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Terrick Sukrai

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Name: Seireijutsu: Akumabarai (Spirit Technique: Exorcism)

Type: Spirit or Ninjutsu

Rank: Chunin

Cost: 140 chakra

Damage: 70

Effects: Target is Stunned for one turn. This technique deals critical hit damage to nonhuman targets. (Demons, summons, etc.) This technique cannot be used against human targets, though it can target nonhuman entities inside human beings.

Description: Utilizing prayers while invoking sacred names and rituals, a practitioner can cause a target excruciating pain as well as preventing them from lashing out at others. Many priests are taught this technique as a means of defence.

Points: 5

Requirements: User must have spiritual training in order to utilize this jutsu, represented by either having a skill stating so, or by training for at least 1000 words with someone who does.

Edited by Terrick Sukrai
Posted

The base cost would be 106. You would still need to pay for doing the extra damage and that depends on what damage it is. Total damage or base damage? If it's base damage, then raise the cot to 150. Also, drop the potential second turn of stun. Stun's duration is limited at one turn.

Posted

Added in a clause I forgot to use before. Severely cuts down what it's used for, in order to balance out the bonus damage.

Posted

I would rather see this say "considered a critical hit" so that you cannot get 150% damage twice. Also, before I weigh in on pricing can you please remind me where the spirit comes from? Is it a clan based skill or is it a character specific?

Posted

Spirit comes from here. It is essentially a different form of ninjutsu that cannot normally be used offensively, but is used in the setup phase. Used against non-human targets however, it is used in the main phase offensively as per ninjutsu rules. (Using the Spirit stat vs their Defence stat to determine damage.)

Posted

I feel like this should cost 140 because it gives auto critical. Even though you can't use it on most targets it still needs a cost raise.

Posted

Sounds fine. Although bold the “cannot target humans” clause. Approved.

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