PandaMattMatt Posted February 14, 2011 Posted February 14, 2011 (edited) Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana Skill Name: Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana Bloodline: [Hanabi Clan] Description: This curious adaptation is seen very rarely because so few have actually unlocked its powers. Normally the Hanabi avoid conflict and lives as shinobi, and thus their power was not realized, but as they began to join the ninja world, members awoke their long dormant powers. Through strong emotional triggers, the Tengoku no Naka Hibana awakens to endow the Hanabi with heightened agility, strength, and focus. The Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana also gives access to the firework element. Effect: 10% total Chakra to activate, 5% total Chakra per following turn upkeep. All "Active" bloodline skills of Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana may be accessed as long as this skill is active. May be activated/deactivated in the setup or main phase. During activation, all advanced regeneration skills are suspended. In addition, at level 30 the user of this bloodline will gain the Fire or Lightning specialty, a 1d2 will be rolled to decide which. At level 80, the user’s second Specialty will be Fire or Lightning, which ever was not obtained at level 30. Restrictions: The User may NOT take the following skills: -Sealed Ninjutsu -Advancement Seal: Ninjutsu -Advancement Seal: Taijutsu. This bloodline may not be activated while under the effects of "Drowning" All advanced regen skills are suspended during activation. Cost: -1 Passive Effects: Heart of the Hanabi Description: The Hanabi are born with a special kind of chakra that reacts with their emotions. When this chakra is activated by a powerful emotion it mixes with the body’s natural chakra and creates a a dazzling shower of electricity and flame. The Hanabi, because of this, are more adept at learning to use Fire and Lightning instead of the usual Wind and Sand elements. Effect: User obtains the Skill “Subtle Elements: Fire” upon Character Creation. At Level 5, User Obtains “Subtle Elements: Lightning” at no cost. User does not gain any other element at character creation; they must be purchased separately at their full costs. Restrictions: Must be Taken at Character Creation. May not purchase any other “Subtle Elements” until “Fire” and “Lightning” are both obtained. No more than once a day and three times per week, the User may roll a 1d50. The User must land on 1-10. In order to roll, the User must engage in either a personal training thread or a training thread with another Hanabi dedicated to trying to unlock the Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana. For every 250 words, the User may subtract 1 side from the roll. In the event of an unsuccessful roll, 5 sides will be added and the User must try again at a later time. No other bloodline skills may be taken until a successful roll is made. Cost: -1 Activated Effects Flame-burst: Radiance* The most basic and apparent effect of the activated bloodline, the User will begin to emit a radiant shower of sparks and light from their chests. As the User grows in strength of heart, the brilliant light grows only stronger. Effect: Rank 1: The Firework Element is granted for the price of 0 sp. Taijutsu and Basic Attacks are considered to have the elemental tag [Firework], and may apply elemental bonuses as such. Requirements: Heart of the Hanabi Cost: -2 Flame-burst: Fusion* By learning to control and focus the shower of sparking colors that flies from their heart, a Hanabi can increase the strength of their Taijutsu and Firework element techniques. Rank 1: "[Firework] Taijutsu and Ninjutsu damage is increased by 1.1x of base, but the user takes 1.5x of base damage of his own firework element attacks as burn damage over two turns. Requirements: Level 5, Flame-burst: Radiance Rank 1 Cost: -1 Rank 2: [Firework] Taijutsu and Ninjutsu damage is increased by 1.2x of base, but the user takes 1.4x of the base damage of his own firework element attacks as burn damage