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Problem: The current wording makes it sound like you roll to see if Body Freeze is successful on yourself. Or, if the user is supposed to roll for BFS success, the use of 'they' meaning the target is inconsistent. (This technique cannot be dodged. Instead, the user rolls 1d6 in their Response Phase. If the roll is odd, they are afflicted with 'Vulnerable' and 'Stunned' for one (1) turn).

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Linkhttp://ninja-academy-online.com/equipmentrules.php#6.05
Problem: The wording for scrolls (and by extension the Scroll Arts skill) mentions that the user can only use one scroll per battle. However, it is unclear if that means the user couldn't use, say a Giant Reusable Scroll with two techniques inscribed twice to perform both techniques since it is technically still the one scroll or if it's just one use of a scroll period.

Expected: Specify whether the total(?) use of a scroll is once per battle or if one use of a scroll is once per battle.

Character Rewarded: Sarutobi Hayate

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Problem: The wording for scrolls (and by extension the Scroll Arts skill) mentions that the user can only use one scroll per battle. However, it is unclear if that means the user couldn't use, say a Giant Reusable Scroll with two techniques inscribed twice to perform both techniques since it is technically still the one scroll or if it's just one use of a scroll period.

I've clarified that this is "one use of a scroll". It is a limit of uses, not scrolls.
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Q: What is Ninja Academy?

 

 

 


 

A: Ninja Academy is a (there is currently no a) text-based asynchronous role playing game based on the series Naruto created and owned by Masashi Kishimoto. It is run by fans and made for all Naruto fans to come and play out their own Ninja (is ninja a name or otherwise should this be capitalized?) in the Naruto world. It takes place over 100 years after the end of the original series (might confuse some into thinking this means the first Naruto anime as opposed to the end of the manga/end of Shippuden, though I suppose that doesn’t very much matter it might be worth remarking given this diverges from Boruto but not from Shippuden), meaning all characters from the story no longer exist, though their clans and legacies do.

 

 

 

Expected Fix: As above, add an a where it is missing. Uncapitalize ninja, clarify what we mean by ‘the end of the original series’.

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/faq.php

 

Character Awarded: Umikoi Warrusu


 

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Q: Can I be a mod or admin?

 

 

 


 

A: Possibly. Anyone that we see as a good canadite (candidate is misspelled) for being a moderator, we will notify them. We look for active people on forums, helpful people and people that overall have a good grasp of the rule, role play, Naruto and responsibility. (rules is lacking an s but this might be better as ‘We look for people who are active on the forums, helpful, and whom have a good grasp of the rules, role play, Naruto and responsibility.’ )

 

 

 

Expected Fix: Fix the spelling mistake of Candidate. Either add a s to rules or change the sentence entirely to what I suggested above.

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/faq.php

 

Character Awarded: Umikoi Warrusu



 

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Q: Can my character start off as a missing-nin?

 


 

A: Yes, but again a Gennin (it feels like rank is missing from this. Gennin rank missing-nin sound better to the tongue than gennin rank missing-nin as that would otherwise be double nouns vs ‘gennin rank’ being an adjective) missing-nin would likely have a very hard time playing. We do not suggest this route for brand new players.

 

 

Expected Fix: As above.

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/faq.php

 

Character Awarded: Umikoi Warrusu

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Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/techs/?medical=1

Problem: The cost of the Gennin version of Gift of the Tengu is 4 JP instead of 3 JP as it should be according to the Jutsu rules chart. The 9.0.0 update also reflects the newest version is 3 JP while the older was 4 JP so it's probably a typo holdover I think

Expected: Change Points cost to to 3

Character Rewarded: Hatake Inoue

 

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/techs/?village=Konohagakure

Problem: Bitter Crimson Tears still appears as it did prior to the 9.0.2 update

Expected: Change Bitter Crimson Tears to its latest version

Character Rewarded: Hatake Inoue

 

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/techs/?viewall=1

Problem: The Angry Boar technique's effect says: "The user is considered 'Enlarged' and 'Enranged' for this attack..."

Expected: Enranged should be Enraged.

