Tw33dle Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 (edited) ~User Data~ Posting: Minimum once a weekTime Zone: US Central Time Zone ~Vital Statistics~ Name: Yamada, AoiClan: NoneBirthplace: Kumogakure no SatoCurrent Residence: Kumogakure no SatoAge: 15D.O.B.: July 11Sex: FemaleSexual Orientation: HeterosexualBlood Type: B-Specialty: Ninjutsu ~Appearance~ Height: 5’3”Weight: 150 lbsHair Color: Short Black Pixie Cut that covers her right eye.Eye Color: BlueSkin: TanPhysical Description: Aoi is of average build for someone her age. She has a narrow frame, thick eyelashes, and long legs. Aoi has a full-color half-sleeve tattoo on her right arm, and wears ruby red lipstick.Clothing: Aoi wears a traditional black medium, short-sleeved dress with frilly edges, fishnet stockings,and white thigh high boots. She uses her white Hitai-ate as a belt around her waist. Along with her lipstick stated above, she wears simple silver earrings, and has a simple silver nose ring. Edited December 7, 2017 by Tw33dle
Tw33dle Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 (edited) ~Persona~ Personality: Positive Traits: Friendly, Kind, Cheerful, Optimistic, Loyal Neutral Traits: IntrovertedNegative Traits: Blunt, Slow At her best, Aoi is seen by her peers as a someone who is kind and terminally cheerful. She is frequently seen with a smile on her face, often friendly, and willing to converse with anyone who starts a conversation with her. However, she often requires time by herself in order to recharge her emotional batteries. Aoi is also described at being blunt or direct; often speaking her mind without filtering her thoughts. Historically, her peers become frustrated with her because she often does not pay attention. She has a tendency to ask questions multiple times as she does not listen the first time it may be answered. She is often believed to be feeble minded, when in reality, she is slow to process certain information. Aoi tries her best to be avoid violence, and never kill anything unless she feels it is the only option. She rarely become angry. But when her loved ones are in danger, she will fight until she is unable to stand. Likes: Cute Boys With Facial Hair Her Hair Being Played With The “C” Word Salty Foods Traveling Anything That Reminds Her Of Her Grandmother. Dislikes: Unnecessary Violence Being Groped Tardiness Favorites: Food: BBQColor: Violet/EggplantMusic Genre: Chillstep/TranceBook Genre: RomanceHangout: The Breakfast Nook In Her Apartment Where She ReadsCatchphrase: “Want some fries with that salt?” Edited July 11, 2017 by Tw33dle
Tw33dle Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 (edited) ~Background~ Current Allegiance: Kumogakure no Sato Relationships: Father: Yamada, Ryuu (Dragon)[DECEASED] - A former Kumogakure Ninja who specialized in Kenjutsu. Ryuu was never seen without his sword, Burūdoragon (Blue Dragon). Ryuu died while on a mission protecting his village. It is said to be that the only things he loved more than his sword, were his wife, Yuki, and their unborn child. Mother: Yamada, Yuki (Happiness) [DECEASED] - While alive, Yuki was a server at a local BBQ restaurant in Kumogakure. During her pregnancy, she ate most of her meals while she was working at the restaurant. Aoi believes this to be the reason for her love of BBQ. Yuki died while giving birth to Aoi. Grandmother: Yamada, Wakana (Harmony/Play Music) [DECEASED] - Wakana was Aoi’s paternal grandmother, and primary caregiver for most of her life. Wakana worked as a manager in a BBQ restaurant until she retired. Once retired, she took to gardening. Wakana became ill shortly after Aoi reached age 15. After nine months, Wakana’s illness took her, leaving Aoi with no more living relatives. History: Ryuu and Yuki longed for child, and tired to have a child for two years. Finally, after two year, Yuki became pregnant. Once pregnant, she continued to work until it was time for her to have her child. However, 4 months before Aoi expected birth, Ryuu was sent on an A rank mission. On his mission, Ryuu encountered missing-nin who attacked him, killing each member of his team. When Yuki heard the news, she did all she could and collapsed to the ground. In response, her mother-in-law and co-workers promised to help raise her future child to ensure she grew up in a