over two turns. Requirements: Level 25, Flame-burst: Aura, Rank 1 Cost: -1 Rank 3: [Firework] Taijutsu and Ninjutsu damage is increased by 1.3x of base, but the user takes 1.3x of base damage of his own firework element attacks as burn damage over two turns. Requirements: Level 45, Flame-burst: Aura, Rank 2 Cost: -2 Rank 4: [Firework] Taijutsu and Ninjutsu damage is increased by 1.4x of base, but the user takes 1.2x of the base damage of his own firework element attack as burn damage over two turns. Requirements: Level 65, Flame-burst: Aura, Rank 3 Cost: -2 Rank 5: [Firework] Taijutsu and Ninjutsu damage is increased by 1.5x of base, but the user takes 1.1x of the base damage of his own firework technique as burn damage over two turns. Requirements: Level 85, Flame-burst: Aura, Rank 4 Cost: -2 Flame-burst: Polarization* Like a firework that dances upon the nighttime sky, the Hanabi are swift on their feet and quick with their reflexes. Through concentrated effort, a Hanabi is able emit a wave of shooting light from their entire body. This light acts as a shield against certain elements, while increasing the Hanabi’s ability to move and evade oncoming assaults. Rank 1: Speed and Evasion are increased by 1.05x of base. All incoming non-ghost Fire and/or Lightning techniques are reduced by 1.1x of base damage. The User takes 1.5x more base damage from Water based techniques. The effects of drowning last 6 turn longer and deal 1.25x more damage Requirement: Level 10; Flame-burst: Fusion Rank 1 Cost: -2 Rank 2: Speed and Evasion are increased by 1.1x of base. All incoming non-ghost Fire and/or Lightning techniques are reduced by 1.2x of base damage. The User takes 1.4x more base damage from Water based techniques. The effects of drowning last 5 turns longer and deal 1.20x more damage Requirement: Level 30; Flame-burst: Fusion Rank 2 Cost: -2 Rank 3: Speed and Evasion are increased by 1.15x of base. All incoming non-ghost Fire and/or Lightning techniques are reduced by 1.3x of base damage. The User takes 1.3x more base damage from Water based techniques. The effects of drowning last 4 turns longer and deal 1.15x more damage Requirement: Level 50; Flame-burst: Fusion Rank 3 Cost: -3 Rank 4: Speed and Evasion are increased by 1.2x of base. All incoming non-ghost Fire and/or Lightning techniques are reduced by 1.4x of base damage. The User takes 1.2x more base damage from Water based techniques. The effects of drowning last 3 turn longer and deal 1.1x more damage Requirement: Level 70; Flame-burst: Fusion Rank 4 Cost: -3 Rank 5: Speed and Evasion are increased by 1.25x of base. All incoming non-ghost damage Fire and/or Lightning techniques are reduced by 1.5x of base damage. The User takes 1.1x more base damage from Water based techniques. The effects of drowning last 2 turn longer and deal 1.05x more damage Requirement: Level 90; Flame-burst: Fusion Rank 5 Cost: -4 Flame-burst: Aura The Hanabi are masters of fire and lightning, not to mention their own Firework, elements. They have found ways to handle fire without being burned, lightning without being electrocuted and fireworks without exploding. In battle, this becomes apparent by an aura of changing colors created by the sparks flying from their chests. The aura protects them from attacks of fire, lightning, and firework. Also, because of the radiated heat from the fireworks, the User can negate some effects of cold. Effect: This bloodline skill may be negated. In order to be negated, the status effect "Drowning" must be inflicted on the User. Or, the user may spend 1 set-up phase to deactivate this bloodline skill, or the entire bloodline. The User may reactivate this bloodline skill by deactivating the entire bloodline and reactivating it at the next possible chance. The User is under the effects of "Dehydrated" until this bloodline skill is negated. Ranks in this bloodline skill stack.