Character Rewarded: Hatake Inoue

 

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/techs/?viewall=1

Problem: The Earth Release: Stalwart Brigade technique's effect says: "Absorb 20 damage directly in front of the user. Multiple walls may be laid down for 20 nin a piece. Does not stop Genjutsu. Any damage done over the 20 will carry over and effect the user. The opponent may sidestep the wall skipping their main phase to move."

Expected: I'm not sure but I think the "Multiple walls may be laid down for 20 nin a piece" could be changed to be understood better or removed?

Character Rewarded: Hatake Inoue

 

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/techs/?viewall=1

Problem: The Curse of Pestilence technique's effect says: "-40 taijutsu and ninjutsu. Last 2 posts."

Expected: I believe posts should be turns

Character Rewarded: Hatake Inoue

 

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/skills.php#AdvancedPaths

Problem: The Path of the Wise's Academic Mastery has a typo in the sentence: "In addition, this character may gain 50% of the EXP they world normally gain when training for abilities that do not normally grant EXP."

Expected: Change world to would

Character Rewarded: Hatake Inoue

Edited by Lisha
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Oooh I'm on a streak. Forgive me. Preferably with exp.

 

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?/forum/343-the-country-of-fire/

Problem; Description for Fire Country has some grammatical/stylistic errors. 

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Hi no Kuni is perhaps one of the most iconic nations in the world, with many claims to fame tucked under her belt. Though her hidden village, Konohagakure no Sato, was once completely decimated, the shinobi industry thrives here. Boasting a mild climate year-round, Hi no Kuni is nearly swallowed by the forests that dominate the landscape. Although it is quite buggy in the spring and summer, tourism is a large source of money for the country. Many people from all over the world come to gawk at the backdrop of Konohagakure, a mountain etched with the faces of the many Kages the village has acted under over time.


Lack of tense makes this sentence clunky and unfinished.

Poorly worded, not actually an error just badly written.

Expected: Change to as shown below.

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Hi no Kuni is perhaps one of the most iconic nations in the world, with many claims to fame tucked under her belt. Though her hidden village, Konohagakure no Sato, was once completely decimated, the shinobi industry has since recovered and now thrives here. Boasting a mild climate year-round, Hi no Kuni is consumed by the forests that dominate her landscape. Although it is quite buggy in the spring and summer, tourism is a large source of money for the country. Many people from all over the world come to gawk at the backdrop of Konohagakure, a mountain etched with the faces of the many Kages the village has acted under over time.

Character Rewarded: Rinha Otome

 

 

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?/forum/412-the-country-of-earth/

Problem: Description for Earth Country has some grammatical/stylistic errors.

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A rich agricultural and mining base, Tsuchi no Kuni is known for its stability. The landscape here is quite harsh, with very few trees, and the horizon is constantly split by mountains as far as the eye can see. Travel here is quite difficult, due to the below-average rainfall and craggy landscape, but it is by no means impossible. The country is widely known for its capital city, Metropolis, which has carved out its own space in the land as being both and economic and tourist hub. (Though, it is argued that Metropolis attracts tourists by default, as Tsuchi no Kuni is so bland otherwise that there is nowhere else to visit.) Iwagakure no Sato is located in the southern half of the country, nestled in a deep valley and sheltered by the mountains that create its backdrop.


Should be 'an' not 'and'.

Stylistic again, you carve a niche. 

Expected: Change to as shown below.

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A rich agricultural and mining base, Tsuchi no Kuni is known for its stability. The landscape here is quite harsh, with very few trees, and the horizon is constantly split by mountains as far as the eye can see. Travel here is quite difficult, due to the below-average rainfall and craggy landscape, but it is by no means impossible. The country is widely known for its capital city, Metropolis, which has carved out its own nice in the land as being both an economic and tourist hub. (Though, it is argued that Metropolis attracts tourists by default, as Tsuchi no Kuni is so bland otherwise that there is nowhere else to visit.) Iwagakure no Sato is located in the southern half of the country, nestled in a deep valley and sheltered by the mountains that create its backdrop.

