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Genesis

Type: Chakra Incarnation

Level: 10

Size: Medium

Attributes: Creation, Hybrid, Indestructible

Description: Underwhelming at first, Genesis consists of what looks like two short, metal rods with leather grips, the functional part of the weapon having snapped off long ago. The rods have been hollowed out, and are filled with what looks a lot like bone marrow, coloured black. Beneath the curves and folds of the strange material lies a nest of strange crystals in the handle of both the rods. The whole mechanism acts as a medium for the creation of solid weapons through the use of chakra.

This weapon creation is, perhaps, the most stunning aspect of Genesis. The wielder may chose to use axes, hammers, whips or almost anything they can imagine. The two rods that comprise the Genesis can also be affixed at the base to form a staff-like weapon should they choose.

Cost: 750

Creation

Weapon: Genesis

Effect: The Genesis may become any weapon of the wielder's choosing, and will be classified as either 'heavy' or 'light.' 'Light' weapons (like swords or whips) bestow +40 accuracy, while 'heavy' weapons (such as hammers or axes) give +20 Ninjutsu and +20 Taijutsu. Though the Genesis may imitate famous weapons known to the wielder, such as the Legendary Cleaver of the SSS, it does not gain any of that weapon's special attributes.

Cost: 240

Hybrid

Weapon: Genesis

Effect: For the purpose of damage reduction, modifiers, skills and response techniques, use of the Gensis is considered to be the use of a Hybrid Technique consisting of Ninjutsu and Taijutsu. A maximum of two attacks per turn may be made with the Genesis.

*If anybody has a suggestion for what type of weapon this should be, please post it. xD Also it's been a while since I've created a weapon, which I kind of suck at so if you've got guidance to offer, go ahead.

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I would say you can get a 25% price cut on "creation" since you may only have 40 of the 80 points at any one time, so $240.

Hybrid is a little unclear. Is that only for modifiers then? or does it include cost? I assume modifiers but it should be stated like "This weapon is modified the same as a Ninjutsu and Taijutsu hybrid jutsu." Saying that it is considered an attack from a technique could get strange because when a skill that modifies a hybrid technique is approved it is assumed to be a "once per turn" action. On a weapon you can get 4 per turn, which can easily break some skills. For instance, cost reduction or damage addition skills.

As for the type, I would say something like [Chakra Incarnation]. Its totally out there for what you want to call it, so long as you decide on some name.

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Are you sure you want to limit the uses of Genesis to two per turn? If so, you should say "a maximum of two" since at Genin level you can still only swing it once. /nitpick.

Otherwise it looks good.

Posted

Why is this 750? Adding up the price you have there is 520 and I wouldn't price Hybrid at 230, especially since it's a little change and you're hindering yourself. But also, is Hybrid going to work in conjunction with jutsu? It seems a tad unclear. Unless you're saying when you make an attack, use a nin/tai mod, then I'd understand the price.

Explain s'il vous plait <3

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It basically takes the weapon attacks from being basic attacks to being Hybrid Techniques, modified by Nin/Tai and payed for with Stm/Chk. So all the skills the person has that pertain to hybrid techs now apply to the weapon strikes, and opponents can no longer just Kawarimi out of it.



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