Pwnzie Posted December 31, 2015 Posted December 31, 2015 (edited) Kowaredamaru | Broken Twig | 壊れ枝丸 Type: Enchanted Greatsword Size: Large Level: 10 Special Abilities: Soul Drinker Effect: With each successful strike of this weapon, a Soul Shard is generated, which increases the total damage from this sword by 5% per Soul Shard currently stored within the blade. [This may stack to a maximum of 5 Soul Shards.] [soul Shards are reset at the beginning of each battle to Zero.] [This ability cannot stack with Attributes that raise base or total damage] Cost: $500 Terror Conduit Effect: If the target of an attack with this weapon is currently under the effects of Fear stage 1-4, the user gains a 2x% critical strike chance when attacking with this weapon. Where X is equal to the stage of fear currently affecting the target of the attack. Cost: $400 Attributes: Unique | Indestructible | Lightened Craft | Chakra Blade | Inlaid Element; Smoke Description: Kowaredamaru is a mythical enchanted great sword, its true origin and how it came to be are unknown and have been lost to the history pages of the past, it laid dormant, untouched by human hands for hundreds of years until Hayashi Tetsuo came about it on his search for a different legendary artifact. He had heard rumors about someone stumbling upon the location of the world tree, the true location of which is known by few people, thats when the rumors flew out of control, talking about things like the fountain of youth and immortality, which Tetsuo didn't care about since it was likely false, it was the item that was mentioned with it that caught his attention. Known simply as, Planeshaper, the fabled emerald green steeled great sword had a bloody reputation that it had carved itself throughout the past, its last known owner hid the blade hundreds of years ago when he could no longer control its power, and it remained hidden this way until Tetsuo stumbled upon the cavern it resided in hidden in the depths of the kumogakure mountain ranges underground tunnel system. One of the most fascinating points of the blade came after Tetsuo accidentally poured some of his chakra into it, the hilt begun oozing smoke, Tetsuos chakra inside of the blade was giving off a greenish glow from all of its edges, this could certainly come in handy. Cost: $1,620 Indestructible Your weapon has been finely crafted of the most resilient materials available. Even if wounded in battle, it can easily be repaired for use again without any knowledge of blacksmithing. Effect: If an effect would 'destroy' this equipment, that equipment is instead rendered unusable for the remainder of the battle, after which it may be used normally. n/a $50 Chakra Blade You can manipulate your blade too react from the strength of your chakra instead of your stamina. This involves the shape and make of the weapon, as it is an entirely different style of fighting. Effect: Attacks made with this weapon cost chakra instead of stamina n/a $50 Unique This weapon is the only one of its kind in the entire world, hand crafted and designed to only be manufactured once. Effect: Only one of this item may exist at any time within the RP. n/a $50 Inlaid Element; [Smoke Element] Effect: This weapon's damage is now considered to be of Smoke Element. This ability may only be applied once per weapon. Restrictions: X element may not be greater than a tier 1 Combinatorial Element. May not be taken with any elements that have requirements aside the Subtle Elements skills without explicit Staff Approval. Cost: 100 Ryo Attribute: Lightened Craft Weapon: All Large Weapons Description: Crafted from lighter materials, the weapon possessed by the user does not bear the weight of other weapons. It is light, almost like a feather, making its swing effortless. Effect: Large Weapons with this ability now cost a a certain ratio when you are attacking with it (see chart below) Stamina : Weapon Level Genin - 1:1 Chuunin - 4:5 Jounin - 2:3 Kage - 1:2 Cost: $200 Cost Breakdown: $270 (Level 10 Large) + $50 (Indestructible) + $200 (Lightened Craft) + $50 (Chakra Blade) + $500 (Soul Drinker) + $400 Terror Conduit +$50 UNique + $100 Inlaid Element Smoke= $1,620 Edited January 25, 2016 by Pwnzie
cntrstrk14 Posted January 19, 2016 Posted January 19, 2016 Soul Drinker: $500 seems fair. Twice as much as Razor Edge so that it applies to total damage + a potential extra 5%. I would mention that this cannot stack with Attributes that raise base or total damage though (so you can't also get razor's edge) Terror Conduit: I like this ability. It can raise the chance to critical strike by 8%, which is not a crazy amount, but it is very flavorful. I would put this at $400, $50 for each point of crit since it is capped at 8% and has a restriction. For the other abilities, can you please link those that are not found on the main site? Thanks.
Kouta Posted January 19, 2016 Posted January 19, 2016 I don't approve of free-handed on this weapon. Free handed is meant to be for weapons like gauntlets or brass knuckles that don't physically take up space in the hands. I don't approve of a large weapon being able to float on its own because of "mind control". It doesn't fit the flavor of the weapon, and just seems tacked on.
Pwnzie Posted January 20, 2016 Author Posted January 20, 2016 Soul Drinker: $500 seems fair. Twice as much as Razor Edge so that it applies to total damage + a potential extra 5%. I would mention that this cannot stack with Attributes that raise base or total damage though (so you can't also get razor's edge) Terror Conduit: I like this ability. It can raise the chance to critical strike by 8%, which is not a crazy amount, but it is very flavorful. I would put this at $400, $50 for each point of crit since it is capped at 8% and has a restriction. For the other abilities, can you please link those that are not found on the main site? Thanks. Added in a clause preventing soul drinker from stacking with other abilities. Price works. Also fine with this price, 400 it is! Linked everything else that was used on the blade, also added inlaid element gravity to give it more flavor and explain the free handed nature. [Kouta are you not familiar with Seven Deadly Sins?]
Azure Posted January 20, 2016 Posted January 20, 2016 Inlaid Element; [Gravity Element] Effect: This weapon's damage is now considered to be of X Element. This ability may only be applied once per weapon. Restrictions: X element may not be greater than a tier 1 Combinatorial Element. May not be taken with any elements that have requirements aside the Subtle Elements skills without explicit Staff Approval. Cost: 100 Ryo So yeah, that doesn't really float. I agree with Kouta a bit, it feels kind of out of place, however I could potentially see it working if it was an activated attribute kind of tied into Terror Conduit. If the sword has made contact with someone that's terrified and they are still terrified, it will seek them out. You would need to have to hold it and hit them with it first. Ideally though, that would be more of a technique than an ability.
Pwnzie Posted January 20, 2016 Author Posted January 20, 2016 Removed the free handed/link formation and switched up the inlaid element to make a bit more sense (I think).
Rhapsody Posted January 21, 2016 Posted January 21, 2016 Is inlaid element smoke or acid? Title says one, effect says another.
Pwnzie Posted January 21, 2016 Author Posted January 21, 2016 Fixed the typo, its supposed to be the smoke element.
wolfnin Posted January 21, 2016 Posted January 21, 2016 Removed the free handed/link formation and switched up the inlaid element to make a bit more sense (I think). Free handed and Link Formation still exist on the weapon.
Hardcore Skittlez Posted January 25, 2016 Posted January 25, 2016 changes via skype: Soul Drinker was altered to adopt Tony's wording. Previous version said it didn't stack with "anything"; this one just says "Attributes". Cost was raised to 1620, as he had forgotten to apply the 50 ryo from Unique. Approved
Rhapsody Posted January 30, 2016 Posted January 30, 2016 (edited) Approved. Edit: I moved this back as I felt the weapon was changed significantly enough (I count 3 or 4 changes) that I wanted it to have a third approval. In future, if you feel that someone has forgotten to move your creation to approved, please ask them. Edited January 30, 2016 by Rhapsody