large family unit. During childbirth, Yuki experienced some complications, killing her in the process of Aoi’s birth. After she was born, Aoi was sent to live with her grandmother. Five years later, Aoi was still living with her grandmother, and being raised by Wakana and other employees of the BBQ restaurant. Aoi tended to be a bit of townboy, often playing shinobi with other children around her own age. After the death of her son, Wakana aimed to shield Aoi’s interest in becoming a shinobi one day. In said attempt, Wakana brought in Aoi to work within the restaurant in any odd jobs she could find for me. However, Aoi was still a child and would often get in trouble. While working at the restaurant, Aoi would often crawl on the floor under the tables. One day while crawling on the floors, she overheard shinobi discussing plans of some mission. She was unable to hear in detail what they were saying. Instead, she just fantasized about becoming a shinobi herself one day. Less than a year later, the Kumogakure Invasion occurred. She did not truly understand what was happening. She would overhear villagers sharing stories and rumors that had heard from the battlefront of each nation being invaded. At the time, she did not care if they were true or false, because in her mind the shinobi were powerful and fighting for a cause. Her grandmother tried her best to shield Aoi from everything, but again, was unable to stop the imagination of her granddaughter. No matter how old Aoi became, Wakana prohibited Aoi from joining the academy. Until one day, Wakana changed her mind and enrolled her in the academy. Aoi states this was the happiest day of her life. However, Wakana knew she was dying, and decided to do so to bring her granddaughter some happiness before experiencing inevitable sadness. Six months before Aoi would finish up in the academy, Wakana died. Aoi almost lost the will to live. She knew that her grandmother would want her to continue doing what made her happy. She emotionally retreated from world, but put on a smile. She promised she would be terminally delightful. Thus, causing Aoi to smile and try to be positive as much as possible. She knew her grandmother would want her to be happy. She continued on striving to become the greatest shinobi she could, for her decrease grandmother... Edited July 11, 2017 by Tw33dle
Tw33dle Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 (edited) Statistics Death Bonus: NoneRank: Gennin Level: 12TXP: 4899/5200 Next Level: 325/400Total Stat Points: 1200/1700 Health 100 Stamina 80 Chakra 200 Taijutsu 100 Defense: 100 Ninjutsu 140 Genjutsu 0 Concentration 100 [+40] Speed 300 Accuracy 180 Evasion 120 ~Modifiers~ Taijutsu: Taijutsu Damage; +25 Basic Attack Damage; +15 Ranged Attacks; +10 Ninjutsu: Ninjutsu Damage; +35 Genjutsu: ~Sealed~ Defense: Damage Reduction; -25 Concentration: Genjutsu Dodge Change; +5% [+2%] Critical Strike with Taijutsu Chance; +1% Ninjutsu Cost Reduction; -2% Speed: Speed Percentile; 250 Accuracy: Physical Attack Chance; +18% Ranged Attack Damage; +18 Evasion: Evasion Chance; +12% Edited April 5, 2018 by Tw33dle Add Modifiers
Tw33dle Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 (edited) ~Skills~ Total Points: 18Total Spent: 8Remaining: 8 2; Character Creation 1; Merciful 2; Sealed Genjutsu 2; Self Defense 10; Level up/Character Compatibility [1-10] 1; Level up [11-12] Spent: 2; Quick Learner 2; Inner Calm 2; Second Wind0; Subtle Elements [Lightning] [Free Village Skill]1; Shiva, The Destroyer [-1; Path of the Shaman]1; Path of the Shaman 0; Elemental Speciality: Earth [Locked] 0; Elemental Speciality: Fire [Locked] Hindering Skills: Quote Merciful: Whenever you would deal the finishing blow in combat to an opponent, you must let them live with one HP left, only applies once a battle. Ranks: 1 Quote Sealed Genjutsu: Cannot use any Genjutsu techniques and may not have any skills (positive or hindering) that give negative effects towards Genjutsu abilities Ranks: 1 Quote Self Defense: User does not get a turn in battle until an opponent has a turn. If all characters have this skill, ignore the effects. Ranks: 1 General: Quote Quick Learner: You may gain +10% EXP From Training, Battles, Gamemaster and Mission rewards. Bonus EXP is not included in this. Rank: 1 Quote Inner Calm: Chakra-based