[/color] Rank 1: The User is immune to the outside application of "Burned" and "Burning". Requirements: Level 15: Flame-burst: Polarization Rank 1 Cost: -2 Rank 2: The User is immune to the outside application of "Cold (Hypothermia Stage 1)" and "Numb". Requirements: Level 35: Flame-burst: Polarization Rank 2 Cost: -2 Rank 3: The User is immune to the outside application of "Frostbite (Hypothermia Stage 2). Requirements: Level 55: Flame-burst: Polarization Rank 3 Cost: -2 Rank 4: The User is immune to the outside application of "Frozen" Requirements: Level 75: Flame-burst: Polarization Rank 4 Cost: -2 Rank 5: The User is immune to the outside application of "Hypothermic (Hypothermia Stage 3)" Requirements: Level 95: Flame-burst: Polarization Rank 5 Cost: -2 *Ranks do NOT stack. *May not go beyond 1.5x [Firework Element] Edited December 26, 2011 by PandaMattMatt
Rilon Posted February 15, 2011 Posted February 15, 2011 (edited) I think that you are the first person on this site to port a music video. Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana This curious adaptation is seen very rarely because so few have actually unlocked its powers. Normally the Hanabi avoid conflict and lives as shinobi, and thus their power was not realized, but as they began to join the ninja world, members awoke their long dormant powers. Through strong emotional triggers, the Tengoku no Naka Hibana awakens to endow the Hanabi with heightened agility, strength, and focus. The Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana also gives access to the firework element. Restrictions: The User may NOT take the following skills: Sealed Ninjutsu Advancement Seal: Ninjutsu Advancement Seal: Taijutsu. Also, at level 30, the User’s Specialty will be Fire or Lightning, a 1d2 will be rolled to decide which. At level 80, the User’s second Specialty will be Fire or Lightning, which ever was not obtained at level 30. Activation: 10% total Chakra to activate, 5% total chakra per turn for upkeep May be activated/Deactivated in the Set-up or Main Phase During activation, all advanced regeneration skills are suspended. Passive Effects: Heart of the Hanabi Description: The Hanabi are born with a special kind of chakra that reacts with their emotions. When this chakra is activated by a powerful emotion it mixes with the body’s natural chakra and creates a a dazzling shower of sparks of electricity and flame. The Hanabi, because of this, are more adept at learning to use Fire and Lightning instead of the usual Wind and Sand elements. Effect: User obtains the Skill “Subtle Elements: Fire” upon Character Creation. At Level 5, User Obtains “Subtle Elements: Lightning” at no cost. User does not gain “Subtle Elements: Wind” and “Combinatorial Elements: Sand” upon Character Creation; they must be purchased separately at their full costs. Restrictions: Must be Taken at Character Creation. May not purchase any other “Subtle Elements” until “Fire” and “Lightning” are both obtained. Cost: 0 Zero cost skills are a no-no. This will need to cost -1. Lighting The Fuse 照明ヒューズ No more than once a day and three times per week, the User may roll a 1d50. The User must land on 1-10. In order to roll, the User must engage in either a personal training thread or a training thread with another Hanabi dedicated to trying to unlock the Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana. For every 250 words, the User may subtract 1 side from the roll. In the event of an unsuccessful roll, 5 sides will be added and the User must try again at a later time. Cost: 0 Taken at Character Creation This doesn't need to be a separate skill. Just roll it in with "Heart of the Hanabi". Activated Effects Flame-burst: Radiance* The most basic and apparent effect of the activated bloodline, the User will begin to emit a radiant shower of sparks and light from their chests. As the User grows in strength of heart, the brilliant light grows only stronger. Effect: Rank 1: Upon Activation, the Opponent rolls a 1d10. If s/he lands on a 1 or 5, then then s/he is inflicted with “Blind” for 3 turns. Access to the Firework Element is granted. Upon activation, and each time Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana is activated, the User suffers 10 point drop in Health, Chakra, and Stamina. Requirements: Lighting the Fuse Cost: -2 Rank 2: Upon Activation, the Opponent rolls a 1d10. Is s/he lands on a 1 or 5, then s/he is inflicted with “Blind” and “Dizzy” for 3 turns. Access to the Firework Element is granted. Upon activation, and each time Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana is activated, the User suffers 50 point drop in Health, Chakra, and Stamina. Requirement: Flame-burst: Polarization Rank 1; Level 20 Cost: -2 Rank 3: Upon Activation, the Opponent rolls a 1d10. Is s/he lands on a 1 or 5, then s/he is inflicted with “Blind”, “Confused” and “Dizzy” for 3 turns. Access to the Firework Element is granted.Upon activation, and each time Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana is activated, the User suffers 90 point drop in Health, Chakra, and Stamina. Requirement: Flame-burst: Polarization Rank 2; 40 Cost: -3 Rank 4: Upon Activation, the Opponent rolls a 1d10. Is s/he lands on a 1 or 5, then s/he is inflicted with “Blind”, “Confused”, “Burned” and “Dizzy” for 3 turns. Access to the Firework Element is granted. Upon activation, and each time Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana is activated, the User suffers 130 point drop in Health, Chakra, and Stamina. Requirement: Flame-burst Polarization: Rank 3; Level 60 Cost: -4 Rank 5: Upon Activation, the Opponent rolls a 1d10. Is s/he lands on a 1 or 5, then s/he is inflicted with “Blind”, “Confused”, “Burned”, “Dizzy” and take an unmodified 10 damage due to “Burning” for 3 turns. Access to the Firework Element is granted. Upon activation, and each time Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana is activated, the User suffers 170 point drop in Health, Chakra, and Stamina. Requirement: Flame-burst: Polarization Rank 4; Level 80 Cost: -5 Skills cannot directly effect opponents, so inflicting those status effects for free is a no go. Also, is the loss of stats permanent or and activation cost? I'm going to tell you right now that a permanent loss of stats is a bad idea. You would be losing 5 level's worth of stats if you want these decreases to be a permanent thing. Flame-burst: Fusion* By learning to control and focus the shower of sparking colors that flies from their heart, a Hanabi can increase the strength of their Taijutsu and Firework element techniques. Rank 1: Taijutsu and Basic Attacks are considered to have the elemental tag [Firework], and may apply elemental bonus as such. Any physical attack, [Taijutsu, Ninjutsu or Basic Attack], with the elemental tag [Firework] deals 10% more base damage. Every time the User uses a “Element: Firework” technique, they receive 10% base damage, spread over two turns in “Burn” damage. Requirements: Level 5, Flame-burst: Radiance, Rank 1 Cost: -2 Rank 2: Taijutsu and Basic Attacks are considered to have the elemental tag [Firework], and may apply elemental bonus as such. Any physical attack, [Taijutsu, Ninjutsu or Basic Attack], with the elemental tag [Firework] deals 20% more base damage. Every time the User uses a “Element: Firework” technique, they receive 20% base damage, spread over two turns in “Burn” damage. Requirements: Level 25, Flame-burst: Radiance, Rank 2 Cost: -2 Rank 3: Taijutsu and Basic Attacks are considered to have the elemental tag [Firework], and may apply elemental bonus as such. Any physical attack, [Taijutsu, Ninjutsu or Basic Attack], with the elemental tag [Firework] deals 30% more base damage. Every time the User uses a “Element: Firework” technique, they receive 30% base damage, spread over two turns in “Burn” damage. Requirements: Level 45, Flame-burst: Radiance, Rank 3 Cost: -3 Rank 4: Taijutsu and Basic Attacks are considered to have the elemental tag [Firework], and may apply elemental bonus as such. Any physical attack, [Taijutsu, Ninjutsu or Basic Attack], with the elemental tag [Firework] deals 40% more base damage. Every time the User uses a “Element: Firework” technique, they receive 40% base damage, spread over two turns in “Burn” damage. Requirements: Level 65, Flame-burst: Radiance, Rank 4 Cost: -4 Rank 5: Taijutsu and Basic Attacks