 

Character Rewarded: Rinha Otome

 

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?/forum/410-the-country-of-lightning/

Problem: Description for Lightning Country has some grammatical/stylistic errors.

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A peninsula nation surrounded by ocean on three sides and known widely for its central mountain ranges and inclement weather, said to be the source of the people's fierce electric power, Rai no Kuni is an infamous place known worldwide for its role in the NCIA takeover. Vast networks of streams and rivers run through the country, a constant blood supply fueled by glacier melt high in the peaks. Kumogakure no Sato, the military heart of the nation, is literally hidden by the clouds atop the highest mountain in the country. The architecture there is breathtaking, and the beauty is only supplemented by the innumerable hot springs that dot the landscape.


Holy run on sentence batman!

Clunky, terrible metaphor and fuelled is spelled wrong.

Typically you would use the 'is only' lead in if you were about to follow on with 'surpassed by'. Supplemented by you can drop the 'only' for and it overall improves the sentence.

Expected: Change to as shown below.

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The Lightning Country is a peninsula nation surrounded by ocean on three sides and known widely for its central mountain ranges and inclement weather. These storms are said to be the source of the people's fierce electric power. This land is infamous for its pivotal role in the rise of the Kumogakure Empire and the atrocities committed by the NCIA,in its name. Vast networks of streams and rivers run through the country, veins in the massive circulatory system that pumps life into the valleys from the glacial caps of the mountains above. Kumogakure no Sato, the military heart of the nation, is literally hidden by the clouds atop the highest mountain in the country. The architecture there is breathtaking, and its irresistible beauty is supplemented by the innumerable hot springs that dot the landscape.

Character Rewarded: Rinha Otome

 

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?/forum/407-the-country-of-water-and-eastern-oceans/

Problem: Description for Water Country has some grammatical/stylistic errors. 

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A breathtakingly beautiful nation that hides a violent and ugly underbelly, Mizu no Kuni can easily be likened to a black widow. Here, clans wrestle for control over the misty country, and black markets are rampant. Though it is a tiny island nation, Muzi no Kuni still boasts a hidden village, cloaked by the perpetual fog that dominates the gently hilly landscape. Most buildings here have more than one story, in an effort to conserve space, and the countryside is thin and sparse, though not barren by any means. A mysterious and somewhat isolated nation, Mizu no Kuni has often been the center of many horror stories and monster folklore. As expected, the chief export here is fish, closely followed by both shipbuilding and pearls.


I laughed at how dumb this line is.

Redundant comma usage.

Redundant comma again, should be 'that is', the term would be 'gentle hilly landscape' and in general this line can be cleaned up a lot.

Gasp, another redundant comma? This should be in parenthesis as an aside.

Shipbuilding is not an export. You export ships, or shipbuilders (shipwrights actually).

Expected: Change to as shown below.

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A breathtakingly beautiful nation that hides a violent and ugly underbelly, Mizu no Kuni is a land that works hard to define itself apart from its bloodied past. Here, clans wrestle for control over the misty country and illegal trade runs rampant on the disparate archipelago. Though it is but a tiny island nation, Muzi no Kuni still boasts a hidden village cloaked by a perpetual fog which dominates the gentle hilly landscape. Most buildings here have more than one story, in an effort to conserve space, and the countryside is thin and sparse (though not barren by any means.) A mysterious and somewhat isolated nation, Mizu no Kuni has often been the center of many horror stories and monster folklore. As expected, the chief export here is fish, closely followed by pearls and the majestic craft its native shipwrights construct.

Character Rewarded: Rinha Otome

 

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?/forum/416-the-countries-of-coal-and-rain/

Problem: The description for the coal/rain countries has some grammatical/stylistic errors;
 

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Two minor countries. Coal, with no shinobi village of its own and Rain with a minor village. They borders on countries of Earth, Wind, Fire and Grass and thus have easy access to shinobi when needed; its largest claim to fame, however, is that it is where most of the world's technology is researched and created. Coal country's industry relies almost entirely on the export of machines, and its population is an astounding 32% made up of certified engineers, with yet more mechanics and tinkerers. If you want technology, you go here. Despite Rain's dreary atmosphere, civilian happiness is through the roof.