techniques cost 5 less chakra (Minimum of 5 chakra must always be paid however). Ranks: 2 Quote Second Wind: Once per battle, if the user's health would be reduced to zero or less, the user's health is reduced to 1 instead. If the user's health would be reduced below -25% of its total then this skill does not come into effect. Rank: 1 Ninjutsu: Quote Shiva, The Destroyer: Ninjutsu from the user will deal an additional 20% base damage and cost 10% less Chakra, rounded up. This multiplier, in this case and this case only, allows you to break the base damage cap. The taker of this skill may not use Genjutsu and may not have any skills that give negative effects towards Genjutsu abilities. Ranks: 1 Path Skill(s): Quote The Path of the Shaman Effect: Character gains 1 extra Jutsu Point every other level.Nature's Path:Rainbow Chakra: "Combinatorial; (element)" skills of Tier 2 or higher cost one less Skill Point. You must always, however, pay a minimum of 1 skill point.Earthen Rage: May purchase 'Shiva, The Destroyer' for 1 skill point. Elemental Specialty: Quote Primary: Earth Specialty [Locked] Description: Naturally aligned to the element of the earth, this character has a natural tact at using and manipulating earth to their bidding. This chakra is thick and well suited for the manipulation of physical jutsu, making it perfect for the creation of barriers. Effect: User has a -15% to base damage (rounded up) for incoming Ninjutsu -or- Taijutsu attacks (choose one when this skill is learned). Earth Jutsu cost one less JP to a minimum of 1. This effect may stack with other skills, to a maximum of -2 JP per technique. User receives the skill 'Subtle Elements; Earth' for free and may purchase an additional rank of 'Subtle Elements'. If the user already has 'Subtle Elements; Earth', they may have their points refunded. Requirements: You get one specialty at level 30 and another one at level 80. - Level 30*: 10 post Jounin training. - Level 80: 5 post training. Cost: 0 Quote Secondary: Fire Speciality [Locked] Spoiler Description: Naturally aligned to the element of the fire, this character has a natural tact at using and manipulating fire to their bidding. The user's chakra is very fierce and can flow through the body, giving it heightened reaction speed and agility, much like the flickering of a flame. Effect: User has a +10% chance to dodge physical strikes and +5% chance to dodge non-physical strikes. Fire Jutsu cost one less JP to a minimum of 1. This effect may stack with other skills, to a maximum of -2 JP per technique. User receives the skill 'Subtle Elements; Fire' for free and may purchase an additional rank of 'Subtle Elements'. If the user already has 'Subtle Elements; Fire', they may have their points refunded. Requirements: You get one specialty at level 30 and another one at level 80. - Level 30*: 10 post Jounin training. - Level 80: 5 post training. Cost: 0 Skills learned from Jounins: (You can learn up to 4 SP worth of skills for free, if a Jounin teaches you them. Link to where you learned the skill.) Edited April 5, 2018 by Tw33dle
Tw33dle Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 (edited) ~Techniques~ Jutsu Points: 3 Used : 22 Available : 21 Total +4 JP Character Creation +12 JP Level Up +2 JP Path of the Shaman +4 JP Rinne Festival Gennin: Shockwave | Shōgekiha Type: Ninjutsu [Kumogakure; Lightning] Rank: Gennin Cost: 60 Chakra Damage: 60 Description: You do 3 handseals and you begin to hear an echo-like noise that sounds like it's rumbling horribly. The area around you then turns pure white for half of a second from the lightning rushing toward your opponent. It's a powerful jutsu that is normally taught to new genin of Kumo.Costs: 3 Academy Student Body Replacement Technique | Kawarimi no JutsuType: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: x Chakra Effect: This technique may be performed as a Free Action in the Response Phase following a failed dodge roll. When determining the cost of this technique "x" is equivalent to the cost of 1 basic attack or small weapon attack that the user failed to dodge. The damage and effects of that basic attack or small weapon attack are negated. The user may take no action in the Setup Phase or Main Phase on the turn this technique is used. This technique has a 5% chance to