are considered to have the elemental tag [Firework], and may apply elemental bonus as such. Any physical attack, [Taijutsu, Ninjutsu or Basic Attack], with the elemental tag [Firework] deals 50% more base damage. Every time the User uses a “Element: Firework” technique, they receive 50% base damage, spread over two turns in “Burn” damage. Requirements: Level 85, Flame-burst: Radiance, Rank 5 Cost: -5 The wording on these skills is really confusing. First of all, you can just say "[Firework] Taijutsu, Ninjutsu and Basic attacks deal X% more base damage." As for the second part of the skill, I think that you're trying to say that when a character with these skills use a [Firework] jutsu burns themselves. If that's the case, just say: "[Firework] Taijutsu, Ninjutsu and Basic attacks deal X% more base damage, but the user takes X% of the base damage as burn damage over two turns." I would also cost these at -1, -1, -2 and -2. Flame-burst: Polarization* Like a firework that dances upon the nighttime sky, the Hanabi are swift on their feet and quick with their reflexes. Through concentrated effort, a Hanabi is able emit a wave of shooting light from their entire body. This light acts as a shield against certain elements, while increasing the Hanabi’s ability to move and evade oncoming assaults. Rank 1: Speed and Evasion are increased by 5% of base. All incoming physical Fire and/or Lightning techniques are reduced by 10% of base damage. The User takes 10% more base damage from Water based techniques. The effects of drowning last 1 turn longer and deal 1.1x more damage Requirement: Level 10; Flame-burst: Fusion Rank 1 Cost: -3 Rank 2: Speed and Evasion are increased by 10% of base. All incoming physical Fire and/or Lightning techniques are reduced by 20% of base damage. The User takes 20% more base damage from Water based techniques. The effects of drowning last 3 turns longer and deal 1.2x more damage Requirement: Level 30; Flame-burst: Fusion Rank 2 Cost: -3 Rank 3: Speed and Evasion are increased by 15% of base. All incoming physical Fire and/or Lightning techniques are reduced by 30% of base damage. The User takes 30% more base damage from Water based techniques. The effects of drowning last 5 turns longer and deal 1.3x more damage Requirement: Level 50; Flame-burst: Fusion Rank 3 Cost: -4 Rank 4: Speed and Evasion are increased by 20% of base. All incoming physical Fire and/or Lightning techniques are reduced by 40% of base damage. The User takes 40% more base damage from Water based techniques. The effects of drowning last 7 turn longer and deal 1.4x more damage Requirement: Level 70; Flame-burst: Fusion Rank 4 Cost: -5 Rank 5: Speed and Evasion are increased by 25% of base. All incoming physical Fire and/or Lightning techniques are reduced by 50% of base damage. The User takes 50% more base damage from Water based techniques. The effects of drowning last 9 turn longer and deal 1.5x more damage Requirement: Level 90; Flame-burst: Fusion Rank 5 Cost: -6 These should be re-formatted to grant a 1.1X, 1.2X, etc. bonus to the stats, it's much cleaner that way. Also, and this is simply a personal suggestion, I would replace all mentions of "physical damage" with "non-ghost damage" I think it looks cleaner and fits into the system better. *Ranks do NOT stack. *May not go beyond 1.5x Edited February 15, 2011 by Rilon
PandaMattMatt Posted February 15, 2011 Author Posted February 15, 2011 (edited) Edited ))((Hopefully being the first(?) to port a music video will give some points in creativity haha))(( Edited March 6, 2011 by PandaMattMatt
Rhapsody Posted February 16, 2011 Posted February 16, 2011 (edited) I would reccomend that you don't color the 'body' text of your creations. This is kind of killer on the eyes in Graphite, lol. Edited February 16, 2011 by Rhapsody
cntrstrk14 Posted February 18, 2011 Posted February 18, 2011 You never really define what the "firework" element is. Is there a skill for it? All elemental combinations need a skill like the ones on the main site. If there is, link it. If there is not, you will need to make one.