Should be 'They border on the countries of'. If you fiddle a bit with the later stuff you can instead say 'Their borders with the countries of...'

Should avoid multiple ands where possible. Works better as '...and Grass, thus having easy access to...'  

This whole bit feels like it was originally written differently and just kinda tagged in. Needs a major overhaul to make sense. 
Can also be cleaned up, end is clunky.
This part is just sad. You give like two and a half lines to coal, which was barely relevant in the anime, and give a quarter of a line to rain, which actually was pretty damn plot centric for several major characters? Fix that.

Expected: Change to as shown below.

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Two minor countries. Coal, with no shinobi of its own and Rain, which possess little more than a minor ninja village. They border the on countries of Earth, Wind, Fire and Grass and thus have easy access to shinobi when needed, though this has also made them a battleground between larger nations in the past. The land of Coal's its largest claim to fame is it's ingenuity, the vast majority of all technological advancement takes place within this small nation. The Coal country's industry thus relies almost entirely upon the export of machines, and an astounding thirty-two percent of the nation's total population are certified engineers with even more mechanics and tinkerers to boot. If you want technology, Coal is the place to be. The Rain country has seen countless wars and suffering in its years, but you would never know that meeting its citizens. The famously dreary atmosphere does little to bring down the spirits of its citizens, who see the silver lining on every rain cloud, and of those they are never in short suppyl.

Rewarded Character: RInha Otome

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Link: Multiplayer Battle Experience - Team Battles

Problem: Team AB Conclusion:
All Team CDE members gain 1/3 EXP for C defeating B.
All Team CDE members gain 1/3 EXP for C losing to A.
All Team CDE members gain 1/3 EXP for D losing to A.
All Team CDE members gain 1/3 EXP for E defeating A.

Expected: Header should be changed to Team CDE Conclusion:

Character Rewarded: Uzumaki Takeo

Edited by Jiran
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http://www.ninja-academy-online.com/jutsurules.php

Problem: Medical Tag is next the the rank of the jutsu and not the type

Gift of the Spirits II
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: Chuunin [Medical]
Cost: 120 Chakra
Effect: The target gains 120 chakra. This technique may only target a character once per battle and cannot target the user.
Description: A bright blue beam strikes from the medical nin's palm and hits the target, infusing it with an immense amount of energy.
Points: 4 [Evolving; 1 Gift of the Spirits]

Expected: Move medical tag to the type line.

Character rewarded: Tokei Hatake

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Hey all, sorry about the delay here!

 

Problem: The cost of the Gennin version of Gift of the Tengu is 4 JP instead of 3 JP as it should be according to the Jutsu rules chart. The 9.0.0 update also reflects the newest version is 3 JP while the older was 4 JP so it's probably a typo holdover I think

+50 EXP and 両20 to Hatake Inoue

 

Problem: Bitter Crimson Tears still appears as it did prior to the 9.0.2 update

+50 EXP and 両20 to Hatake Inoue

 

 

Problem: The Angry Boar technique's effect says: "The user is considered 'Enlarged' and 'Enranged' for this attack..."

+25 EXP and 両10 to Hatake Inoue

 

 

Problem: The Earth Release: Stalwart Brigade technique's effect says: "Absorb 20 damage directly in front of the user. Multiple walls may be laid down for 20 nin a piece. Does not stop Genjutsu. Any damage done over the 20 will carry over and effect the user. The opponent may sidestep the wall skipping their main phase to move."

+25 EXP and 両10 to Hatake Inoue

 

 

Problem: The Curse of Pestilence technique's effect says: "-40 taijutsu and ninjutsu. Last 2 posts."

+25 EXP and 両10 to Hatake Inoue

 

 

Problem: The Path of the Wise's Academic Mastery has a typo in the sentence: "In addition, this character may gain 50% of the EXP they world normally gain when training for abilities that do not normally grant EXP."

