Terrick Sukrai Posted December 21, 2007 Posted December 21, 2007 (edited) Name: Zansatsu no Shippudan: Maelstrom of Slaughter Type: Taijutsu Rank: Jounin Cost: 150 stamina Damage: 120 Effects: AoE, 12 Bleeding damage for three turns. Description: A much deadlier version of the Nawari no Mai, this form of jutsu relies on the brute strength of the wielder to manipulate the chains of his claws, alternately wrapping up targets then withdrawing the chains to simulate a chainsaw's effects, simply whipping them across the vulnerable parts of his targets, or even using the tips of the chains to stab into an opponent before using one of the other methods. Due to the nature of the weapon and the length of the chains, it allows the ninja wielding this technique to hit multiple targets over a broad area. Points: 4, (Evolving 2 if you have Nawari no Mai) Edited December 29, 2007 by Terrick Sukrai
Eechi-go Posted December 21, 2007 Posted December 21, 2007 Ignoring the fact it doesn't have a description yet, it costs 149.
Eechi-go Posted December 23, 2007 Posted December 23, 2007 This is an AoE, therefore, the chuunin ratio is 3:1
Terrick Sukrai Posted December 23, 2007 Author Posted December 23, 2007 Aw crap... forgot to put that on the bleeding yeah... my bad
Terrick Sukrai Posted December 25, 2007 Author Posted December 25, 2007 Okay, forgot that Nawari no Mai was already Chuunin, so I've changed it to Jounin. Cost for Jounin lvl techs is 1:2, and AoE is 2:1, making it a 2:2 or 1:1 cost ratio total. That better?
Atlas Posted January 9, 2008 Posted January 9, 2008 Looks pretty good to me, no glaring errors atleast. Good job.
Terrick Sukrai Posted January 28, 2008 Author Posted January 28, 2008 *Takes a running start and boots the thread at the mods*
