cntrstrk14 Posted February 7, 2016 Posted February 7, 2016 • Renkin Hijutsu; Tansotate | Alchemy Secret Technique; Carbon Shield | 錬金秘術•炭素盾Type: Ninjutsu [steel | Alchem Hijutsu | Shield]Rank: SenninCost: 600 ChakraEffects: Used in the Response Phase or Main Phase. Creates up to six Shields in front of the chosen allies with 200 Health each. May target the same ally multiple times. If used in the Response Phase, user loses their Main Phase. May be used twice per battle.Description: Through his continued use of Alchemy, Alchem Syaoran has developed a new style of shield jutsu. While using this jutsu he forms an alchemic reaction in the ground or material nearby to create a thick circular shield of carbon via fire and earth manipulation. Along the edges of this circle of carbon will be placed a series of magnets that are then used to hold the shield aloft. The user will create a magnetic field around the shield, manipulating the magnets upon it to hold it up, and float the shield to its intended placed. Depending on the amount of focus and chakra used within this technique, the shield can be as weak and soft as pencil lead or as strong and hard as a diamond.Requirements: AlchemyPoints: 18 • Renkin Hijutsu; Gurafuin Joukaku | Alchemy Secret Technique; Graphene Bunker | 錬金秘術•石墨烯城郭Type: Ninjutsu [steel | Alchem Hijutsu | Group Barrier]Rank: SenninCost: 900 ChakraEffects: Used in the Response Phase. Creates a Barrier around the chosen ally and up to three (3) other allies with 1400 Health. User loses their Main Phase. May be used twice per battle.Description: Graphene is a one-atom-thick planar sheet of sp2-bonded carbon atoms that are densely packed in a honeycomb crystal lattice. It can be viewed as an atomic-scale chicken wire made of carbon atoms and their bonds. The name comes from GRAPHITE + -ENE; graphite itself consists of many graphene sheets stacked together. The carbon-carbon bond length in graphene is approximately 1.42 Å. Graphene is the basic structural element of all other graphitic materials including graphite, carbon nanotubes and fullerenes. It can also be considered as an infinitely large aromatic molecule, the limiting case of the family of flat polycyclic aromatic hydrocarbons called graphenes. Alchem Syaoran, after studying in depth research on graphene, decided to conduct a shielding experiment with the material. With using only a quarter inch thick piece of graphene, he was able to create a very powerful shielding technique that could block even the strongest of attacks. What else was amazing, was that because of the relatively low amount of resources needed to construct the dome like structure itself, it could easily be spread over very wide areas and across multiple people. Of course, this jutsu can only be constructed correctly with the help of alchemy, as the composition and construction of the elements is key to the jutsu's correct application. The dome that is formed when this technique is used is not rounded, but a strange curved dome made up of flat octagonal pieces.Requirements: AlchemyPoints: 13
cntrstrk14 Posted February 7, 2016 Author Posted February 7, 2016 Notes- Resubmissions, originals can be found here and here.- Reworked to follow new Barrier rules. Lots of rules text removed from effects because Barrier rules cover it all.- Here is a link to Alchemy for requirement reference.
Kouta Posted February 7, 2016 Posted February 7, 2016 (edited) the second one should cost 910, but I'm okay with it. approved P.S. Nice Harry Dresden you got goin on up there. Edited February 7, 2016 by Kouta
cntrstrk14 Posted May 10, 2016 Author Posted May 10, 2016 Moved back because the first one said Barrier in one place and Shield in another. Corrected all to Shield. Also the JP was half what it should be. Should be 18 because its two techniques in one.
Azure Posted May 10, 2016 Posted May 10, 2016 You were too excited over your cool pictures. It's okay. Approved.