PandaMattMatt Posted March 19, 2011 Author Posted March 19, 2011 Do you ever feel like a plastic bag drifting through the wind, wanting to start again?
cntrstrk14 Posted March 24, 2011 Posted March 24, 2011 Okay, first step is that all of this... Also, at level 30, the User’s Specialty will be Fire or Lightning, a 1d2 will be rolled to decide which. At level 80, the User’s second Specialty will be Fire or Lightning, which ever was not obtained at level 30. Activation: 10% total Chakra to activate, 5% total chakra per turn for upkeep May be activated/Deactivated in the Set-up or Main Phase During activation, all advanced regeneration skills are suspended. Should be in a skill somewhere. For instance, I would create a "cornerstone" skill that IS your bloodline. When this cornerstone skill is activated, you gain the effects of all of the other "active" abilities. Example: Fire Ass Porcupine Bloodline of Exotic RepremandDescription: <poof> Effect: 10% total Chakra to activate, 5% total Chakra per following turn upkeep. All "Active" bloodline skills of Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana may be accessed as long as this skill is active. May be activated/deactivated in the setup or main phase. During activation, all advanced regeneration skills are suspended. In addition, at level 30 the user of this bloodline will gain the Fire or Lightning specialty, a 1d2 will be rolled to decide which. At level 80, the user’s second Specialty will be Fire or Lightning, which ever was not obtained at level 30. Flame-burst: Radiance Is this giving access to the combinatorial skill? As in, they can take the skill or they can now just use firework techniques? The only avenue to using an element is through its combinatorial skill, so if that is what you want you must give that skill for free. I would highly suggest that you just let them take it normally though.
cntrstrk14 Posted March 24, 2011 Posted March 24, 2011 Okay, first step is that all of this... Also, at level 30, the User’s Specialty will be Fire or Lightning, a 1d2 will be rolled to decide which. At level 80, the User’s second Specialty will be Fire or Lightning, which ever was not obtained at level 30. Activation: 10% total Chakra to activate, 5% total chakra per turn for upkeep May be activated/Deactivated in the Set-up or Main Phase During activation, all advanced regeneration skills are suspended. Should be in a skill somewhere. For instance, I would create a "cornerstone" skill that IS your bloodline. When this cornerstone skill is activated, you gain the effects of all of the other "active" abilities. Example: Fire Ass Porcupine Bloodline of Exotic RepremandDescription: <poof> Effect: 10% total Chakra to activate, 5% total Chakra per following turn upkeep. All "Active" bloodline skills of Tengoku no Naka Kara Hibana may be accessed as long as this skill is active. May be activated/deactivated in the setup or main phase. During activation, all advanced regeneration skills are suspended. In addition, at level 30 the user of this bloodline will gain the Fire or Lightning specialty, a 1d2 will be rolled to decide which. At level 80, the user’s second Specialty will be Fire or Lightning, which ever was not obtained at level 30. Flame-burst: Radiance Is this giving access to the combinatorial skill? As in, they can take the skill or they can now just use firework techniques? The only avenue to using an element is through its combinatorial skill, so if that is what you want you must give that skill for free. I would highly suggest that you just let them take it normally though.
PandaMattMatt Posted March 26, 2011 Author Posted March 26, 2011 Edited Cornerstone skill added to the top Flame-burst radiance: Altered it so that they may take the skill for free, but must still have the two basic elements in order to make the skill.
Azure Posted April 8, 2011 Posted April 8, 2011 Heart of the Hanabi; May not break the rank rule. Just to keep that in mind. Polarization; I think you should still be hurt by the firework element, otherwise as stacking with the other ranks you're just canceling out the negative. On another note, I REALLY don't like getting 1.5x on two stats, ESPECIALLY speed. This isn't even their specialty. Before I advise anything more, I want your input.
PandaMattMatt Posted April 8, 2011 Author Posted April 8, 2011 Heart of the Hanabi: Noted Polarization: This only defends against fire and lightning elements, firework elements still damage as normal. I shall change the increments in which the evasion and speed are increased. Instead of increasing by 1.1x at rank 1, it shall inscease by 1.05. Rank two will increase by 1.1, and ect until at rank 5 it will increase by 1.25x as a max. Will that suffice?
PandaMattMatt Posted November 11, 2011 Author Posted November 11, 2011 Numbers have been altered, and changes have been made, I am happy with this, so feel free to tear it apart, I'm ready!
