Play Purposes only. To be used outside of battle.) Restriction: Taken upon acceptance This is not for role play purposes only. This is a Forbidden level Jutsu that costs 20 points. Note: As though the following techniques say they are light or Darkness, they are all considered void. Light and Dark are Jutsu Elements... so why not make that a requirement for this 'elite' Organization? Yes, it does cost 10 points of skill points in Twisted Colors [rank 4] but that reflects the difficulty of using said Jutsu. The Deadly Sins Name: Enter the Darkness Type: Genjutsu Rank: Chuunin Cost: 150 Damage: N/A Effects: Blind for 3 turns. Description: The Deadly Sins of the Saints are known for their powers and ties with the darkness. With a set of hand seals made, the user begins to screw around with the opponents mind causing their eyesight to go missing to the point where they are surrounded by compelte darkness, not able to see anything, not even their hand infront of their face. Points: 5 (Erosion 1) Name: The Darkness flame Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chuunin Cost: 150 Damage: 110 Effects: burned for 2 turns Description: A powerful justu used with the Deadly Sins. They begin to surround their entire body with a dark and powerful flame. They then force this onto the opponent as it covers them and burns them quite horribly. Points: 5 Name: Beware the Claws Attack Type: Taijutsu Rank: Chuunin Cost: 60 Damage: 5 hits of 15 damage (Multi Hit Justu) Effects: Instead of adding all of your normal Taijustu stat to this technique, you instead add half of your speed modifier and half of your Taijustu together. Description: Freddy Krueger, a person known for his long claws and slick killing abilities, has always been a person who ends up in nightmares. With mimicking the ways of F.K., the user uses his/her speed and strength together. Points: 2 points (Erosion 1) Name: Beware of Darkness Type: Genjutsu Rank: Jounin Cost: 380 Damage: 100 Effects: confused for 3 turns, Terrified for 3 turns after the confused, -250 evasion for 1 turn. Description: Darkness is something no one should ever temper with. But manipulating the power is something the Deadly sins are used too. With this they temper with the mind of their opponent thinking they are in true darkness, unable to tell if they are attacking themselves or an opponent. But after the darkness breaks free, the opponent thinks the opponent is the Grim Reaper, the skeleton, and face of your death. Points: 8 Name: The dark orbs Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Jounin Cost: 380 Damage: 10 attacks of 33 damage each Effects: Vulnerable for 1 turn Description: The Deadly sin that uses this skill will bring their hands to their faces and cross over so each of their hands are on the opposite side of their face. By concentrating on their fingertips, they gain small orbs in each finger. They then uncross their wrists and throws each orbs at their opponent for hopes that they will hit. Points: 8 Name: Strike of the 7 Angels Type: Taijustu Rank: Jounin Cost: 170 Damage: 40 damage per hit, 7 hits Effects: Scared for 3 turns. Description: In order to use this attack the user must have a weapon. With said weapon, the user charges at the opponent with and disappears. They reappear to one side of their rival and attack them. They disappear again and do so once more. This happens 7 times. Though true this is a technique that of a light based, this technique is the one and only Yang of the yin. Only usable once per battle. Points: 4 The Heavenly Virtues Name: A Piercing Light Type: Genjutsu Rank: chuunin Cost: 90 Damage: n/a Effects: Stunned for 1 turn, Dizzy for 2 turns. Description: The Heavenly Virtues use this technique quite often. All this technique does is have the user point their index finger into the sky and produce a rather bright light, though this all an illusion. Points: 3 (erosion 1) Name: The Icy Light Beam Type: Ninjutsu Rank: Chuunin Cost: 130 Damage: 60 damage Effects: frozen for 2 turns Description: Have you ever heard of the expression the cold light? Well this makes a person freeze in their tracks. A light usually causes a person to stand still, even if their in grave danger. This is a technique that uses this skill and causes a bright light to come out of the user's body and aim said light in 1 direction, freezing their opponent. Points: 5 (Erosion 1) Name: luminosity combo Type: Taijutsu Rank: chuunin Cost: 60 Damage: 3 attacks of 30 damage Effects: N/A Description: In a flash, the Saint of Virtue runs at the opponent and disappears and then appears in front of their face and punches them into the chest and a hammer fist into the side of their head. Points: 2 Name: The Light of the heavens Type: Genjutsu Rank: Jounin Cost: 320 Damage: 120 Effects: Prone for 2 turns, blind for 3 Description: The Saint of Virtue that uses this technique has been able to mess with the opponents mind causing them to see a bright light and mentally hurt through this. They cannot see or move for a set amount of time because of the intensity of the light. Points: 4 Name: Strike of the 7 Demons Type: Taijustu Rank: Jounin Cost: 170 Damage: 40 damage per hit, 7 hits Effects: Scared for 3 turns. Description: With a weapon the user is able to send chakra of their dark powers throughout their whole body and disappears in mid air. Then they reappear to attack and disappear. This would go on 7 times and then after that, the whole technique is finished. Though this technique is of a dark basis, every good must have a bad, so thus the technique is made of evil. Only useable once per battle. Points: 4 --------------------------------- Organization EQ: The Deadly Sins Rings: These rings are worn on a specific finger to show their Sin. Depending on where their ring is based on their position on the Sins. Once given a ring, you cannot change it. Name: Ring of Sins- Death Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique, Indestructible. Description: A small black ring given to the Saint of death. This ring has the Kanji of "death” engraved into the top of the ring and filled in with a white color. The ring is worn on the right thumb to show the power of this person which makes it a big bigger in size. Only the leader of the group may have this. Name: Ring of Sins- Green Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique, Indestructible. Description: A small black ring given to the Saint of Greed. This ring has the kanji for "greed” put into it to show their rank in this group and the kanji is colors a light green. This ring usually is worn on the middle finger of the right hand to show their rank amongst the others. Name: Ring of Sins- Lust Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A black ring that is small in size that has the words "Lust” written in Japanese kanji on the top of it and written in orange ink to make the engraved kanji more standing out. This is given to the Saint of Lust for is it his/her ring to show to others. This ring is usually worn on the right pinky finger so it is a little bit smaller than the others in size. Name: Ring of Sins- Pride Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A small ring and dark in color, this black ring has the word "Pride” inscribed into the top of it and colored a light blue color. This ring is given to and only given to the Saint of pride. The ring is worn on their left ring finger to show their status in the organization. Name: Ring of Sins- Envy Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A small ring, though medium sized compared to most, this ring has the kanji "Envy” and the kanji colored with a light purple color. This is given to the Saint of Envy and worn on the left ring finger. Name: Cloak of Sins Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Indestructible +60 evasion +60 accuracy. Description: A simple cloak that is black in color. This cloak is given to all of the Saints of the Deadly Sins. It has sleeves and a collar that goes up to the nose of the person. It also goes down to the wearer's shins. The person's normal clothes are normally worn under this. The clan emblem is on the back as the back cloak is covered in several white crescent moons around the cloak but not the collar. Does not count as an armor slot. ~Variation for organization leader only changes the look. Half of the cloak is black (right side) and the half of the cloak is white (left side.) Name: Kasa Hat Item Slots Taken: 0 Effect: N/A Attributes: N/A Description: A Kasa hat is a hat that is usually made from weaved grass and made so it would be difficult for it to be set aflame. Members of Kuroshirokon wear this to hide their identity. --------------------------------- The Heavenly Virtues Rings: These rings are worn on a specific finger to show their Sin. Depending on where their ring is based on their position on the Sins. Once given a ring, you cannot change it. Name: Ring of Virtues- Life Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A small white ring, this ring has the kanji of "Life” written on it and then colored in with black ink to show the kanji better. This ring is unique only to the Saint of Life, no one else may have it. This is usually worn on the right index finger to show their power above all of the other members, except the Saint of death. Name: Ring of Virtues- Generosity Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A white ring that is medium in size. This ring has the kanji of "Generosity” engraved into the top and colored with a dark gold color to show it more clearly. Given to the Saint of Generosity, this ring is worn the right ring finger. Name: Ring of Virtues- Chastity Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A ring worn on the left index finger, this ring is white in color. It bears the engraved kanji of "Chastity” The engraved word is colored a deep purple to make it stand out more. This ring is only given to the Saint of Chastity. Name: Ring of Virtues- Humility Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible. Description: A ring that is white in color, this ring is usually worn on the left middle finger. It has the kanji of "Humility” engraved into the top of the ring and colored a dark pink. Only given to the Saint of Humility. Name: Ring of Virtues- Love Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Unique Indestructible Description: A small white ring. This ring is worn on the left pinky finger and has the kanji of "Love” on it and colored a deep red. This is given to the Saint of Love. Name: Cloak of Virtue Item Slots Taken: 1 Effect: N/A Attributes: Indestructible +60 evasion +60 accuracy. Description: A cloak made for each of the Saints of Heavenly Vitrues. This is a basic white colored cloak. It has sleeves and goes down to the shins and the collar goes up to the nose. This cloak has the emblem of the organization on the back and also has black crescent moons all over the cloak. Usually under this cloak people wear their normal clothes. Does not count as armor ~Variation for Saint of Life: The same but has black on the left side and white on the right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted December 3, 2006 Author Share Posted December 3, 2006 Though it was a lot of things to change, I finished changing them. May I please have another look Sako? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted December 9, 2006 Author Share Posted December 9, 2006 Bump plox? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 (edited) HOLY MOLEY!! It's the Seven Deadly Sins!!! I told you Billy couldn't handle the mantle, I told you! The Wizard (Shazam) must be spinning in his grave! Death's true power May you explain the exact connection between death and wisdom? Anyone can study death and acquire said ‘saint', yet you've added a required for little reason. Saint of Greed I'd rather a realistic ability that plays in the realm of possibility. If you raise to 5-6 skill points I'll 2 of 3 suggested effects. -For every 3 lines (600 words) this character completes beyond his/her mission requirement, he receives an additional 15 Ryo/Yen to a maximum of 300. A maximum of twice per month. -If you character is appointed Squad Leader of a mission, he/ she receives 20 percent of the cash reward in addition to her own pay (6 points if you include this one). -The character pay may sell an item for 75 percent of the market price. The Lusty Pervert Also, when in battle with a member of the gender you have with the "Pervert” skill, you gain +10% in evasion rolls. How and why does this work exactly? Pride isn't always a bad thing What is the purpose of taking medical Jutsu if one cannot help himself? Saint of Life Please change the percentage to a contant value. Humility nature Denied The Power of Love This should be a medical Jutsu. Astral Projection Technique Why is Astral Projection restricted to your organization? Anyone with advanced Shamastic knowledge can acquire such a feat. ______________________________________________________________________ ___________________ That's it! I'm calling the Black Marvel Family to deal with this mess! Edited December 9, 2006 by Rei Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted December 9, 2006 Author Share Posted December 9, 2006 (edited) Noes Rei! Don't call the Black Marvel Family, they alredy hate me enough as it is. Death: Edited: Greed: Edited Pervert: Edited Pride: Just because medical justu can't be used on them doesn't mean they can't heal other people, ya know? Life: edited Humility: Changed Love: Changed. And yes, i realize it's the 7 sins and stuff, but I have explained this at least twice now... Astrial: Because, I want it to be. The idea wasn't made previously so I thought why not just make it only accesable to members of the Organization? Edited December 9, 2006 by Cho Hakkai Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 (edited) Noes Rei! Don't call the Black Marvel Family, they alredy hate me enough as it is. Who's the newest Black Marvel? Astrial: Because, I want it to be. The idea wasn't made previously so I thought why not just make it only accesable to members of the Organization Unless you can prove a logical reason why this ablity is restricted to your organization, I will not approve of it. Pride: Just because medical justu can't be used on them doesn't mean they can't heal other people, ya know? A three point medical Justu is hardly beneficial. Also, I find it hard to believe a medical Shinobi would acquire Pride. And yes, i realize it's the 7 sins and stuff, but I have explained this at least twice now... *roll eyes* Did you understand my reference all? ______________________________________________________________________ ___ Did you read my post? Saint of Greed -For every 3 lines (600 words) this character completes beyond his/her mission requirement, he receives an additional 15 Ryo/Yen to a maximum of 300. A maximum of twice per month. -Raise the cost to four (4). Edited December 9, 2006 by Rei Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted December 9, 2006 Author Share Posted December 9, 2006 The one that appered in Spider Man in the 90's? Because that's the last time I saw/read Black Marvel. Astrial: This justu is going to be used usually along with the forbidden technique that is underneath it. This is so that if the sins already have things or missions that they are doing that they don't have to stop and drop everything to return to a certain place to just to the summoning. This will also be used on a regular occasion for status reports and such from each of the groups. Pride: I wasn't planning on having a medical ninja as Pride, but they can still have some little justu to help smaller things. 7 sins: Nope. Sorry, I thought you were going to bust my chops about not having all 14 of them. Sorry, it's just that i have been getting a lot of those VIA pm and it's annoying. Greed: Edited and changed it around a little more. IF you need me to explain, I would be more than happy to do so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rei Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 The one that appered in Spider Man in the 90's? Because that's the last time I saw/read Black Marvel. *roll eyes* Do you understand any of my references? Astrial:Your explanation is not good enough, and thus denied. Pride: Add a real restriction. 7 sins:Don't assume, especially if you cannot follow my references. Death's true power: once again: What is the exact connection between death and wisdom? Greed is always beneficial: For every 300 words this character completes beyond his/her mission requirement, receives an additional $10 to a maximum of 300. A maximum of twice per month. The Lusty Pervert: Someone else, anyone else cover this. Humility nature: 5 percent the Jutsu's what exactly? The Power of Love: While tremendously over powered, this ability is better suited for Lust than Love. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cho Hakkai Posted December 9, 2006 Author Share Posted December 9, 2006 I am just gonna stop with the connections, I end up making them the wrong way. *sigh* sorry. My connections are almost never right. Well, everything edited, changed, or gotten rid of (Astral Projection Technique has been moved to the technqiue approval section.) And now, I am out of ideas for Love. Do you have any by any chance? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kido Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 Maybe Love should be closer to the medical ninja/savior path...because love is without the physical attributes attributed to lust as you currently have it. Maybe they should be in some cases very reluctant to use violence [making the self defense skill mandatory] and of course maintains a permanent support capacity when coupled with another... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
