Specialty Series; Mk2

[cntrstrk14]

This first one is a resubmission due to the new rules.

Secret Fire Type; Shield of the Fire Goddess (Katon Hijutsu; Nantosuelta no Toku)
Type: Ninjutsu (Fire)
Rank: Sennin
Cost: y Chakra + 90 Chakra (Optional; See Effect)
Damage: n/a
Effects: Used in the Response Phase. Negates the effects and damage of any Ninjutsu attack. To find the cost ‘y' you start by paying ‘x' chakra, which is the total damage of the technique inclusive of modifiers. You then subtract from ‘x' your Ninjutsu modifier, and you have ‘y'. Total cost cannot go lower than zero. If the attack is a melee Ninjutsu (cause the opponent to get within 5 feet of the user) the user may pay an additional 90 chakra to cause the opponent to be ‘Burned' for 3 turns. User looses their main phase. May be used to shield an ally in battle, if your turn falls between the one where they are attacked and their own turn. Sacrifice your response phase to do so, you do not loose your main phase. Does not work on Forbidden or Sealing level jutsu. Usable twice per battle.
Description: The use of fire as a means of destruction has been around since ancient times. The fierce power of the flame destroying that which it touches time and time again. Alchem Syaoran saw this, and wanting to use his power only to protect, created this jutsu with the intent to use the power of fire to protect his allies. Concentrating his chakra into the oxygen near the target, Syaoran makes a sudden and violent ignition of the air to create a momentary shield of flames. Timing and control are key for this shield, as the explosion must be preformed away from the target, or else it would just cause to hurt them.
Restrictions:
- Elemental Specialty; Fire
Points: 7
 
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Secret Earth Type; Army of the Fallen Stone (Doton Hijutsu; Guntai no Iwagakure Haigun)
Type: Ninjutsu (Earth)
Rank: Sennin
Cost: 50x
Damage: n/a
Effects: Creates x clones on field. Clones have 75% of the user‘s Accuracy, 1 HP and 25% the user's other stats. Minimum of 5, maximum of 20 clones. Clones are not subject to be hit by attacks that miss the user. These clones cannot use weapons the original had. Every clone has a set of 10 kunai and one level 1 medium weapon.
Description: A secret Ninjutsu passed down through the most powerful and respected ninja of the Country of Earth. It is a secret jutsu that allows the user to create their own specialized army out of the soil itself. This cloning technique differs from most because the clones do not actually resemble the user, and because of such they cannot be confused with him. Each clone is clearly made of stone, a mixture of gray and brown, and each one is separate from the others, having different weaponry and clothing as if each was modeled after a real person. It is said that when this technique was first developed it was made so that those who had already fallen in battle could once again fight alongside their comrades.
Restrictions:
- Elemental Specialty; Earth
- Must be a Sennin of Iwagakure no Sato
Points: 6

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Phasing Thunder God (Imoshinai Hiraishin no Jutsu)
Type: Ninjutsu [Personal]
Rank: Sennin
Cost: 150 Chakra
Damage: n/a
Effects: Used in the response phase dodges all attacks aimed at the user this turn. Usable 3 times per battle. User loses their main phase. Must have an object with Seal; Jutsu formula (術式, "Jutsu-shiki") placed on it in possession.
Description: Through the application of Forbidden Art #14; Flying Thunder God Technique (Hiraishin no Jutsu), the user phases themselves out of existence on this plane for a duration of time. Within this time the user is within the plane of the summons, where the legendary and mythical beings that ninja summon live. When this technique is used, the user leaves behind some item with Seal; Jutsu formula (術式, "Jutsu-shiki") upon it, and when returning use that item to guide them back. The time that can be spent within the summon plane is limited, as they do not actually fully exist, their body only being projected into this realm. Their existence is actually being stretched between the two worlds, trying to ricochet back to its own plane. With practice this time can be extended, but only through extensive use of this type of technique.
Restrictions:
- Forbidden Art #14; Flying Thunder God Technique (Hiraishin no Jutsu)
- Seal; Jutsu formula (術式, "Jutsu-shiki")
Points: 3

Edited January 28, 2016 by cntrstrk14

[Azure]

Approved.

[Kouta]

Whoa now...hold the phone for a second nappers.

Fire Shield Dealio:

-- Your math is very strange... Get X, which is generally some very large number of damage. Then subtract it from your Ninjutsu Modifier. You know what? Your Ninijutsu Modifier is usually a number no larger than 1 or 2 hundred. What if X is bigger than your ninjutsu mod? You pay Negative Chakra to use the jutsu (Meaning you'd gain chakra when you use it)? I need some explanation here, because that makes little sense.

Earthy Clone Dealio:

-- Again, your costing methods fail you. I think nearly ALL clones are underpriced, but then, I'll bring that up in the Admin section later. Right now I'm talking about your clone. Take a gander at this clone jutsu:

Sand Clone (Suna Bunshin no Jutsu)

Type: Ninjutsu (Sand)

Rank: Chuunin

Cost: 50 per clone

Effect:: Each Sand Clone has 1/10 stats of the user, but only 1hp. They are automatically hit by any attack that includes them as a target (they get no dodge roll).

Description: The clones of sand are quite obviously not the original and pose no threat, but they will eagerly throw themselves between their creator and harm to keep them safe, often proving a hassle to get by.

Points: 3

Now, these clones are auto hit, they only get 10% of all stats, and have 1 HP, and they cost 50 chakra. I understand the entire "Higher Rank" bit, but for a clone that is more than Twice as Powerful (over 7 times more in the case of Accuracy), and DOESN'T get auto-smashed by jutsu, 30 chakra is far too cheap...

[cntrstrk14]

Well the idea is that you start with a larger number than the regular negation technique. Usually it is based on base damage or cost of the technique, but by making it base + modifiers you start at the largest. Then you subtract your ninjutsu mod from that number, so you are running the risk that you will be paying more than the base damage of the technique. So you seem to have that right, I should probably state that you cannot go negative on the price, I will put a minimum cost on it, though I doubt I will ever use it in said situation because I will probably take near to no damage from the attack anyways since the enemy mod/ base damage is so low...

As for the clones, I was actually basing them off this clone...

Soil Clone (Iwa Bunshin no Jutsu)

Type: Ninjutsu (Earth)

Rank: Chuunin

Cost: 75 per clone (max of 3 clones on the field)

Effect:: Each Soil Clone has 1/4 stats of the user, but only 1hp. They are automatically hit by any attack that includes them as a target (they get no dodge roll).

Description: In similar fashion with any other clone technique, Iwa Bunshin No Jutsu can make up to several clones made out of soil from the ground. Used to trick the opponent in a clever way. When the opponent hits one of these clones, it turns back into soil but latches onto the opponent, thus hindering his/her movement.

Points: 3

I am all for upping the cost to say, 50 or so per clone.

Also, that is not Nappers, that is Azure

[cntrstrk14]

Bump, new technique added.

[Azure]

Are you calling me the second Nappers? o.o;

Anyway, after going through these [again] I'll approve again.

[Rei]

Approved

[Cellar Door]

Afflicts Burned: Dead