wolfnin Posted October 16, 2007 Author Posted October 16, 2007 Awwww Well spelling and grammer check done. And changed.
cntrstrk14 Posted October 17, 2007 Posted October 17, 2007 With Thunder Heaven, the user should be able to get hit, and you should say that it is a terrain effect that is applied over other terrain effects and is in effect whenever the sword is drawn. Also, you should note that this effect cannot reduce chakra below 1, so that it cannot KO an opponent.
wolfnin Posted November 27, 2007 Author Posted November 27, 2007 I really want this sword to be approved...please!!! BUMPPPP
cntrstrk14 Posted December 7, 2007 Posted December 7, 2007 Katakusekura (Blade of A Thousand Lightning bolts)Weapon Type: Lightning Blade Size: Medium Level: 15 Special: Lightning's Gift, Craft Lightning, Thunder Heaven, Unique Blade Attributes: Indestructible Lightning's Gift Description: When unsheathed, the blade surrounds the user with lightning increasing their movement. Effect: Every time turn this sword is unsheathe the user gains 40 evasion; to a maximum of 400 evasion. wtf is a time turn? Fix this. Craft Lightning: Effect: Allows user to create anything out of lightning. Must have limits. Creating a boat out of lightning? A flying ship? An army of soldiers? I would say limit the size it can create things with <___< Thunder Heaven Description: When unsheathed lightning begins to come down from the sky. Bolts of chakra draining lightning hit the ground hard causing explosions. If the lightning bolts hit a target, the bolts will drain chakra from that target. All lightning jutsus have an increased chance to hit here. The wielder of the sword is protected from the raining lightning bolts. Effect: When this sword is unsheathed any lightning jutsu used gains a +15% chance to hit, lightning jutsus used by the wielder of the sword has a +25% chance to hit. Every shinobi on the field has a 10% chance every turn to get hit by a lightning bolt. Shinobi must roll a d100, if they roll a 10 or less they are hit. If a shinobi is hit, they lose 75 chakra. Chakra may not go below 1. This effect is considered a terrain effect and is applied over a terrain effect whenever the sword is drawn. Mention this only works outdoors. No thunderstorms inside the house or in caves Unique Blade Description: There is only one blade of this kind. That is all. The blade will accept its master. Effect: Only one blade of this kind may be in existence at the same time. The master may pass this sword on to somebody before they die or the sword vanishes and must be searched for again. If another shinobi, besides the master, tries to wield the sword, they take 50 unmodified damage for every turn wielded. Description: An ancient blade which is said to wield the enormous powers of lightning and is able to give the user great powers. It is made of the lightest steel, lightning, and some chakra. Inside the blade is a Lightning core which powers the ancient sword. In the days before the cities of Kumogakure, Otogakure, Iwagakure, Kusagakure, and the others were formed; people lived in separate villages or towns. In this one town known as the Town of Thunder, due to the numerous lightning storms that occurred in the area. Unfortunately this village was constantly raided and destroyed by numerous monsters and shinobi. The villagers tried to fight back, but they were defeated easily and swiftly. So they did what they could only do...pray. It was if their prayers were answered. A man in a yellow and black robe appeared one day. Lightning began to strike the ground as the man placed a sword on a shrine. A thousand lightning bolts struck the sword causing the sword to glow. It was then when the monsters and shinobi attacked. The man used the sword to obliterate any opponent. The villagers said it was a sword given to them by the gods. Unfortunately after the man and sword saved the village, both disappeared. The sword was said to be wrapped in a cyclone of lightning then vanished. The sword was said to disappear to a land of earth, which is now current day Iwagakure. Many people, scientist, researchers, shinobi, and others have tried to locate the sword. Some went and never returned, others were found dead, and those who did return were traumatized for life and died a few days later. Cost: 45 post quest on getting the sword. Once the quest is complete, the user rolls a d100. User must roll higher than X.(X=100-User's Level). If user rolls a 1-15, the user MUST redo the quest again. If user fails, user has the option of redoing the quest again and re rolling. Must be in the location of the sword in odder to start the quest and obtained the sword.
wolfnin Posted December 7, 2007 Author Posted December 7, 2007 Fixed and changed. Although it would be pretty cool to create a boat out of lightning.
cntrstrk14 Posted December 7, 2007 Posted December 7, 2007 kk, fine. I GUESS I will approve this now. APPROVED
Azure Posted December 14, 2007 Posted December 14, 2007 Craft Lightning:Effect: Allows user to create anything out of lightning. The user can not create anything that is bigger than them, with the exception of animals. I don't like this. By this wording, the person in question could create basically -anything- that is not bigger than them, instead of buying it. They could even make a child with this wording. I also don't understand how one could create living things out of lighting. Basically, I can't see this being fixed without totally remaking this ability. So either change it somehow or get rid of it, please.
wolfnin Posted December 15, 2007 Author Posted December 15, 2007 Changed it. Pretty much its now any non-living thing. Also I added Rp only,
Azure Posted December 19, 2007 Posted December 19, 2007 Any is still a very general term. I mean make a rock out of lighting? Craft Lightning:(Rp Only)Effect: Allows user to create sensible non-living objects out of lightning that is equal to or less than the size and weight of the user. This may not produce multiple objects at once and may not be used in short term intervals. Even though it's RP, with the way you phrased it, you could create an array of small weapons at your disposal, or create basically anything you wanted that is smaller than you. With what I quoted and changed, I think it should be more reasonable.
Eechi-go Posted December 19, 2007 Posted December 19, 2007 I'm not a particular fan of the whole 'Craft Lightning'. Anything you create in the first place could not be touched without harming yourself, regardless of wether you made it or not. I also don't see how a sword could craft something like a chair. The whole thing doesn't make much sense to me, and isn't a neccesity.
Rei Posted December 19, 2007 Posted December 19, 2007 What characteristics, attributes, or abilities would a lightning craft have?
wolfnin Posted December 19, 2007 Author Posted December 19, 2007 Removed Craft Lightning. Its not worth the trouble of keep redoing and like eechie said its not needed.
wolfnin Posted December 29, 2007 Author Posted December 29, 2007 MAJOR MAJOR MAJOR BUMP. I REALLY NEED THIS APPROVED!!!
Matthias Drake Posted January 3, 2008 Posted January 3, 2008 Approved. Cntr approved already, and nothing has been changed except the removal of craft lightning, so moved.
