Princess Posted March 16, 2015 Posted March 16, 2015 (edited) All listed techniques belong to the Rinha Clan. Rinha Hidden Art: Power Bond Type: Ninjutsu [Rinha] Rank: Gennin Cost: 40 Chakra Effect: This jutsu targets one ally. That character may spend up to 80 Chakra to grant the user an equal amount of 'Absorbed Chakra;'. Description: The original technique used in tandem with the Rinha’s powers, this allows for allies to share their chakra with the Rinha, giving them the resources to utilise their techniques to the fullest. JP: 2 Rinha Hidden Art: Power Bond II Type: Ninjutsu [Rinha] Rank: Chuunin Cost: 80 Chakra Effect: This jutsu targets one ally. That character may spend up to 150 Chakra to grant the user an equal amount of 'Absorbed Chakra;'. Description: The original technique used in tandem with the Rinha’s powers, this allows for allies to share their chakra with the Rinha, giving them the resources to utilise their techniques to the fullest. JP: 3 (Evolving 1; Rinha Hidden Art: Power Bond) Rinha Hidden Art: Power Bond III Type: Ninjutsu [Rinha] Rank: Jounin Cost: 160 Chakra Effect: This jutsu targets one ally. That character may spend up to 320 Chakra to grant the user an equal amount of 'Absorbed Chakra;'. Description: The original technique used in tandem with the Rinha’s powers, this allows for allies to share their chakra with the Rinha, giving them the resources to utilise their techniques to the fullest. JP: 4 (Evolving 1; Rinha Hidden Art: Power Bond II) Rinha Hidden Art: Perfect Power Bond Type: Ninjutsu [Rinha] Rank: Sennin Cost: 320 Chakra Effect: This jutsu targets one ally. That character may spend any amount of chakra to grant the user an equal amount of 'Absorbed Chakra;'. Description: The true form of original technique used in tandem with the Rinha’s powers, this allows for allies to share their chakra with the Rinha, giving them the resources to utilise their techniques to the fullest. JP: 5 (Evolving 1; Rinha Hidden Art: Power Bond III) Perfect Spirit Reflection Technique Type: Ninjutsu [Forbidden: Unacceptable|Clone|Hijutsu:Rinha] Rank: Sennin Cost: 175x Chakra -or- 120x Chakra & 120x Absorbed Chakra Requirements: Spirit Reflection Technique [Level 3], Spirit Reflection Mastery [Rank 5] Effect: The user creates x Spirit Reflections, with ‘x’ being less than or equal to 4. Spirit Reflections have 40% of the user's stats unless they opted to pay for this technique using Absorbed Chakra, in which case they instead have 50% of the stats of the character named in the Absorbed Chakra statistic. If the Spirit Reflection was paid for with Absorbed Chakra, all clones created reference the character named in the Absorbed Chakra statistic instead of the user for purposes of techniques they may utilize. Each clone created may be paid with different Absorbed Chakra or normal Chakra. Spirit Reflections created with this technique are able to leave the thread of their creator, and each may exist in any one thread separate from their creator's. Additional Rules for Perfect Spirit Reflections are listed below. Description: The ultimate expression of the Rinha’s power as a clan. Forbidden for its potential, this technique can create as near to an exact copy of the user as possible, but as with the imperfect version of this technique, it’s true power lies in copying other. Despite the incredible resources required to create these reflections, when all the elements come together the resulting duplicate is all but impossible to differentiate from the original. Possessed of the full power of its originator, the creation of these reflections is among the deadliest techniques in the ninja world. JP: 13 Edited March 30, 2017 by Princess
Princess Posted March 22, 2015 Author Posted March 22, 2015 (edited) Perfect Spirit Reflection Additional Rules: -Spirit Reflections may never, unless specifically stated otherwise, possess skills or ranks in bloodlines. They are only treated as such when checking the requirements of a jutsu they are performing. They gain no bonuses from skills/bloodline ranks they are treated as possessing. -The exception to the above rule is Taijutsu Styles. Following the rules of any Taijutsu Styles the Spirit Reflection possesses, Spirit Reflections may generate charges as normal. These charges may only be spent on techniques. -While Spirit Reflections may never possess bloodline ranks, they are allowed to utilise aspects of any bloodline the character listed in the 'Absorbed Chakra;a;b;c;or d' statistic possessed. These aspects may never have any direct impact on combat, and have no mechanical benefits. Examples could be a reflection manifesting a Sharingan, or generating a special aura, but not copying techniques or using that aura as a shield. -Clones created using Absorbed Chakra use the stats of the character at the time the latest source of Absorbed Chakra was added. Thus, if a Rinha character gains 40 Absorbed Chakra for a character, then summons a clone 3 months later, the clone uses the stats for the chosen character from 3 months prior, regardless of any experience gain and expenditure since. Edited March 30, 2017 by Princess
Rhap Sodos Posted March 22, 2015 Posted March 22, 2015 Effect: This jutsu targets one ally (the caster included). That character may spend any amount of chakra to increase the user’s power by an amount equal to the chakra spent. Question! What is "Power"?
Princess Posted March 22, 2015 Author Posted March 22, 2015 It's the stat generated by the rinha bloodline.