+25 EXP and 両10 to Hatake Inoue

 

 

 

Problem: The Country of Fire Description

+25 EXP and 両10 to Rinha Otome

 

 

Problem: The Country of Earth Description

+25 EXP and 両10 to Rinha Otome

 

 

Problem: The Country of Lightning Description

+25 EXP and 両10 to Rinha Otome

 

 

Problem: The Country of Water Description

+25 EXP and 両10 to Rinha Otome

 

 

Problem: The Country of Coal & Rain Description

+25 EXP and 両10 to Rinha Otome

 

 

 

Problem: Incorrect Header on the Leveling System example

+25 EXP and 両10 to Uzumaki Takeo

 

 

Problem: Incorrect tag placement on example medical jutsu

+25 EXP and 両10 to Tokei Hatake


 

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I had these sitting around in a Doc for a while. I know you’re busy with IRL stuff, so no rush getting to these, just wanted to drop them into the forum before I forgot again. 

 

Shoved into a spoiler so that this page doesn’t take forever to scroll through: It's loosely organized from "things that have a mechanical effect or can potentially cause confusion in-battle" to "typos." Special mention to the first one though, because its a minor typo that harms site navigation.

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Link: It... cannot be linked to. Please see the Problem Field!

Problem: Shouton; Amai Kanro III cannot be linked to. This is because the technique page URLs are derived from the English name of a technique, and unfortunately a typo left Shouton; Amai Kanro III’s English name as Plant Release; Sweet Nectar II, the same as the technique it evolves from.

So here is a link to the Plant section instead, the problem technique is the third from the bottom. 

Expected: Shouton; Amai Kanro III’s English name should be Plant Release; Sweet Nectar III instead of II. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: Enlarged increases the chance to hit of both Accuracy and Concentration-based attacks by 15%, instead of halving the bonus for Concentration as is normal. 

Expected: The Concentration should be… well, reduced to either 7 or 8. Can’t really give a +7.5% chance to hit >.>. Could also just have it not apply to Concentration-based attacks, similar to Startled.

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: Stamina’s description does not specify whether it increases base or total Chakra costs by 1.25x when it is at 0. Chakra has the opposite problem. 

Expected: They should specify whether they increase base or total costs. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Stat page, Genjutsu, Ninjutsu, and Taijutsu

Problem: Genjutsu, Ninjutsu, and Taijutsu should specify whether they need to be as high as the base or total cost of one of their techniques in order to perform it. 

Expected: Please specify whether they require base or total costs. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link

Problem: Combinatorial; Sand does not specify whether it increases a construct’s base or total Health by 10%. 

Expected: It should specify which kind of Health it boosts. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link

Problem: Combinatorial; Scorch does not specify whether it increases the base or total cost of techniques used by the opponent. 

Expected: It should specify which kind of costs it increases. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: Combinatorial; Dark should specify that it increases base or total effects as well as total damage instead of just “effects and total damage.” 

Expected: It should specify which it increases.

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: This is a Genin technique when it’s built as a Chuunin technique. I understand that main site techniques often receive special consideration for costing and such, but this uses terrains which aren’t typically available until Chuunin, costs 140 Chakra, and has the JP cost of a 140 Chakra Chuunin tech. 

Expected: It should be Chuunin technique instead of a Genin one. Also, the Effect Field needs a period between Sand and its last quotation mark. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: This technique should cost 55 Chakra instead of 45. Like I said above, I understand that main site techniques receive special discounts and the like. But this doesn’t do anything or have any qualities that makes it special, it just does 20 Ghost Damage and inflicts a turn of Weakened. So… probably just a typo or a carry-over from previous version. 

Expected: The cost should be increased by 10. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi.

 

Link: Link.

Problem: The technique’s description explicitly references Kiri nin being able to perform it. It isn’t a Kiri technique. 

Expected: Either “Kiri nin” being replaced with “ninja” or “shinobi” or something similar, or the technique becoming a Kiri technique. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: Kite Shuriken has the following effect: “Deals 50 damage & costs three (4) Stamina.”

Expected: It should say that it costs four (4) Stamina.

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: The Pet Combination Effect is merged with the normal Effect section. 

Expected: They should be separate sections. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: There should be a line break between the “Effect” and “Enemy” entries.

