Terrick Sukrai Posted June 25, 2012 Posted June 25, 2012 (edited) Name: Seireijutsu: Akumabarai (Spirit Technique: Exorcism) Type: Spirit or Ninjutsu Rank: Chunin Cost: 140 chakra Damage: 70 Effects: Target is Stunned for one turn. This technique deals critical hit damage to nonhuman targets. (Demons, summons, etc.) This technique cannot be used against human targets, though it can target nonhuman entities inside human beings. Description: Utilizing prayers while invoking sacred names and rituals, a practitioner can cause a target excruciating pain as well as preventing them from lashing out at others. Many priests are taught this technique as a means of defence. Points: 5 Requirements: User must have spiritual training in order to utilize this jutsu, represented by either having a skill stating so, or by training for at least 1000 words with someone who does. Edited July 19, 2012 by Terrick Sukrai
Azure Posted June 30, 2012 Posted June 30, 2012 The base cost would be 106. You would still need to pay for doing the extra damage and that depends on what damage it is. Total damage or base damage? If it's base damage, then raise the cot to 150. Also, drop the potential second turn of stun. Stun's duration is limited at one turn.
Terrick Sukrai Posted June 30, 2012 Author Posted June 30, 2012 Added in a clause I forgot to use before. Severely cuts down what it's used for, in order to balance out the bonus damage.
cntrstrk14 Posted July 2, 2012 Posted July 2, 2012 I would rather see this say "considered a critical hit" so that you cannot get 150% damage twice. Also, before I weigh in on pricing can you please remind me where the spirit comes from? Is it a clan based skill or is it a character specific?
Terrick Sukrai Posted July 2, 2012 Author Posted July 2, 2012 Spirit comes from here. It is essentially a different form of ninjutsu that cannot normally be used offensively, but is used in the setup phase. Used against non-human targets however, it is used in the main phase offensively as per ninjutsu rules. (Using the Spirit stat vs their Defence stat to determine damage.)
Azure Posted July 19, 2012 Posted July 19, 2012 I feel like this should cost 140 because it gives auto critical. Even though you can't use it on most targets it still needs a cost raise.
Rei Posted September 2, 2012 Posted September 2, 2012 Sounds fine. Although bold the “cannot target humans” clause. Approved.