Zereon Posted July 23, 2008 Posted July 23, 2008 (edited) Weapon Type: Fire Amplifier Size: Implant Level: N/A Special: This weapon is made of two large metal pipes either implanted in your forearms or lower legs, leaving small holes in the bottom of your feet or in your palms. Therefore, the weapon can only be destroyed by breaking those specific body parts. The arms and legs can only be healed by repairing or removing these implants after being damaged. This weapon is also capable of making long ranged fire attacks that works like kicks and punches but uses chakra and ninjutsu modifier instead of stamina and tajutsu. Description: A character with these implants have holes either on his feet or palms made from metal pipes that sticks out just to the equal of the skin surface. On the inside the metal pipes are connected with the chakra flow of the user. In these pipes the user creates and stores gases that ignite with the fire jutsus he/she uses. The implant also has a self-igniter that makes it possible to use this weapon for small long ranged attacks, in the form of fireballs, with the use of chakra. Cost: $150 and requires a rest period of two RL days after the surgery. Player has to RP the stay at the hospital with at least 1 post and cannot train, fight, or take missions for the duration of the rest period, unless the user gets this when you create your character, although a background story is required if so is the case. Restriction: Requires permission from me (Sereon). Edited July 22, 2010 by Zereon
Cellar Door Posted July 23, 2008 Posted July 23, 2008 So... essentially this just allows you to use Ninjutsu/Chakra for basic attacks?
Zereon Posted July 23, 2008 Author Posted July 23, 2008 Indeed, with some cool RP purposes. And I'm later creating techniques for this one.
Cellar Door Posted July 23, 2008 Posted July 23, 2008 It should probably be considered a level one weapon, rather than "N/A" But other than that it looks pretty good.
Maelstrom Posted July 23, 2008 Posted July 23, 2008 (edited) The 'N/A' portion is fine, since it basically only allows the user to make ranged or melee basic attacks of the fire element while using chakra and ninjutsu instead of stamina and taijutsu. I'm fine with it, for the most part, but I think a set a number of words describing the bearers general stay at the hospital, and perhaps adaptation/implementation of the implants themselves might be a necessary touch. Edit: The above only applies to anyone obtaining the implant after character creation, of course. Edited July 23, 2008 by Maelstrom
Zereon Posted July 23, 2008 Author Posted July 23, 2008 Okay added your things Mealstorm. I think 10 posts should be enough.
Maelstrom Posted July 23, 2008 Posted July 23, 2008 You can lower that quite a bit. I'd say 5 posts max, considering it's a simple procedure. Actually, considering the restrictions/requirements I found under Khaos' Sound Amplifier, which is essentially the same deal, I'd say change it to; 'Requires a rest period of two RL day after the surgery. Player can RP but cannot train, fight, or take missions for the duration of the rest period.'
Zereon Posted July 24, 2008 Author Posted July 24, 2008 Thank you Lets hope there will be more approvals.
Azure Posted July 24, 2008 Posted July 24, 2008 Is there a posting requirement for the surgery in a hospital?
Zereon Posted July 24, 2008 Author Posted July 24, 2008 Not anymore. Since I changed to what Mael said.
Azure Posted July 24, 2008 Posted July 24, 2008 Ok, but personally I think you should at least have to RP getting to the hospital and make life make sense >.>
Zereon Posted July 24, 2008 Author Posted July 24, 2008 Okay I've made it so that you have to RP the stay at the hospital.
cntrstrk14 Posted July 27, 2008 Posted July 27, 2008 The price for a weapon that does ninjutsu based basic attacks will need to be a little higher than that. With the restrictions and problems that you put in with it though, I could let it get away at $150.
Zereon Posted July 27, 2008 Author Posted July 27, 2008 (edited) The price for a weapon that does ninjutsu based basic attacks will need to be a little higher than that. With the restrictions and problems that you put in with it though, I could let it get away at $150. Hmm... I think that's a little unfair considering the Air Pressure device implant does pretty much the same and still go for $100. Could we at least meet at $125 so a new character could get it? I'll change it to $125 and you'll have to say what you think. Edited July 27, 2008 by Sereon
Rei Posted July 27, 2008 Posted July 27, 2008 Your argument would carry more weight if the air pressure device were a recent creation. Nevertheless, it was posted two years ago when we could've been more lenient on creation costs.
cntrstrk14 Posted July 27, 2008 Posted July 27, 2008 What Rei said. If he wanted to rebuy that item we would reprice it for him.
Zereon Posted July 27, 2008 Author Posted July 27, 2008 Okay. then I know. I've changed it to what you wanted. I don't want to an ass about it. And you had good reasons.
Baromosa Posted July 27, 2008 Posted July 27, 2008 If you really want those implants now, take the successful skill for the extra money. ^.^
Zereon Posted July 28, 2008 Author Posted July 28, 2008 Yeah but still 2 skill point can be much. But yeah I probably have too. Anyway as I said I've changed it now.
Zereon Posted July 30, 2008 Author Posted July 30, 2008 Alright! Now this only needs to get moved I suppose.