Expected: Please add a line break. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Heads up, everything past this point is a minor typo that has no mechanical effect and couldn't cause any confusion when read. Missing letters, extra words, et cetera.

 

Link: Link.

Problem: Under Advanced Response Phase Rules, it says: “Per turn you may only use one (1) Response Phase technique per turn.”

Expected: One of the “per turns” should be removed. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: Ctrl-F for this, easiest way to find it: “If a defender has an ability that modifiers”.

Expected: Remove the R. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: Gliding Joints’ effect: “This puppet gains +4x% to dodge physical attack, where x is equal to the wielder's ninja rank.” 

Expected: Please add an S between the bolded K and the comma. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: Ctrl-F for this, easiest way to find it: “Summon may not have advanced regeneration skills (Chakra Flow, etc.) and may not have Second Wind or any similar skills.”

Expected: Summon should either be made plural or replaced with “The summon”.

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: The second paragraph under Creating Pet Techniques starts with “In additional.” 

Expected: It should be “In addition.” 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: Path of the Elementalist’s Elemental Apex says “When using Ninjutsu techniques with Combinatorial Elements, the user may choose to apply an additional bonus from one of the Subtle Elements skill required to learn it, if they own it.”

Expected: The bolded “skill” needs an s taped on the end. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: Health says “This is your health bar, the thing that stands between you and the real of unconsciousness and death.”

Expected: Real should probably be realm. 

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

Link: Link.

Problem: The Effect Field needs a period between Sand and its last quotation mark. 

Expected: The Effect Field needs a period between Sand and its last quotation mark.

Character Rewarded: Inuzuka Mimi. 

 

 

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Problem: Shouton; Amai Kanro III cannot be linked to.
+50 EXP and 両20 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Enlarged increases the chance to hit of both Accuracy and Concentration-based attacks by 15%, instead of halving the bonus for Concentration as is normal.
+100 EXP and 両40 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Stamina’s description does not specify whether it increases base or total Chakra costs by 1.25x when it is at 0. Chakra has the opposite problem. 
+100 EXP and 両40 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Genjutsu, Ninjutsu, and Taijutsu should specify whether they need to be as high as the base or total cost of one of their techniques in order to perform it. 
+150 EXP and 両60 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Combinatorial; Sand does not specify whether it increases a construct’s base or total Health by 10%. 
+50 EXP and 両20 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Combinatorial; Scorch does not specify whether it increases the base or total cost of techniques used by the opponent. 
+50 EXP and 両20 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Combinatorial; Dark should specify that it increases base or total effects as well as total damage instead of just “effects and total damage.” 
+50 EXP and 両20 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: This is a Genin technique when it’s built as a Chuunin technique. I understand that main site techniques often receive special consideration for costing and such, but this uses terrains which aren’t typically available until Chuunin, costs 140 Chakra, and has the JP cost of a 140 Chakra Chuunin tech. 
Not a bug, but something we might want to evaluate in an upcoming update. This was done on purpose though.

 

Problem: This technique should cost 55 Chakra instead of 45. Like I said above, I understand that main site techniques receive special discounts and the like. But this doesn’t do anything or have any qualities that makes it special, it just does 20 Ghost Damage and inflicts a turn of Weakened. So… probably just a typo or a carry-over from previous version. 
+50 EXP and 両20 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: The technique’s description explicitly references Kiri nin being able to perform it. It isn’t a Kiri technique. 
+25 EXP and 両10 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Kite Shuriken has the following effect: “Deals 50 damage & costs three (4) Stamina.”
+50 EXP and 両20 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: The Pet Combination Effect is merged with the normal Effect section. 
+25 EXP and 両10 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: There should be a line break between the “Effect” and “Enemy” entries.
+25 EXP and 両10 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Under Advanced Response Phase Rules, it says: “Per turn you may only use one (1) Response Phase technique per turn.”
+25 EXP and 両10 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Ctrl-F for this, easiest way to find it: “If a defender has an ability that modifiers”.
+25 EXP and 両10 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Gliding Joints’ effect: “This puppet gains +4x% to dodge physical attack, where x is equal to the wielder's ninja rank.” 
+25 EXP and 両10 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Ctrl-F for this, easiest way to find it: “Summon may not have advanced regeneration skills (Chakra Flow, etc.) and may not have Second Wind or any similar skills.”
+25 EXP and 両10 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: The second paragraph under Creating Pet Techniques starts with “In additional.” 
+25 EXP and 両10 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Path of the Elementalist’s Elemental Apex says “When using Ninjutsu techniques with Combinatorial Elements, the user may choose to apply an additional bonus from one of the Subtle Elements skill required to learn it, if they own it.”
+25 EXP and 両10 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: Health says “This is your health bar, the thing that stands between you and the real of unconsciousness and death.”
+25 EXP and 両10 to Inuzuka Mimi