fail. This technique may be performed 1 time per battle. Description: A life-saving technique for most young shinobi, the Body Replacement Jutsu has been a staple in academy learning for many years. By utilizing their ability to manipulate chakra, with quick movement, a skillful shinobi is capable of switching their position with another object to evade damage. By creating a simple optical illusion, the user of the Kawarimi no Jutsu can make it appear as though they were damaged or even killed by the opponent's attack. Some ninja become extremely adept in the usage of this technique, and have even been known to swap places with hazardous materials to trap their enemies.Points: Free Upon Creation Clone Technique | Bunshin no JutsuType: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 5x Chakra Effect: This technique may be used in the Setup Phase or Main Phase. When determining the cost of this technique "x" is considered to be the number of "Clones" created by the user and may never be greater than 2. "Clones" have 1 Health and 1% of the user's other statistics. "Clones" are not physical, and may not use items, techniques or attack during their turn. The user of this technique gains +20 Evasion or +20 Accuracy for every "Clone" on the battlefield. The effects of 'Clones' may be ignored by any character with heightened senses (i.e; Byakugan, Path of the Sensor, Inuzuka Smell Tracker, etc). This technique may be used in the Setup Phase 1 time per battle. Description: A technique that most students are required to be proficient in before they can graduate from the academy, the Bunshin no Jutsu is the most basic of the myriad of clone techniques that exist in the world. By properly molding their chakra, the user is capable of creating near perfect replicas of themselves. Unlike most bunshinjutsu, the basic clone technique does not produce physical clones but creates something more akin to a projected image, which is a real image that has no form. The Clone Technique is considered an E-Ranked jutsu, and is not very powerful, but with practice and ingenuity many shinobi have come to use it in masterful ways. Most often stalling by hiding out among their clones, or setting themselves up for a strong offensive.Points: Free Upon Creation Transformation Technique | Henge no JutsuType: Ninjutsu Rank: Academy Student Cost: 10 Chakra Effect: During any situation in which a character with this technique would need to calculate their "Visibility Score", they may use this technique to reduce their "Visibility Score" by -10%. "Visibility Score" reduction caused by this technique may be ignored by any character with heightened senses (i.e; Byakugan, Path of the Sensor, Inuzuka Smell Tracker, etc). Description: The Transformation Technique is a time-honored staple of nearly every shinobi academy the world over. Its concept and execution are both extremely basic, making it a perfect training technique for young students. By molding chakra around their body, the user of the Transformation Jutsu is able to temporarily take on the physical characteristics of another person. Though the Henge no Jutsu rarely offers a perfect disguise, clever ninja have been using it for hundreds of years to confound their foes.Points: Free Upon Creation Jutsu learned from Jounins: Edited April 5, 2018 by Tw33dle
Tw33dle Posted July 6, 2017 Author Posted July 6, 2017 (edited) ~Inventory~ (9.4 Slots Used l 15 Slots Total) Armor: Head:Neck:Body:Waist: Hitai-ateForearm(s):Hand(s): Clan Signet Ring (Yamada) [+40 Concentration]Thigh(s):Calve(s):Feet: Weapons: Main Weapon:Sub Weapon: Item Listing Items on Hand: 3 Shuriken, 3 Kunai, and 4 Senbon Needles 2x Training Manual - Rinne Festival 2x Mission Promotion - Rinne Festival Item: 2x Training Manual Quote Quantity: 2 Size: 2 Item Slots Type: Consumable Item Effect: When used, the user may increase their total Experience gains by +50% for the next 5000 Experience. Description: The are countless editions of training texts that assist young shinobi in learning the ways of the nindo. These particular volumes are of the highest quality and are chock full of incredibly useful information for even the most experienced of ninja. By cross-referencing these materials, a ninja can enhance their training and get the very best results out of their