Alchemy Series | Renkinjutsu Ichiwa | 錬金術一話

[cntrstrk14]

 

Alchemy Technique; North Wind | Renkinjutsu; Amihan | 錬金術•北風
Type: Ninjutsu [Ice | Alchem]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 220 Chakra
Damage: 42 per Strike
Effects: This attack has five strikes. The first and third strike afflict the target with 'Fazed' and the fifth strike afflicts the target with 'Stunned' for one (1) turn.
Description: The alchemist will condense and freeze the water particles in the air around them, shaping them into five crude spears of ice. With a flurry of movement they will send the barrage of ice spears at their opponent, cutting through the opposing ninja as well as the terrain around them.
Requirements: Alchemy
Points: 5
 
 

 

 

Alchemy Technique; Explosion Field | Renkinjutsu; Todoroki Gen | 錬金術•軣原
Type: Ninjutsu [Fire | Earth | Alchem]
Rank: Jounin
Cost: 320
Damage: 300
Effects: The target is afflicted with 'Confused' for three (3) turns. In addition, this attack also deals 15 damage area of effect separate strike with no other effects.
Description: With the use of alchemy, the performer of this technique stands in one spot with hands clasped together. As they channel their chakra into the ground around them, they create narrow tubes of earth that erupt out all across the battlefield, with a concentration around their primary target. Each of these containers of earth is filled with pure Nitroglycerin. As these containers make contact with the opponent, the impact causes the Nitroglycerin to explode, sending shrapnel in all directions. Though the most of the damage is contained around a single target, the shrapnel has a chance to damage additional targets on the field.
Requirements: Alchemy
Points: 7
 

[cntrstrk14]

Designer Notes

- Previous versions can be found here and here.

- Mostly just cleaning these up. 

- Adjusted North Wind to be 5 strikes instead of 2.

- Adjusted North Wind to distinguish what strikes deal effects in accordance with current rules. Previously gave status effects on x hits. Since on a 5 strike attack you have 5 chances to hit "once" it throws off cost. This is much more straightforward. 

- Changed the first element on Explosion Field.

- Japanese translation updates!

 

[Hardcore Skittlez]

North Wind: Approved

 

Explosion Field: I feel like the AoE should be a separate strike, but I'd like to hear how you're seeing it working with the current wording- is it aoe for everyone aside the first target? etc.

[cntrstrk14]

AoE for everyone, including the first target. I can clarify that.

[Hardcore Skittlez]

I'd suggest adding: In addition, this attack also deals a separate 15 damage as an area of effect with no other effects; this is a separate strike.

 

Or some similar wording that makes it explicit that the area of effect is its own strike. 

[wolfnin]

Approved

 

I'd also suggest adding in Skittz's suggestion of "this is a separate strike" to the second effect of Explosion Field. Since it can be a bit confusing at first glance. 

[cntrstrk14]

Made that small edit

[Rhapsody]

Approved.

 

@wolfnin come back to this and re app it.

[wolfnin]

Approved