 

Problem: The Effect Field needs a period between Sand and its last quotation mark. 
+10 EXP and 両5 to Inuzuka Mimi


Problem: The "mastery title" for Tamer is read as "studious mastery" which belongs to Path of the Pupil.
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I may be reaching with some of these, so if they aren't acceptable, that's fine. 

 

Link to Issue: Free Kumo Skills and Combinatorial; Cloud

Issue: The two effects are different. Free Kumo Skills has "Whenever a player uses a Cloud Technique they may subtract 10 from their speed percentile for that turn. This may not lower a Speed Percentile below its normal minimum and may only be used once per turn." The main site has "When a Cloud element technique is used, the user may subtract 20-x from their Speed Percentile, where the value of x is the character's level divided by 6, rounded up; the subtraction applied through this effect may never be less than 4. This effect may not be applied more than once per turn. "

Expected: Update the outdated effect.

Character Reward: Ishii Kaii

 

Link to Issue: Free Oto Skills and Combinatorial; Sound

Issue: The two effects are different. Free Oto Skills has "Sound Techniques have a +4% chance to hit. As well, when in a small enclosed area they gain +10% effect, rounded up." The main site has "The first strike of a Sound element attack also afflicts its target with one (1) turn of 'Deafened'."

Expected: Update the outdated effect.

Character Reward: Ishii Kaii

 

Link to Issue: Sand Clone

Issue: The way the cost is worded, it makes it sound like it's a flat 50 Chakra for 5 clones. 

Expected: Update the cost to 50x so it is uniform with a majority of the other clone skills

Character Reward: Ishii Kaii

 

Link to Issue: Water Clone

Issue: The way the cost is worded, it makes it sound like it's a flat 50 Chakra for 5 clones. 

Expected: Update The cost to 50x so it is uniform with a majority of the other clone skills

Character Reward: Ishii Kaii

 

Link to Issue: Shadow Clone

Issue: The way the cost is worded, it makes it sound like it's a flat 250 Chakra for 5 clones. 

Expected: Update The cost to 250x so it is uniform with a majority of the other clone skills

Character Reward: Ishii Kaii

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Link: Blacksmith's Forge

Problem: Affliction: [Status Effect] has the text "A weapon with this attribute has the potential to afflict a target with one (1) turn of a status effect when successfully struck." Even though it makes sense struck isn't really a word defined in the game or the Glossary but hit is and fits the same

Expected: Change "struck" to "hit"

Character Rewarded: Hatake Inoue

 

Link: Blacksmith's Forge

Problem: Defend has the text "As an action in your Response Phase you may Block (take half damage) a single Taijutsu or Basic attack." Basic Attack has been changed to include Basic Unarmed Attacks and Basic Weapon Attacks. I don't believe the intention was to affect Basic Weapon Attacks since that's what the Parry attribute does

Expected: Change "Basic Attack" to "Basic Unarmed Attacks"

Character Rewarded: Hatake Inoue

 

Link: Blacksmith's Forge

Problem: Parry has the text "As an action in your Response Phase you may Block (take half damage) a single weapon attack." Weapon attack nomenclature has been changed

Expected: Change "single weapon attack" to "Basic Weapon Attack".