hard-work. Cost: 両0 • Item: 2x Mission Promotion Spoiler Quantity: 2Size: .2 Item SlotsType: Consumable ItemEffect: This item may be used when completing a Mission to treat the rewards of that Mission as if they were 1 Rank higher than normal. Description: This leaflet of paperwork was obviously obtained by some less than reputable means. In most situations, only a jōnin of your particular village ever gets their hands on these documents that are used to note an elevation of danger or expected work in the field. You could use these as they're intended, or... really get paid the next time you have to pick up trash in the park. Cost: 両0 Items in Vault: None Money on Hand: $445Money in Bank: 0 Exp Earned: 2,000 exp; Character Compatibility 400 exp [+40 l Quick Learner]; Babysitting 550 exp [+55 l Quicker Learner]; ]Village Registration 800 exp [+80 l Quick Learner]; Urgent Delivery 885 exp [+89 l Quick Learner]; Cathedral & Pearls Transaction Log: +125 Character Creation +100 Babysitting +120 Village Registration +100 Mystery Gift +200 Urgent Delivery Mission Log: Rank D: Babysitting: Twin Nightmare - 400 exp and $100 Village Registration - 550 exp and $120 Urgent Delivery - 800 exp and $200 Cathedral & Pearls - 974 exp Rank C:Rank B:Rank A:Rank S: Edited April 5, 2018 by Tw33dle
Cellar Door Posted July 6, 2017 Posted July 6, 2017 I'm not sure you can be outgoing and introverted at the same time. Seems a bit paradoxical to me. Also, you're using outdated versions of the academy techniques.
cntrstrk14 Posted July 7, 2017 Posted July 7, 2017 (I am outgoing but introverted in real life, as long as its what he meant I don't think they are necessarily exclusive.)
Tw33dle Posted July 7, 2017 Author Posted July 7, 2017 As for the difference between Introversion and Outgoing, the two are not quite the same thing. Introversion refers to someone preferring small groups and requires time to recharge their emotional energy. Outgoing refers to someone who is friendly and willing to talk with others. However, I have updated the wording in the personality so it makes more sense and updated the Academy Techniques.
wolfnin Posted July 8, 2017 Posted July 8, 2017 Outgoing does not equal extrovert. Most extroverts are out going, but the two are not synonymous. Other than that everything looks good, Approved.
Tw33dle Posted July 11, 2017 Author Posted July 11, 2017 (edited) Ignore this comment. Was trying to edit formatting and screwed up. It's been fixed now. Edited July 11, 2017 by Tw33dle Trying to edit, screwed up :/
Cloudnine Posted July 12, 2017 Posted July 12, 2017 Did you want to do a character compatibility transfer from your older character? You can carry over some exp and $$. It's totally fine if you want to start fresh too!
Tw33dle Posted July 12, 2017 Author Posted July 12, 2017 Oh, forgot about that. Can I do that Hisame Rin?
Cloudnine Posted July 12, 2017 Posted July 12, 2017 Yup! That's 100% exp and the money and money value of items from your Hisame.
Tw33dle Posted July 12, 2017 Author Posted July 12, 2017 Which items? All I have are the starting shrunken, kunai and senbon needles.
Cloudnine Posted July 12, 2017 Posted July 12, 2017 Meh, don't think those count for much. Just go with the 100% exp transfer and start with $125 then.
Tw33dle Posted July 12, 2017 Author Posted July 12, 2017 Okay. Do I need to add a special note in my creation sheet?
Cloudnine Posted July 12, 2017 Posted July 12, 2017 Under your exp log, just link to Rin's character sheet, state the exp amount, give the reason as Character Compatibility.
Tw33dle Posted July 12, 2017 Author Posted July 12, 2017 Thanks I'll do that tomorrow when I'm on the computer. I'll let you know after I do.
Tw33dle Posted July 12, 2017 Author Posted July 12, 2017 Okay, I added the exp, jutsu points, stats, and skill points from the Character Compatibility. Let me know if I did it correctly.
Leon Posted July 13, 2017 Posted July 13, 2017 Under the "EXP Earned" log can you do 2000 instead of 500 please? Other than that everything else looks good!
Tw33dle Posted July 13, 2017 Author Posted July 13, 2017 Edited. Thanks for catching that. Now I just need the two approvals, right?
Leon Posted July 13, 2017 Posted July 13, 2017 (edited) You should just need one after mine, thanks for the edit! Edited July 13, 2017 by Leon