Princess Posted April 25, 2015 Author Posted April 25, 2015 Bored and wanting stuff to happen so let the 20 odd day bumps begin!
Cellar Door Posted April 28, 2015 Posted April 28, 2015 For the ones that you give wonky upkeeps... I think it'd be easier to just work with the maximum duration of Ninjutsu. (4 turns) I was ignoring these as hard as I could because of how complicated they are, but now that I'm getting it, I want them to be cool and get approved. However, I think that because you're adding so many altered or different mechanics, that you should cut corners where available. No sense re-inventing the wheel. Do that first. Reflected Glory is extremely weird, because it's almost entirely RP. I know I've mentioned this to you before about the difference between In Character effects and system effects. But you're once again blending that line so much that your effect section doesn't really do anything worth paying Chakra for. So like, when we talk about the bloodline let's discuss techniques as well. Make an itemized list of the stuff that you want to talk about, or aren't real sure on with this clan, and we'll go over them the next time we're both free.
Princess Posted April 28, 2015 Author Posted April 28, 2015 I'll write up a list and then bother you on skype, cheers for the hand mate^^
Princess Posted May 26, 2015 Author Posted May 26, 2015 Altered to suit the new form of the bloodline. Volume 2 will have the actual spirit reflection technique chain, as I wanted to retain power bond and can't fit 5 techs in one app. Approvals/comments would be lovely^^
Cellar Door Posted June 8, 2015 Posted June 8, 2015 In the first one, what do you mean by (the caster included)? Targeting yourself with that, should probably not grant Absorbed Chakra. (Absorbed Chakra; You) would just be your Chakra. The other one hearkens back to what I said in the Number 2 thread.
Princess Posted June 15, 2015 Author Posted June 15, 2015 That was a carry over from an older version of the bl, removed (the caster included). Also I'll get on to tony, wish me luck...
Hardcore Skittlez Posted February 24, 2016 Posted February 24, 2016 Power bond needs an upward chakra cap-- probably no more than 80. You'll need to make evolving jutsu with each rank capping out at the maximum cost cap, I think. The other one... Yep. Tony's still your guy.
Hardcore Skittlez Posted October 13, 2016 Posted October 13, 2016 Hasn't seen activity in some time, moving to dead.
Hardcore Skittlez Posted November 4, 2016 Posted November 4, 2016 Moved back to custom per Princess' request!
Princess Posted November 6, 2016 Author Posted November 6, 2016 Still need tony for the one that needs tony, but I'm writing bond up as an evolving technique as per your advice^^ Just gotta wrap my head around writing techs again.
cntrstrk14 Posted November 27, 2016 Posted November 27, 2016 Rinha Hidden Art: Power Bond: I agree with Peter's assessment. There should be a cap to how much Chakra an ally can donate at once, based on the cap for each rank. So Genin would be 80, Chuunin 150, Jounin 360, Sennin 800. I would suggest just making this an evolving series (you can just make the Gennin one for now if you want). Perfect Spirit Reflection Technique: - 40% Clone of yourself costs ~175 Chakra. - 50% Clone of yourself costs ~242 Chakra. - Can use all techniques: This is not really needed. Clone rules already say that a clone can use all techniques except for Clones & Summons, which would include these jutsu. I think instead you should use this space to clarify that clones made with Perfect Spirit Reflection and Absorbed Chakra instead utilize the techniques of the absorbed character. - Retaining all non-unique equipment: This is a problem that I brought up I believe in the main thread for this clan's bloodline. Specifically, that you can easily have 4 allies that each have their own equipment. Take all of the equipment from all 4, put it on a single ally, and then absorb their chakra. Rinse and repeat for each ally. So in the end you have 4 stats all with the same equipment. This is the fundamental problem with having clones that have the user's equipment. I would honestly just cut this part. - Bloodline Access: I could see this being workable due to the need to absorb other's Chakra. It is also the first part of this that makes it worth Sennin level. Overall I think you are overpaying for this stuff, but I feel like I can't do a great job looking at this on its own without the more base jutsu in their final form in front of me as well.
Princess Posted November 29, 2016 Author Posted November 29, 2016 Basic Techs Obviously the basic techs aren't approved, but I think the only real changes they are likely to see is cost changes, I think the wording is downpat. I also have a better costing model for this one, just need to port it across. I am working on getting the evolving version done, just trying to get my mission post out and struggling a little to get back into the swing of things. Cutting the items is fine. The wording for technique use is there because originally these were not written as clones but their own separate system, which we moved away from because why do that when it can be done with existing systems and all.
cntrstrk14 Posted December 19, 2016 Posted December 19, 2016 Commented in the other techniques since I think we should put the lid on those before really digging in here.
Pwnzie Posted January 28, 2017 Posted January 28, 2017 Bumping this, needs to be edited to reflect system changes since it was posted (and the now approved vol 2 topic that has changed since this topic was made) then we can re evaluate.
Princess Posted March 30, 2017 Author Posted March 30, 2017 Okay, updated and made it all shiny, I know there's 4 in here and should only be 3, but I have no other techs planned for the Rinha yet and don't want to make a third thread with 1 tech in it. So if this is cool I'll leave it, else I'll pull out perfect power bond and go make some new stuff up.