Character Rewarded: Hatake Inoue

 

Link: Blacksmith's Forge

Problem: Link Formation has the text "Character may use this weapon with regular or ranged weapon modifiers." Ranged weapon modifiers have been removed though

Expected: Remove "or ranged weapon", rework the whole effect or remove the whole attribute possibly?

Character Rewarded: Hatake Inoue

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Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/techs/?village=&basicelement=&comboelement=Plant&style=&rank=Gennin&type=Ninjutsu&archetype= 

Problem: Sprout | Sutaba no Jutsu

The justu does not have the medical tag on it even thought it is a medical justu.

Expected: putting medical tag on this justu

Chataracter rewarded: Fuhgahkra Uzoomarik 

 

Link: http://ninja-academy-online.com/techs/?village=&basicelement=&comboelement=Wood&style=&rank=Gennin&type=&archetype=

Problem: Wood Release; Wooden Arrow | Mokuton; Mokusei Ya no Jutsu

The jp value is off on the technique. It should be 3 not 2.

Expected: change jp from 2 to 3

Character rewarded: Fuhgahkra Uzoomarik 

 

Link:  http://ninja-academy-online.com/techs/?village=&basicelement=&comboelement=Wood&style=&rank=Gennin&type=&archetype=

Problem:Sapling Armor | Naegi Gusoku

The upkeep cost is slightly too high. The value should be 48 per turn based on current ninjustu upkeep rules

Expected: change upkeep cost from 50 to 48.

Character rewarded: Fuhgahkra Uzoomarik 

Edited by fuhgahkra
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Link: http://www.ninja-academy-online.com/skills.php#TaijutsuStyles

Problem: Desert Aikido

"• The user may spend a Counter Charge during their Response Phase to reduce the cost of a Response Phase technique by 10x%, where x is the amount of charges used."

As written, Desert Aikido reduced the cost of ALL Response Phase techniques, not just taijutsu/desert aikido style techs

Expected: Counter Charges should reduce the cost of Desert Aikido RPJ techs, not any RPJ techs

Character Rewarded: Hoshigaki Namichi

 

Link: http://www.ninja-academy-online.com/skills.php#Elements

Problem: Subtle Elements; Water.

"All Water Techniques cost 10% less." This doesn't clarify total or base cost. It has been a discussion on multiple creation threads whether or not this is the case.

Expected: Subtle Elements; Water clarifies whether or not it reduces base or total cost.

Character Rewarded: Hoshigaki Namichi

 

The above could also be clarified in the Water Specialty as well.

Edited by Sol Pope
Water Specialty and Water Element share the same clarity issue
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Link: Skills

Problem: The effect for using cloud jutsu states, "When a Cloud element technique is used, the user may subtract 20-x from their Speed Percentile, where the value of x is the character's level divided by 6, rounded up; the subtraction applied through this effect may never be less than 4. " So the formula seems off because the higher the level, it seems the worse it gets. Examples- 

 

Level 60 

20-(60/6=10) = 10 [Subtract ten from speed percentile]

 

Level 120 

20-(120/6 = 20) = 0; [Therefore you subtract 4 from speed percentile]

 

This formula makes it so the skill gets worse as one levels up. 

 

Expected: My initial thought was that the formula was actually meant to be "20+x". However, Sol said that this would make the skill way too strong. So..I don't know. Maybe something like... "When a Cloud element technique is used, the user may subtract x from their Speed Percentile, where the value of x is the character's level divided by 6, rounded up; the subtraction applied through this effect may never be less than 4."

Character Rewarded: Saiken, Asashi 

 

*Edit: I stand corrected 

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Kiba's Bug Fix List (1):


Linkhttp://ninja-academy-online.com/forum/index.php?/forum/344-hotarunoshi/

Problem: [Typo] Instead of "The Capital", its written as "he Capital"

Expected: It should be written as The Capital

Character Rewarded: Kenji Inuzuka

Image: Link

Edited by Kiba
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Problem: [Typo] Instead of "The Capital", its written as "he Capital"

+25 EXP and 両10

 

I notice I missed a handful of these above. I will review them at a later date, but wanted to address the latest posting because it was a quick and easy fix.

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